| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.22 | | leniency | 0.44 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.51% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.22% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1432 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silence" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "desire" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "wavered" | | 9 | "whisper" | | 10 | "echoes" | | 11 | "weight" | | 12 | "stomach" | | 13 | "lurching" | | 14 | "glint" | | 15 | "resolved" | | 16 | "oppressive" | | 17 | "treacherous" | | 18 | "shimmered" | | 19 | "familiar" | | 20 | "chill" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 128 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 167 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 10 | | totalWords | 1415 | | ratio | 0.007 | | matches | | 0 | "You are not worthy." | | 1 | "You are afraid." | | 2 | "You will fail." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 40.91% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 74 | | wordCount | 1100 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 2.18 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 24 | | Richmond | 2 | | Park | 2 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Isolde | 20 | | Evan | 1 | | Nyx | 16 | | One | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Evan" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "One" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.409 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.707 | | wordCount | 1415 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 167 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 58 | | mean | 24.4 | | std | 14 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 35 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 33 | | 5 | 44 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 13 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 32 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 26 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 40 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 32 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 47 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 35 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 45 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 211 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 13 | | totalSentences | 167 | | ratio | 0.078 | | matches | | 0 | "The grove swallowed sound—no rustle of leaves, no distant chatter from Richmond Park’s joggers." | | 1 | "The leaves weren’t leaves at all—delicate, translucent membranes that hummed when brushed." | | 2 | "Isolde pointed toward a break in the foliage—a narrow trail carpeted in bluebells that chimed softly underfoot." | | 3 | "The clearing beyond wasn’t a clearing at all—it was a sinkhole, a perfect circle of darkness ringed by mushrooms the size of stools." | | 4 | "Then—a shimmer, like heat haze over pavement." | | 5 | "Shapes moved beneath its surface—shadows with too many limbs, darting just out of sight." | | 6 | "A face formed—pale, gaunt, mouth stretched in a silent scream." | | 7 | "The liquid didn’t splash—it clung, beading like mercury." | | 8 | "The liquid was neither hot nor cold, but alive—it thrummed against her legs, a low vibration that set her teeth on edge." | | 9 | "Ahead, the lake curved around a jutting rock formation—a natural bridge arching over the silver expanse." | | 10 | "The closer they got, the louder the hum became—a chorus now, voices layered over one another, whispering in a language that made her skull ache." | | 11 | "Then—" | | 12 | "She braced for impact, but it never came—the liquid caught her, cradling her like a hammock." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1117 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03043867502238138 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0017905102954341987 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 167 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 167 | | mean | 8.47 | | std | 5.18 | | cv | 0.611 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 14 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 10 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 13 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 44.01% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2754491017964072 | | totalSentences | 167 | | uniqueOpeners | 46 | |
| 56.50% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Just silence, heavy as a" | | 1 | "Then—a shimmer, like heat haze" |
| | ratio | 0.017 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 25 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 1 | "It pulsed against her collarbone," | | 2 | "She nudged a low-hanging branch" | | 3 | "Their voice carried the echo" | | 4 | "It thrummed between her fingers," | | 5 | "She tossed it into the" | | 6 | "She flexed her fingers, focusing" | | 7 | "She reached back, fingers brushing" | | 8 | "Their touch was ice and" | | 9 | "Their caps pulsed with bioluminescent" | | 10 | "She stepped onto the first" | | 11 | "Their solidity was a relief," | | 12 | "It parted around her like" | | 13 | "She stepped in." | | 14 | "It hummed, a high, clear" | | 15 | "She was already moving, her" | | 16 | "She wrapped her fingers around" | | 17 | "She braced for impact, but" | | 18 | "She floated, suspended, as the" | | 19 | "*You are not worthy.*" |
| | ratio | 0.212 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 109 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as Rory" | | 1 | "The grove swallowed sound—no rustle" | | 2 | "Nyx materialized beside her, their" | | 3 | "Isolde didn’t turn, her silver" | | 4 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 5 | "Rory adjusted the Heartstone pendant" | | 6 | "It pulsed against her collarbone," | | 7 | "She nudged a low-hanging branch" | | 8 | "The leaves weren’t leaves at" | | 9 | "Nyx extended a shadowy finger," | | 10 | "Their voice carried the echo" | | 11 | "Isolde plucked one, holding it" | | 12 | "It thrummed between her fingers," | | 13 | "She tossed it into the" | | 14 | "Rory’s wrist twinged where Evan’s" | | 15 | "She flexed her fingers, focusing" | | 16 | "The trees here grew in" | | 17 | "Isolde pointed toward a break" | | 18 | "Nyx’s form flickered, their edges" | | 19 | "Isolde’s lavender eyes gleamed" |
| | ratio | 0.924 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 82.07% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as Rory stepped past the standing stones, her boots sinking into moss that hadn’t known winter." | | 1 | "The leaves weren’t leaves at all—delicate, translucent membranes that hummed when brushed." | | 2 | "The liquid was neither hot nor cold, but alive—it thrummed against her legs, a low vibration that set her teeth on edge." | | 3 | "The closer they got, the louder the hum became—a chorus now, voices layered over one another, whispering in a language that made her skull ache." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.06 | | leniency | 0.12 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |