| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx’s voice curled around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 96.11% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.01% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1284 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "flicked" | | 5 | "velvet" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "perfect" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "rhythmic" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "trembled" | | 14 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 16 | | markdownWords | 16 | | totalWords | 1274 | | ratio | 0.013 | | matches | | 0 | "hung" | | 1 | "you" | | 2 | "it" | | 3 | "rippled" | | 4 | "your" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "scales" | | 7 | "thump" | | 8 | "glass" | | 9 | "burned" | | 10 | "clear" | | 11 | "knows" | | 12 | "blood" | | 13 | "sound" | | 14 | "stop" | | 15 | "hunger" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 57.77% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 50 | | wordCount | 1030 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.84 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Rory | 19 | | Nyx | 11 | | Isolde | 12 | | Fae | 2 | | Brendan | 1 | | Carter | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Pendant" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Brendan" | | 5 | "Carter" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.578 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "quite touch the air" | | 1 | "as if responding to the seer’s attention" | | 2 | "quite touch them" | | 3 | "something like it—translucent, veined with t" | | 4 | "as if sensing the light" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1274 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 32.67 | | std | 18.72 | | cv | 0.573 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 52 | | 1 | 41 | | 2 | 72 | | 3 | 47 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 45 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 54 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 25 | | 18 | 66 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 25 | | 22 | 82 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 36 | | 25 | 41 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 61 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 29 | | 34 | 29 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 7 |
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| 97.95% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "was gnarled" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | | 0 | "was spreading" | | 1 | "was pulling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—honey and crushed petals, cloying enough to make her nose twitch." | | 1 | "The moss beneath her boots wasn’t moss at all—it was something finer, like velvet, and it *rippled* when she shifted her weight." | | 2 | "The standing stones receded, replaced by trees that weren’t trees—their trunks were too smooth, too *perfect*, like polished bone, and their leaves shimmered in colors Rory didn’t have names for." | | 3 | "A sound cut through the hum of the grove—a low, rhythmic *thump*, like a drumbeat." | | 4 | "Or something like it—translucent, veined with threads of gold that pulsed in time with the distant drumbeat." | | 5 | "The branches stretched upward, vanishing into the violet sky, and the leaves—if they were leaves—were fragments of that same light, drifting lazily in an unfelt breeze." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1039 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 36 | | adverbRatio | 0.03464870067372473 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005774783445620789 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 10.8 | | std | 7.35 | | cv | 0.681 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 27 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 3 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 8 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 21 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 30 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 19 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 41.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.2711864406779661 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "Their silhouette flickered at the" | | 2 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 3 | "They *hung*, suspended, as if" | | 4 | "She didn’t turn as they" | | 5 | "she said, though Rory’s watch" | | 6 | "She flicked her fingers toward" | | 7 | "She looked down." | | 8 | "Their fingers sank an inch" | | 9 | "She turned, her silver hair" | | 10 | "She fell into step beside" | | 11 | "He was right." | | 12 | "It didn’t feel like plant" | | 13 | "It felt like skin." | | 14 | "It was *glass*." | | 15 | "Its trunk was gnarled, split" | | 16 | "Its edge glowed faintly, as" | | 17 | "She gasped, clutching at it," | | 18 | "It was *clear*, like a" | | 19 | "They were a *sound*, a" |
| | ratio | 0.259 | |
| 24.71% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 74 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | | 0 | "The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air smelled of damp" | | 3 | "Nyx’s voice curled around her," | | 4 | "Their silhouette flickered at the" | | 5 | "Rory exhaled through her nose." | | 6 | "She stepped forward, boots sinking" | | 7 | "The moment her foot crossed" | | 8 | "The sky above the clearing" | | 9 | "They *hung*, suspended, as if" | | 10 | "Isolde stood at the center" | | 11 | "She didn’t turn as they" | | 12 | "she said, though Rory’s watch" | | 13 | "Nyx materialized beside Rory, their" | | 14 | "Isolde finally looked at them," | | 15 | "She flicked her fingers toward" | | 16 | "Rory’s hand flew to it." | | 17 | "Isolde’s lips curved, but there" | | 18 | "A shiver ran down Rory’s" | | 19 | "She looked down." |
| | ratio | 0.871 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 85 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 76.41% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones receded, replaced by trees that weren’t trees—their trunks were too smooth, too *perfect*, like polished bone, and their leaves shimmered in…" | | 1 | "Nyx’s shadow stretched long and thin beside them, darker than it should have been, as if the light here couldn’t quite touch them." | | 2 | "A color that *burned*, that made Rory’s eyes water and her teeth ache." | | 3 | "They were a *sound*, a vibration that rattled her teeth and made her bones ache." |
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| 83.33% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped, boots sinking into the moss that carpeted the grove" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "they murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.118 | | leniency | 0.235 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |