Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ553CRNGCQ74KSNHNJH8K

Run Details

Duration:
3.8s
Cost:
$0.000063

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Tube station smelled of damp stone and something older—something that clung to the air like a second skin. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through the flickering emergency lights, her boots crunching on the broken glass and rusted metal. The place had been a station once, but now it was a gauntlet of shadows, the kind that didn’t belong in this world. She crouched beside the body, her sharp jaw set in the cold light. DS Morris. His chest was still warm. Too warm. The way his fingers curled around the Veil Compass—*the thing he’d been obsessed with*—made her stomach twist. No one had seen him take it. No one had seen him leave. “You’re sure it’s him?” Eva Kowalski’s voice cut through the silence, her round glasses reflecting the dim glow of the emergency lights. She stood beside her satchel, her freckled cheeks flushed with nerves. She tucked her curly red hair behind her ear, the habit she did when she was thinking too hard. “Positive,” Quinn said, her voice low, precise. “His pulse was still there. And his skin—” She hesitated, then pressed a thumb to her lips. “It’s like he’d been… *absorbed*.” Eva exhaled sharply. “You think it’s the Veil Market?” Quinn didn’t answer. She knelt, brushing aside a loose cobweb that clung to the edge of Morris’s coat. The brass compass lay half-buried in the dirt, its needle pointing straight at the ceiling. Not at the nearest rift. At the ceiling. “That’s impossible,” Eva muttered, her voice tight. “The Compass doesn’t work like that.” Quinn’s watch ticked. The leather strap was worn thin, but she didn’t look at it. “It does now.” A distant hum vibrated through the station, like a machine breathing. The air thickened, pressing against her skin. Eva’s breath hitched. “Did you hear that?” Quinn didn’t answer. She stood, her gaze locked on the ceiling. The emergency lights flickered. Then, from the shadows above, something *moved*. Eva’s satchel clattered to the ground. “We need to leave.” Quinn didn’t move. The shadows stretched longer. The hum grew louder. Then, from the darkness, a voice—soft, but clear as a blade. *“You shouldn’t have come.”*
total_cost0.00006304

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She hesitated then [then]"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.182
86.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount361
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount361
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"stomach"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"stomach"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"vibrated"
4"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences36
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences36
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences43
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen23
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords12
totalWords358
ratio0.034
matches
0"the thing he’d been obsessed with"
1"absorbed"
2"moved"
3"“You shouldn’t have come.”"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
53.54% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount311
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow1
Quinn6
Morris2
Veil1
Compass1
Kowalski1
Eva5
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.535
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences21
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount358
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences43
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs14
mean25.57
std18
cv0.704
sampleLengths
061
152
252
329
49
541
613
718
825
922
1010
1111
1211
134
95.52% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences36
matches
0"been obsessed"
74.21% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs53
matches
0"was thinking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences43
ratio0.07
matches
0"The Tube station smelled of damp stone and something older—something that clung to the air like a second skin."
1"The way his fingers curled around the Veil Compass—*the thing he’d been obsessed with*—made her stomach twist."
2"Then, from the darkness, a voice—soft, but clear as a blade."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount314
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.03184713375796178
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.006369426751592357
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences43
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences43
mean8.33
std5.95
cv0.715
sampleLengths
019
119
223
313
42
55
62
717
87
96
1022
1111
1219
137
1417
155
163
176
183
1915
2015
215
223
237
246
253
2612
273
2811
297
303
314
323
338
344
357
366
374
383
394
404
4111
424
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4418604651162791
totalSentences43
uniqueOpeners19
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences34
matches
0"Then, from the shadows above,"
1"Then, from the darkness, a"
ratio0.059
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount7
totalSentences34
matches
0"She crouched beside the body,"
1"His chest was still warm."
2"She stood beside her satchel,"
3"She tucked her curly red"
4"She hesitated, then pressed a"
5"She knelt, brushing aside a"
6"She stood, her gaze locked"
ratio0.206
48.24% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount28
totalSentences34
matches
0"The Tube station smelled of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through"
2"The place had been a"
3"She crouched beside the body,"
4"His chest was still warm."
5"The way his fingers curled"
6"Eva Kowalski’s voice cut through"
7"She stood beside her satchel,"
8"She tucked her curly red"
9"Quinn said, her voice low,"
10"She hesitated, then pressed a"
11"Eva exhaled sharply."
12"Quinn didn’t answer."
13"She knelt, brushing aside a"
14"The brass compass lay half-buried"
15"Eva muttered, her voice tight"
16"Quinn’s watch ticked."
17"The leather strap was worn"
18"A distant hum vibrated through"
19"The air thickened, pressing against"
ratio0.824
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences34
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The Tube station smelled of damp stone and something older—something that clung to the air like a second skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn said, her voice low, precise"
1"Eva muttered, her voice tight"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.182
77.1891%