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Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ28G56APMQR17CTA81209
Run Details
Model:
GPT-4o, May 13th (temp=0)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
10.5s
Cost:
$0.031365
Provider:
OpenAI
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
77.99%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
49.18%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
25.62%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
89.51%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
63.86%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
25.57%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
46.55%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
73.3206%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora Carter, known to her
friends as Rory, stepped
cautiously
into the hidden grove in Richmond Park.
The ancient oak standing stones
loomed
around her, marking the boundary of this Fae-touched place.
Her bright blue eyes scanned
the surroundings, taking in the wildflowers that bloomed in a riot of colors, despite the
chill
in the air.
She felt the familiar weight
of the Heartstone Pendant against her chest, its faint
warmth
a constant
reminder
of its mysterious origins. "Are you sure this is the place?"
Rory's voice was steady, but
there was a hint of unease in her tone. Beside her, Nyx, the Shadow, shifted from their incorporeal form into a solid silhouette.
Their faintly glowing violet eyes
flickered
as they surveyed the grove. "The Seer resides here. The air hums with her presence."
Rory nodded, her fingers brushing
the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit she hadn't
quite shaken
.
She glanced back at the
path they had taken, the world outside the grove already feeling distant and unreal. "Let's keep moving,"
she said, her voice firmer
now. "We need to find Isolde." As they ventured deeper into the grove, the air grew thicker, almost
tangible
.
Time seemed to stretch and
compress, making each step
feel
both immediate and eternal.
The wildflowers swayed gently, though
there was no breeze, and the light filtering through the canopy above had a dreamlike quality, casting everything in a soft, ethereal glow. Nyx moved silently beside her, their presence a
comforting
shadow. "The Fae have a way of making the
familiar
feel
alien,"
they whispered, their voice like
a breeze rustling through leaves.
Rory nodded, her eyes catching
the faint luminescence of the Fae-Forged Blade tucked into her belt.
Isolde's gift had proven invaluable
more than once, and she felt a surge of gratitude for the
enigmatic
Seer.
A sudden rustling ahead made
Rory pause, her hand instinctively reaching for the blade.
Nyx's form shimmered, ready to
shift at a moment's
notice
. But as the sound grew closer, a figure emerged from the underbrush.
Isolde Varga, the Seer, stepped
into view, her silver hair
cascading
down to her waist, her pale lavender eyes serene and knowing.
She moved with an ethereal
grace, leaving no footprints behind. "Welcome, Aurora," Isolde's voice was soft, melodic, carrying an
otherworldly
resonance
. "And Nyx, the Shadow. You seek answers." Rory relaxed
slightly
, though the
tension
in her shoulders remained. "We need your guidance, Isolde. The Veil is weakening, and we fear what might come through." Isolde's eyes
seemed to
pierce through Rory, seeing more than just the surface. "The Veil is a delicate balance, and its weakening is a sign of greater turmoil. But you already know this." Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx, who nodded almost imperceptibly. "We need to know how to strengthen it, how to protect our world." Isolde's lips curved into a faint,
enigmatic
smile. "The answers you seek lie within the heart of Dymas, the realm of Gluttony. There, you will find the key to restoring the balance." Rory's heart
skipped a beat
. Dymas was a place of excess and indulgence, ruled by Prince Belphegor.
It was not a place
one ventured
lightly
. "How do we get there?" Isolde raised her hand, and a small, shimmering portal appeared before them, its edges flickering like the surface of a pond disturbed by a pebble. "This will take you to the outskirts of Dymas. But be warned, the path is fraught with danger and temptation." Rory took a deep breath, steeling herself. "Thank you, Isolde. We won't let you down." Isolde's eyes softened, a hint of sadness in their
depths
. "The path you walk is not an easy one, Aurora. But you are stronger than you know." With a final nod, Rory stepped through the portal, Nyx close behind. The world around them shifted, the ethereal glow of the grove giving way to the warm amber sky of Dymas.
The air was thick with
the scent of ripe fruit and exotic spices, and the distant sound of laughter and clinking glasses reached their ears. Rory's
eyes widened
as she took in the sprawling vineyards and orchards, the grand feasts laid out on long tables, and the helbound souls moving about, their expressions a mix of contentment and despair. "This place is... overwhelming," Rory murmured, her senses assaulted by the sheer excess of it all. Nyx's form
flickered
, their eyes narrowing. "We must stay focused. The key to strengthening the Veil is here, somewhere." As they moved deeper into Dymas, the sights and sounds grew more intense. Chefs worked tirelessly, crafting dishes that defied imagination, while guests indulged in every manner of food and drink. Rory felt a
pang
of hunger, but she pushed it aside, her mind focused on their mission. They approached a grand hall, its entrance guarded by two
imposing
figures. Rory's hand tightened around the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade, its cold touch grounding her. "We seek an audience with Prince Belphegor,"
she declared, her voice steady
. The guards exchanged a glance before stepping aside, allowing them entry. The hall was a marvel of opulence, with golden chandeliers casting a warm glow over the room. At the far end, seated on a throne of intricately carved wood, was Prince Belphegor himself. He was a striking figure, his eyes a deep, knowing green, his presence commanding. "Welcome, travelers,"
he greeted, his voice smooth
and inviting. "What brings you to my realm?" Rory stepped forward, her gaze
unwavering
. "We seek a way to strengthen the Veil. We were told the key lies here, in Dymas." Belphegor's eyes sparkled with amusement. "The Veil, you say? A delicate matter indeed. But why should I help you?" Rory took a deep breath, her mind
racing
. "Because if the Veil collapses, the balance between realms will be
shattered
. It will affect
not just Earth, but all realms, including yours
." Belphegor leaned back, his expression thoughtful. "You make a compelling argument, Aurora Carter. Very well, I will help you. But first, you must prove your worth." Rory's
heart pounded in her chest
. "What do you require of us?" Belphegor's smile was
enigmatic
. "A simple task. Retrieve the Heartstone from the
depths
of my vineyard. It is a powerful artifact, and only those with true
resolve
can claim it." Rory nodded, determination in her eyes. "We will retrieve it." As they left the hall, Nyx's voice was a
whisper
in her ear. "This is only the beginning, Rory. Stay vigilant." Rory's grip on the Fae-Forged Blade tightened. "I know. But we will succeed. We have to." With renewed
resolve
, they ventured into the heart of the vineyard, ready to face whatever challenges lay ahead. The fate of the Veil, and the balance between realms, rested in their hands.
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"2026-02-19T03:28:28.684Z"
2/19/2026, 3:28:28 AM
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1816
tokens_completion
1745
native_tokens_prompt
1707
native_tokens_completion
1522
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native_tokens_cached
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num_input_audio_prompt
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num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
5
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
29
tagDensity
0.172
leniency
0.345
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
77.99%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1136
totalAiIsmAdverbs
5
found
0
adverb
"cautiously"
count
1
1
adverb
"gently"
count
1
2
adverb
"slightly"
count
1
3
adverb
"lightly"
count
1
4
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"cautiously"
1
"gently"
2
"slightly"
3
"lightly"
4
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1136
totalAiIsms
31
found
0
word
"loomed"
count
1
1
word
"scanned"
count
1
2
word
"chill"
count
1
3
word
"familiar"
count
2
4
word
"weight"
count
1
5
word
"warmth"
count
1
6
word
"reminder"
count
1
7
word
"flickered"
count
2
8
word
"tangible"
count
1
9
word
"comforting"
count
1
10
word
"enigmatic"
count
3
11
word
"shimmered"
count
1
12
word
"cascading"
count
1
13
word
"otherworldly"
count
1
14
word
"resonance"
count
1
15
word
"tension"
count
1
16
word
"skipped a beat"
count
1
17
word
"depths"
count
2
18
word
"pang"
count
1
19
word
"imposing"
count
1
20
word
"unwavering"
count
1
21
word
"racing"
count
1
22
word
"shattered"
count
1
23
word
"resolve"
count
2
24
word
"whisper"
count
1
highlights
0
"loomed"
1
"scanned"
2
"chill"
3
"familiar"
4
"weight"
5
"warmth"
6
"reminder"
7
"flickered"
8
"tangible"
9
"comforting"
10
"enigmatic"
11
"shimmered"
12
"cascading"
13
"otherworldly"
14
"resonance"
15
"tension"
16
"skipped a beat"
17
"depths"
18
"pang"
19
"imposing"
20
"unwavering"
21
"racing"
22
"shattered"
23
"resolve"
24
"whisper"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"heart pounded in chest"
count
1
1
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
2
label
"air was thick with"
count
1
highlights
0
"heart pounded in her chest"
1
"eyes widened"
2
"The air was thick with"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
61
matches
(empty)
49.18%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
2
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
61
filterMatches
0
"feel"
1
"notice"
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
83
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
34
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1131
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
8
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
25.62%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
61
wordCount
804
uniqueNames
18
maxNameDensity
2.49
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
4
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter
1
Rory
20
Richmond
1
Park
1
Fae-touched
1
Heartstone
1
Pendant
1
Nyx
7
Shadow
1
Fae-Forged
3
Blade
3
Seer
2
Varga
1
Prince
2
Belphegor
5
Dymas
3
Veil
1
Isolde
7
persons
0
"Carter"
1
"Rory"
2
"Nyx"
3
"Shadow"
4
"Blade"
5
"Seer"
6
"Prince"
7
"Belphegor"
8
"Isolde"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
2
"Dymas"
globalScore
0.256
windowScore
0.333
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
57
glossingSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"quite shaken"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.884
wordCount
1131
matches
0
"not just Earth, but all realms, including yours"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
83
matches
(empty)
89.51%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
38
mean
29.76
std
13.79
cv
0.463
sampleLengths
0
78
1
21
2
35
3
39
4
14
5
55
6
31
7
35
8
36
9
32
10
18
11
26
12
33
13
23
14
32
15
30
16
45
17
15
18
27
19
57
20
34
21
16
22
19
23
48
24
27
25
12
26
44
27
29
28
23
29
19
30
31
31
26
32
12
33
30
34
10
35
21
36
16
37
32
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
61
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
129
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
83
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
88.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
809
adjectiveStacks
2
stackExamples
0
"small crescent-shaped scar"
1
"deep, knowing green, his"
adverbCount
30
adverbRatio
0.037082818294190356
lyAdverbCount
11
lyAdverbRatio
0.013597033374536464
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
83
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
83
mean
13.63
std
6.34
cv
0.466
sampleLengths
0
17
1
15
2
24
3
22
4
21
5
14
6
11
7
10
8
20
9
19
10
9
11
5
12
13
13
14
14
28
15
10
16
21
17
16
18
19
19
14
20
10
21
12
22
22
23
10
24
11
25
7
26
10
27
16
28
13
29
20
30
10
31
13
32
8
33
24
34
5
35
12
36
8
37
5
38
25
39
20
40
7
41
8
42
10
43
17
44
12
45
20
46
25
47
34
48
16
49
6
63.86%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
2
diversityRatio
0.39759036144578314
totalSentences
83
uniqueOpeners
33
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
61
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
12
totalSentences
61
matches
0
"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
1
"She felt the familiar weight"
2
"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
3
"She glanced back at the"
4
"she said, her voice firmer"
5
"they whispered, their voice like"
6
"She moved with an ethereal"
7
"It was not a place"
8
"They approached a grand hall,"
9
"she declared, her voice steady"
10
"He was a striking figure,"
11
"he greeted, his voice smooth"
ratio
0.197
25.57%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
53
totalSentences
61
matches
0
"Aurora Carter, known to her"
1
"The ancient oak standing stones"
2
"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
3
"She felt the familiar weight"
4
"Rory's voice was steady, but"
5
"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
6
"Rory nodded, her fingers brushing"
7
"She glanced back at the"
8
"she said, her voice firmer"
9
"Time seemed to stretch and"
10
"The wildflowers swayed gently, though"
11
"Nyx moved silently beside her,"
12
"they whispered, their voice like"
13
"Rory nodded, her eyes catching"
14
"Isolde's gift had proven invaluable"
15
"A sudden rustling ahead made"
16
"Nyx's form shimmered, ready to"
17
"Isolde Varga, the Seer, stepped"
18
"She moved with an ethereal"
19
"Isolde's voice was soft, melodic,"
ratio
0.869
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
61
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
41
technicalSentenceCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
5
uselessAdditionCount
3
matches
0
"she said, her voice firmer now"
1
"she declared, her voice steady"
2
"he greeted, his voice smooth and inviting"
46.55%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
3
fancyTags
0
"they whispered (whisper)"
1
"Rory murmured (murmur)"
2
"she declared (declare)"
dialogueSentences
29
tagDensity
0.138
leniency
0.276
rawRatio
0.75
effectiveRatio
0.207
73.3206%