Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ236MDEMZ2WJ73KT7PE05

Run Details

Duration:
2m 20s
Cost:
$0.001882
Provider:
Novita

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past nine, a sharp staccato rap against the wood that made Rory flinch. She had been curled in Eva’s armchair, a blanket over her legs and a heavy tome open in her lap, the air thick with the scent of turmeric and cumin from the restaurant below. Ptolemy raised his head from the hearthrug, blinked once with slow deliberation, and settled back into his loaf. Three deadbolts. Eva never had visitors, not at this hour. Rory placed the book aside and padded to the door, her socks whispering against the floorboards. “Eva?” Another knock, firmer this time. She slid the first bolt, the second, the third, and pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood on the narrow landing, the weak light from the single bulb above the stairs catching the platinum sweep of his hair. He wore a charcoal suit, immaculate as ever, one hand resting on the ivory handle of his cane. The amber eye fixed on her; the black one seemed to drink the shadows of the hallway. Rain glistened on the shoulders of his coat. He hadn’t called. He hadn’t written. It had been six weeks since she’d seen him last, in the back room of his club, the air thick with smoke and words that cut deeper than any blade he concealed. “Rory.” Her name in his mouth was a low, soft thing. It curled around the silence between them. She didn’t step back, didn’t invite him in. Her hand remained on the edge of the door. “You’re soaked.” “London is unkind tonight.” He didn’t smile. His gaze drifted past her, taking in the crammed bookshelves, the scrolls piled on the small table, the cat now watching from the rug. “May I come in?” “Eva’s not here.” “I know.” Of course he knew. Lucien knew everything that moved in this city, aboveground and below. That was the problem, wasn’t it? He traded in secrets, in favors, in the quiet currency of the unseen world. And six weeks ago, she had become a piece on his board, a move he hadn’t bothered to explain. She let the door swing wider, a silent permission. He stepped across the threshold, bringing with him the chill damp of the evening and the faint, clean scent of sandalwood and rain. He leaned his cane against the wall by the door, shrugged out of his overcoat. Rory took it from him, her fingers brushing against the cold, wet wool. She hung it on the stand beside Eva’s waxed jacket, the mundane domesticity of the gesture feeling absurd. “Tea?” The word came out clipped, practical. “If it’s no trouble.” She walked the few steps to the galley kitchen, her back to him. The kettle filled under the tap, the click of the switch too loud in the quiet room. She could feel him standing there, taking inventory of her – the old Cardiff University sweatshirt, the frayed jeans, her hair tied up in a messy knot. She’d been crying earlier, over something stupid, a song on the radio that reminded her of her father. Her eyes probably looked puffy. She hated that he might notice. “You look tired,” he said. His voice was closer. He hadn’t moved from the entry, but his words reached her as if he stood just behind her shoulder. “Long day.” She kept her eyes on the kettle, watching the first tendrils of steam curl from its spout. “Deliveries. Rain makes people order more curry.” “And how is Madame Cheung?” “Still threatening to adopt me.” A quiet huff of air – almost a laugh. “She sees what others miss.” The kettle whistled, a sharp, shrill sound that severed the moment. Rory poured the boiling water into two mismatched mugs, dropped tea bags in, stirred. Milk, no sugar for him. She remembered that. She carried the mugs back into the main room, handed one to him. Their fingers didn’t touch. He took a seat on the worn sofa, setting his cane within easy reach. Rory resumed her place in the armchair, pulling the blanket over her legs again, a barrier. Ptolemy, ever the traitor, jumped onto the sofa and settled against Lucien’s thigh, purring like a engine. “Why are you here, Lucien?” He cradled the mug in both hands, looking down into the dark liquid. The amber of his eye seemed to glow in the low lamplight. “The Venatori are asking questions in Soho.” A cold knot tightened in her stomach. The Venatori – the hunters. She’d crossed paths with them once, a messy business involving a stolen grimoire and a body in the Thames. Lucien had extricated her. For a price. “What kind of questions?” “About a human girl who keeps turning up where she shouldn’t. A girl with a habit of… noticing things.” He looked up, his heterochromatic gaze pinning her. “They have your description, Rory. Not your name. Not yet.” She swallowed. The tea tasted bitter. “And you’re telling me this why? Out of the goodness of your heart?” His expression didn’t change, but something flickered in the black eye – a wounded darkness. “You think so little of me.” “You gave me up.” The words were out before she could stop them, ragged and raw. “You handed over that ledger to Malphas knowing he’d come for me. You used me as bait.” “I protected you.” “By throwing me to a demon?” “By controlling which demon caught you!” The cane clattered to the floor as he leaned forward, his voice cutting through the room, sharp and sudden. Ptolemy startled, leapt down, and disappeared under the table. Lucien took a breath, visibly reining himself in. When he spoke again, his tone was lower, frayed at the edges. “Malphas operates by rules. Predictable, cruel, but rules. The others… there are things in the dark, Aurora, that have no rules at all. I placed you squarely in a transaction I could oversee. You walked away. You always do.” “You didn’t tell me.” “Would you have listened? Would you have trusted me if I’d laid out the plan?” He shook his head, a bitter twist to his mouth. “You were already looking for the door. You still are.” She looked away, her throat tight. He was right. She had been looking for the door, for an escape back to a normal life, back to Cardiff and law books and a world where demons were just stories. But the door kept vanishing every time she reached for it. “Why now?” she whispered. “Why come here tonight, after all this time, just to warn me?” Silence stretched between them, filled only by the distant hum of Brick Lane traffic and the drip of a tap in the kitchen sink. Lucien set his mug on the floor beside his feet. He stood, picked up his cane, but didn’t lean on it. He took a step toward her, then another, until he stood before her chair, looming over her. She didn’t look up, kept her gaze fixed on the small crescent scar on her wrist. “Look at me.” She didn’t. His hand came up, fingers gentle beneath her chin, tilting her face toward his. His skin was cooler than she remembered. His eyes, one of fire and one of night, held hers. “Because I saw one of them tonight,” he said, his voice barely a breath. “A Venatori, watching your flat above Silas’ bar. Because they are not patient, and they are not kind. And because…” He hesitated, the words catching. “Because the thought of them touching you makes the demon in my blood want to tear this city apart stone by stone.” Her breath hitched. The admission hung in the air between them, stark and undeniable. All the careful walls she’d built, the anger she’d nursed, crumbled under the weight of it. “Luc…” Her voice broke. He leaned down, his other hand bracing on the arm of her chair, caging her in. His forehead touched hers. She could smell the tea on his breath, the rain in his hair. “I have done terrible things to keep you safe,” he murmured against her skin. “And I will do worse. But I cannot do them from across the city, wondering if tonight is the night you finally run out of luck.” “I’m not yours to protect.” It was a weak protest, whispered into the scant space between their mouths. “Aren’t you?” His lips brushed hers, the lightest pressure, a question. “Then tell me to leave. Tell me you feel nothing. Tell me the last six weeks have been a relief.” She couldn’t. The lie wouldn’t form. Her hands came up, fingers tangling in the lapels of his suit jacket, pulling him closer. The kiss deepened, slow and searching, a conversation of its own. It tasted of regret and rain and the metallic tang of the demon-blood that sang in his veins. His cane clattered forgotten to the floor again as his arms wrapped around her, lifting her from the chair, blanket and all, holding her against him. She was small in his grasp, but she held on just as tight, her fingers in his hair, messing the perfect sweep of it. When they broke apart, both were breathing hard. He rested his forehead against hers again, his eyes closed. “I should have come sooner.” “You’re here now.” “They’ll come for you, Rory. Tonight, tomorrow. They have your scent.” “Then what do we do?” He opened his eyes, the resolve in them clear and hard. “We disappear.”
created_at"2026-02-19T03:28:23.26Z" 2/19/2026, 3:28:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.313
leniency0.625
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1582
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1582
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"could feel"
count1
3
word"stomach"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"predictable"
count1
6
word"looming"
count1
7
word"stark"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"chill"
2"could feel"
3"stomach"
4"flickered"
5"predictable"
6"looming"
7"stark"
8"weight"
9"perfect"
10"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences105
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences138
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1585
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount1213
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.49
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory5
Eva3
Moreau1
Cardiff2
University1
Lucien6
Venatori1
Thames1
Ptolemy3
Silence1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Ptolemy"
5"Silence"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Thames"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"took a breath, visibly reining himself in"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1585
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences138
matches
0"hated that he"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean31.08
std29.71
cv0.956
sampleLengths
070
127
25
314
4105
51
636
735
83
92
1054
1178
127
134
1486
1528
1626
175
185
1914
2050
2147
225
2332
2442
2537
2619
2721
2833
293
306
3193
324
3335
3449
3516
3678
373
382
3993
4030
414
4273
4318
4431
45101
4623
473
4811
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"been curled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs187
matches
0"were breathing"
39.34% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences138
ratio0.036
matches
0"The amber eye fixed on her; the black one seemed to drink the shadows of the hallway."
1"She could feel him standing there, taking inventory of her – the old Cardiff University sweatshirt, the frayed jeans, her hair tied up in a messy knot."
2"A quiet huff of air – almost a laugh."
3"The Venatori – the hunters."
4"His expression didn’t change, but something flickered in the black eye – a wounded darkness."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1210
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.023966942148760332
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003305785123966942
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences138
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences138
mean11.49
std7.82
cv0.681
sampleLengths
018
134
218
32
48
516
61
75
814
924
1018
1117
128
133
143
1532
161
1710
187
198
209
212
227
2324
244
253
262
274
2811
296
3014
3119
329
3323
3415
3513
3618
377
384
3913
4017
4127
4218
435
446
455
464
4719
4819
497
46.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences138
uniqueOpeners46
33.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences99
matches
0"Of course he knew."
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences99
matches
0"She had been curled in"
1"She slid the first bolt,"
2"He wore a charcoal suit,"
3"He hadn’t called."
4"He hadn’t written."
5"It had been six weeks"
6"Her name in his mouth"
7"It curled around the silence"
8"She didn’t step back, didn’t"
9"Her hand remained on the"
10"He didn’t smile"
11"His gaze drifted past her,"
12"He traded in secrets, in"
13"She let the door swing"
14"He stepped across the threshold,"
15"He leaned his cane against"
16"She hung it on the"
17"She walked the few steps"
18"She could feel him standing"
19"She’d been crying earlier, over"
ratio0.596
0.40% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount91
totalSentences99
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"She had been curled in"
2"Ptolemy raised his head from"
3"Eva never had visitors, not"
4"Rory placed the book aside"
5"Another knock, firmer this time."
6"She slid the first bolt,"
7"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
8"He wore a charcoal suit,"
9"The amber eye fixed on"
10"Rain glistened on the shoulders"
11"He hadn’t called."
12"He hadn’t written."
13"It had been six weeks"
14"Her name in his mouth"
15"It curled around the silence"
16"She didn’t step back, didn’t"
17"Her hand remained on the"
18"He didn’t smile"
19"His gaze drifted past her,"
ratio0.919
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She’d been crying earlier, over something stupid, a song on the radio that reminded her of her father."
1"He hadn’t moved from the entry, but his words reached her as if he stood just behind her shoulder."
2"He leaned down, his other hand bracing on the arm of her chair, caging her in."
3"It tasted of regret and rain and the metallic tang of the demon-blood that sang in his veins."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"The word came out, practical"
1"He looked up, his heterochromatic gaze pinning her"
2"The cane clattered, his voice cutting through the room, sharp and sudden"
3"he said, his voice barely a breath"
4"He hesitated, the words catching"
87.50% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"a weak protest whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.104
leniency0.208
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.125
78.6597%