| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "the sudden silence their shadowy form flickering like [like]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.321 | | leniency | 0.643 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.071 | |
| 90.55% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1588 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 5.54% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1588 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "searing" | | 3 | "porcelain" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "vibrated" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "glinting" | | 9 | "etched" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "loomed" | | 12 | "glistening" | | 13 | "flickered" | | 14 | "wavering" | | 15 | "weight" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.44% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 105 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 124 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.40% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 45 | | markdownWords | 98 | | totalWords | 1573 | | ratio | 0.062 | | matches | | 0 | "shifted" | | 1 | "hell" | | 2 | "moved" | | 3 | "Monuments." | | 4 | "fuck" | | 5 | "threshold" | | 6 | "shimmered" | | 7 | "Dymas" | | 8 | "moved" | | 9 | "decaying luxury" | | 10 | "changed." | | 11 | "monuments" | | 12 | "food." | | 13 | "Art." | | 14 | "people" | | 15 | "worship" | | 16 | "the feast of the unquenchable." | | 17 | "here" | | 18 | "shuddered." | | 19 | "thrashing" | | 20 | "struggling" | | 21 | "crunching" | | 22 | "feeding." | | 23 | "breathe." | | 24 | "drink" | | 25 | "laughing." | | 26 | "stopped." | | 27 | "“You are not invited.”" | | 28 | "terror" | | 29 | "offering." | | 30 | "“Stay,”" | | 31 | "“Eat. Drink. Become one with the feast. And when you are full, you will never hunger again.”" | | 32 | "taste" | | 33 | "own" | | 34 | "No." | | 35 | "delicious." | | 36 | "“Refusal is just another kind of hunger, little mortal.”" | | 37 | "“Then let’s make it *permanent." | | 38 | "“The Veil is thinning. We have to move.”" | | 39 | "shifted" | | 40 | "stopped." | | 41 | "silent." | | 42 | "“Next time, let’s bring a *map." | | 43 | "“There will be a next time.”" | | 44 | "moved" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 1439 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.9 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 13 | | Towering | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Nyx | 6 | | Plates | 1 | | Belphegor | 2 | | Dymas | 1 | | Prince | 2 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Belphegor" | | 4 | "Prince" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "something like rusted copper and crushed vio" | | 1 | "as if screaming into the void" | | 2 | "quite match the shapes of the trees, as if the light itself was warping reality" | | 3 | "something between awe and dread" | | 4 | "quite a smile" | | 5 | "shadows that seemed to move on their own" | | 6 | "quite blood" | | 7 | "dishes that seemed to multiply as she watched" | | 8 | "pits that seemed to drink* in the light" | | 9 | "something like a blade of black ice" | | 10 | "something like a smile" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.179 | | wordCount | 1573 | | matches | | 0 | "not like a door swinging open, but like the air itself dissolving into something thicker, heavi" | | 1 | "not like sunlight, but like the inside of a dying star" | | 2 | "Not the black of a cave, but the deep, suffocating dark of a stomach after a feast" | | 3 | "Not the slow, deliberate shift of the earth, but a *thrashing*, a *struggling*, as if something vast" | | 4 | "Not like torches or lanterns, but like the sudden flare of a thousand candles, each one castin" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 124 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 68 | | mean | 23.13 | | std | 22.15 | | cv | 0.958 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 94 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 63 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 42 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 52 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 66 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 41 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 55 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 58 | | 28 | 72 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 36 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 53 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 54 | | 38 | 63 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 40 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 34 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 30 |
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| 95.24% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | | 0 | "been stretched" | | 1 | "been swallowed" | | 2 | "been stretched" |
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| 81.48% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 225 | | matches | | 0 | "was warping" | | 1 | "was trying" | | 2 | "was *laughing" | | 3 | "was *offering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 124 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t have time to pull it away before the world *shifted*—not like a door swinging open, but like the air itself dissolving into something thicker, heavier, as if she’d stepped into the centre of a honeycomb and the walls were suddenly made of syrup." | | 1 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward it, but the moment she touched the chain, the pendant flared—white-hot, searing—and light erupted from it, not like sunlight, but like the inside of a dying star." | | 2 | "Towering, skeletal things with bark like cracked porcelain, their branches twisting into shapes that made her stomach clench—faces, half-formed, mouths agape as if screaming into the void." | | 3 | "She was too busy staring at the ground, where the earth had split open in a jagged line, revealing something glinting beneath the dirt—a path, or a wound, or both." | | 4 | "Not a door like she’d seen a thousand times—wooden, metal, even the great iron portals of old castles." | | 5 | "Not the black of a cave, but the deep, suffocating dark of a stomach after a feast—something that had been swallowed and never returned." | | 6 | "Not just the scent of food—oh no, nothing so mundane." | | 7 | "The trees—*monuments*—loomed closer, their branches twisting into shapes that made her think of fingers, long and skeletal, reaching for her." | | 8 | "But the worst of it was the *people*—or what was left of them." | | 9 | "His face—if it could be called a face—was a shifting mask of hunger, his mouth a lipless gash that stretched from ear to ear, his eyes two black pits that seemed to *drink* in the light." | | 10 | "She could *taste* it—the sweet, suffocating promise of the feast, the way it would wrap around her like a lover’s arms, the way it would *own* her, body and soul." | | 11 | "Her fingers twitched toward the nearest plate, toward the steaming meat, the glistening fruit—" | | 12 | "The feast hall dissolved into something else—a corridor of flickering shadows, the air thick with the scent of ozone and something older, something that made her teeth ache." |
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| 89.31% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1455 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same strange, porous stone" |
| | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.04536082474226804 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006872852233676976 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 124 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 124 | | mean | 12.68 | | std | 9.47 | | cv | 0.747 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 33 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 30 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 1 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 2 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 24 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 24 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 26 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 47.58% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 11 | | diversityRatio | 0.3387096774193548 | | totalSentences | 124 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the trees came." | | 1 | "Then she saw it." | | 2 | "Then the smell hit her." | | 3 | "Then the ground *shuddered.*" | | 4 | "Then he spoke." |
| | ratio | 0.052 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 19 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t have time to" | | 1 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 2 | "She stumbled back, her heel" | | 3 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 4 | "She was too busy staring" | | 5 | "Her stomach heaved, but she" | | 6 | "She was too busy staring" | | 7 | "His body was a grotesque" | | 8 | "His face—if it could be" | | 9 | "His gaze locked onto them," | | 10 | "His voice was a chorus" | | 11 | "She gasped, her hands flying" | | 12 | "He was *offering.*" | | 13 | "his voice slithered through her" | | 14 | "She could *taste* it—the sweet," | | 15 | "Her fingers twitched toward the" | | 16 | "They stood in a clearing," | | 17 | "She looked down at the" | | 18 | "She had a feeling they" |
| | ratio | 0.196 | |
| 78.56% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory’s" | | 1 | "She didn’t have time to" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "Her boots sank into the" | | 4 | "Nyx’s voice cut through the" | | 5 | "The pendant pulsed once, twice," | | 6 | "Rory’s fingers twitched toward it," | | 7 | "She stumbled back, her heel" | | 8 | "The air hummed, a low," | | 9 | "The pendant’s glow cast long," | | 10 | "Rory said, voice tight" | | 11 | "Isolde’s silver hair shimmered like" | | 12 | "she murmured, her voice barely" | | 13 | "Nyx’s shadow stretched unnaturally long," | | 14 | "Rory didn’t answer." | | 15 | "She was too busy staring" | | 16 | "The pendant pulsed again, and" | | 17 | "This was a *threshold*, carved" | | 18 | "The air around it *shimmered*," | | 19 | "Isolde said, her voice barely" |
| | ratio | 0.763 | |
| 51.55% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 97 | | matches | | 0 | "Because the Prince wasn’t just" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t have time to pull it away before the world *shifted*—not like a door swinging open, but like the air itself dissolving into something thicker, heavie…" | | 1 | "She stumbled back, her heel catching on something unseen, and she went down hard, the world tilting as the ground beneath her *moved*, rippling like water distu…" | | 2 | "Towering, skeletal things with bark like cracked porcelain, their branches twisting into shapes that made her stomach clench—faces, half-formed, mouths agape as…" | | 3 | "The pendant’s glow cast long, jagged shadows that didn’t quite match the shapes of the trees, as if the light itself was warping reality." | | 4 | "This was a *threshold*, carved from the same strange, porous stone as the trees, its surface etched with symbols that made her skin crawl." | | 5 | "The air around it *shimmered*, as if the very fabric of the world had been stretched thin, and something was trying to get through." | | 6 | "Not the black of a cave, but the deep, suffocating dark of a stomach after a feast—something that had been swallowed and never returned." | | 7 | "This was the stench of *decaying luxury*, of rotten fruit and spoiled wine, of flesh that had been stretched too thin and then left to fester." | | 8 | "The pendant burned against her chest, its glow casting long, shifting shadows that seemed to move on their own." | | 9 | "Desserts piled high, their layers trembling as if still warm from the oven." | | 10 | "One man, his body swollen to twice its size, his face a mask of ecstasy as he gnawed on a leg of lamb that dripped with something that wasn’t quite blood." | | 11 | "A woman, her skin glistening with sweat, her fingers buried in a mountain of truffles, her eyes wide with hunger that had long since devoured her soul." | | 12 | "Not the slow, deliberate shift of the earth, but a *thrashing*, a *struggling*, as if something vast and hungry had just awakened." | | 13 | "The trees groaned, their branches twisting unnaturally, their faces contorting into screams." | | 14 | "Not like torches or lanterns, but like the sudden flare of a thousand candles, each one casting a glow that made the shadows *breathe.* The feast tables stretch…" | | 15 | "His face—if it could be called a face—was a shifting mask of hunger, his mouth a lipless gash that stretched from ear to ear, his eyes two black pits that seeme…" | | 16 | "She gasped, her hands flying to her chest, but the pain was nothing compared to the *terror* that clawed up her throat." | | 17 | "The feast hall dissolved into something else—a corridor of flickering shadows, the air thick with the scent of ozone and something older, something that made he…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, voice tight," | | 1 | "she murmured, her voice barely audible over the pulse of the pendant" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her voice barely a whisper" |
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| 78.57% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.143 | | leniency | 0.286 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |