| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx replied grimly [grimly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.382 | | leniency | 0.765 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 83.14% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1186 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "quickly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1186 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "flickered" | | 1 | "wavered" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "kaleidoscope" | | 4 | "dancing" | | 5 | "racing" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "fascinating" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "measured" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "down her spine" | | 13 | "enigmatic" | | 14 | "etched" | | 15 | "otherworldly" | | 16 | "depths" | | 17 | "charged" | | 18 | "palpable" | | 19 | "sense of" | | 20 | "could feel" | | 21 | "warmth" | | 22 | "spectral" | | 23 | "echoed" | | 24 | "raced" | | 25 | "echoing" | | 26 | "familiar" | | 27 | "loomed" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "eyes widened" |
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| 89.79% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 3 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a chill" | | 1 | "d with urgency" | | 2 | "d with determination" |
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| 62.37% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1184 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.55% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 55 | | wordCount | 1005 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 2.19 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 4 | | Nyx | 13 | | Aurora | 22 | | Isolde | 6 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Fae-forged | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Veil | 2 | | Hellspawn | 2 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Hellspawn" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.405 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 73.08% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "light that seemed to shift and pulse with every step" | | 1 | "d and swirled, seemingly defying the laws of" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.845 | | wordCount | 1184 | | matches | | 0 | "not the half-Fae seer, but rather a diminutive, rabbit-like creature with iridescent fu" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 44 | | mean | 26.91 | | std | 14.63 | | cv | 0.544 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 36 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 37 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 6 | | 11 | 56 | | 12 | 49 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 29 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 34 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 26 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 39 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 51 | | 41 | 42 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 196 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond it, she glimpsed a kaleidoscope of colour - wildflowers in bloom, their petals dancing in an unfelt breeze." | | 1 | "As she leaned closer, a flash of silver caught her eye - a shoal of iridescent fish darted through the current, their scales glimmering like mirrors." | | 2 | "Aurora risked a glance over her shoulder and gasped - the demonic entity was in pursuit, its massive form barreling through the foliage with single-minded determination." | | 3 | "This was no mere beast - it was an avatar of pure, unadulterated malevolence, a living embodiment of Hel's darkest desires." | | 4 | "This was no time for fear - only survival." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1006 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.03180914512922465 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017892644135188866 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 12.87 | | std | 6.64 | | cv | 0.516 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 10 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 29 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 21 |
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| 79.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4891304347826087 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 45 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "She released the pendant and" | | 1 | "It paused, nose twitching, before" | | 2 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 3 | "she breathed, mesmerized" | | 4 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 5 | "Her words were drowned out" | | 6 | "she called out, her voice" | | 7 | "They pressed on, the thunderous" |
| | ratio | 0.113 | |
| 72.68% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Shadows flickered, shifting and intertwining" | | 1 | "Aurora clutched the Heartstone pendant," | | 2 | "the shade murmured, their whisper-like" | | 3 | "Aurora nodded, her gaze fixed" | | 4 | "She released the pendant and" | | 5 | "The air seemed to shiver" | | 6 | "Nyx followed silently." | | 7 | "The world on the other" | | 8 | "Nyx murmured, their form shifting" | | 9 | "Aurora nodded in agreement, her" | | 10 | "A rustling to her left" | | 11 | "It paused, nose twitching, before" | | 12 | "Nyx observed, their inky form" | | 13 | "Aurora watched it vanish, then" | | 14 | "Nyx inclined their head." | | 15 | "They ventured deeper into the" | | 16 | "Aurora kept one hand on" | | 17 | "The sound of running water" | | 18 | "Nyx murmured, trailing one shadowy" | | 19 | "Aurora crouched by the stream," |
| | ratio | 0.775 | |
| 70.42% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Aurora could respond, a" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 38.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora nodded, her gaze fixed on the archway of mossy boulders that marked the entrance to Isolde's grove." | | 1 | "But the figure that emerged from the shadows was not the half-Fae seer, but rather a diminutive, rabbit-like creature with iridescent fur." | | 2 | "Glowing mushrooms and luminescent moss carpeted the forest floor, casting an ethereal light that seemed to shift and pulse with every step." | | 3 | "The sound of running water grew louder, and Aurora paused as they rounded a bend, coming upon a glistening stream that babbled merrily over a bed of rounded sto…" | | 4 | "Aurora felt her heart racing, adrenaline surging through her veins." | | 5 | "Aurora and Nyx stumbled back as a towering, shadowy figure rose from the depths, its eyes burning with unholy fire." | | 6 | "Turning, she faced the towering demon, its eyes burning with unholy hunger." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "the shade murmured, their whisper-like voice barely audible" | | 1 | "Nyx observed, their inky form trailing after the creature" | | 2 | "Aurora called out, her voice measured and calm" | | 3 | "she murmured, her voice barely audible over the mounting thunder" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 10 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "the shade murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx observed (observe)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 5 | "Aurora called out (call out)" | | 6 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 7 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 8 | "Isolde cried (cry)" | | 9 | "she called out (call out)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.324 | | leniency | 0.647 | | rawRatio | 0.909 | | effectiveRatio | 0.588 | |