Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ3GK84K8BWJ0SYYSD64VA

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Duration:
6.8s
Cost:
$0.000291

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled of damp earth and something sweet, like overripe fruit left too long in the sun. Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss that carpeted the ground. The pendant at her throat pulsed faintly, warm against her skin. Beside her, Nyx shifted, their shadowy form flickering like a candle flame in a draft. The Shade’s violet eyes gleamed, though their face remained a shifting void of darkness. “This is it,” Aurora murmured, her voice low. “The Grove.” Isolde Varga stood at the edge of the clearing, her silver hair catching the dappled light filtering through the ancient oaks. She didn’t turn, but her voice carried, smooth as honeyed wine. *“You have come. The Veil thins here. But beware—it does not bend easily.”* A gust of wind rustled the leaves, and for a heartbeat, the world seemed to still. The air hummed, a low vibration in the bones, like the note of a tuning fork struck just out of reach. Aurora reached up, brushing her fingers over the pendant. The warmth intensified, steady as a heartbeat. Then, the ground tilted. Not underfoot—no, the world itself seemed to lean. The trees stretched taller, their branches twisting into shapes that made her stomach clench. Some looked like skeletal fingers, others like the ribs of some long-dead beast. The wildflowers here weren’t like anything she’d seen before. Their petals shimmered with an inner light, shifting between gold and violet as she moved past them. “It’s alive,” Nyx whispered, their voice like wind through dead leaves. “Or it’s hungry.” Aurora swallowed. “Or it’s just… breathing.” Isolde finally turned, her pale lavender eyes fixed on something beyond the clearing. *“The stones mark the boundary. Cross them, and you leave the world you know.”* She gestured toward the standing stones, their bark blackened as if scorched by time. The air around them shimmered, a distortion like heat rising from pavement. Aurora stepped closer. The pendant burned against her chest. The stones weren’t just wood—they were *alive*. Veins of silver light pulsed beneath their bark, slow and deliberate. She reached out, her fingers hovering just above the rough surface. A spark of warmth met her touch, then a prickle, like static electricity. The stone didn’t resist. “It’s warm,” she breathed. Nyx moved silently beside her, their shadow stretching unnaturally long, as if reaching for something just beyond sight. *“They’re not just markers. They’re… anchors. Something is holding the Veil here.”* Isolde’s lips curved, though there was no warmth in it. *“And something is trying to break it.”* A sound cut through the quiet—the snap of a twig, too sharp to be natural. Aurora spun, her hand instinctively going to the Fae-forged blade at her belt. The dagger was cold, its edge humming faintly, as if sensing danger. Nothing moved. Then, the flowers. The ones nearest the stones began to *twist*. Petals curled inward, sealing shut like the mouth of a predator. The air thickened, pressing against her skin. Nyx’s shadow rippled, their form flickering like a dying flame. “What the hell—?” Aurora’s voice cracked. Isolde’s fingers tightened around the hilt of a blade she hadn’t shown before—a slender thing of blackened steel, its edge gleaming with a faint, unnatural light. *“They sense you. They *remember* you.”* Her gaze flicked to Aurora’s pendant. *“The Heartstone. It’s not just a guide. It’s a beacon.”* Aurora’s breath hitched. The pendant pulsed harder, the warmth turning to heat, pressing against her collarbone. The flowers around them began to *bloom backward*, petals uncurling with a wet, tearing sound. The air smelled suddenly of iron and something older, something like rot and honey. Then the ground gave way. Not under her feet—no, the *world* did. The clearing tilted again, sharper this time, and the trees above them seemed to *lean* closer, their branches stretching like grasping hands. The standing stones groaned, their silver veins flashing bright as they split apart, revealing a yawning darkness beyond. Aurora stumbled back, her boot catching on something soft. She looked down. The moss beneath her feet wasn’t just moss. It was *eyes*. Thousands of them, tiny and blind, opening in unison as she moved. The pendant at her throat flared, white-hot against her skin. Nyx’s shadow surged forward, a living wall of darkness between her and the blooming horde. *“We need to move,”* Nyx said, their voice urgent. *“Now.”* Isolde didn’t wait for an answer. She stepped forward, her bare feet pressing into the earth with a sound like wet parchment. The stones behind her split wider, revealing a tunnel of darkness, its edges lined with the same silver veins. The air inside was thick, heavy with the scent of spices and something fouler—like spoiled meat left in the sun. Aurora hesitated. Then she took a step forward. The pendant burned.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.467
leniency0.933
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount809
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount809
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulsed"
count3
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"predator"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"beacon"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"stomach"
3"shimmered"
4"predator"
5"gleaming"
6"flicked"
7"beacon"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences68
matches
0"A spark of warmth"
37.82% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences68
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
17.50% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans14
markdownWords73
totalWords800
ratio0.091
matches
0"“You have come. The Veil thins here. But beware—it does not bend easily.”"
1"“The stones mark the boundary. Cross them, and you leave the world you know.”"
2"alive"
3"“They’re not just markers. They’re… anchors. Something is holding the Veil here.”"
4"“And something is trying to break it.”"
5"twist"
6"“They sense you. They *remember"
7"“The Heartstone. It’s not just a guide. It’s a beacon.”"
8"bloom backward"
9"world"
10"lean"
11"eyes"
12"“We need to move,”"
13"“Now.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.97% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount714
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Nyx6
Shade1
Isolde5
Varga1
Aurora11
Fae-forged1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Isolde"
4"Varga"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Fae-forged"
globalScore0.73
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like skeletal fingers, others like"
1"as if reaching for something just beyond sight"
2"as if sensing danger"
3"something like rot and honey"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount800
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs32
mean25
std20.75
cv0.83
sampleLengths
045
129
210
345
453
54
661
714
86
953
1055
114
1230
1317
1440
152
163
1736
186
1948
2045
215
2247
2312
248
253
2637
2710
2861
292
306
313
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs119
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences76
ratio0.079
matches
0"Not underfoot—no, the world itself seemed to lean."
1"The stones weren’t just wood—they were *alive*."
2"A sound cut through the quiet—the snap of a twig, too sharp to be natural."
3"Isolde’s fingers tightened around the hilt of a blade she hadn’t shown before—a slender thing of blackened steel, its edge gleaming with a faint, unnatural light."
4"Not under her feet—no, the *world* did."
5"The air inside was thick, heavy with the scent of spices and something fouler—like spoiled meat left in the sun."
93.85% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount722
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"white-hot against her"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04016620498614958
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.0110803324099723
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean10.53
std5.94
cv0.564
sampleLengths
018
116
211
315
414
58
62
721
811
913
1016
1121
129
137
144
158
1614
1713
189
1917
2011
213
222
234
2413
2528
2612
273
286
297
3011
3111
3213
334
344
3518
3612
3710
387
3915
4013
4112
422
433
448
4511
467
4710
486
4926
44.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3157894736842105
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners24
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences64
matches
0"Then, the ground tilted."
1"Then, the flowers."
2"Then the ground gave way."
3"Then she took a step"
ratio0.063
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences64
matches
0"She didn’t turn, but her"
1"Their petals shimmered with an"
2"She gestured toward the standing"
3"She reached out, her fingers"
4"Her gaze flicked to Aurora’s"
5"She looked down."
6"It was *eyes*."
7"She stepped forward, her bare"
ratio0.125
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences64
matches
0"The air smelled of damp"
1"Aurora Carter stepped forward, her"
2"The pendant at her throat"
3"The Shade’s violet eyes gleamed,"
4"Aurora murmured, her voice low"
5"Isolde Varga stood at the"
6"She didn’t turn, but her"
7"A gust of wind rustled"
8"The air hummed, a low"
9"Aurora reached up, brushing her"
10"The warmth intensified, steady as"
11"The trees stretched taller, their"
12"Some looked like skeletal fingers,"
13"The wildflowers here weren’t like"
14"Their petals shimmered with an"
15"Nyx whispered, their voice like"
16"Isolde finally turned, her pale"
17"She gestured toward the standing"
18"The air around them shimmered,"
19"Aurora stepped closer."
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences64
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss that carpeted the ground."
1"Nyx moved silently beside her, their shadow stretching unnaturally long, as if reaching for something just beyond sight."
2"The dagger was cold, its edge humming faintly, as if sensing danger."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora murmured, her voice low"
1"Nyx said, their voice urgent"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.267
leniency0.533
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.4
69.1274%