Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ21K2W06R88ZS58MPGGBZ

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Fantasy genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

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Aurora's breath caught in her throat as she stumbled through the shimmering boundary of the Fae Grove. The ancient oak standing stones loomed around her, their gnarled branches twisting like skeletal fingers against the amber sky. She glanced back at Nyx, their shadowy form slipping through the Veil with an eerie grace, and then at Isolde, who moved with the silent elegance of a ghost. "Keep close," Isolde's voice, soft and melodic, carried a hint of warning. "Time flows differently here." Aurora nodded, her fingers brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she had never quite shaken. The wildflowers beneath her feet seemed to pulse with an inner light, their petals shifting colours with each step she took. The air was thick with the scent of blooming jasmine and something else, something ancient and powerful that made her skin tingle. "Is it always like this?" Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper. "Always," Isolde replied, her pale lavender eyes scanning the grove. "The Fae Grove is a place of magic and mystery. It is both beautiful and dangerous." Nyx, their faintly glowing violet eyes flickering like distant stars, moved silently beside Aurora. "Stay alert," they whispered, their voice like a breeze rustling through leaves. "The Grove has a way of revealing truths and secrets." Aurora tightened her grip on the Heartstone Pendant around her neck, the deep crimson gem pulsing faintly with warmth. She had no idea who had given it to her, but it had become a source of comfort in this strange new world. As they ventured deeper into the grove, the trees grew taller and more twisted, their bark covered in intricate patterns that seemed to shift and change when she wasn't looking. The ground beneath her feet was soft and spongy, and she could hear the distant sound of running water, a gentle, melodic trickle that seemed to call to her. "Look," Nyx said, pointing to a cluster of mushrooms that glowed with an ethereal light. "Fae lights. They mark the path." Aurora crouched down, reaching out to touch one of the mushrooms. It was cool and smooth beneath her fingers, and as she brushed against it, the light grew brighter, illuminating the path ahead. "Fascinating," she murmured, standing up and following the trail of glowing mushrooms. "It's like something out of a dream." "Or a nightmare," Nyx added, their voice tinged with a hint of amusement. The path led them to a clearing, where a small, crystal-clear pond lay nestled among the trees. The water shimmered with a thousand colours, reflecting the amber sky above. Aurora knelt by the edge, dipping her fingers into the cool water. It felt like liquid silk, smooth and soothing against her skin. "Isolde, what is this place?" she asked, her eyes wide with wonder. "The Heart of the Grove," Isolde replied, her voice soft and reverent. "It is a place of great power, where the boundaries between worlds are thin. Many come here seeking answers, but few find what they are looking for." Aurora stared into the depths of the pond, her reflection shimmering and shifting like a mirage. She could see her own bright blue eyes staring back at her, but there was something else, something lurking just beneath the surface. "Be careful," Nyx warned, their shadowy form hovering at the edge of the clearing. "The Grove has a way of showing you what you fear most." Aurora's heart pounded in her chest as she watched her reflection twist and change. She saw Evan, her abusive ex, his face contorted with rage. She saw her parents, their expressions filled with disappointment. She saw herself, alone and broken, lost in a world she didn't understand. "No," she whispered, tearing her gaze away from the pond. "I won't let it control me." Isolde placed a gentle hand on her shoulder, her touch cool and comforting. "You are stronger than you know, Aurora. The Grove tests us all, but it also reveals our true selves." Aurora took a deep breath, steadying herself. "What now?" "We continue," Isolde said, her voice firm. "There is more to see, more to learn." As they moved deeper into the grove, the air grew colder, and the light dimmed. The trees seemed to close in around them, their branches forming a tangled web overhead. Aurora could hear whispers, faint and indistinct, like the murmur of a distant crowd. "Do you hear that?" she asked, her voice trembling. "Voices of the past," Nyx replied. "Echoes of those who have walked this path before us." Aurora shivered, pulling her jacket tighter around her. The whispers grew louder, more insistent, and she could feel the weight of their gaze upon her. "Stay focused," Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise. "Do not let them distract you." They emerged into another clearing, this one filled with ancient stone ruins. The stones were covered in moss and ivy, their surfaces etched with strange symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light. "What is this place?" Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe. "An old Fae temple," Isolde replied. "Long abandoned, but still powerful." Aurora stepped closer to the stones, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns. She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race. "Be careful," Nyx warned. "The magic here is old and unpredictable." Aurora nodded, her eyes scanning the ruins. She could see a faint glow coming from one of the stones, and she moved closer, her curiosity piqued. "What's this?" she asked, reaching out to touch the glowing stone. As her fingers brushed against it, the stone shifted, revealing a hidden compartment. Inside, nestled among the moss and ivy, was a slender, leaf-shaped dagger. The blade was made of moonsilver, and it glowed faintly in the dim light. "A Fae-Forged Blade," Isolde said, her voice filled with reverence. "A rare and powerful weapon." Aurora picked up the dagger, its cold surface sending a shiver down her spine. "What does it do?" "It can cut through magical wards," Isolde explained. "And it is particularly effective against demons." Aurora's grip tightened on the hilt of the dagger. "I think I'm going to need this." "Indeed," Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind. "The path ahead is fraught with danger." Aurora took a deep breath, steeling herself. "Then let's keep moving." As they ventured further into the grove, the air grew colder, and the light dimmed even more. The trees seemed to close in around them, their branches forming a tangled web overhead. Aurora could hear the whispers growing louder, more insistent, and she could feel the weight of their gaze upon her. "Stay focused," Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise. "Do not let them distract you." They emerged into another clearing, this one filled with ancient stone ruins. The stones were covered in moss and ivy, their surfaces etched with strange symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light. "What is this place?" Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe. "An old Fae temple," Isolde replied. "Long abandoned, but still powerful." Aurora stepped closer to the stones, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns. She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race. "Be careful," Nyx warned. "The magic here is old and unpredictable." Aurora nodded, her eyes scanning the ruins. She could see a faint glow coming from one of the stones, and she moved closer, her curiosity piqued. "What's this?" she asked, reaching out to touch the glowing stone. As her fingers brushed against it, the stone shifted, revealing a hidden compartment. Inside, nestled among the moss and ivy, was a slender, leaf-shaped dagger. The blade was made of moonsilver, and it glowed faintly in the dim light. "A Fae-Forged Blade," Isolde said, her voice filled with reverence. "A rare and powerful weapon." Aurora picked up the dagger, its cold surface sending a shiver down her spine. "What does it do?" "It can cut through magical wards," Isolde explained. "And it is particularly effective against demons." Aurora's grip tightened on the hilt of the dagger. "I think I'm going to need this." "Indeed," Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind. "The path ahead is fraught with danger." Aurora took a deep breath, steeling herself. "Then let's keep moving." As they ventured further into the grove, the air grew colder, and the light dimmed even more. The trees seemed to close in around them, their branches forming a tangled web overhead. Aurora could hear the whispers growing louder, more insistent, and she could feel the weight of their gaze upon her. "Stay focused," Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise. "Do not let them distract you." They emerged into another clearing, this one filled with ancient stone ruins. The stones were covered in moss and ivy, their surfaces etched with strange symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light. "What is this place?" Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe. "An old Fae temple," Isolde replied. "Long abandoned, but still powerful." Aurora stepped closer to the stones, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns. She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race. "Be careful," Nyx warned. "The magic here is old and unpredictable." Aurora nodded, her eyes scanning the ruins. She could see a faint glow coming from one of the stones, and she moved closer, her curiosity piqued. "What's this?" she asked, reaching out to touch the glowing stone. As her fingers brushed against it, the stone shifted, revealing a hidden compartment. Inside, nestled among the moss and ivy, was a slender, leaf-shaped dagger. The blade was made of moonsilver, and it glowed faintly in the dim light. "A Fae-Forged Blade," Isolde said, her voice filled with reverence. "A rare and powerful weapon." Aurora picked up the dagger, its cold surface sending a shiver down her spine. "What does it do?" "It can cut through magical wards," Isolde explained. "And it is particularly effective against demons." Aurora's grip tightened on the hilt of the dagger. "I think I'm going to need this." "Indeed," Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind. "The path ahead is fraught with danger." Aurora took a deep breath, steeling herself. "Then let's keep moving." As they ventured further into the grove, the air grew colder, and the light dimmed even more. The trees seemed to close in around them, their branches forming a tangled web overhead. Aurora could hear the whispers growing louder, more insistent, and she could feel the weight of their gaze upon her. "Stay focused," Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise. "Do not let them distract you." They emerged into another clearing, this one filled with ancient stone ruins. The stones were covered in moss and ivy, their surfaces etched with strange symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light. "What is this place?" Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe. "An old Fae temple," Isolde replied. "Long abandoned, but still powerful." Aurora stepped closer to the stones, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns. She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race. "Be careful," Nyx warned. "The magic here is old and unpredictable." Aurora nodded, her eyes scanning the ruins. She could see a faint glow coming from one of the stones, and she moved closer, her curiosity piqued. "What's this?" she asked, reaching out to touch the glowing stone. As her fingers brushed against it, the stone shifted, revealing a hidden compartment. Inside, nestled among the moss and ivy, was a slender, leaf-shaped dagger. The blade was made of moonsilver, and it glowed faintly in the dim light. "A Fae-Forged Blade," Isolde said, her voice filled with reverence. "A rare and powerful weapon." Aurora picked up the dagger, its cold surface sending a shiver down her spine. "What does it do?" "It can cut through magical wards," Isolde explained. "And it is particularly effective against demons." Aurora's grip tightened on the hilt of the dagger. "I think I'm going to need this." "Indeed," Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind. "The path ahead is fraught with danger." Aurora took a deep breath, steeling herself. "Then let's keep moving." As they ventured further into the grove, the air grew colder, and the light dimmed even more. The trees seemed to close in around them, their branches forming a tangled web overhead. Aurora could hear the whispers growing louder, more insistent, and she could feel the weight of their gaze upon her. "Stay focused," Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise. "Do not let them distract you." They emerged into another clearing, this one filled with ancient stone ruins. The stones were covered in moss and ivy, their surfaces etched with strange symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light. "What is this place?" Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe. "An old Fae temple," Isolde replied. "Long abandoned, but still powerful." Aurora stepped closer to the stones, her fingers tracing the intricate patterns. She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race. "Be careful," Nyx warned. "The magic here is old and unpredictable." Aurora nodded, her eyes scanning the ruins. She could see a faint glow coming from one of the stones, and she moved closer, her curiosity piqued. "What's this?" she asked, reaching out to touch the glowing stone. As her fingers brushed against it, the stone shifted, revealing a hidden compartment. Inside, nestled among the moss and ivy, was a slender, leaf-shaped dagger. The blade was made of moonsilver, and it glowed faintly in the dim light. "A Fae-Forged Blade," Isolde said, her voice filled with reverence. "A rare and powerful weapon." Aurora picked up the dagger, its cold surface sending a shiver down her spine. "What does it do?" "It can cut through magical wards," Isolde explained. "And it is particularly effective against demons." Aurora's grip tightened on the hilt of the dagger. "I think I'm going to need this." "Indeed," Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind. "The path ahead is fraught with danger." Aurora took a deep breath, steeling herself. "Then let's keep moving." As they ventured further into the grove, the air grew colder, and the light dimmed even more. The trees seemed to close in around them, their branches forming a tangled web overhead. Aurora could hear the whispers growing louder, more insistent, and she could feel the weight of their gaze upon her. "Stay focused," Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise. 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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags69
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences145
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
98.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount3099
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount3099
totalAiIsms84
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count8
3
word"scanning"
count8
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count8
6
word"fascinating"
count1
7
word"tinged"
count1
8
word"crystal"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"depths"
count1
12
word"comforting"
count1
13
word"echoes"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count14
15
word"weight"
count7
16
word"etched"
count7
17
word"tracing"
count7
18
word"race"
count7
19
word"down her spine"
count7
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulse"
2"whisper"
3"scanning"
4"warmth"
5"intricate"
6"fascinating"
7"tinged"
8"crystal"
9"shimmered"
10"silk"
11"depths"
12"comforting"
13"echoes"
14"could feel"
15"weight"
16"etched"
17"tracing"
18"race"
19"down her spine"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"heart pounded in her chest"
1"The air was thick with"
83.95% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells10
narrationSentences203
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"e with wonder"
2"d with rage"
3"e with awe"
4"e with awe"
5"e with awe"
6"e with awe"
7"e with awe"
8"e with awe"
9"e with awe"
23.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount17
narrationSentences203
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences278
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords3083
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions52
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
24.27% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions120
wordCount2386
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.51
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Nyx20
Veil1
Isolde34
Aurora60
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Evan1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Aurora"
3"Evan"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Veil"
globalScore0.243
windowScore0.5
10.34% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences179
glossingSentenceCount10
matches
0"patterns that seemed to shift and change when she wasn't looking"
1"trickle that seemed to call to her"
2"felt like liquid silk, smooth and sooth"
3"symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light"
4"symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light"
5"symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light"
6"symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light"
7"symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light"
8"symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light"
9"symbols that seemed to glow with an inner light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount3083
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences278
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs138
mean22.34
std13.16
cv0.589
sampleLengths
065
116
264
313
426
536
642
759
821
933
1019
1113
1252
1312
1439
1539
1626
1747
1816
1932
209
2115
2244
239
2416
2525
2616
2734
2811
2911
3030
3111
3226
3311
3439
3515
3618
3715
3816
3917
4011
4152
4216
4334
4411
4511
4630
4711
4826
4911
81.06% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount14
totalSentences203
matches
0"were covered"
1"was made"
2"were covered"
3"was made"
4"were covered"
5"was made"
6"were covered"
7"was made"
8"were covered"
9"was made"
10"were covered"
11"was made"
12"were covered"
13"was made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs461
matches
0"wasn't looking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences278
ratio0
matches(empty)
60.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2395
adjectiveStacks9
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"small, crystal-clear pond"
2"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
3"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
4"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
5"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
6"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
7"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
8"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.01837160751565762
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.004592901878914405
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences278
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences278
mean11.09
std5.38
cv0.485
sampleLengths
017
119
229
312
44
521
621
722
813
910
1016
1114
1212
1310
1419
1523
1630
1729
1815
196
2011
2122
2212
237
2413
2517
2612
2712
2811
2912
3012
3127
3216
3323
3414
3512
3614
3711
389
3913
4010
416
4213
4319
447
452
467
478
4815
4915
46.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.1223021582733813
totalSentences278
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences181
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences181
matches
0"She glanced back at Nyx,"
1"they whispered, their voice like"
2"She had no idea who"
3"It was cool and smooth"
4"she murmured, standing up and"
5"It felt like liquid silk,"
6"she asked, her eyes wide"
7"She could see her own"
8"She saw Evan, her abusive"
9"She saw her parents, their"
10"She saw herself, alone and"
11"she whispered, tearing her gaze"
12"she asked, her voice trembling"
13"They emerged into another clearing,"
14"She could feel the magic"
15"She could see a faint"
16"she asked, reaching out to"
17"They emerged into another clearing,"
18"She could feel the magic"
19"She could see a faint"
ratio0.227
23.54% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount158
totalSentences181
matches
0"Aurora's breath caught in her"
1"The ancient oak standing stones"
2"She glanced back at Nyx,"
3"Isolde's voice, soft and melodic,"
4"Aurora nodded, her fingers brushing"
5"The wildflowers beneath her feet"
6"The air was thick with"
7"Aurora asked, her voice barely"
8"Isolde replied, her pale lavender"
9"Nyx, their faintly glowing violet"
10"they whispered, their voice like"
11"Aurora tightened her grip on"
12"She had no idea who"
13"The ground beneath her feet"
14"Nyx said, pointing to a"
15"Aurora crouched down, reaching out"
16"It was cool and smooth"
17"she murmured, standing up and"
18"Nyx added, their voice tinged"
19"The path led them to"
ratio0.873
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences181
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences109
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"As they ventured deeper into the grove, the trees grew taller and more twisted, their bark covered in intricate patterns that seemed to shift and change when sh…"
1"The ground beneath her feet was soft and spongy, and she could hear the distant sound of running water, a gentle, melodic trickle that seemed to call to her."
2"Aurora stared into the depths of the pond, her reflection shimmering and shifting like a mirage."
3"She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race."
4"She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race."
5"She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race."
6"She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race."
7"She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race."
8"She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race."
9"She could feel the magic pulsing beneath her skin, a deep, thrumming energy that made her heart race."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags69
uselessAdditionCount27
matches
0"Aurora asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
1"she asked, her eyes wide with wonder"
2"Isolde replied, her voice soft and reverent"
3"Nyx warned, their shadowy form hovering at the edge of the clearing"
4"Isolde said, her voice firm"
5"she asked, her voice trembling"
6"Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise"
7"Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe"
8"Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind"
9"Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise"
10"Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe"
11"Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind"
12"Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise"
13"Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe"
14"Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind"
15"Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise"
16"Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe"
17"Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind"
18"Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise"
19"Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe"
20"Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind"
21"Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise"
22"Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe"
23"Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind"
24"Isolde said, her voice cutting through the noise"
25"Aurora asked, her eyes wide with awe"
26"Nyx said, their voice a whisper on the wind"
18.97% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags69
fancyCount19
fancyTags
0"they whispered (whisper)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Nyx added (add)"
3"Nyx warned (warn)"
4"she whispered (whisper)"
5"Nyx warned (warn)"
6"Isolde explained (explain)"
7"Nyx warned (warn)"
8"Isolde explained (explain)"
9"Nyx warned (warn)"
10"Isolde explained (explain)"
11"Nyx warned (warn)"
12"Isolde explained (explain)"
13"Nyx warned (warn)"
14"Isolde explained (explain)"
15"Nyx warned (warn)"
16"Isolde explained (explain)"
17"Nyx warned (warn)"
18"Isolde explained (explain)"
dialogueSentences145
tagDensity0.476
leniency0.952
rawRatio0.275
effectiveRatio0.262
67.1254%