Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ1X0W5P29Q72PV7NPN444

Run Details

Duration:
28.0s
Cost:
$0.015253
Provider:
Cohere

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open and there he stood, filling the doorway with his broad shoulders and confident smirk. Aurora's heart skipped a beat at the sight of him. She hadn't expected to see Lucien again, especially after the way they had last parted. But here he was, looking as dapper as ever in one of his tailored suits, the amber eye glaring under his blond quiff. The scent of his cologne wafted towards her, a familiar mix of sandalwood and musk. "Well, well, Carter. Long time no see." His deep voice echoed through the dimly lit corridor. Aurora's hand gripped the doorknob tightly, her knuckles turning white. She had to remind herself to breathe. Seeing Lucien again stirred up a whirlwind of emotions she thought she had buried long ago. "What do you want, Moreau?" Her voice came out sharper than she intended, a clear sign of the turmoil within. Lucien raised an eyebrow at the use of his surname. He stepped into the flat, his cane clicking against the wooden floor. Ptolemy, her tabby cat, rubbed against his leg, unbothered by the intrusion. "I thought we were past formalities, ma chère. After all, we've shared things that friends don't tell each other." Aurora bit her lip, remembering the intimacy they had once shared. It had been a whirlwind of passion and secrets, until it all came crashing down. She stepped aside, allowing him entry. "This is a surprise. Thought you'd be busy collecting debts or brokering deals in the underworld." He chuckled, his gaze taking in the chaos of her living room. "I saw an opportunity to deal with a certain fiery redhead and thought, 'Why not?' Besides, I'm here for a social call, not business. For once." Her heart fluttered at the implication, but she kept her features carefully neutral. "Right. A social call." Aurora shut the door, ensuring all three deadbolts were secured. She turned to face him, crossing her arms. "What brings you here, then? Decided to catch up on old times?" Lucien sauntered towards her, his dark eyes glittering with an unreadable emotion. "Something like that. I couldn't stay away, especially after hearing certain... interesting tidbits about your recent adventures." He pulled out a slim silver cigarette case and offered her one. Aurora declined with a shake of her head, not wanting to be drawn into his web of charm and seduction. "I don't smoke." "Ah, yes. A healthy lifestyle. Admirable." He lit his own cigarette with an antique lighter, the flame reflecting in his eyes. "So, tell me, Rory, how's life treating you? Still making deliveries for Cheung?" "Mostly. I've been keeping busy. You know, making an honest living." She gestured around the modest flat, littered with books and notes, a stark contrast to Lucien's luxurious tastes. "Hmm, quite the contrast to my world." He exhaled a stream of smoke, his gaze turning smoky. "But I must admit, I prefer the rogue to the law-abiding citizen. It suits you, this life on the edge." Aurora's cheeks warmed at the compliment, or perhaps it was the cigarette smoke curling around them. "I don't remember asking for your opinion on my lifestyle choices." "Maybe you should. We both know you're not the law-abiding type, Rory. You've got a wild streak, and I've always admired that about you." He took a step closer, his proximity making her aware of her rapid heartbeat. "We shouldn't..." Aurora trailed off, feeling the pull of attraction between them, the same force that had brought them together and torn them apart. Lucien's hand reached up, gently brushing a stray lock of hair from her face. "There's something between us, Aurora. A connection forged in secrets and shared dangers. We've never addressed it." She caught his hand in midair, their fingers twining together. "What are you asking me, Lucien?" He leaned in, his breath tickling her earlobe. "I'm not running this time. From you, from us. I want to know what you feel, mon ange." Aurora's body buzzed with electricity, the air crackling with unspoken desire. She released his hand and took a cautious step back. "I... I can't do this. Not now. Too much has happened, and I..." Lucien's eyes narrowed, his features turning sharp. "Afraid?" She shook her head, her straight black hair sliding across her shoulders. "No, not afraid. Just... cautious. You don't stay in one place, and I've got roots growing here." He took a deep drag on his cigarette, his amber eye studying her intently. "Think you can tame me, Rory?" Aurora's heart hammered in her chest. "I'm not trying to tame you, Luc. I just... I want to know you're not going to disappear again." "I'm here, aren't I? Standing in your flat, in front of you." He dropped the cigarette on the floor and stubbed it out with his shoe. "I came back. That's gotta count for something." She could feel her resolve weakening, the memories of their past pulling at her like a gravitational force. "What do you want from me, Lucien?" His voice lowered to a husky whisper. "I want you. All of you, Rory—the passion, the secrets, the demons. Everything." Aurora's mind raced, grappling with the intensity of his words. "I..." Before she could finish, Lucien closed the gap between them, his lips meeting hers in a kiss that was both fierce and desperate. His taste was familiar, the scent of spice and temptation. Aurora's arms slid around his neck, and she surrendered to the moment, to the rush of emotions that consumed her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences30
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.067
83.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount924
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"carefully"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount924
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"skipped a beat"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count2
2
word"echoed"
count1
3
word"eyebrow"
count1
4
word"fluttered"
count1
5
word"implication"
count1
6
word"ensuring"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"charm"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"desire"
count1
12
word"could feel"
count1
13
word"resolve"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"raced"
count1
16
word"grappling"
count1
17
word"intensity"
count1
highlights
0"skipped a beat"
1"familiar"
2"echoed"
3"eyebrow"
4"fluttered"
5"implication"
6"ensuring"
7"unreadable"
8"charm"
9"stark"
10"unspoken"
11"desire"
12"could feel"
13"resolve"
14"whisper"
15"raced"
16"grappling"
17"intensity"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences45
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences65
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords921
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.17% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount580
uniqueNames2
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Lucien8
Aurora11
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.552
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount921
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean34.11
std17.73
cv0.52
sampleLengths
097
133
220
353
448
538
647
741
823
934
1029
1137
1227
1362
1431
1516
1626
1734
188
1929
2020
2125
2234
2325
2420
2511
2653
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs101
matches
0"was, looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences65
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount580
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.027586206896551724
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.010344827586206896
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences65
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences65
mean14.17
std6.9
cv0.487
sampleLengths
018
110
215
323
415
516
610
77
816
920
1010
1112
1212
1319
1411
1515
166
1716
1812
1926
2013
2114
228
2312
2412
2529
2620
273
2821
2913
3029
3117
3220
3316
3411
3538
3624
3714
3817
3910
406
418
4218
4311
4410
4513
467
471
4812
4917
68.72% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4307692307692308
totalSentences65
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences45
matches
0"She hadn't expected to see"
1"His deep voice echoed through"
2"She had to remind herself"
3"Her voice came out sharper"
4"He stepped into the flat,"
5"It had been a whirlwind"
6"She stepped aside, allowing him"
7"He chuckled, his gaze taking"
8"Her heart fluttered at the"
9"She turned to face him,"
10"He pulled out a slim"
11"He lit his own cigarette"
12"She gestured around the modest"
13"He exhaled a stream of"
14"He took a step closer,"
15"She caught his hand in"
16"He leaned in, his breath"
17"She released his hand and"
18"She shook her head, her"
19"He took a deep drag"
ratio0.533
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences45
matches
0"The door swung open and"
1"Aurora's heart skipped a beat"
2"She hadn't expected to see"
3"The scent of his cologne"
4"His deep voice echoed through"
5"Aurora's hand gripped the doorknob"
6"She had to remind herself"
7"Her voice came out sharper"
8"Lucien raised an eyebrow at"
9"He stepped into the flat,"
10"Ptolemy, her tabby cat, rubbed"
11"Aurora bit her lip, remembering"
12"It had been a whirlwind"
13"She stepped aside, allowing him"
14"He chuckled, his gaze taking"
15"Her heart fluttered at the"
16"Aurora shut the door, ensuring"
17"She turned to face him,"
18"Lucien sauntered towards her, his"
19"He pulled out a slim"
ratio0.933
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Before she could finish, Lucien"
ratio0.022
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She could feel her resolve weakening, the memories of their past pulling at her like a gravitational force."
1"Aurora's arms slid around his neck, and she surrendered to the moment, to the rush of emotions that consumed her."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"He lit, the flame reflecting in his eyes"
1"He exhaled, his gaze turning smoky"
2"He took, his proximity making her aware of her rapid heartbeat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.0942%