| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx's form condensed slightly [slightly]" | | 1 | "Isolde's voice chimed like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.538 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.286 | | effectiveRatio | 0.286 | |
| 70.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 681 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmly" | | 1 | "very" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 681 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "crystalline" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "otherworldly" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "footsteps" | | 6 | "gleaming" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "crystal" | | 11 | "shattered" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "depths" | | 14 | "foreboding" | | 15 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 72.92% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "y with warmth" | | 1 | "y with foreboding" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 32 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 677 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 6 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.37% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 568 | | uniqueNames | 12 | | maxNameDensity | 2.11 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 12 | | Isolde | 4 | | Nyx | 5 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Moonlight | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Tiny | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | London | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Moonlight" | | 5 | "Fae" | | 6 | "Half-Fae" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.444 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sound that seemed to echo longer than they should" | | 1 | "seemed alive responding to their presence with subtle movements and transformations" | | 2 | "looked like cross between fish and fallin" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 677 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.54% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 18 | | mean | 37.61 | | std | 11.5 | | cv | 0.306 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 54 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 54 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 49 | | 7 | 32 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 26 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 16 | | 13 | 42 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 46 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 101 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 38 | | ratio | 0.053 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught at the sight - wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors, their petals glowing with an inner light that pulsed like tiny heartbeats." | | 1 | "The trees themselves defied natural law - their trunks spiraled in impossible geometric patterns, branches weaving together to form archways and passages that beckoned them deeper into the grove." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 571 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.03502626970227671 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014010507880910683 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 38 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 87.03% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 38 | | mean | 17.82 | | std | 6.55 | | cv | 0.368 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 20 | | 19 | 31 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 30 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 25 |
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| 76.32% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 1 | | diversityRatio | 0.47368421052631576 | | totalSentences | 38 | | uniqueOpeners | 18 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "Even the wildflowers seemed to" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath caught at the" | | 1 | "Her Heartstone pendant pulsed warmly" | | 2 | "She noticed Nyx left no" | | 3 | "Her lavender eyes fixed on" |
| | ratio | 0.125 | |
| 38.13% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 27 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver mist parted as" | | 1 | "Her breath caught at the" | | 2 | "Aurora's words hung suspended in" | | 3 | "Her Heartstone pendant pulsed warmly" | | 4 | "Nyx's whispered voice drifted on" | | 5 | "Moonlight filtered through the canopy" | | 6 | "The trees themselves defied natural" | | 7 | "Aurora's fingers brushed the hilt" | | 8 | "The luminescent weapon cast subtle" | | 9 | "She noticed Nyx left no" | | 10 | "A cluster of mushrooms sprouted" | | 11 | "The very ground seemed alive," | | 12 | "Aurora pointed to a stream" | | 13 | "Nyx's form condensed slightly, becoming" | | 14 | "Aurora's Heartstone flared suddenly with" | | 15 | "The Half-Fae's silver hair floated" | | 16 | "Her lavender eyes fixed on" | | 17 | "Isolde's voice chimed like crystal" | | 18 | "Aurora glanced down at her" | | 19 | "The glowing trail behind them" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 32 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 23 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Her Heartstone pendant pulsed warmly against her chest, responding to the otherworldly energy that saturated the grove." | | 1 | "The trees themselves defied natural law - their trunks spiraled in impossible geometric patterns, branches weaving together to form archways and passages that b…" | | 2 | "The luminescent weapon cast subtle shadows across the misty ground, which seemed to swallow their footsteps." | | 3 | "A cluster of mushrooms sprouted beneath her feet as she walked, their caps gleaming with constellation patterns that shifted and swirled." | | 4 | "Tiny creatures that looked like cross between fish and falling leaves swam through it, their bodies transparent except for glowing cores of blue-white light." | | 5 | "In a clearing ahead, Isolde stood beside a pool of water so still it mirrored the star-studded sky above with perfect clarity, despite the canopy that should ha…" | | 6 | "The Half-Fae's silver hair floated around her as though underwater, though no wind stirred the grove." | | 7 | "Aurora glanced down at her feet, noticing for the first time that her footprints left tiny blooms of phosphorescent fungi in her wake, marking their twisted pat…" | | 8 | "The pool's mirror-surface rippled, and in its depths, Aurora glimpsed a vision of London's streets warping and twisting, buildings folding in on themselves like…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped, the Heartstone's warmth intensifying" | | 1 | "Nyx observed, their violet eyes fixed on the pool's dark surface" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde's voice chimed like (chime)" | | 1 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 13 | | tagDensity | 0.154 | | leniency | 0.308 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |