Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ1R06JXTH0QHJYFQFFNJ6

Run Details

Duration:
2m 3s
Cost:
$0.002348
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber sky arched overhead, a permanent sunset that cast long shadows from the twisted, gnarled trees. The air smelled of woodsmoke and roasting spices, sweet and heavy. Aurora took a tentative step forward, her boots sinking into rich, dark soil that gave off a faint warmth. Behind her, Nyx solidified from a pool of shadow, their violet eyes scanning the horizon. Isolde stood between them, her silver hair shimmering like spilled mercury in the strange light. “Dymas,” Isolde whispered, her voice hushed. “A place of eternal appetite.” Aurora’s pendant pulsed against her chest, a steady heartbeat of crimson light. She touched it, the warmth familiar now. “Which way?” Nyx pointed a shadowed hand toward a distant ridge lined with orderly rows of dark-leaved vines. “Movement. Many bodies.” They followed a worn path carpeted with velvety moss that glimmered with gold flecks. The trees around them were heavy with fruit—globes of dusky purple, clusters of crystalline berries, bulbous melons that pulsed with soft inner light. Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing the skin of a pear-shaped fruit; it was warm, like living flesh. She snatched her hand back. “Everything here feeds or is fed upon,” Isolde said quietly. A low hum filled the air, a vibration that thrummed through the soles of Aurora’s feet. As they crested the ridge, the source revealed itself. Below sprawled a vast, tiered garden, a tapestry of colors so vibrant they hurt the eyes. Coppery leaves shimmered beside emerald vines. Flowers the size of dinner plates opened and closed like breathing lungs. And through the gardens moved figures—humanoid shapes with an unnatural grace, tending to plants with careful, ritualistic motions. They were too far to see details, but their movements were synchronized, almost mechanical. “Souls bound to service,” Nyx murmured, their voice a chill breeze in the warm air. “Chefs and farmers and vintners, stolen from your world to fuel Dymas’s appetites.” One of the figures straightened, turning its head slowly toward the ridge. Its face was a smooth, featureless blank. Aurora crouched lower. “They feel wrong.” “They are not whole,” Isolde agreed. “Their memories, their desires—all distilled into a single purpose. To cultivate. To create sustenance for the Prince’s table.” They slipped down the back slope of the ridge, away from the garden. The path narrowed, winding through a copse of trees whose branches were tangled together like clasped hands. The bark was striated with patterns that shifted when Aurora looked at them directly—writhes of dark against lighter wood, forming fleeting images: a laden table, a goblet overflowing, teeth tearing into meat. She shivered. Ahead, the trees parted, revealing a clearing dominated by a structure that stole Aurora’s breath. It was a pavilion made of interlocking ribs—whale bones, she realized, bleached white and enormous, curving up to support a canopy of stretched, translucent membranes that rippled like sails. Beneath it, long tables groaned under impossible feasts. Whole roasted beasts with iridescent skins glistened next to mountains of jewel-toned fruits. Tureens steamed with fragrant soups that shimmered with oil-slick rainbows. And seated at the tables were demons. Not the monstrous forms from storybooks, but beings of unsettling elegance. Tall, slender figures with skin the color of old wine or polished brass or bruised twilight. Some wore elaborate robes, others little more than artful drapes of silk. Horns curled from temples, delicate and sharp. Tails lazily swished. They ate with a focused, ravenous intensity, hands dipping into platters, bringing dripping morsels to thin-lipped mouths. No laughter echoed, no conversation buzzed—just the wet sounds of consumption. At the head of the central table sat a figure larger than the others, slumped in a high-backed chair of carved obsidian. His face was obscured by shadows, but his presence pressed against the clearing like a physical weight. Prince Belphegor. Even from this distance, Aurora felt a cold knot tighten in her stomach. “We should not linger here,” Isolde breathed. Nyx nodded, already melting back toward the tree line. “The grove’s gift. Do you feel its call?” Aurora’s hand went to the Fae-forged blade at her hip. The cool metal of the hilt was a shock against her palm, a clarity in the overwhelming sensory feast of Dymas. “I feel it. A pull… westward?” “The Veil is thin there,” Isolde confirmed. “But the way will be guarded.” They retreated, moving swift and silent through the twisted woods. The further they got from the pavilion, the more the landscape changed. The rich soil gave way to cracked, dry earth. The lush trees became skeletal things, branches clawing at the amber sky. The air grew colder, sharp with the scent of ozone and something else—something metallic and old. Aurora’s unease deepened. “It feels like we’re being watched.” Nyx paused, becoming utterly still. “We are.” From the jagged shadows of the dead trees, shapes detached themselves. They were low to the ground, moving with a liquid grace. Dogs, but wrong—their bodies elongated, their hides smooth and hairless, the color of tarnished silver. They had no eyes, only smooth sockets that gleamed with faint inner light. Their mouths were lipless slits filled with needle-sharp teeth. A pack of six surrounded them, silent as ghosts. “Hounds of Dymas,” Isolde said, her voice steady. “They track the scent of magic. Of intrusion.” One hound took a step forward, its head tilting, scenting the air. Aurora’s pendant flared hot against her skin. Nyx shifted, their form bleeding into the surrounding shadows, becoming half-there, half-not. “Do not run. They are faster.” Aurora drew the Fae blade. The leaf-shaped dagger caught the strange light, the moonsilver blade glowing with a cool, blue-white luminescence. The hounds recoiled slightly, a unified hiss escaping their slit mouths. The lead hound lunged. Aurora moved on instinct, not a combat stance but a dancer’s pivot. She stepped inside the lunge, the Fae blade slicing upward. It met no resistance, passing through the creature’s neck like cutting smoke. The hound dissolved into motes of shadow and vanished, leaving only a fading shriek of rage. The remaining hounds hesitated. Isolde raised her hands, palms outward. She began to chant, words in a language that twisted in the air, sharp and crystalline. The ground at her feet erupted with wildflowers—not the alien blooms of Dymas, but familiar Earth blossoms: daisies, bluebells, foxgloves. They spread in a ring, pushing back the dead earth. The hounds snarled, backing away from the circle of living color. A deep, resonant horn blast echoed through the skeletal forest, shaking the dry branches. The hounds froze, their headless forms turning as one toward the sound. Then, as if summoned, they melted back into the shadows, disappearing as quickly as they had come. Silence descended, broken only by the ragged sound of Aurora’s breathing. “The Prince knows we are here,” Nyx said, reforming beside her. Their violet eyes were wide. “That horn calls his guard.” “Then we run,” Aurora said, sheathing the blade. Its cold clarity was a lifeline. “West. To the thin place.” They ran. The dead forest blurred around them, a monochrome nightmare of gray and ochre. Their feet pounded on the cracked earth, kicking up puffs of dust that tasted of ash. Aurora’s lungs burned. The pendant thrummed against her chest, a beacon pulling her forward. The ground began to slope downward. The skeletal trees thinned, replaced by jagged rocks that thrust from the earth like broken teeth. The amber sky darkened toward a bruised purple at the horizon. And there, nestled in a canyon between two massive ridges of black stone, she saw it. A shimmer in the air, like heat rising from pavement on a summer day. But it was colder here, not hotter. The air wavered, distorted, and through the distortion, Aurora caught glimpses of another world—the deep green of a forest, the gray of a London sky. The Veil. It was torn here, a ragged wound in reality. Tendrils of shadowy energy leaked from the edges, snapping like black lightning. “It’s unstable,” Aurora panted, skidding to a halt at the canyon’s edge. “It is our only way back,” Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on the shimmering rift. “But crossing… it will not be gentle.” Another horn blast, closer this time. The ground vibrated with the approach of something heavy. Nyx placed a shadow-hand on Aurora’s shoulder. “Now.” They jumped together, into the distortion, into the tear in the world. The cold hit her first, a slicing, soul-deep chill. Then the pressure, crushing her from all sides. Colors bled together—the amber of Dymas, the green of Earth, streaks of impossible violet and void-black. She felt herself stretching, tearing, reassembling. Her last sight of Dymas was of the canyon rim, now lined with tall, armored figures silhouetted against the hellish sky, before the world unraveled into silent, screaming light.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.071
83.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1487
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"lazily"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"lazily"
2"utterly"
3"slightly"
4"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.85% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1487
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count2
4
word"crystalline"
count2
5
word"tapestry"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count2
7
word"synchronized"
count1
8
word"mechanical"
count1
9
word"chill"
count2
10
word"fleeting"
count1
11
word"structure"
count1
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count2
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"stomach"
count1
17
word"silence"
count1
18
word"beacon"
count1
19
word"wavered"
count1
20
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"scanning"
2"pulsed"
3"familiar"
4"crystalline"
5"tapestry"
6"shimmered"
7"synchronized"
8"mechanical"
9"chill"
10"fleeting"
11"structure"
12"silk"
13"intensity"
14"echoed"
15"weight"
16"stomach"
17"silence"
18"beacon"
19"wavered"
20"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences134
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1461
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
77.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1311
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.45
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx8
Aurora19
One2
Belphegor1
Fae-forged1
Dymas4
Fae3
Earth2
London1
Veil1
Isolde9
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Belphegor"
3"Earth"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Fae-forged"
1"Fae"
2"London"
globalScore0.775
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.053
wordCount1461
matches
0"Not the monstrous forms from storybooks, but beings of unsettling elegance"
1"not a combat stance but a dancer’s pivot"
2"not the alien blooms of Dymas, but familiar Earth blossoms: daisies, bluebells, foxgloves"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean28.65
std22.35
cv0.78
sampleLengths
077
111
221
319
460
510
677
714
828
919
106
1124
1262
132
1475
157
1677
1754
187
1917
2037
2113
2259
239
247
2559
269
2716
2819
2918
3032
314
3250
334
3452
3511
3643
3711
3821
3919
4045
4149
4246
432
4421
4512
4623
4715
488
4951
90.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences117
matches
0"were synchronized"
1"were tangled"
2"was striated"
3"was obscured"
4"was torn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs213
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences134
ratio0.082
matches
0"The trees around them were heavy with fruit—globes of dusky purple, clusters of crystalline berries, bulbous melons that pulsed with soft inner light."
1"Aurora reached out, her fingers brushing the skin of a pear-shaped fruit; it was warm, like living flesh."
2"And through the gardens moved figures—humanoid shapes with an unnatural grace, tending to plants with careful, ritualistic motions."
3"The bark was striated with patterns that shifted when Aurora looked at them directly—writhes of dark against lighter wood, forming fleeting images: a laden table, a goblet overflowing, teeth tearing into meat."
4"It was a pavilion made of interlocking ribs—whale bones, she realized, bleached white and enormous, curving up to support a canopy of stretched, translucent membranes that rippled like sails."
5"No laughter echoed, no conversation buzzed—just the wet sounds of consumption."
6"The air grew colder, sharp with the scent of ozone and something else—something metallic and old."
7"Dogs, but wrong—their bodies elongated, their hides smooth and hairless, the color of tarnished silver."
8"The ground at her feet erupted with wildflowers—not the alien blooms of Dymas, but familiar Earth blossoms: daisies, bluebells, foxgloves."
9"The air wavered, distorted, and through the distortion, Aurora caught glimpses of another world—the deep green of a forest, the gray of a London sky."
10"Colors bled together—the amber of Dymas, the green of Earth, streaks of impossible violet and void-black."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1336
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cool, blue-white luminescence."
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.02470059880239521
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.008233532934131737
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences134
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences134
mean10.9
std5.78
cv0.53
sampleLengths
017
111
219
315
415
56
65
712
87
92
1016
113
1214
1323
1418
155
1610
1716
189
1916
206
2112
2218
2314
2415
2513
2612
277
283
293
306
3118
3213
3317
3432
352
3615
3729
388
3913
4010
417
4211
4316
4412
457
463
4717
4811
4922
55.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.39552238805970147
totalSentences134
uniqueOpeners53
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences110
matches
0"Then, as if summoned, they"
1"Then the pressure, crushing her"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences110
matches
0"She touched it, the warmth"
1"They followed a worn path"
2"She snatched her hand back."
3"They were too far to"
4"Its face was a smooth,"
5"They slipped down the back"
6"It was a pavilion made"
7"They ate with a focused,"
8"His face was obscured by"
9"They retreated, moving swift and"
10"They were low to the"
11"They had no eyes, only"
12"Their mouths were lipless slits"
13"She stepped inside the lunge,"
14"It met no resistance, passing"
15"She began to chant, words"
16"They spread in a ring,"
17"Their violet eyes were wide."
18"Its cold clarity was a"
19"Their feet pounded on the"
ratio0.218
55.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences110
matches
0"The amber sky arched overhead,"
1"The air smelled of woodsmoke"
2"Aurora took a tentative step"
3"Isolde stood between them, her"
4"Isolde whispered, her voice hushed"
5"Aurora’s pendant pulsed against her"
6"She touched it, the warmth"
7"Nyx pointed a shadowed hand"
8"They followed a worn path"
9"The trees around them were"
10"Aurora reached out, her fingers"
11"She snatched her hand back."
12"Isolde said quietly"
13"A low hum filled the"
14"Coppery leaves shimmered beside emerald"
15"Flowers the size of dinner"
16"They were too far to"
17"Nyx murmured, their voice a"
18"Its face was a smooth,"
19"Aurora crouched lower."
ratio0.809
45.45% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"Even from this distance, Aurora"
ratio0.009
82.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"The bark was striated with patterns that shifted when Aurora looked at them directly—writhes of dark against lighter wood, forming fleeting images: a laden tabl…"
1"Ahead, the trees parted, revealing a clearing dominated by a structure that stole Aurora’s breath."
2"It was a pavilion made of interlocking ribs—whale bones, she realized, bleached white and enormous, curving up to support a canopy of stretched, translucent mem…"
3"Tureens steamed with fragrant soups that shimmered with oil-slick rainbows."
4"One hound took a step forward, its head tilting, scenting the air."
5"Nyx shifted, their form bleeding into the surrounding shadows, becoming half-there, half-not."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde whispered, her voice hushed"
1"Nyx murmured, their voice a chill breeze in the warm air"
2"Isolde said, her voice steady"
3"Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on the shimmering rift"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
2"Isolde agreed (agree)"
3"Isolde breathed (breathe)"
4"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
5"Aurora panted (pant)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.393
leniency0.786
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.429
75.0109%