Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ1S0E37FG1RAVW60JZ1D4

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2m 28s
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$0.003982
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Novita

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first knock sounded like a mistake. Three quick raps, hesitant. Rory kept slicing limes. Two more knocks, stronger this time. "Aurora?" She knew that voice. French accent smoothed by London living. The knife slipped and nicked her thumb. "One second." She wiped her thumb on her jeans and peered into the hall mirror. Her straight black hair fell over the bright blue of her eyes, tired from last night's research. The small crescent scar on her left wrist stood stark under pasty white skin. The chain stayed latched as she cracked the door. Lucien Moreau filled the doorway like a mistake she'd been expecting. Impeccable charcoal suit, platinum hair slicked back from a handsome face that made every memory worsen. One amber eye, one black. The cane with its ivory handle rested beside him. He looked better than she remembered. Worse. "Delivery came up short," he said. "Thought I'd see if you were avoiding me." "I'm working." She didn't open further. "Part-time hours. Cheung pays well, but not that well. Hardly seems like you." "She always paid fairly. Unlike some." His heterochromatic eyes dropped to the chain. "That's a new addition." "London's full of surprises." "I suppose that includes ex-lovers who vanish without a word." Rory shut the door enough to slide the chain free, then opened it wide. "Come in. Since you're here." Eva's flat smelled of old curry and older books. Ptolemy the tabby watched from atop a pile of scrolls. The room felt smaller with Lucien in it, the air thinner. She returned to the kitchenette, picking up the knife again. "Drink?" "Whiskey. Neat." "The good stuff's in Eva's room. You get what's left." "That's fine." He didn't sit. Instead, he wandered the perimeter, cane tapping softly on worn floorboards. His gaze traced the mess of research and myths spread over every surface. "Still chasing stories?" "Someone has to." She poured two fingers of cheap scotch into a clean glass. "What do you want, Luc?" "Is that what we're doing now? First names only?" "We haven't been anything for four months." She turned and found him closer than expected. His scent filled the space between them, bergamot and something deeper, masculine. Dangerous. "You moved," he said quietly. "Changed jobs. Changed everything except that godawful cat." "Ptolemy's appreciating antiques." "Much like Eva's taste in whiskey." He took the glass, fingers brushing hers. "Tell me it was something I said." Rory backed up against the counter. Knife still in hand. "It was something you did." The silence stretched. Ptolemy gave a soft meow of agreement. "You asked me," he said finally, "to find him. And I did." "You did." She set the knife down, gently. "And then you watched him leave." Lucien's face tightened. The black eye seemed darker. "As I told you at the time-" "You told me security footage placed him at Heathrow. Twelve hours after his supposed death." Rory heard her voice crack and steadied it. "I thought you were helping me." "I did help." "No. You let me think he was gone. And instead you..." She trailed off. "You what, exactly?" "He got away." Simple. "Because you let him." "Yes." The admission hung between them, sharp as the blade in his cane. Rory picked up a cloth and began wiping down the counters. Methodical. "He hurt people, Luc. Since he's been back. A girl in Soho. Another in Camden." "Evan always had terrible taste." "He's not Evan." "No," Lucien agreed softly. "He's something else." Rory's hands stilled. She glanced over her shoulder. He'd emptied his glass and set it aside, watching her. "You're still hunting him," he said. "You're still keeping secrets." He moved then, closing the small distance. "What would you have had me do?" "Stop him." "With what army?" His voice dropped. "You came to me with tears and blood on your sleeves. Told me he was dead. Made me want to burn the city down for proof." A hand reached out, brushed black hair from her face. "And then you saw the footage yourself and believed he'd survived somehow. But not who he is." Rory stepped back. Her hip hit the counter. "You never said." "You never asked." "I shouldn't have to ask." "And I shouldn't have to explain." He leaned on his cane, shoulders stiff. "We were... too tangled. You, wounded by him. Me, caught between what you wanted and what was safe." "Safe." "Yes." His gaze pinned her. "For you." "I didn't ask to be safe." "You would have, had you known what he became." The words fell like stones in still water. Rory watched them ripple outwards. "What," she said slowly, "did he become?" Lucien sighed, his earlier polish crumbling into something tired. "After you left Cardiff, Evan didn't waste time mourning. He sought out things most people think don't exist." "He's mortal." "Still mortal. But now he carries something inside him. A parasite. Or a passenger. The Aethelings call them Eaters of Shadow." A shiver traced Rory's spine. "What do they eat?" "Suffering." Lucien nodded towards her research. "You've likely read about them already, under another name. Lamiae. Wraithkin. Demi-Shades." Rory remembered the section Eva had flagged in an old lore compendium. "They feed on trauma," she whispered. "They thrive on it. And Evan... Evan found one desperate enough to bind to him. An entity starved by centuries of neglect. A perfect match." The room seemed darker. Colder. Rory saw Evan's face again, twisted in fury when she'd said she was leaving. Saw something she'd dismissed as cruelty now twisting into something worse. "I have to find him," she murmured. "Of course you do." "I mean alone." Lucien's laugh sounded hollow. "You're smarter than that." "I'm realistic. He knows you, Luc. He'll smell you coming." "He certainly smelled you in April. That night by the river." Rory went still. "How..." "The air tasted of you. Fear and awakened magic." Lucien took another step forward, forcing her to tilt her head back to meet his eyes. "You ran from Cardiff to get away from him. Yet you let him see you." "He didn't-" "He saw," Lucien insisted softly. "And he knew. Which is why you haven't slept through the night since." He read her too well. Always had. She pushed past him, needing space. Ptolemy chirped and jumped down, weaving between her legs. "I can help." Lucien's voice followed her. "Or I can pretend I never came here." "What makes you think I want your help?" "The fact you haven't thrown me out." Rory turned. He stood by the kitchenette, cane flat against his leg. The amber eye caught light from the bare bulb above. The black one devoured it. She swallowed. "He's killed." "And he will kill again." "I know." "Then stop being stubborn." "It's not stubbornness." Her voice shook slightly. "It's self-preservation." "For you, or for me?" She didn't answer. Couldn't. He crossed the room with slow, deliberate steps. When he reached her, he stopped, his suit brushing her jacket. "I made a mistake," he said, low enough she had to lean in. "Letting him go was cowardice." "Why?" "Because you would have fought him. And I would have helped you." His fingers touched her cheek. "And one of us would be dead." "I'm willing to risk it." "And I," he murmured, lips close enough to feel his breath, "am not willing to risk you." The words hung between them, delicate as spun glass. Rory heard soft clicking sounds and realised his thumb stroked her cheekbone. Touching the skin his eyes drank in. Somewhere in the next room, her phone buzzed. Ignored. "I need time," she whispered. "You've had months." "I need more." "Time," Lucien said, "is exactly what he's using against you." Three bolts. Eva's flat had three bolts on the front door. Suddenly it wasn't enough. Rory backed away again. "I'll think about it." "Think fast. He's finishing something." "What?" "I don't know yet. But the signatures are growing stronger. Concentrated." Lucien watched her. "You feel it, don't you?" She did. A tightening in her chest when she woke sweating from dreams she didn't remember. Shadows that moved too slowly in the corner of her vision. A weight that grew heavy as London's ancient stones. "He's hunting for a heartstone," Lucien revealed. "One last piece." Rory froze. "They're all gone." "One remains. Hidden. To use it would require..." She understood instantly. "A sacrifice." "Precisely." She met his mismatched eyes. "And I'm guessing I'd make a nicely symbolic one." "Welcome to the human condition," Lucien murmured. "He keeps returning to the source of his pain. And pleasure." "He hasn't been here." "Yet." She reached behind her, hand settling on the knife handle again. "Get out." "Aurora." "Now." He didn't move. Instead he tilted his head. "Your flat above Silas'. First floor." "Yes." "I slept outside it two weeks ago. Waiting." "For what?" "A sign." He smiled, thin and sharp. "That you were still breathing." "You shouldn't have come." "I know." He turned then, moving to the door. When he reached it, his hand on the knob, he looked back once. "You'll call me." It wasn't a question. Rory tightened her grip on the knife. "What makes you think?" "The crescent moon tattooed over his heart," Lucien said softly. "You told me about it that night in Marseille." Memory rushed back. Hotel room. Warm salt air. Her lips tracing the scar-like mark over his collarbone. "You never forgot a detail," she whispered. "Not one." He opened the door. "And neither has he." The click of the latch echoed in the sudden silence. Ptolemy walked over, rubbing against her leg. The knife slipped from her fingers and clattered to the floor.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.81% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags35
adverbTagCount7
adverbTags
0"he said quietly [quietly]"
1"he said finally [finally]"
2"Lucien agreed softly [softly]"
3"she said slowly [slowly]"
4"Lucien insisted softly [softly]"
5"Her voice shook slightly [slightly]"
6"Lucien said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences137
tagDensity0.255
leniency0.511
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.102
69.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"softly"
count4
1
adverb"gently"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"gently"
2"slowly"
3"slightly"
4"suddenly"
5"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"methodical"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"tracing"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"traced"
2"silence"
3"methodical"
4"perfect"
5"weight"
6"tracing"
7"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences134
matches
0"d in fury"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences134
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences235
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1614
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions31
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount844
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London2
Moreau1
Lucien15
Rory17
Simple1
Eva3
Evan1
Three2
Memory1
Ptolemy4
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Memory"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.493
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a mistake"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1614
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences235
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs139
mean11.61
std10.06
cv0.866
sampleLengths
015
17
217
32
444
59
648
714
86
913
106
1111
124
1310
1419
1530
1611
172
1810
192
2027
213
2219
239
247
2521
2613
273
2820
2915
3010
3112
3214
3315
3429
353
3617
374
384
391
4012
4127
425
433
447
4518
466
474
4814
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences134
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was leaving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences235
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount844
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"stark under pasty white skin."
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.0462085308056872
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.014218009478672985
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences235
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences235
mean6.87
std4.98
cv0.724
sampleLengths
07
14
24
36
41
54
66
77
82
913
1017
1114
129
1311
1416
155
169
176
181
196
208
216
2213
236
247
254
264
2710
2814
295
309
3110
3211
3310
341
352
3610
372
383
3911
4013
413
4214
435
449
457
468
4712
481
495
53.19% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3446808510638298
totalSentences235
uniqueOpeners81
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences111
matches
0"Instead, he wandered the perimeter,"
1"Somewhere in the next room,"
2"Suddenly it wasn't enough."
3"Instead he tilted his head."
ratio0.036
65.05% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences111
matches
0"She knew that voice."
1"She wiped her thumb on"
2"Her straight black hair fell"
3"He looked better than she"
4"She didn't open further"
5"His heterochromatic eyes dropped to"
6"She returned to the kitchenette,"
7"He didn't sit."
8"His gaze traced the mess"
9"She poured two fingers of"
10"She turned and found him"
11"His scent filled the space"
12"he said quietly"
13"He took the glass, fingers"
14"he said finally"
15"She set the knife down,"
16"She trailed off"
17"She glanced over her shoulder."
18"He'd emptied his glass and"
19"He moved then, closing the"
ratio0.387
18.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences111
matches
0"The first knock sounded like"
1"Rory kept slicing limes."
2"She knew that voice."
3"French accent smoothed by London"
4"The knife slipped and nicked"
5"She wiped her thumb on"
6"Her straight black hair fell"
7"The small crescent scar on"
8"The chain stayed latched as"
9"Lucien Moreau filled the doorway"
10"The cane with its ivory"
11"He looked better than she"
12"She didn't open further"
13"His heterochromatic eyes dropped to"
14"Rory shut the door enough"
15"Eva's flat smelled of old"
16"Ptolemy the tabby watched from"
17"The room felt smaller with"
18"She returned to the kitchenette,"
19"He didn't sit."
ratio0.883
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
96.43% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags35
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He took, fingers brushing hers"
1"She set, gently"
84.31% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Lucien agreed softly (agree)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
3"Lucien insisted softly (insist)"
4"he murmured (murmur)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
6"Lucien revealed (reveal)"
7"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
8"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences137
tagDensity0.124
leniency0.248
rawRatio0.529
effectiveRatio0.131
85.2911%