Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ3QYCEDH1Q2R9F36QH25T

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Duration:
46.2s
Cost:
$0.013982

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against Rory’s collarbone, a slow, insistent warmth that hadn’t faded since they’d stepped through the standing stones. The air in the grove had thickened, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—like crushed violets left too long in the sun. Nyx moved ahead, their shadowy form rippling as they passed between the ancient oaks, fingers brushing the bark as if testing the boundary between worlds. "You’re sure this is the right place?" Rory adjusted the strap of her bag, the Fae blade tucked inside pressing cold against her ribs. Isolde didn’t turn, her silver hair swaying as she stepped over a root that hadn’t been there a moment before. "The Veil is thin here. Thinner than it should be." Her voice carried the weight of something unspoken, the kind of certainty that made Rory’s skin prickle. "Dymas doesn’t just let visitors wander in." Nyx’s laughter was a whisper on the wind, their violet eyes flickering like embers in the dim light. "Oh, it’ll let us in. It’s the *leaving* that’s the problem." The trees ahead parted—not bending, not swaying, but *unraveling* like thread pulled from a spool. Beyond them, the sky bled amber, too warm, too *hungry*. Rory’s breath hitched. The grove had been lush, alive. This place was something else entirely. They stepped through. The first thing that hit Rory was the smell. Not the rot of decay, not the sharp tang of magic, but something richer, deeper—spiced wine and roasting meat, caramelized sugar and the faint metallic bite of blood. Her stomach growled before she could stop it. Nyx inhaled sharply, their form solidifying for a moment, fingers curling into fists. Isolde’s lavender eyes darkened. "Gluttony isn’t just a sin here. It’s a *law*." The ground beneath them wasn’t dirt. It was something softer, spongier, like walking on a living thing. Rory crouched, pressing her palm to it. The surface gave slightly, then *pulsed*, a slow, rhythmic throb that matched the pendant’s warmth. She jerked her hand back. Nyx crouched beside her, their shadow stretching unnaturally long. "It’s breathing." A vine slithered past Rory’s boot, its leaves broad and waxy, the edges serrated like teeth. It curled around her ankle, not tight, not yet, but *testing*. She kicked it off, and it recoiled with a sound like a hiss. Isolde’s fingers tightened around the hilt of her own blade. "Don’t eat. Don’t drink. Don’t *touch* anything you don’t have to." Rory stood, brushing her hands on her jeans. "Noted." They moved deeper into the orchard. The trees here weren’t trees at all—they were *towers* of flesh and bark, their trunks pulsing with veins of golden sap. Fruit hung low, swollen and glistening, their skins stretched taut over what looked like *meat*, not pulp. Rory’s throat burned. She swallowed hard. Nyx plucked one from a branch, turning it in their fingers. The skin split with a wet sound, revealing something that *twitched*. They dropped it. "That’s new." Isolde didn’t look. "Keep moving." The path widened into a clearing where the ground gave way to a mosaic of tiles, each one a different shade of red—ruby, garnet, the deep crimson of old wine. In the center stood a fountain, but the water wasn’t water. It was *syrup*, thick and slow-moving, bubbling up from the mouth of a stone face that wore a permanent grin. The liquid pooled in the basin before overflowing, dripping down the sides in slow, sticky rivulets. Rory’s pendant flared hot against her chest. She hissed, pressing a hand to it. The stone’s glow seeped between her fingers. Nyx’s eyes locked onto it. "It’s reacting to something." Isolde’s gaze followed the syrup’s path. It led to a set of stairs, wide and shallow, descending into darkness. "There." The air grew heavier with each step, thick with the scent of cooking fat and something *older*, something that made Rory’s teeth ache. The stairs ended in a cavernous hall, its ceiling lost in shadow. Torches lined the walls, but their flames burned *green*, casting everything in an eerie, sickly light. Tables stretched the length of the hall, long and low, piled high with food. Not just food—*feasts*. Whole roasted beasts with apples stuffed in their mouths, towers of pastries dripping with honey, bowls of fruit that *moved* when no one was looking. Rory’s stomach twisted. She hadn’t eaten since morning, but the thought of food now made her want to retch. At the far end of the hall, a figure lounged on a throne of twisted bone. Prince Belphegor, Rory assumed. He was *large*, not just tall but *wide*, his body soft in a way that made her think of overripe fruit. His skin had the sheen of something glazed, his lips wet and red. He watched them with eyes that were too small, too dark, like currants pressed into dough. "Visitors," he said, his voice a wet gurgle. "How *delightful*." Isolde stepped forward, her movements fluid, unhurried. "We’re not here to dine, Belphegor." The prince’s laugh was a sound like something breaking. "Oh, but you *are*." He snapped his fingers. The tables groaned. The food *shifted*. Plates slid forward on their own, cutlery clinking against porcelain. A goblet tipped over, spilling wine that wasn’t wine—it was *thicker*, darker, pooling on the table like syrup. Rory’s fingers twitched toward the Fae blade. Nyx’s shadow writhed, their form flickering between solid and smoke. Belphegor leaned forward, his throne creaking. "Eat. Drink. *Indulge*." His smile split his face too wide, his teeth too sharp. "It’s the only way out." Isolde’s voice was steel. "We’ll pass." The prince’s smile didn’t waver. "Then you’ll *starve*." He waved a hand, and the hall *shifted*. The tables stretched longer, the food multiplying, the scent growing richer, sweeter, until Rory’s head spun. The pendant burned against her skin, a warning. Nyx’s whisper was a breath of wind. "We need to move. *Now*." Rory didn’t argue. She turned, but the stairs were gone. The hall stretched endlessly in every direction, the tables repeating in an infinite loop. The air thickened, pressing against her skin, her lungs. She gasped, her vision swimming. Isolde’s hand closed around her wrist, her grip like ice. "Breathe. It’s an illusion." But it *felt* real. The hunger gnawed at her, the thirst a fire in her throat. The pendant’s heat was the only thing keeping her grounded. Nyx’s form solidified beside them, their voice low. "The Veil’s weakest point is always at the heart of the sin. We find the source, we find the way out." Belphegor’s laughter echoed, bouncing off the walls. "You can’t *escape* Gluttony. It’s already inside you." Rory’s fingers closed around the Fae blade. She pulled it free, the metal humming in her grip. The moment it cleared the sheath, the air *shifted*. The illusions wavered, just for a second, like heat rising from pavement. Isolde’s eyes gleamed. "Clever girl." Nyx grinned, their teeth sharp in the dim light. "Let’s give the prince a *taste* of his own medicine."
total_cost0.013982

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.231
leniency0.462
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1172
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.21% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1172
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count2
2
word"carried the weight"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"unraveling"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count2
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"throb"
count1
9
word"glistening"
count1
10
word"mosaic"
count1
11
word"porcelain"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"wavered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"carried the weight"
3"unspoken"
4"whisper"
5"unraveling"
6"stomach"
7"rhythmic"
8"throb"
9"glistening"
10"mosaic"
11"porcelain"
12"echoed"
13"wavered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"think"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans29
markdownWords29
totalWords1166
ratio0.025
matches
0"leaving"
1"unraveling"
2"hungry"
3"law"
4"pulsed"
5"testing"
6"touch"
7"towers"
8"meat"
9"twitched"
10"syrup"
11"older"
12"green"
13"feasts"
14"moved"
15"large"
16"wide"
17"delightful"
18"are"
19"shifted"
20"thicker"
21"Indulge"
22"starve"
23"shifted"
24"Now"
25"felt"
26"escape"
27"shifted"
28"taste"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1023
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory17
Fae3
Isolde9
Nyx10
Belphegor3
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
4"Belphegor"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.669
windowScore0.833
83.33% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if testing the boundary between worlds"
1"looked like *meat*, not pulp"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords6.003
wordCount1166
matches
0"not bending, not swaying, but *unraveling* like thread pulled from a spool"
1"not swaying, but *unraveling* like thread pulled from a spool"
2"Not the rot of decay, not the sharp tang of magic, but something richer, deeper"
3"not the sharp tang of magic, but something richer, deeper"
4"not tight, not yet, but *testing*"
5"not yet, but *testing*"
6"not just tall but *wide*, his body soft in a way"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean29.15
std19.78
cv0.679
sampleLengths
071
124
254
329
440
53
658
713
844
911
1040
1121
129
1350
1427
155
1677
1721
189
1920
2051
2161
2270
2310
2413
2517
2634
2717
2825
296
3040
3112
3238
3314
3426
3529
3615
3738
385
3919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences116
ratio0.06
matches
0"The air in the grove had thickened, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—like crushed violets left too long in the sun."
1"The trees ahead parted—not bending, not swaying, but *unraveling* like thread pulled from a spool."
2"Not the rot of decay, not the sharp tang of magic, but something richer, deeper—spiced wine and roasting meat, caramelized sugar and the faint metallic bite of blood."
3"The trees here weren’t trees at all—they were *towers* of flesh and bark, their trunks pulsing with veins of golden sap."
4"The path widened into a clearing where the ground gave way to a mosaic of tiles, each one a different shade of red—ruby, garnet, the deep crimson of old wine."
5"Not just food—*feasts*."
6"A goblet tipped over, spilling wine that wasn’t wine—it was *thicker*, darker, pooling on the table like syrup."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1029
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"inside pressing cold against her"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.025267249757045675
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.006802721088435374
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean10.05
std6.61
cv0.657
sampleLengths
021
125
225
324
420
527
67
718
811
915
1010
113
126
136
143
159
1628
178
1813
194
209
216
2211
237
2415
255
269
272
2816
2911
3013
3110
3211
338
341
356
3621
3717
383
393
4011
4111
423
432
443
452
4630
4711
4820
4916
52.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.35344827586206895
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences96
matches
0"Her voice carried the weight"
1"They stepped through."
2"Her stomach growled before she"
3"It was something softer, spongier,"
4"She jerked her hand back."
5"It curled around her ankle,"
6"She kicked it off, and"
7"They moved deeper into the"
8"She swallowed hard."
9"They dropped it."
10"It was *syrup*, thick and"
11"She hissed, pressing a hand"
12"It led to a set"
13"She hadn’t eaten since morning,"
14"He was *large*, not just"
15"His skin had the sheen"
16"He watched them with eyes"
17"he said, his voice a"
18"He snapped his fingers"
19"His smile split his face"
ratio0.25
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences96
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
1"The air in the grove"
2"Nyx moved ahead, their shadowy"
3"Rory adjusted the strap of"
4"Isolde didn’t turn, her silver"
5"Her voice carried the weight"
6"Nyx’s laughter was a whisper"
7"The trees ahead parted—not bending,"
8"Rory’s breath hitched."
9"The grove had been lush,"
10"This place was something else"
11"They stepped through."
12"The first thing that hit"
13"Her stomach growled before she"
14"Nyx inhaled sharply, their form"
15"Isolde’s lavender eyes darkened."
16"The ground beneath them wasn’t"
17"It was something softer, spongier,"
18"Rory crouched, pressing her palm"
19"The surface gave slightly, then"
ratio0.927
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
ratio0
29.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against Rory’s collarbone, a slow, insistent warmth that hadn’t faded since they’d stepped through the standing stones."
1"Nyx moved ahead, their shadowy form rippling as they passed between the ancient oaks, fingers brushing the bark as if testing the boundary between worlds."
2"The skin split with a wet sound, revealing something that *twitched*."
3"It was *syrup*, thick and slow-moving, bubbling up from the mouth of a stone face that wore a permanent grin."
4"The air grew heavier with each step, thick with the scent of cooking fat and something *older*, something that made Rory’s teeth ache."
5"Whole roasted beasts with apples stuffed in their mouths, towers of pastries dripping with honey, bowls of fruit that *moved* when no one was looking."
6"He was *large*, not just tall but *wide*, his body soft in a way that made her think of overripe fruit."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Her voice carried, the kind of certainty that made Rory’s skin prickle"
1"he said, his voice a wet gurgle"
2"His smile split, his teeth too sharp"
3"He waved, and the hall *shifted*"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences26
tagDensity0.077
leniency0.154
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.077
71.3671%