| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.38% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1380 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.42% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1380 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "shimmered" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "flickered" | | 9 | "trembled" | | 10 | "sense of" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "crystal" | | 13 | "surreal" | | 14 | "stomach" | | 15 | "searing" | | 16 | "throb" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 87.49% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 129 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 168 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 11 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 1363 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "Hearts." | | 1 | "fuck" | | 2 | "hungry" | | 3 | "hissed" | | 4 | "ripped" | | 5 | "thud." | | 6 | "crawl" | | 7 | "things." | | 8 | "shimmer," | | 9 | "throb" | | 10 | "ran." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 38.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 67 | | wordCount | 1166 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 26 | | Nyx | 14 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Human | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 14 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.385 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 93.82% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "knots that seemed to shift when she blinked" | | 1 | "looked like glass" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.734 | | wordCount | 1363 | | matches | | 0 | "not a hole, but a slide, slick" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 67 | | mean | 20.34 | | std | 14.19 | | cv | 0.697 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 49 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 28 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 40 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 41 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 20 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 18 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 46 | | 27 | 17 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 40 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 34 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 51 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 97.10% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 129 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "was made" | | 2 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 201 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 14 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 168 | | ratio | 0.071 | | matches | | 0 | "She traced the deep grooves of ancient carvings—swirling knots that seemed to shift when she blinked." | | 1 | "The trees ahead weren’t trees at all—not like any she’d seen." | | 2 | "Isolde plucked a flower from the air—it hadn’t been there a second ago—and twirled it between her fingers." | | 3 | "Vines coiled up the trees, heavy with fruit that glowed faintly in the dim light—some ruby-red, others a sickly green." | | 4 | "Not chimes—laughter." | | 5 | "A whisper slithered past her ear—words she almost understood." | | 6 | "Not an earthquake—something beneath the earth was shifting." | | 7 | "The ground beneath Rory’s feet gave way—not a hole, but a slide, slick and steep, sending her tumbling into the dark." | | 8 | "Not from the pendant—from the walls." | | 9 | "Not trees—something like them." | | 10 | "The branches above them trembled, and one of the hearts—smaller than the others, no bigger than a fist—twitched violently." | | 11 | "And floating above it—" |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1183 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavier, pressing against Rory’s" | | 1 | "thicker, pressing against Rory’s" |
| | adverbCount | 44 | | adverbRatio | 0.037193575655114115 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006762468300929839 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 168 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 168 | | mean | 8.11 | | std | 5.68 | | cv | 0.701 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 28 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 18 | | 20 | 8 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 45.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.27976190476190477 | | totalSentences | 168 | | uniqueOpeners | 47 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Just more trees, more vines," | | 1 | "Just the damp, earthy dark." | | 2 | "Then, the tunnel opened." | | 3 | "Then it *ripped* free from" | | 4 | "Then, the roots parted." |
| | ratio | 0.044 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "She traced the deep grooves" | | 1 | "Their voice was the rustle" | | 2 | "She ignored it." | | 3 | "Their trunks twisted like melted" | | 4 | "It landed on a branch" | | 5 | "She spun, but nothing was" | | 6 | "She barely had time to" | | 7 | "Her breath came shallow." | | 8 | "They stood at the edge" | | 9 | "It was the trees." | | 10 | "Their trunks were bone-white, their" | | 11 | "It let out a sound" | | 12 | "They didn’t need to be" | | 13 | "She bolted, the others close" | | 14 | "They snarled, shadows flaring as" | | 15 | "She grabbed Nyx’s hand and" |
| | ratio | 0.14 | |
| 47.72% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 94 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 1 | "She traced the deep grooves" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "Isolde murmured, her silver hair" | | 4 | "Nyx materialized beside Rory, their" | | 5 | "Their voice was the rustle" | | 6 | "Rory exhaled, adjusting the strap" | | 7 | "The Heartstone pendant against her" | | 8 | "She ignored it." | | 9 | "The moment they crossed the" | | 10 | "The trees ahead weren’t trees" | | 11 | "Their trunks twisted like melted" | | 12 | "The ground beneath her boots" | | 13 | "Nyx crouched, pressing a hand" | | 14 | "Shadows pooled around their fingers." | | 15 | "Isolde plucked a flower from" | | 16 | "Rory’s pulse jumped as a" | | 17 | "It landed on a branch" | | 18 | "Nyx straightened, their form solidifying." | | 19 | "The deeper they walked, the" |
| | ratio | 0.825 | |
| 43.86% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 114 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could answer, the" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "The ground beneath her boots felt spongy, yielding, as if she walked on something alive." | | 1 | "Vines coiled up the trees, heavy with fruit that glowed faintly in the dim light—some ruby-red, others a sickly green." | | 2 | "But it wasn’t the size or the light that made her stomach clench." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde agreed (agree)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 44 | | tagDensity | 0.068 | | leniency | 0.136 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |