Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ58S95663381ST7VXV571

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Duration:
41.4s
Cost:
$0.016232

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened as Rory stepped past the standing stones, her boots sinking into moss that hadn’t known winter. The grove swallowed sound—no rustle of leaves, no distant chatter from Richmond Park’s joggers. Just silence, heavy as a held breath. Nyx materialized beside her, their violet glow dimming to a smolder. "Time’s already slipping. We’ve got maybe an hour before the grove spits us back out." Isolde didn’t turn, her silver hair catching the light like spun glass. "Or three days. The grove decides." Her bare feet left no prints in the damp earth, just the faintest shiver of disturbed petals. Rory adjusted the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed against her collarbone, warm as a living thing. "So we don’t waste time." She nudged a low-hanging branch aside. The leaves weren’t leaves at all—delicate, translucent membranes that hummed when brushed. "What the hell are these?" Nyx extended a shadowy finger, hesitating just shy of contact. "Fae flora. They sing if you listen close enough." Their voice carried the echo of wind through ruins. "Though I wouldn’t recommend it." Isolde plucked one, holding it to the light. It thrummed between her fingers, vibrating like a plucked string. "They’re attuned to truth. Lie near them, and they wither." She tossed it into the undergrowth where it dissolved into mist. "Useful for weeding out spies." Rory’s wrist twinged where Evan’s grip had once bruised. She flexed her fingers, focusing on the path ahead. The trees here grew in impossible spirals, their bark etched with glowing runes that shifted when stared at too long. "You said the grove hides something. Where do we start?" Isolde pointed toward a break in the foliage—a narrow trail carpeted in bluebells that chimed softly underfoot. "The heart of the grove. But be warned: the deeper we go, the more the grove tests you." Nyx’s form flickered, their edges blurring like smoke in a draft. "Tests how?" "By showing you what you fear. What you desire." Isolde’s lavender eyes gleamed. "The grove doesn’t give answers. It gives mirrors." Rory exhaled through her nose. "Great. So we’re walking into a magical funhouse." The trail narrowed, forcing them single-file. Rory went first, her pulse quickening as the air turned syrupy, thick with the scent of ozone and crushed herbs. The Heartstone’s heat spread across her chest, insistent now. She reached back, fingers brushing Nyx’s incorporeal arm. Their touch was ice and static. "You feel that?" Rory murmured. Nyx’s glow intensified. "Something’s watching." Ahead, the trees parted. The clearing beyond wasn’t a clearing at all—it was a sinkhole, a perfect circle of darkness ringed by mushrooms the size of stools. Their caps pulsed with bioluminescent veins, casting eerie light on the sheer drop. At the bottom, a lake of liquid silver stretched into the distance, its surface rippling without wind. Isolde knelt, pressing her palm to the edge. The earth sighed beneath her touch. "The Veil’s thin here. Can you see it?" Rory crouched beside her. At first, there was nothing. Then—a shimmer, like heat haze over pavement. The air wavered, distorting the far side of the lake. "That’s it? The barrier between worlds?" "One of the weak points." Isolde’s voice dropped to a whisper. "Hel’s rifts are easier to spot. The Fae ones? They hide in plain sight." Nyx drifted forward, their form stretching toward the drop. "There’s something down there." Rory followed their gaze. The silver lake wasn’t still. Shapes moved beneath its surface—shadows with too many limbs, darting just out of sight. "What the hell are those?" "Echoes," Isolde said. "Memories given form. The grove’s way of showing you what lurks beyond." One of the shadows surged upward, pressing against the underside of the liquid. A face formed—pale, gaunt, mouth stretched in a silent scream. Rory recoiled. "That’s—" "Someone who tried to cross and failed." Isolde didn’t flinch. "The grove remembers." Nyx’s glow flickered like a dying bulb. "We’re not here for Hel’s leftovers. Where’s the damn relic?" Isolde stood, brushing dirt from her knees. "Patience. The grove doesn’t give up its secrets to the impatient." She stepped onto the first mushroom, testing its weight. It held. "Follow me. And whatever you do, don’t look down." Rory swallowed. "That’s not ominous at all." The mushrooms formed a spiraling path downward, their caps slick with condensation. Rory’s boots slipped once, her stomach lurching as she caught herself on Nyx’s arm. Their solidity was a relief, even if their skin felt like cooled wax. At the bottom, the silver lake lapped at their feet. The liquid didn’t splash—it clung, beading like mercury. Rory poked it with her toe. The bead skittered away, leaving no trace. Isolde waded in without hesitation. The liquid rose to her knees, then her waist, but never touched her skin. It parted around her like water around a stone. "Come on. It won’t hurt you." Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx. "Famous last words." She stepped in. The liquid was neither hot nor cold, but alive—it thrummed against her legs, a low vibration that set her teeth on edge. Nyx followed, their form rippling as the substance resisted them. "It’s trying to dissolve me." Isolde didn’t turn. "It’s testing your intent. Hold your purpose tight." The lake stretched on, endless. Rory’s thighs burned with the effort of pushing through the thick liquid. The Heartstone pendant grew heavier, its heat a brand against her sternum. "How much farther?" Isolde pointed. Ahead, the lake curved around a jutting rock formation—a natural bridge arching over the silver expanse. At its peak, something glinted. "There." Rory’s breath hitched. The glint resolved into a dagger, its leaf-shaped blade embedded in the stone. The Fae-forged blade. It hummed, a high, clear note that cut through the grove’s oppressive silence. Nyx’s voice was a rasp. "That’s it?" Isolde didn’t answer. She was already moving, her steps sure despite the treacherous footing. Rory followed, her fingers twitching toward the blade. The closer they got, the louder the hum became—a chorus now, voices layered over one another, whispering in a language that made her skull ache. The rock beneath her boots was warm. Too warm. Rory yanked her foot back as the stone hissed, tendrils of smoke curling from the impression her boot had left. "It’s alive." Nyx’s glow pulsed erratically. "The grove doesn’t want us to take it." Isolde reached the blade first. She wrapped her fingers around the hilt, her knuckles whitening. The hum cut off mid-note. The lake stilled. Then— A crack split the air. The rock beneath them groaned, fissures spiderwebbing outward. Rory lunged for the blade, but Isolde was already pulling it free. The moment the metal left the stone, the bridge collapsed. Rory fell. The silver liquid rushed up to meet her. She braced for impact, but it never came—the liquid caught her, cradling her like a hammock. She floated, suspended, as the grove’s whispers rose around her. *You are not worthy.* *You are afraid.* *You will fail.* The voices slithered into her ears, her mind. Rory gritted her teeth. "Shut up." The liquid released her. She hit the ground hard, the breath knocked from her lungs. Nyx materialized beside her, their form flickering like a dying flame. Isolde stood over them, the Fae blade clutched in her hand. Its glow cast jagged shadows across her face. "You passed the test," Isolde said. "The grove has deemed you... adequate." Rory pushed herself up, wincing. "Adequate? That’s it?" Nyx’s laughter was a dry rustle. "High praise from a sentient forest." The grove shuddered. The standing stones at the entrance shimmered, their edges blurring. Isolde tucked the blade into her belt. "Time’s up. We need to go. Now." Rory didn’t argue. She sprinted for the exit, the Heartstone pendant bouncing against her chest. The whispers followed, a chorus of hisses and sighs, until the grove spat them out into Richmond Park’s familiar chill. The standing stones snapped back into place behind them. Rory doubled over, hands on her knees, gulping down air that tasted of exhaust and rain. Nyx solidified beside her, their glow steadying. Isolde turned the Fae blade over in her hands, examining the runes etched into the metal. "It’s yours now. Use it well." Rory straightened, wiping sweat from her brow. The pendant at her throat had gone cold. "What do I even do with it?" Nyx’s violet eyes gleamed. "Cut through the bullshit, for starters." Isolde smiled, sharp as the blade’s edge. "And when the time comes, cut through the Veil."
total_cost0.016232

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.22
leniency0.44
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
9.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1432
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count2
5
word"desire"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"echoes"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"lurching"
count1
14
word"glint"
count1
15
word"resolved"
count1
16
word"oppressive"
count1
17
word"treacherous"
count1
18
word"shimmered"
count1
19
word"familiar"
count1
20
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"pulsed"
2"echo"
3"etched"
4"flickered"
5"desire"
6"pulse"
7"perfect"
8"wavered"
9"whisper"
10"echoes"
11"weight"
12"stomach"
13"lurching"
14"glint"
15"resolved"
16"oppressive"
17"treacherous"
18"shimmered"
19"familiar"
20"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences128
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences167
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords10
totalWords1415
ratio0.007
matches
0"You are not worthy."
1"You are afraid."
2"You will fail."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
40.91% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount1100
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity2.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory24
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone4
Isolde20
Evan1
Nyx16
One1
Fae-forged1
Fae3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Evan"
4"Nyx"
5"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.409
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like cooled wax"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.707
wordCount1415
matches
0"neither hot nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences167
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean24.4
std14
cv0.574
sampleLengths
040
126
235
346
433
544
648
735
813
921
1013
1149
125
135
1457
1522
1632
1725
1813
1928
2015
2126
2213
2317
2438
257
2639
2731
2834
299
3040
3111
3232
3324
3432
357
3647
3731
3812
3924
4035
412
4234
434
443
453
4614
4745
4812
498
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences128
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs211
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences167
ratio0.078
matches
0"The grove swallowed sound—no rustle of leaves, no distant chatter from Richmond Park’s joggers."
1"The leaves weren’t leaves at all—delicate, translucent membranes that hummed when brushed."
2"Isolde pointed toward a break in the foliage—a narrow trail carpeted in bluebells that chimed softly underfoot."
3"The clearing beyond wasn’t a clearing at all—it was a sinkhole, a perfect circle of darkness ringed by mushrooms the size of stools."
4"Then—a shimmer, like heat haze over pavement."
5"Shapes moved beneath its surface—shadows with too many limbs, darting just out of sight."
6"A face formed—pale, gaunt, mouth stretched in a silent scream."
7"The liquid didn’t splash—it clung, beading like mercury."
8"The liquid was neither hot nor cold, but alive—it thrummed against her legs, a low vibration that set her teeth on edge."
9"Ahead, the lake curved around a jutting rock formation—a natural bridge arching over the silver expanse."
10"The closer they got, the louder the hum became—a chorus now, voices layered over one another, whispering in a language that made her skull ache."
11"Then—"
12"She braced for impact, but it never came—the liquid caught her, cradling her like a hammock."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1117
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03043867502238138
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0017905102954341987
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences167
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences167
mean8.47
std5.18
cv0.611
sampleLengths
019
114
27
311
415
512
623
78
810
911
1012
115
1210
1318
145
158
1610
1721
185
199
209
2120
2210
2317
2418
2511
262
2713
288
295
308
316
3220
339
348
356
365
373
382
394
4023
4113
4217
438
446
458
464
475
487
4910
44.01% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2754491017964072
totalSentences167
uniqueOpeners46
56.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences118
matches
0"Just silence, heavy as a"
1"Then—a shimmer, like heat haze"
ratio0.017
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences118
matches
0"Her bare feet left no"
1"It pulsed against her collarbone,"
2"She nudged a low-hanging branch"
3"Their voice carried the echo"
4"It thrummed between her fingers,"
5"She tossed it into the"
6"She flexed her fingers, focusing"
7"She reached back, fingers brushing"
8"Their touch was ice and"
9"Their caps pulsed with bioluminescent"
10"She stepped onto the first"
11"Their solidity was a relief,"
12"It parted around her like"
13"She stepped in."
14"It hummed, a high, clear"
15"She was already moving, her"
16"She wrapped her fingers around"
17"She braced for impact, but"
18"She floated, suspended, as the"
19"*You are not worthy.*"
ratio0.212
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount109
totalSentences118
matches
0"The air thickened as Rory"
1"The grove swallowed sound—no rustle"
2"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
3"Isolde didn’t turn, her silver"
4"Her bare feet left no"
5"Rory adjusted the Heartstone pendant"
6"It pulsed against her collarbone,"
7"She nudged a low-hanging branch"
8"The leaves weren’t leaves at"
9"Nyx extended a shadowy finger,"
10"Their voice carried the echo"
11"Isolde plucked one, holding it"
12"It thrummed between her fingers,"
13"She tossed it into the"
14"Rory’s wrist twinged where Evan’s"
15"She flexed her fingers, focusing"
16"The trees here grew in"
17"Isolde pointed toward a break"
18"Nyx’s form flickered, their edges"
19"Isolde’s lavender eyes gleamed"
ratio0.924
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.07% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The air thickened as Rory stepped past the standing stones, her boots sinking into moss that hadn’t known winter."
1"The leaves weren’t leaves at all—delicate, translucent membranes that hummed when brushed."
2"The liquid was neither hot nor cold, but alive—it thrummed against her legs, a low vibration that set her teeth on edge."
3"The closer they got, the louder the hum became—a chorus now, voices layered over one another, whispering in a language that made her skull ache."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.06
leniency0.12
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.04
80.9737%