Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ3G97MB39DSN8F4481BFT

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
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Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open, and the world seemed to stop turning. "You're supposed to be in France." The words tumbled out of Rory's mouth before she could stop them, her fingers still clutching the doorknob as if it might keep her standing. Lucien Moreau stood in the threshold of Eva's flat, impeccably dressed as always in a tailored charcoal suit that made his platinum blond hair seem almost luminous in the dim hallway light. "Evidently, I am not." His voice carried that same subtle French accent, simultaneously soft and razor-sharp. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—taking in every detail of her appearance. Ptolemy the tabby darted between Rory's legs and sniffed cautiously at Lucien's polished shoes. "Eva's not here," Rory said, her throat suddenly dry. "She's at the British Library for research. Won't be back until morning." "I'm not looking for Eva." Lucien's gaze remained fixed on her face. "May I come in?" Rory hesitated, her mind racing through the implications. Eighteen months since Paris. Eighteen months since she'd told him never to contact her again. Eighteen months of determinedly not thinking about him. "Depends. Are you here to apologize or to cause trouble?" She crossed her arms, aware of how defensive the posture made her look. "Neither. Information." He tapped his cane once on the floor. "The kind best discussed behind closed doors." Against her better judgment, Rory stepped aside. The familiar scent of his cologne—something expensive with notes of sandalwood and amber—briefly overwhelmed her as he passed. The cramped flat suddenly felt even smaller. Ptolemy immediately jumped onto the windowsill, watching the newcomer with feline suspicion. Rory closed the door, engaging all three deadbolts with deliberate care. The tiny rituals of security gave her precious seconds to compose herself. "Nice place," Lucien remarked, though his tone suggested the opposite. His gaze swept across the stacks of books and scrolls covering nearly every surface. "I see Ms. Winters remains as... academic as ever." "What information, Lucien?" He turned to face her fully. "You've been asking questions about the Blackwell auction." "How did you—" "It's my business to know these things. Information broker, remember?" A ghost of a smile touched his lips. "Your inquiries have not gone unnoticed." Rory moved to the kitchenette, needing space between them. She filled the electric kettle, switched it on. Normal actions to counter the abnormal situation of having Lucien Moreau standing in Eva's living room. "Tea?" she offered, knowing he'd refuse. "No, thank you." He remained standing, one hand resting on his cane. "You should stop investigating Blackwell." "I wasn't aware I needed your permission." The kettle rumbled to life. "It's not about permission. It's about keeping you alive." "Dramatic as always." Rory pulled two mugs from the cabinet anyway. "Why are you really here, Luc?" The nickname slipped out before she could catch it. His eyes flickered at the sound. "People who ask questions about Blackwell have a tendency to disappear. Three in the past month alone." He moved toward her, his cane making soft taps against the floorboards. "Whatever you think you're looking for, it's not worth it." "You don't know what I'm looking for." "Don't I?" He stopped at the edge of the kitchenette. Close enough that she could see the perfect Windsor knot of his tie. "The Blackwell family has been trafficking supernatural artifacts for centuries. You're investigating because of what happened to your friend." Rory's hand stilled on the tea canister. "Leave Eva out of this." "I'm trying to. And you as well." His voice softened slightly. "Some doors, once opened, cannot be closed again." The kettle clicked off. Rory poured hot water over a tea bag, watching it bloom dark in the mug. "That's rich, coming from you. Wasn't it you who told me that knowledge was power? That secrets were currency?" "I also told you that some currency comes with too high an exchange rate." She pushed the unwanted mug of tea toward him across the counter. "Why now? Why show up at Eva's door after all this time?" "Because your name crossed my desk this morning." He didn't touch the mug. "Someone put a price on information about your activities. Someone connected to Blackwell." Rory's stomach clenched. "How much?" "Enough to make me concerned." "You're never concerned. You're calculating." She searched his mismatched eyes. "What's your angle here?" Lucien sighed, a barely perceptible exhalation. "Must I have one?" "With you? Always." His fingers drummed once on the countertop. "Perhaps I simply don't wish to see your body fished from the Thames." "Touching." Rory sipped her tea, using the mug to hide her expression. "But we both know sentiment isn't your style." "You presume to know a great deal about my style after walking away in Paris." The accusation hung in the air between them. Rory set her mug down with deliberate care. "I walked away because you lied to me. You used me to get to Eva's research." "I was doing my job." "Your job was more important than—" She cut herself off, unwilling to finish the thought. "Than what?" Lucien challenged, taking a step closer. "Than whatever was happening between us? You never even gave it a name, Aurora." The use of her full name stung like a slap. Only her father called her Aurora, usually when he was disappointed. "Don't." She squared her shoulders. "You don't get to come here and act wounded when you were the one who manipulated the situation from the beginning." "Is that what you believe?" His accent thickened slightly, as it always did when his emotions ran high. "That everything was manipulation?" "Wasn't it?" Rory moved around the counter, needing to establish some control in this conversation. "You needed access to Eva's translation of the Malfian text. I was convenient." "You were never convenient, Carter." The nickname he'd given her in those early days in London slipped out, echoing her earlier mistake. "You were many things, but never that." Ptolemy chose that moment to leap from the windowsill, landing with a soft thud on the floor between them. The cat wound around Lucien's ankles once before returning to Rory's side. "Traitor," she muttered to the cat. "Your friend remains an excellent judge of character." A hint of the old humor crept into Lucien's voice. "Cats always know." "What do you want from me, Lucien?" Rory asked, suddenly tired. "You've delivered your warning. Duty done." He studied her for a long moment. "I want you to walk away from this investigation." "I can't." "Can't or won't?" "Both." Rory's fingers unconsciously moved to the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "Eva's research is missing. Her translation notes from the Malfian text—the same ones you were so interested in—disappeared three days ago." Something flashed in Lucien's eyes. Surprise, quickly masked. "And you believe Blackwell is responsible?" "The break-in happened the day after Blackwell announced the auction of 'previously undiscovered occult manuscripts.' Bit of a coincidence, don't you think?" Lucien's grip tightened on his cane. "Why didn't you report this?" "To whom? The Metropolitan Police?" Rory laughed without humor. "And tell them what? That my flatmate's supernatural research was stolen by occult antiquities dealers?" "You should have come to me." The statement hung between them, loaded with implication. "Right. Because that worked so well last time." Rory crossed her arms. "Besides, I thought I told you never to contact me again." "Yet here I am." Lucien's mouth curved in a slight smile. "I've never been particularly good at following instructions." "So I've noticed." A moment of charged silence stretched between them, filled with all the things they weren't saying. "I can help you, Carter," Lucien finally said. "But not if you keep charging ahead without a plan." "I have a plan." "Let me guess. Attend the auction, somehow identify Eva's stolen research, and then... what? Create a scene? Steal it back?" His voice dripped with skepticism. "The Blackwell auction is invitation only, heavily guarded, and attended by people who wouldn't hesitate to silence a curious bystander." Rory's silence confirmed his suspicions. Lucien pinched the bridge of his nose, a rare display of frustration. "This is exactly why I'm here. You'll get yourself killed." "Why do you care?" The question came out sharper than she intended. Lucien stilled, his mismatched eyes boring into hers. "That's the question, isn't it?" He moved closer, close enough that she could see the subtle variations of color in his amber eye. "Why would the cold, calculating information broker concern himself with a stubborn former law student?" "Lucien—" "I have many regrets about Paris," he interrupted, his voice low. "Using you was never one of them, because I didn't. That's what you refuse to understand." "Then what would you call it?" Rory forced herself to stand her ground despite his proximity. "Conflicting priorities," he said simply. "But never manipulation. Not with you." The air between them felt electric, charged with eighteen months of unresolved tension. "I need to find Eva's research," Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper. "I know." Lucien's hand moved as if to reach for her, then stopped. "Let me help you do it properly." "What's the catch?" "No catch." His eyes never left hers. "Consider it a gesture of good faith." "You don't make gestures." "Perhaps I'm evolving." The hint of a smile touched his lips. "Will you accept my help, Carter? Or shall we continue this dance of distrust until someone puts a bullet in your stubborn head?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags39
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"His voice softened slightly [slightly]"
1"His accent thickened slightly [slightly]"
2"Rory moved around [around]"
3"he said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences104
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.077
68.61% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1593
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count3
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
5
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"cautiously"
2"suddenly"
3"really"
4"quickly"
5"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1593
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"racing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"electric"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"perfect"
count1
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"calculating"
count2
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"implication"
count1
9
word"charged"
count2
10
word"silence"
count3
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"whisper"
count1
13
word"dance"
count1
highlights
0"racing"
1"familiar"
2"electric"
3"flickered"
4"perfect"
5"stomach"
6"calculating"
7"echoing"
8"implication"
9"charged"
10"silence"
11"tension"
12"whisper"
13"dance"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences87
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences150
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1583
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
14.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount812
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.71
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory22
Lucien16
Moreau2
Eva2
French1
Paris1
Close1
Windsor1
Aurora1
London1
Ptolemy3
Eighteen3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Paris"
1"Windsor"
2"London"
globalScore0.145
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1583
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences150
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs89
mean17.79
std10.52
cv0.591
sampleLengths
011
131
232
335
414
521
616
731
823
917
1032
1112
1223
1333
143
1514
163
1724
1833
196
2017
2112
229
2317
2415
2539
267
2742
2812
2919
3038
3114
3224
3326
345
355
3614
3710
383
3920
4020
4115
4216
4316
445
4515
4622
4721
4826
4922
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"was disappointed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"weren't saying"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences150
ratio0.013
matches
0"He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—taking in every detail of her appearance."
1"The familiar scent of his cologne—something expensive with notes of sandalwood and amber—briefly overwhelmed her as he passed."
80.60% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount819
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount39
adverbRatio0.047619047619047616
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.028083028083028084
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences150
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences150
mean10.55
std5.95
cv0.564
sampleLengths
011
131
232
316
419
514
69
712
812
94
108
114
1211
138
1423
1510
167
177
1818
197
2012
2111
2212
2310
2414
259
263
276
288
293
3018
316
329
338
3416
356
3612
375
3812
399
4011
416
429
436
4429
4510
467
4710
4813
4919
66.22% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.43333333333333335
totalSentences150
uniqueOpeners65
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences87
matches
0"Only her father called her"
ratio0.011
95.86% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences87
matches
0"His voice carried that same"
1"He leaned slightly on his"
2"She crossed her arms, aware"
3"He tapped his cane once"
4"His gaze swept across the"
5"He turned to face her"
6"She filled the electric kettle,"
7"she offered, knowing he'd refuse"
8"He remained standing, one hand"
9"His eyes flickered at the"
10"He moved toward her, his"
11"He stopped at the edge"
12"His voice softened slightly"
13"She pushed the unwanted mug"
14"He didn't touch the mug"
15"She searched his mismatched eyes"
16"His fingers drummed once on"
17"She cut herself off, unwilling"
18"She squared her shoulders"
19"His accent thickened slightly, as"
ratio0.31
5.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences87
matches
0"The door swung open, and"
1"The words tumbled out of"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"His voice carried that same"
4"He leaned slightly on his"
5"Ptolemy the tabby darted between"
6"Rory said, her throat suddenly"
7"Lucien's gaze remained fixed on"
8"Rory hesitated, her mind racing"
9"She crossed her arms, aware"
10"He tapped his cane once"
11"The familiar scent of his"
12"The cramped flat suddenly felt"
13"Ptolemy immediately jumped onto the"
14"Rory closed the door, engaging"
15"The tiny rituals of security"
16"Lucien remarked, though his tone"
17"His gaze swept across the"
18"He turned to face her"
19"A ghost of a smile"
ratio0.908
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood in the threshold of Eva's flat, impeccably dressed as always in a tailored charcoal suit that made his platinum blond hair seem almost lumin…"
35.26% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags39
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"Rory said, her throat suddenly dry"
1"Lucien remarked, though his tone suggested the opposite"
2"He moved, his cane making soft taps against the floorboards"
3"She cut, unwilling to finish the thought"
4"Rory moved around, needing to establish some control in this conversation"
5"he interrupted, his voice low"
6"Rory said, her voice barely above a whisper"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien challenged (challenge)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"Rory laughed (laugh)"
3"he interrupted (interrupt)"
dialogueSentences104
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.077
81.5246%