Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ21PQ2HNQ48Y4611ADFE8

Run Details

Duration:
26.9s
Cost:
$0.041850
Provider:
Amazon Bedrock

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The silver mist parted as Aurora stepped through the ancient oak archway into Isolde's grove. Her breath caught at the sight - wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors, their petals glowing with an inner light that pulsed like tiny heartbeats. Behind her, Nyx's shadowy form rippled as they passed through the standing stones. "The air feels... different here." Aurora's words hung suspended in the stillness, crystalline droplets of sound that seemed to echo longer than they should. Her Heartstone pendant pulsed warmly against her chest, responding to the otherworldly energy that saturated the grove. "Time moves strangely in this place." Nyx's whispered voice drifted on nonexistent wind. "What seems like moments outside could stretch into days within these bounds." Moonlight filtered through the canopy above, though Aurora distinctly remembered it being mid-afternoon when they'd entered Richmond Park. The trees themselves defied natural law - their trunks spiraled in impossible geometric patterns, branches weaving together to form archways and passages that beckoned them deeper into the grove. Aurora's fingers brushed the hilt of her Fae blade, its familiar cold touch grounding her in reality as they ventured forward. The luminescent weapon cast subtle shadows across the misty ground, which seemed to swallow their footsteps. She noticed Nyx left no impressions at all, their form floating just above the earth like smoke. A cluster of mushrooms sprouted beneath her feet as she walked, their caps gleaming with constellation patterns that shifted and swirled. The very ground seemed alive, responding to their presence with subtle movements and transformations. "Look." Aurora pointed to a stream that flowed upward, defying gravity as it wound its way through the air like a ribbon of liquid starlight. Tiny creatures that looked like cross between fish and falling leaves swam through it, their bodies transparent except for glowing cores of blue-white light. "The Veil is tissue-thin here." Nyx's form condensed slightly, becoming more solid as they studied the impossible stream. "See how reality bends and warps? We walk the boundary between Earth and Faerie." Aurora's Heartstone flared suddenly with warmth as they rounded a massive oak tree whose trunk was wider than a car. In a clearing ahead, Isolde stood beside a pool of water so still it mirrored the star-studded sky above with perfect clarity, despite the canopy that should have blocked the view. The Half-Fae's silver hair floated around her as though underwater, though no wind stirred the grove. Her lavender eyes fixed on Aurora with ancient knowing. "The shadows whisper of your coming." Isolde's voice chimed like crystal bells. "Three seekers at the crossroads of fate, where mortal steps leave marks upon dreams." Aurora glanced down at her feet, noticing for the first time that her footprints left tiny blooms of phosphorescent fungi in her wake, marking their twisted path through the grove. The glowing trail behind them wound impossibly, suggesting they'd walked much further than the physical space should have allowed. "We need your guidance." Aurora stepped forward, the Heartstone's warmth intensifying. "The rifts in London are-" A sound like breaking glass shattered the grove's otherworldly silence. The pool's mirror-surface rippled, and in its depths, Aurora glimpsed a vision of London's streets warping and twisting, buildings folding in on themselves like origami as the Veil between worlds grew thinner. Isolde raised her hand, and the vision froze. "What lies beneath the city's skin writhes and hungers. The feast of Dymas spreads its table in the world above." Aurora's hand tightened on her Fae blade as the grove's peaceful atmosphere turned heavy with foreboding. Even the wildflowers seemed to dim, their bioluminescent pulses slowing like failing heartbeats. "The paths between worlds grow shorter," Nyx observed, their violet eyes fixed on the pool's dark surface. "The solstice approaches, and with it, the weakening of the Veil." Around them, the grove's twisted geometry seemed to shift and breathe, ancient magics stirring in response to forces beyond mortal comprehension. Aurora felt the weight of prophecy settling around them like a shroud, even as the otherworldly beauty of their surroundings threatened to overwhelm her senses.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:28:21.729Z" 2/19/2026, 3:28:21 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx's form condensed slightly [slightly]"
1"Isolde's voice chimed like [like]"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.538
leniency1
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.286
70.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount681
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"warmly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"warmly"
1"very"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount681
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"crystalline"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count3
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"gleaming"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"crystal"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
12
word"silence"
count1
13
word"depths"
count1
14
word"foreboding"
count1
15
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"crystalline"
2"echo"
3"otherworldly"
4"familiar"
5"footsteps"
6"gleaming"
7"warmth"
8"perfect"
9"whisper"
10"crystal"
11"shattered"
12"silence"
13"depths"
14"foreboding"
15"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
72.92% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences32
matches
0"y with warmth"
1"y with foreboding"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences32
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences38
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords677
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
44.37% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions34
wordCount568
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.11
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora12
Isolde4
Nyx5
Heartstone3
Moonlight1
Richmond1
Park1
Fae3
Tiny1
Half-Fae1
London1
Veil1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Heartstone"
4"Moonlight"
5"Fae"
6"Half-Fae"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.444
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sound that seemed to echo longer than they should"
1"seemed alive responding to their presence with subtle movements and transformations"
2"looked like cross between fish and fallin"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount677
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
44.54% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs18
mean37.61
std11.5
cv0.306
sampleLengths
054
141
225
347
454
535
649
732
851
925
1026
1149
1216
1342
1428
1529
1628
1746
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs101
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences38
ratio0.053
matches
0"Her breath caught at the sight - wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors, their petals glowing with an inner light that pulsed like tiny heartbeats."
1"The trees themselves defied natural law - their trunks spiraled in impossible geometric patterns, branches weaving together to form archways and passages that beckoned them deeper into the grove."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount571
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.03502626970227671
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.014010507880910683
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences38
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
87.03% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences38
mean17.82
std6.55
cv0.368
sampleLengths
015
126
213
324
417
513
612
718
829
921
1016
1117
1221
1314
1425
1524
1618
1714
1820
1931
2016
219
2212
2314
2430
2519
2611
275
2810
2932
308
3120
3216
3313
3417
3511
3621
3725
76.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.47368421052631576
totalSentences38
uniqueOpeners18
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences32
matches
0"Even the wildflowers seemed to"
ratio0.031
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences32
matches
0"Her breath caught at the"
1"Her Heartstone pendant pulsed warmly"
2"She noticed Nyx left no"
3"Her lavender eyes fixed on"
ratio0.125
38.13% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount27
totalSentences32
matches
0"The silver mist parted as"
1"Her breath caught at the"
2"Aurora's words hung suspended in"
3"Her Heartstone pendant pulsed warmly"
4"Nyx's whispered voice drifted on"
5"Moonlight filtered through the canopy"
6"The trees themselves defied natural"
7"Aurora's fingers brushed the hilt"
8"The luminescent weapon cast subtle"
9"She noticed Nyx left no"
10"A cluster of mushrooms sprouted"
11"The very ground seemed alive,"
12"Aurora pointed to a stream"
13"Nyx's form condensed slightly, becoming"
14"Aurora's Heartstone flared suddenly with"
15"The Half-Fae's silver hair floated"
16"Her lavender eyes fixed on"
17"Isolde's voice chimed like crystal"
18"Aurora glanced down at her"
19"The glowing trail behind them"
ratio0.844
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Her Heartstone pendant pulsed warmly against her chest, responding to the otherworldly energy that saturated the grove."
1"The trees themselves defied natural law - their trunks spiraled in impossible geometric patterns, branches weaving together to form archways and passages that b…"
2"The luminescent weapon cast subtle shadows across the misty ground, which seemed to swallow their footsteps."
3"A cluster of mushrooms sprouted beneath her feet as she walked, their caps gleaming with constellation patterns that shifted and swirled."
4"Tiny creatures that looked like cross between fish and falling leaves swam through it, their bodies transparent except for glowing cores of blue-white light."
5"In a clearing ahead, Isolde stood beside a pool of water so still it mirrored the star-studded sky above with perfect clarity, despite the canopy that should ha…"
6"The Half-Fae's silver hair floated around her as though underwater, though no wind stirred the grove."
7"Aurora glanced down at her feet, noticing for the first time that her footprints left tiny blooms of phosphorescent fungi in her wake, marking their twisted pat…"
8"The pool's mirror-surface rippled, and in its depths, Aurora glimpsed a vision of London's streets warping and twisting, buildings folding in on themselves like…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora stepped, the Heartstone's warmth intensifying"
1"Nyx observed, their violet eyes fixed on the pool's dark surface"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde's voice chimed like (chime)"
1"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences13
tagDensity0.154
leniency0.308
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.308
61.1308%