Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ5MBE9WDG9QPYXZCT2MNA

Run Details

Duration:
2.6s
Cost:
$0.000100

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the walls like a whisper. Aurora stepped forward, the **Heartstone** at her throat pressing against her collarbone, warm despite the chill. The **Fae-Forged Blade** in her belt hummed faintly, its cold edge biting into her palm as she gripped it. Nyx moved like smoke, their silhouette stretching and twisting as they followed behind her. The shadows here weren’t just dark—they *breathed*, shifting between solid and translucent, pooling around the edges of the grove’s boundary. Aurora’s breath caught. This wasn’t just Richmond Park. It was something else. Something that pulsed beneath the surface, alive in ways she couldn’t name. “Where are we?” Aurora asked, her voice low. The words hung between them, unanswered. Isolde stood at the center of the clearing, her silver hair catching the dim light from the standing stones. The air around her shimmered, though no wind stirred. “You’ve come to the place where the Veil thins,” she said, her voice like wind through reeds. “The old ones called it the *Grove of Whispers*.” A gust of wind howled through the trees, carrying the scent of pine and something metallic. Aurora’s fingers tightened around the hilt of the dagger. The ground beneath her feet was uneven—roots twisted into knots, vines coiled like serpents. She crouched, brushing dirt from her knees. Beneath the soil, something glinted. “What is that?” Nyx asked, their voice a whisper. Aurora knelt, pressing her palm to the earth. The stone beneath her fingers was warm, pulsing faintly, like a heartbeat. She lifted it—small, blackened, and jagged. “Hel’s residue,” she murmured. “This isn’t just the Fae realm. It’s a *tear*.” Isolde’s fingers traced the curve of a standing stone. “The Veil weakens here. The boundaries between worlds bleed.” She turned, her pale eyes gleaming. “But you’re not alone in this.” A figure stepped from the shadows—a tall, gaunt man with hollow cheeks and eyes like polished obsidian. He wore a tattered cloak, his breath misting in the cold. “Prince Belphegor’s messengers,” he rasped. “We’ve been waiting.” Aurora’s grip on the dagger tightened. “Who are you?” “Guards,” Nyx said, their voice sharp. “Hel’s watch.” The man smirked, revealing teeth too sharp for a mortal. “The Veil is thinning. And you’ve found a way through.” His gaze locked onto the **Heartstone** at Aurora’s throat. “You’re not supposed to be here.” Aurora didn’t flinch. “Then tell me why.” The man’s smile widened. “Because you’re a thief. A liar. And Prince Belphegor wants his treasure back.” A chorus of voices erupted from the trees—laughter, screams, the distant clatter of metal. The air thickened, heavy with the scent of blood and something sour. The standing stones trembled. Isolde’s voice cut through the chaos. “Run.” Aurora didn’t hesitate. She lunged for Nyx, her fingers closing around their wrist. The world dissolved into light and shadow, the Veil tearing open behind them as they vanished into the darkness.
total_cost0.00010028

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount494
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.03% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount494
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"traced"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"chill"
2"pulsed"
3"shimmered"
4"traced"
5"gleaming"
6"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences42
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences52
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords9
totalWords488
ratio0.018
matches
0"Heartstone"
1"Fae-Forged Blade"
2"breathed"
3"Grove of Whispers"
4"tear"
5"Heartstone"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
35.20% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount392
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.3
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora9
Isolde3
Nyx4
Veil1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Isolde"
2"Nyx"
3"Veil"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.352
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount488
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean28.71
std17.58
cv0.612
sampleLengths
052
158
214
354
451
59
639
730
836
99
108
1135
127
1317
1430
157
1632
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences42
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs66
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences52
ratio0.115
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the walls like a whisper."
1"The shadows here weren’t just dark—they *breathed*, shifting between solid and translucent, pooling around the edges of the grove’s boundary."
2"The ground beneath her feet was uneven—roots twisted into knots, vines coiled like serpents."
3"She lifted it—small, blackened, and jagged."
4"A figure stepped from the shadows—a tall, gaunt man with hollow cheeks and eyes like polished obsidian."
5"A chorus of voices erupted from the trees—laughter, screams, the distant clatter of metal."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount398
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.02763819095477387
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.005025125628140704
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences52
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences52
mean9.38
std5.37
cv0.572
sampleLengths
017
116
219
314
420
53
65
74
812
98
106
1119
129
1317
149
1516
169
1714
187
195
209
218
2212
236
244
259
269
2715
286
2917
3011
315
323
336
343
356
362
3710
3819
396
403
414
424
4313
4414
4512
464
476
481
493
69.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4423076923076923
totalSentences52
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences40
matches
0"It was something else."
1"she said, her voice like"
2"She crouched, brushing dirt from"
3"She lifted it—small, blackened, and"
4"She turned, her pale eyes"
5"He wore a tattered cloak,"
6"His gaze locked onto the"
7"She lunged for Nyx, her"
ratio0.2
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences40
matches
0"The air smelled of damp"
1"Aurora stepped forward, the **Heartstone**"
2"The **Fae-Forged Blade** in her"
3"Nyx moved like smoke, their"
4"The shadows here weren’t just"
5"Aurora’s breath caught."
6"This wasn’t just Richmond Park."
7"It was something else."
8"Something that pulsed beneath the"
9"Aurora asked, her voice low"
10"The words hung between them,"
11"Isolde stood at the center"
12"The air around her shimmered,"
13"she said, her voice like"
14"A gust of wind howled"
15"Aurora’s fingers tightened around the"
16"The ground beneath her feet"
17"She crouched, brushing dirt from"
18"Nyx asked, their voice a"
19"Aurora knelt, pressing her palm"
ratio0.975
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something older—something that clung to the walls like a whisper."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora asked, her voice low"
1"Nyx asked, their voice a whisper"
2"She turned, her pale eyes gleaming"
3"Nyx said, their voice sharp"
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.278
leniency0.556
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.111
77.2850%