"The trees around them were heavy with fruit—globes of dusky purple, clusters of crystalline berries, bulbous melons that pulsed with soft inner light."
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"Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing the skin of a pear-shaped fruit; it was warm, like living flesh."
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"And through the gardens moved figures—humanoid shapes with an unnatural grace, tending to plants with careful, ritualistic motions."
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"The bark was striated with patterns that shifted when Aurora looked at them directly—writhes of dark against lighter wood, forming fleeting images: a laden table, a goblet overflowing, teeth tearing into meat."
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"It was a pavilion made of interlocking ribs—whale bones, she realized, bleached white and enormous, curving up to support a canopy of stretched, translucent membranes that rippled like sails."
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"No laughter echoed, no conversation buzzed—just the wet sounds of consumption."
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"The air grew colder, sharp with the scent of ozone and something else—something metallic and old."
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"Dogs, but wrong—their bodies elongated, their hides smooth and hairless, the color of tarnished silver."
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"The ground at her feet erupted with wildflowers—not the alien blooms of Dymas, but familiar Earth blossoms: daisies, bluebells, foxgloves."
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"The air wavered, distorted, and through the distortion, Aurora caught glimpses of another world—the deep green of a forest, the gray of a London sky."
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"Colors bled together—the amber of Dymas, the green of Earth, streaks of impossible violet and void-black."
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"The bark was striated with patterns that shifted when Aurora looked at them directly—writhes of dark against lighter wood, forming fleeting images: a laden tabl…"
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"Ahead, the trees parted, revealing a clearing dominated by a structure that stole Aurora’s breath."
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"It was a pavilion made of interlocking ribs—whale bones, she realized, bleached white and enormous, curving up to support a canopy of stretched, translucent mem…"
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"Tureens steamed with fragrant soups that shimmered with oil-slick rainbows."
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"One hound took a step forward, its head tilting, scenting the air."
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"Nyx shifted, their form bleeding into the surrounding shadows, becoming half-there, half-not."