| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.467 | | leniency | 0.933 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 87.64% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 809 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.47% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 809 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "predator" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "beacon" |
| |
| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | matches | | |
| 37.82% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 68 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 17.50% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 14 | | markdownWords | 73 | | totalWords | 800 | | ratio | 0.091 | | matches | | 0 | "“You have come. The Veil thins here. But beware—it does not bend easily.”" | | 1 | "“The stones mark the boundary. Cross them, and you leave the world you know.”" | | 2 | "alive" | | 3 | "“They’re not just markers. They’re… anchors. Something is holding the Veil here.”" | | 4 | "“And something is trying to break it.”" | | 5 | "twist" | | 6 | "“They sense you. They *remember" | | 7 | "“The Heartstone. It’s not just a guide. It’s a beacon.”" | | 8 | "bloom backward" | | 9 | "world" | | 10 | "lean" | | 11 | "eyes" | | 12 | "“We need to move,”" | | 13 | "“Now.”" |
| |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.97% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 26 | | wordCount | 714 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.54 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 1 | | Isolde | 5 | | Varga | 1 | | Aurora | 11 | | Fae-forged | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Shade" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.73 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like skeletal fingers, others like" | | 1 | "as if reaching for something just beyond sight" | | 2 | "as if sensing danger" | | 3 | "something like rot and honey" |
| |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 800 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 25 | | std | 20.75 | | cv | 0.83 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 45 | | 1 | 29 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 45 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 61 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 48 | | 20 | 45 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 47 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 61 | | 29 | 2 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 3 |
| |
| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 68 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.079 | | matches | | 0 | "Not underfoot—no, the world itself seemed to lean." | | 1 | "The stones weren’t just wood—they were *alive*." | | 2 | "A sound cut through the quiet—the snap of a twig, too sharp to be natural." | | 3 | "Isolde’s fingers tightened around the hilt of a blade she hadn’t shown before—a slender thing of blackened steel, its edge gleaming with a faint, unnatural light." | | 4 | "Not under her feet—no, the *world* did." | | 5 | "The air inside was thick, heavy with the scent of spices and something fouler—like spoiled meat left in the sun." |
| |
| 93.85% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 722 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 29 | | adverbRatio | 0.04016620498614958 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0110803324099723 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 10.53 | | std | 5.94 | | cv | 0.564 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 26 |
| |
| 44.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.3157894736842105 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, the ground tilted." | | 1 | "Then, the flowers." | | 2 | "Then the ground gave way." | | 3 | "Then she took a step" |
| | ratio | 0.063 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t turn, but her" | | 1 | "Their petals shimmered with an" | | 2 | "She gestured toward the standing" | | 3 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 4 | "Her gaze flicked to Aurora’s" | | 5 | "She looked down." | | 6 | "It was *eyes*." | | 7 | "She stepped forward, her bare" |
| | ratio | 0.125 | |
| 22.50% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, her" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "The Shade’s violet eyes gleamed," | | 4 | "Aurora murmured, her voice low" | | 5 | "Isolde Varga stood at the" | | 6 | "She didn’t turn, but her" | | 7 | "A gust of wind rustled" | | 8 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 9 | "Aurora reached up, brushing her" | | 10 | "The warmth intensified, steady as" | | 11 | "The trees stretched taller, their" | | 12 | "Some looked like skeletal fingers," | | 13 | "The wildflowers here weren’t like" | | 14 | "Their petals shimmered with an" | | 15 | "Nyx whispered, their voice like" | | 16 | "Isolde finally turned, her pale" | | 17 | "She gestured toward the standing" | | 18 | "The air around them shimmered," | | 19 | "Aurora stepped closer." |
| | ratio | 0.875 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 83.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter stepped forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft moss that carpeted the ground." | | 1 | "Nyx moved silently beside her, their shadow stretching unnaturally long, as if reaching for something just beyond sight." | | 2 | "The dagger was cold, its edge humming faintly, as if sensing danger." |
| |
| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora murmured, her voice low" | | 1 | "Nyx said, their voice urgent" |
| |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 15 | | tagDensity | 0.267 | | leniency | 0.533 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.4 | |