Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ3299SYR52C280ZAA4J5W

Run Details

Duration:
21.0s
Cost:
$0.008622

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and rust. Quinn stepped off the last rung of the ladder, her boots hitting the platform with a sharp echo. The beam of her torch cut through the gloom, illuminating peeling posters and graffiti that crawled up the tiled walls like ivy. She adjusted the worn leather strap of her watch, the second hand ticking too loud in the silence. "Quinn. Over here." Detective Sergeant Cole stood near the mouth of an old service tunnel, his silhouette framed by the flicker of police floodlights. He waved her over, the motion jerky. "Took you long enough." She ignored the jab. "What’ve we got?" Cole jerked his chin toward the tunnel. "Body’s in there. Male, late twenties. No ID, no wallet. Just this." He held up an evidence bag, the contents glinting under the artificial light—a small brass compass, its face etched with strange symbols. The needle spun lazily, as if drunk. Quinn’s fingers twitched. She knew that compass. Had seen one just like it in a case file three years ago, the one that had cost her a partner. She stepped closer, the beam of her torch catching the patina of verdigris on the brass. "Where’d you find it?" "Clutched in his hand. Like he was using it right before—" Cole made a vague gesture toward the tunnel. "You’ll see." The body lay sprawled across the tracks, limbs splayed at unnatural angles. The floodlights bleached his skin to wax, the blood pooling beneath him dark as oil. Quinn crouched, her knees protesting. No signs of a struggle. No defensive wounds. Just a single, clean puncture in the side of his neck, the edges too precise to be a knife. "Looks like a drug deal gone wrong," Cole said, arms crossed. "Maybe he was meeting someone here. Got greedy, got stabbed." Quinn didn’t answer. She was too busy staring at the compass. The needle had stopped spinning. Now it pointed straight at the wall. She stood, brushing dust from her trousers. "You said there’s no ID?" Cole shook his head. "Nothing. But we found this in his pocket." He handed her another evidence bag. Inside was a small, yellowed bone token, carved with the same symbols as the compass. Quinn’s stomach tightened. "This isn’t a drug deal." Cole exhaled through his nose. "You’re reaching. It’s a stabbing. Happens every damn night in this city." She turned the token over in the bag. "Then why’s he holding a compass that doesn’t point north? Why’s he got a key to the Veil Market in his pocket?" Cole’s jaw worked. "The what now?" Quinn ignored him, stepping closer to the wall. The needle of the compass trembled, as if pulled by an invisible thread. She ran her fingers along the tiles, pressing until her fingertips ached. Nothing. Just cold, smooth ceramic. Then—there. A seam. Almost invisible, but when she traced it with her nail, it gave way, the edges rough under her skin. She dug her fingers in and pulled. The wall didn’t move. Cole let out a sharp laugh. "Christ, Quinn. You’re losing it." She didn’t look at him. Instead, she turned the compass over, studying the sigils. One of them—a crescent moon bisected by a jagged line—looked familiar. She’d seen it before, in Eva Kowalski’s notes. A protective ward. Meant to keep something *in*. Or something *out*. She pressed her palm against the wall, right where the needle pointed. The tiles were warm. Almost pulsing. "Get me a crowbar," she said. Cole didn’t move. "You’re serious?" Quinn didn’t answer. She was too busy watching the compass. The needle had started spinning again, faster this time, a blur of motion. Then it stopped. Pointed straight at her. The wall groaned. A crack split the tiles, jagged as lightning. Dust rained down, stinging her eyes. Cole stumbled back, swearing. Quinn didn’t move. She just watched as the crack widened, revealing a sliver of darkness beyond. A draft whispered out, carrying the scent of old paper and something sharper—copper, maybe, or ozone. The compass in her hand grew hot. Cole grabbed her arm. "Quinn, what the hell is that?" She shook him off. "It’s a door." "Not a normal one," he muttered. She didn’t correct him. She already knew that. The crack widened further, the tiles crumbling like stale bread. Beyond it, the darkness shifted, coalescing into shapes—shelves, maybe, or stalls. A market. One that shouldn’t exist. Quinn stepped forward, the compass burning against her palm. The last time she’d seen something like this, Morris had died. But she wasn’t Morris. And she wasn’t about to let another body go unexplained. She took a breath. Then she stepped through.
total_cost0.008622

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.65% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount787
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount787
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"echo"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"echo"
1"gloom"
2"silence"
3"flicker"
4"glinting"
5"etched"
6"stomach"
7"trembled"
8"traced"
9"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords781
ratio0.003
matches
0"in"
1"out"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.86% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount646
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.7
worstName"Cole"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Cole"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Sergeant1
Cole11
Quinn9
Eva1
Kowalski1
Morris2
persons
0"Sergeant"
1"Cole"
2"Quinn"
3"Eva"
4"Kowalski"
5"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0.649
windowScore0.833
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like this, Morris had died"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount781
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"knew that compass"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean21.11
std16.66
cv0.79
sampleLengths
068
13
232
37
448
528
620
721
859
921
1023
1112
1233
138
1417
1530
166
1738
1829
194
2011
2141
223
2318
246
255
2630
273
2850
297
3010
317
326
338
3427
3534
368
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs119
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences100
ratio0.05
matches
0"\"Body’s in there. Male, late twenties. No ID, no wallet. Just this.\" He held up an evidence bag, the contents glinting under the artificial light—a small brass compass, its face etched with strange symbols."
1"Then—there."
2"One of them—a crescent moon bisected by a jagged line—looked familiar."
3"A draft whispered out, carrying the scent of old paper and something sharper—copper, maybe, or ozone."
4"Beyond it, the darkness shifted, coalescing into shapes—shelves, maybe, or stalls."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount652
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03374233128834356
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0015337423312883436
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean7.81
std5.91
cv0.757
sampleLengths
010
118
222
318
43
521
67
74
84
93
107
1134
127
133
144
1521
1616
174
1819
192
2012
2115
225
235
243
2519
2611
2710
283
298
305
317
327
335
344
3514
3615
373
385
395
4012
418
4222
433
443
458
4613
4712
481
494
58.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.37
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners37
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences78
matches
0"Just a single, clean puncture"
1"Just cold, smooth ceramic."
2"Almost invisible, but when she"
3"Instead, she turned the compass"
4"Then it stopped."
5"Then she stepped through."
ratio0.077
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences78
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"He waved her over, the"
2"She ignored the jab."
3"He held up an evidence"
4"She knew that compass."
5"She stepped closer, the beam"
6"She was too busy staring"
7"She stood, brushing dust from"
8"He handed her another evidence"
9"She turned the token over"
10"She ran her fingers along"
11"She dug her fingers in"
12"She didn’t look at him."
13"She’d seen it before, in"
14"She pressed her palm against"
15"She was too busy watching"
16"She just watched as the"
17"She shook him off."
18"She didn’t correct him."
19"She already knew that."
ratio0.269
81.79% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences78
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled"
1"Quinn stepped off the last"
2"The beam of her torch"
3"She adjusted the worn leather"
4"Detective Sergeant Cole stood near"
5"He waved her over, the"
6"She ignored the jab."
7"Cole jerked his chin toward"
8"He held up an evidence"
9"The needle spun lazily, as"
10"Quinn’s fingers twitched."
11"She knew that compass."
12"She stepped closer, the beam"
13"Cole made a vague gesture"
14"The body lay sprawled across"
15"The floodlights bleached his skin"
16"Quinn crouched, her knees protesting."
17"Cole said, arms crossed"
18"Quinn didn’t answer."
19"She was too busy staring"
ratio0.756
64.10% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Now it pointed straight at"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.095
89.7133%