Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ50JACNJZ2EZJ9MXYAG48

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Duration:
38.9s
Cost:
$0.015380

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The standing stones loomed like jagged teeth against the twilight, their bark rough under Rory’s fingertips. She traced the deep grooves of ancient carvings—swirling knots that seemed to shift when she blinked. The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter, like honey left too long in the sun. "Time’s funny here," Isolde murmured, her silver hair catching the last light as she stepped between the stones. "An hour inside could be a breath out there. Or a week." Nyx materialized beside Rory, their violet eyes flickering like embers. "Or a lifetime." Their voice was the rustle of dry leaves. "The Grove doesn’t care for mortal clocks." Rory exhaled, adjusting the strap of her bag. The Heartstone pendant against her chest pulsed once, warm as a heartbeat. She ignored it. "Then we’d best not dawdle." The moment they crossed the threshold, the world tilted. The trees ahead weren’t trees at all—not like any she’d seen. Their trunks twisted like melted wax, bark the color of old parchment, and their leaves shimmered in hues of violet and gold, even though no wind stirred them. The ground beneath her boots felt spongy, yielding, as if she walked on something alive. Nyx crouched, pressing a hand to the earth. Shadows pooled around their fingers. "The soil’s humming." Isolde plucked a flower from the air—it hadn’t been there a second ago—and twirled it between her fingers. "The Grove breathes. It decides what you see." Rory’s pulse jumped as a bird the size of her palm darted past, its wings iridescent as oil on water. It landed on a branch that bent under its weight, though the creature weighed nothing. "What the hell was that?" "A memory," Isolde said. "Or a warning." Nyx straightened, their form solidifying. "Or dinner." The deeper they walked, the more the Grove unspooled around them. Vines coiled up the trees, heavy with fruit that glowed faintly in the dim light—some ruby-red, others a sickly green. Rory reached out, then hesitated. "Are these safe to eat?" Isolde plucked a peach-shaped thing from a low branch and bit into it. Juice dripped down her chin. "Delicious. But mortal stomachs might disagree." Rory’s fingers curled into her palm. "Noted." A sound like distant chimes carried through the trees. Not chimes—laughter. High and sweet, it echoed from everywhere and nowhere. Nyx’s shadows flared, tendrils snaking out to brush the air. "Something’s watching." Rory’s hand went to the Fae blade at her hip. The metal was cold, even through her jacket. "How many?" "Many." Isolde’s lavender eyes darkened. "But not all of them are here for us." The path ahead split. One fork led uphill, the ground littered with petals that never seemed to wilt. The other sloped downward, the air growing thick with the scent of wet stone. Nyx tilted their head. "The lower path smells like old magic." Isolde didn’t move. "And the higher one smells like old blood." Rory exhaled through her nose. "Great choices." A whisper slithered past her ear—words she almost understood. She spun, but nothing was there. The Heartstone pendant flared hot against her skin. "Did you hear that?" Nyx’s form flickered. "Hear what?" Before Rory could answer, the ground trembled. Not an earthquake—something beneath the earth was shifting. The trees groaned, their branches twisting as if in pain. Isolde’s fingers tightened around Rory’s wrist. "We’re being herded." The path behind them was gone. Just more trees, more vines, more of the Grove’s endless, suffocating green. Rory swallowed. "Then we pick a direction and run." Nyx’s laughter was a dry crackle. "Or we let it take us where it wants." Isolde’s grip tightened. "Or we don’t." The choice was made for them. The ground beneath Rory’s feet gave way—not a hole, but a slide, slick and steep, sending her tumbling into the dark. She barely had time to curse before she landed hard on her side, the breath knocked from her lungs. Above her, the opening had already sealed itself. No light. No sound. Just the damp, earthy dark. And then, a glow. Not from the pendant—from the walls. Tiny, bioluminescent mushrooms pulsed in slow waves, casting eerie blue light over the tunnel. Rory pushed herself up, brushing dirt from her jeans. The air was cooler here, thick with the scent of minerals. Nyx materialized beside her, their form solid but faint, like smoke given shape. "Well. This is new." Isolde dropped down behind them, landing as lightly as a leaf. "The Grove has a sense of humor." Rory’s fingers traced the tunnel wall. The stone was smooth, almost polished, but etched with the same swirling knots as the standing stones. "This wasn’t here before." "No," Isolde agreed. "But it was always here." Nyx’s shadows stretched ahead, probing the dark. "There’s something deeper in." Rory adjusted her bag, the Fae blade’s weight a comfort at her hip. "Then let’s not keep it waiting." The tunnel sloped downward, the bioluminescent glow shifting from blue to a sickly green the farther they went. The air grew heavier, pressing against Rory’s skin like a damp cloth. Her breath came shallow. Then, the tunnel opened. Rory froze. They stood at the edge of a cavern so vast the ceiling vanished into darkness. The walls shimmered with veins of crystal, pulsing with the same eerie light as the mushrooms, casting everything in a surreal, underwater glow. But it wasn’t the size or the light that made her stomach clench. It was the trees. Not trees—something like them. Their trunks were bone-white, their branches stretching like skeletal fingers, and hanging from those branches were fruits. Not fruits. *Hearts.* Human hearts. Still beating. Rory’s own heart hammered against her ribs. "What the *fuck* is this?" Isolde’s voice was barely a whisper. "A garden." Nyx’s form flickered, their violet eyes wide. "A *hungry* one." One of the hearts pulsed, its rhythm uneven. A drop of dark liquid fell from it, splattering onto the ground below. The earth *hissed* where it landed, steam rising from the spot. Rory’s fingers twitched toward the Fae blade. "We’re leaving. Now." Isolde didn’t move. "We can’t." A sound like a sigh filled the cavern. The branches above them trembled, and one of the hearts—smaller than the others, no bigger than a fist—twitched violently. Then it *ripped* free from its branch, plummeting toward them. Rory dove to the side as it hit the ground with a wet *thud.* The heart twitched, veins writhing like worms as it began to *crawl* toward her. Nyx’s shadows lashed out, wrapping around the thing and yanking it back. It let out a sound like a choked scream. "Run." They didn’t need to be told twice. The tunnel behind them was gone. In its place, a labyrinth of bone-white roots stretched into the dark, twisting and turning like a living thing. Rory didn’t hesitate. She bolted, the others close behind. The roots shifted underfoot, writhing like serpents. One lashed out, coiling around Nyx’s ankle. They snarled, shadows flaring as they severed it with a thought. The root shrieked, black ichor spraying from the wound. Isolde’s voice cut through the chaos. "The center! We have to reach the center!" Rory didn’t ask why. She ran. The cavern seemed to stretch, the walls receding the faster they moved. The air grew thicker, pressing against Rory’s lungs like a fist. The Heartstone pendant burned against her skin, its heat searing through her shirt. Then, the roots parted. A clearing. A single tree, its trunk wider than Rory was tall, its branches heavy with more of those *things.* But at its base, a pool of water so still it looked like glass. And floating above it— A door. Not a real door. A *shimmer,* a distortion in the air, like heat rising from pavement. The Veil. Isolde stumbled to a stop, her silver hair whipping around her as she turned. "We have to go through. Now." Nyx’s shadows coiled protectively around Rory. "That’s not the way we came in." "It’s the only way out." The roots behind them groaned, slithering closer. The hearts in the trees above began to *throb* in unison, a slow, sickening rhythm. Rory didn’t think. She grabbed Nyx’s hand and *ran.*
total_cost0.01538

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1380
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"traced"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"shimmered"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"weight"
count2
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count2
8
word"flickered"
count2
9
word"trembled"
count2
10
word"sense of"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count1
13
word"surreal"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count1
15
word"searing"
count1
16
word"throb"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"traced"
2"pulsed"
3"shimmered"
4"pulse"
5"weight"
6"echoed"
7"whisper"
8"flickered"
9"trembled"
10"sense of"
11"etched"
12"crystal"
13"surreal"
14"stomach"
15"searing"
16"throb"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences129
matches(empty)
87.49% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences129
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences168
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords11
totalWords1363
ratio0.008
matches
0"Hearts."
1"fuck"
2"hungry"
3"hissed"
4"ripped"
5"thud."
6"crawl"
7"things."
8"shimmer,"
9"throb"
10"ran."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
38.51% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount1166
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity2.23
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory26
Nyx14
Heartstone3
Grove2
Fae3
Human1
Veil1
Isolde14
One3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Grove"
3"Isolde"
4"One"
places
0"Fae"
globalScore0.385
windowScore0.5
93.82% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"knots that seemed to shift when she blinked"
1"looked like glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.734
wordCount1363
matches
0"not a hole, but a slide, slick"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs67
mean20.34
std14.19
cv0.697
sampleLengths
049
130
228
328
463
516
626
740
87
97
1041
1124
127
1332
1420
1514
1643
1711
187
1927
205
2134
2218
239
2415
256
2646
2717
284
2940
3017
3118
3227
338
3411
3519
3634
374
382
3951
404
4124
424
4312
448
4510
4632
4710
485
4937
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences129
matches
0"was gone"
1"was made"
2"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs201
matches
0"was shifting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences168
ratio0.071
matches
0"She traced the deep grooves of ancient carvings—swirling knots that seemed to shift when she blinked."
1"The trees ahead weren’t trees at all—not like any she’d seen."
2"Isolde plucked a flower from the air—it hadn’t been there a second ago—and twirled it between her fingers."
3"Vines coiled up the trees, heavy with fruit that glowed faintly in the dim light—some ruby-red, others a sickly green."
4"Not chimes—laughter."
5"A whisper slithered past her ear—words she almost understood."
6"Not an earthquake—something beneath the earth was shifting."
7"The ground beneath Rory’s feet gave way—not a hole, but a slide, slick and steep, sending her tumbling into the dark."
8"Not from the pendant—from the walls."
9"Not trees—something like them."
10"The branches above them trembled, and one of the hearts—smaller than the others, no bigger than a fist—twitched violently."
11"And floating above it—"
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1183
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"heavier, pressing against Rory’s"
1"thicker, pressing against Rory’s"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.037193575655114115
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.006762468300929839
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences168
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences168
mean8.11
std5.68
cv0.701
sampleLengths
016
116
217
318
412
510
611
77
88
912
103
115
129
1311
1428
1515
168
175
183
1918
208
2120
2215
235
244
253
265
272
2811
2920
305
315
3213
335
346
356
361
379
382
399
4010
412
4210
438
442
455
469
474
4814
4914
45.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.27976190476190477
totalSentences168
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences114
matches
0"Just more trees, more vines,"
1"Just the damp, earthy dark."
2"Then, the tunnel opened."
3"Then it *ripped* free from"
4"Then, the roots parted."
ratio0.044
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences114
matches
0"She traced the deep grooves"
1"Their voice was the rustle"
2"She ignored it."
3"Their trunks twisted like melted"
4"It landed on a branch"
5"She spun, but nothing was"
6"She barely had time to"
7"Her breath came shallow."
8"They stood at the edge"
9"It was the trees."
10"Their trunks were bone-white, their"
11"It let out a sound"
12"They didn’t need to be"
13"She bolted, the others close"
14"They snarled, shadows flaring as"
15"She grabbed Nyx’s hand and"
ratio0.14
47.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences114
matches
0"The standing stones loomed like"
1"She traced the deep grooves"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"Isolde murmured, her silver hair"
4"Nyx materialized beside Rory, their"
5"Their voice was the rustle"
6"Rory exhaled, adjusting the strap"
7"The Heartstone pendant against her"
8"She ignored it."
9"The moment they crossed the"
10"The trees ahead weren’t trees"
11"Their trunks twisted like melted"
12"The ground beneath her boots"
13"Nyx crouched, pressing a hand"
14"Shadows pooled around their fingers."
15"Isolde plucked a flower from"
16"Rory’s pulse jumped as a"
17"It landed on a branch"
18"Nyx straightened, their form solidifying."
19"The deeper they walked, the"
ratio0.825
43.86% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences114
matches
0"Before Rory could answer, the"
ratio0.009
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The ground beneath her boots felt spongy, yielding, as if she walked on something alive."
1"Vines coiled up the trees, heavy with fruit that glowed faintly in the dim light—some ruby-red, others a sickly green."
2"But it wasn’t the size or the light that made her stomach clench."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"Isolde agreed (agree)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.068
leniency0.136
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.091
84.9177%