Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ1ZVP4XCSJEF3G62JWN1W

Run Details

Duration:
22.8s
Cost:
$0.008998

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The key turned in the deadbolt with a sharp click. Rory hesitated, her fingers still wrapped around the cold metal, before pushing the door open. The scent of cardamom and old paper hit her first, then the low hum of Eva’s record player spinning some jazz she didn’t recognize. Ptolemy uncurled from the armchair, stretched, and blinked at her with lazy green eyes. Then she saw him. Lucien stood by the window, one hand resting on the sill, the other tapping his cane against his thigh. The late afternoon light caught the sharp angles of his face, the platinum of his hair, the way his amber eye glinted like a coin in the sun. His suit was immaculate, as always—charcoal wool, tailored to perfection, the faintest sheen of rain still clinging to the shoulders. Rory’s breath stuck in her throat. “You’re not Eva,” she said. His mouth quirked. “Observant as ever.” “What are you doing here?” “Waiting for you.” He turned fully toward her, the black eye swallowing the light. “Eva let me in. Said you’d be back soon.” Rory stepped inside, shutting the door harder than she meant to. The locks slid home with three decisive thunks. “She didn’t mention it.” “She was in the middle of a ritual. Something about binding a spirit to a teacup.” He shrugged. “I didn’t ask for details.” Rory tossed her keys onto the cluttered side table. They skidded across a stack of books, sending a few sliding to the floor. “You could’ve called.” “I did. Three times.” She pulled her phone from her pocket. Sure enough, three missed calls from a number she’d deleted months ago. “I’ve been working.” “Delivering dumplings?” “Someone’s got to pay the rent.” Lucien’s gaze flicked to her wrist, where the crescent scar peeked out from under her sleeve. She tugged it down, but not fast enough. His jaw tightened. “You look tired.” “And you look like you walked out of a magazine.” She crossed her arms. “What do you want, Lucien?” He exhaled through his nose, a sound that was almost a laugh. “Straight to the point. I forgot how much I missed that.” “Don’t.” “Don’t what?” “Don’t act like we’re old friends catching up.” His fingers tightened around the cane. “We were never just friends, Rory.” The words hung between them, heavy as the London damp. She could still feel the ghost of his mouth on hers, the way his hands had gripped her hips like he was afraid she’d disappear. Then the way he’d walked away without looking back. She turned toward the kitchenette, putting the counter between them. “Eva’s got tea somewhere. Or whiskey. You can have whichever you want, then you can leave.” “Whiskey, then.” She pulled a bottle from the cabinet, the glass cool against her palm. Two glasses. No ice. She poured, the liquid catching the light like amber fire. When she turned back, he was closer than she expected, close enough that she could see the faint scar above his eyebrow, the one he’d gotten in Marseille years ago. He took the glass. Their fingers didn’t touch, but she felt the heat of him anyway. “You left,” she said. “I had to.” “Bullshit.” His mouth twisted. “You think I wanted to walk away from you?” “You did it pretty well.” “Because I had no choice.” He set the glass down without drinking. “You know what I am. What I’m capable of. I wasn’t going to drag you into that.” “You didn’t give me a say in it.” “Would you have stayed if I had?” She didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. They both knew the truth. Lucien stepped closer, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, the way his pupils dilated when he looked at her. “I thought about you every damn day.” “Then why didn’t you come back sooner?” “Because I’m an idiot.” His hand lifted, hesitated, then cupped her cheek. His skin was warmer than she remembered, rougher. “Because I thought you were better off without me.” She should’ve pulled away. Should’ve told him to leave. But his thumb brushed over her bottom lip, and her breath hitched. “Rory,” he murmured. She grabbed his wrist, not to push him away, but to hold him there. “If you walk out that door again, don’t bother coming back.” His other hand slid around her waist, pulling her against him. “I’m not going anywhere.” Then his mouth was on hers, and it wasn’t gentle. It was desperate, hungry, like he was trying to make up for every second they’d lost. She kissed him back just as hard, her fingers tangling in his hair, pulling him closer. The cane clattered to the floor, forgotten. Ptolemy yowled from the armchair. Lucien broke the kiss with a rough laugh, resting his forehead against hers. “Your cat’s judging me.” “He’s got good taste.” She pressed her lips to his jaw, then his throat, feeling the rapid pulse beneath his skin. “You’re still an idiot.” “Yeah.” His hands slid under her shirt, tracing the curve of her spine. “But I’m your idiot.” She bit his earlobe, just hard enough to make him groan. “Prove it.”
total_cost0.008998

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned fully [fully]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.222
leniency0.444
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.044
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount867
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.93% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount867
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"eyebrow"
2"pulse"
3"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
97.22% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences60
matches
0"was afraid"
1"was desperate"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences95
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords866
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount617
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Rory4
London1
Marseille1
Lucien4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
84.53% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.155
wordCount866
matches
0"not to push him away, but to hold him there"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences95
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean17.67
std16.07
cv0.909
sampleLengths
063
14
267
36
45
56
65
723
823
923
1026
114
1222
132
146
1530
1619
1723
181
192
208
2112
2244
2326
242
2557
2616
274
283
291
3012
315
3229
338
347
3512
3634
377
3829
3921
403
4125
4215
4349
445
4517
4625
4717
4813
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs110
matches
0"was trying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences95
ratio0.011
matches
0"His suit was immaculate, as always—charcoal wool, tailored to perfection, the faintest sheen of rain still clinging to the shoulders."
95.36% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount618
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.045307443365695796
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0016181229773462784
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences95
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences95
mean9.12
std6.36
cv0.698
sampleLengths
010
115
224
314
44
519
628
720
86
95
103
113
125
1314
149
1511
168
174
1818
195
209
2114
223
234
247
2512
263
272
286
2916
308
313
323
3314
345
3512
3611
371
382
398
406
416
4210
4325
449
4510
4616
472
4813
492
58.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3894736842105263
totalSentences95
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences54
matches
0"Then she saw him."
1"Then the way he’d walked"
2"Then his mouth was on"
ratio0.056
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences54
matches
0"His suit was immaculate, as"
1"His mouth quirked."
2"He turned fully toward her,"
3"They skidded across a stack"
4"She pulled her phone from"
5"She tugged it down, but"
6"His jaw tightened."
7"She crossed her arms"
8"He exhaled through his nose,"
9"His fingers tightened around the"
10"She could still feel the"
11"She turned toward the kitchenette,"
12"She pulled a bottle from"
13"She poured, the liquid catching"
14"He took the glass."
15"Their fingers didn’t touch, but"
16"His mouth twisted."
17"He set the glass down"
18"She didn’t answer."
19"She didn’t have to."
ratio0.574
24.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences54
matches
0"The key turned in the"
1"Rory hesitated, her fingers still"
2"The scent of cardamom and"
3"Ptolemy uncurled from the armchair,"
4"Lucien stood by the window,"
5"The late afternoon light caught"
6"His suit was immaculate, as"
7"Rory’s breath stuck in her"
8"His mouth quirked."
9"He turned fully toward her,"
10"Rory stepped inside, shutting the"
11"The locks slid home with"
12"Rory tossed her keys onto"
13"They skidded across a stack"
14"She pulled her phone from"
15"Lucien’s gaze flicked to her"
16"She tugged it down, but"
17"His jaw tightened."
18"She crossed her arms"
19"He exhaled through his nose,"
ratio0.87
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She kissed him back just as hard, her fingers tangling in his hair, pulling him closer."
75.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He turned fully, the black eye swallowing the light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"She pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.089
leniency0.178
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.089
87.0816%