| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.231 | | leniency | 0.462 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.47% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 23.21% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1172 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "carried the weight" | | 3 | "unspoken" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "unraveling" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "rhythmic" | | 8 | "throb" | | 9 | "glistening" | | 10 | "mosaic" | | 11 | "porcelain" | | 12 | "echoed" | | 13 | "wavered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 29 | | markdownWords | 29 | | totalWords | 1166 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "leaving" | | 1 | "unraveling" | | 2 | "hungry" | | 3 | "law" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "testing" | | 6 | "touch" | | 7 | "towers" | | 8 | "meat" | | 9 | "twitched" | | 10 | "syrup" | | 11 | "older" | | 12 | "green" | | 13 | "feasts" | | 14 | "moved" | | 15 | "large" | | 16 | "wide" | | 17 | "delightful" | | 18 | "are" | | 19 | "shifted" | | 20 | "thicker" | | 21 | "Indulge" | | 22 | "starve" | | 23 | "shifted" | | 24 | "Now" | | 25 | "felt" | | 26 | "escape" | | 27 | "shifted" | | 28 | "taste" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1023 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Fae | 3 | | Isolde | 9 | | Nyx | 10 | | Belphegor | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Belphegor" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.669 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 83.33% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if testing the boundary between worlds" | | 1 | "looked like *meat*, not pulp" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 7 | | per1kWords | 6.003 | | wordCount | 1166 | | matches | | 0 | "not bending, not swaying, but *unraveling* like thread pulled from a spool" | | 1 | "not swaying, but *unraveling* like thread pulled from a spool" | | 2 | "Not the rot of decay, not the sharp tang of magic, but something richer, deeper" | | 3 | "not the sharp tang of magic, but something richer, deeper" | | 4 | "not tight, not yet, but *testing*" | | 5 | "not yet, but *testing*" | | 6 | "not just tall but *wide*, his body soft in a way" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 29.15 | | std | 19.78 | | cv | 0.679 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 54 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 40 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 44 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 40 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 27 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 77 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 70 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 34 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 25 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 38 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 29 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 38 | | 38 | 5 | | 39 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "The air in the grove had thickened, heavy with the scent of damp earth and something sweeter—like crushed violets left too long in the sun." | | 1 | "The trees ahead parted—not bending, not swaying, but *unraveling* like thread pulled from a spool." | | 2 | "Not the rot of decay, not the sharp tang of magic, but something richer, deeper—spiced wine and roasting meat, caramelized sugar and the faint metallic bite of blood." | | 3 | "The trees here weren’t trees at all—they were *towers* of flesh and bark, their trunks pulsing with veins of golden sap." | | 4 | "The path widened into a clearing where the ground gave way to a mosaic of tiles, each one a different shade of red—ruby, garnet, the deep crimson of old wine." | | 5 | "Not just food—*feasts*." | | 6 | "A goblet tipped over, spilling wine that wasn’t wine—it was *thicker*, darker, pooling on the table like syrup." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1029 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "inside pressing cold against her" |
| | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.025267249757045675 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006802721088435374 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 10.05 | | std | 6.61 | | cv | 0.657 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 21 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 27 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 1 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 52.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.35344827586206895 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 41 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 24 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice carried the weight" | | 1 | "They stepped through." | | 2 | "Her stomach growled before she" | | 3 | "It was something softer, spongier," | | 4 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 5 | "It curled around her ankle," | | 6 | "She kicked it off, and" | | 7 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 8 | "She swallowed hard." | | 9 | "They dropped it." | | 10 | "It was *syrup*, thick and" | | 11 | "She hissed, pressing a hand" | | 12 | "It led to a set" | | 13 | "She hadn’t eaten since morning," | | 14 | "He was *large*, not just" | | 15 | "His skin had the sheen" | | 16 | "He watched them with eyes" | | 17 | "he said, his voice a" | | 18 | "He snapped his fingers" | | 19 | "His smile split his face" |
| | ratio | 0.25 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 89 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "The air in the grove" | | 2 | "Nyx moved ahead, their shadowy" | | 3 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 4 | "Isolde didn’t turn, her silver" | | 5 | "Her voice carried the weight" | | 6 | "Nyx’s laughter was a whisper" | | 7 | "The trees ahead parted—not bending," | | 8 | "Rory’s breath hitched." | | 9 | "The grove had been lush," | | 10 | "This place was something else" | | 11 | "They stepped through." | | 12 | "The first thing that hit" | | 13 | "Her stomach growled before she" | | 14 | "Nyx inhaled sharply, their form" | | 15 | "Isolde’s lavender eyes darkened." | | 16 | "The ground beneath them wasn’t" | | 17 | "It was something softer, spongier," | | 18 | "Rory crouched, pressing her palm" | | 19 | "The surface gave slightly, then" |
| | ratio | 0.927 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 29.22% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against Rory’s collarbone, a slow, insistent warmth that hadn’t faded since they’d stepped through the standing stones." | | 1 | "Nyx moved ahead, their shadowy form rippling as they passed between the ancient oaks, fingers brushing the bark as if testing the boundary between worlds." | | 2 | "The skin split with a wet sound, revealing something that *twitched*." | | 3 | "It was *syrup*, thick and slow-moving, bubbling up from the mouth of a stone face that wore a permanent grin." | | 4 | "The air grew heavier with each step, thick with the scent of cooking fat and something *older*, something that made Rory’s teeth ache." | | 5 | "Whole roasted beasts with apples stuffed in their mouths, towers of pastries dripping with honey, bowls of fruit that *moved* when no one was looking." | | 6 | "He was *large*, not just tall but *wide*, his body soft in a way that made her think of overripe fruit." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Her voice carried, the kind of certainty that made Rory’s skin prickle" | | 1 | "he said, his voice a wet gurgle" | | 2 | "His smile split, his teeth too sharp" | | 3 | "He waved, and the hall *shifted*" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.077 | | leniency | 0.154 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.077 | |