Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ69Z3QET347ZV6Z2VG4W1

Run Details

Duration:
36.2s
Cost:
$0.014582

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against Rory’s collarbone, a slow, insistent warmth like a second heartbeat. She adjusted the strap of her backpack, fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist out of habit. The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—honey and crushed petals, cloying enough to make her nose twitch. "Still think this is a terrible idea?" Nyx’s voice curled around her, a whisper that didn’t quite touch the air. Their silhouette flickered at the edge of her vision, solid one moment, then bleeding into the shadows between the standing stones. Rory exhaled through her nose. "I think it’s the only idea we’ve got." She stepped forward, boots sinking into the moss that carpeted the grove. The moment her foot crossed the boundary marked by the ancient oaks, the world tilted. The sky above the clearing deepened from twilight to a bruised violet, streaked with ribbons of silver that didn’t move like clouds. They *hung*, suspended, as if time had thickened around them. Isolde stood at the center of the grove, her silver hair catching the strange light like spun metal. She didn’t turn as they approached, her bare feet hovering just above the wildflowers. "You’re late," she said, though Rory’s watch still read 7:12 PM. "The solstice won’t wait." Nyx materialized beside Rory, their violet eyes reflecting the unnatural sky. "We had to lose a tail. Belphegor’s got eyes everywhere these days." Isolde finally looked at them, her lavender gaze sharp as broken glass. "And yet, you brought one here." She flicked her fingers toward Rory’s chest, where the Heartstone Pendant glowed brighter now, as if responding to the seer’s attention. Rory’s hand flew to it. "This thing’s the only reason we’re here. It led us to you." "Or it led *you* to *it*." Isolde’s lips curved, but there was no humor in it. "The Veil thins at the edges, child. And you’re standing in a tear." A shiver ran down Rory’s spine. She looked down. The moss beneath her boots wasn’t moss at all—it was something finer, like velvet, and it *rippled* when she shifted her weight. Not like water. Like fabric. Like the whole grove was a living thing, breathing. Nyx crouched, pressing their palm to the ground. Their fingers sank an inch into the surface before meeting resistance. "This isn’t Earth. Not anymore." Isolde’s laughter was a chime, high and brittle. "Oh, it’s Earth. Just not *your* Earth." She turned, her silver hair swaying as if underwater, and gestured toward the heart of the grove. "Walk with me. The path reveals itself only to those who don’t look for it." Rory hesitated. The last time she’d followed someone blindly, she’d ended up with a broken rib and a restraining order. But the pendant’s heat was spreading now, creeping up her throat, and the air hummed with a sound like distant chimes. She fell into step beside Nyx, their shoulder brushing hers. The grove shifted as they walked. The standing stones receded, replaced by trees that weren’t trees—their trunks were too smooth, too *perfect*, like polished bone, and their leaves shimmered in colors Rory didn’t have names for. One moment they were green, the next indigo, then a deep, bruised purple that made her eyes ache. Nyx reached out, fingers hovering just shy of a low-hanging branch. "They’re not leaves," they murmured. "They’re *scales*." Rory squinted. He was right. The "leaves" were tiny, overlapping plates, iridescent and faintly warm to the touch when she dared to brush one. It didn’t feel like plant matter. It felt like skin. A sound cut through the hum of the grove—a low, rhythmic *thump*, like a drumbeat. Rory’s pulse jumped in response. "What is that?" Isolde didn’t slow. "The heart of the grove. It beats once every hundred years. You’re lucky to hear it." Nyx’s shadow stretched long and thin beside them, darker than it should have been, as if the light here couldn’t quite touch them. "Or unlucky." The path sloped downward, the velvet moss giving way to something harder, smoother. Rory’s boots skidded on the surface, and she caught herself against Nyx’s arm. The ground beneath them wasn’t stone. It was *glass*. Or something like it—translucent, veined with threads of gold that pulsed in time with the distant drumbeat. When she pressed her palm to it, she felt the vibration in her bones. "Careful," Isolde said, though she didn’t look back. "The glass remembers." Rory snatched her hand away. "Remembers what?" But Isolde was already moving forward, her bare feet making no sound on the glass. The path widened into a clearing, and Rory’s breath caught. A tree stood at the center, but it wasn’t like the others. Its trunk was gnarled, split down the middle like lightning had struck it, and from the fissure spilled a light so bright it hurt to look at. Not gold. Not white. A color that *burned*, that made Rory’s eyes water and her teeth ache. The branches stretched upward, vanishing into the violet sky, and the leaves—if they were leaves—were fragments of that same light, drifting lazily in an unfelt breeze. Nyx’s voice was barely audible. "That’s not a tree." Isolde reached into the folds of her dress and withdrew something small and silver. The Fae blade. Its edge glowed faintly, as if sensing the light. "It’s a door," she said. "Or a key. Or both." Rory’s pendant flared, searing against her skin. She gasped, clutching at it, and when she looked down, the crimson gem was no longer crimson. It was *clear*, like a drop of water, and inside it, something moved. A shape. A figure. Nyx grabbed her wrist. "Rory. Look at me." She couldn’t. The pendant was pulling her forward, toward the tree, toward the light. The glass beneath her feet was warm now, almost hot, and the drumbeat had become a roar, a rush of blood in her ears. Isolde’s voice cut through the haze, sharp as a blade. "It’s calling to you because it *knows* you. The Veil remembers your bloodline, Aurora Carter. Your father’s people were Wardens once, before they turned their backs on the old ways." Rory’s vision swam. "My father’s a barrister." "A title. A mask." Isolde stepped closer, the Fae blade casting eerie reflections across her face. "The Veil doesn’t care about titles. It cares about *blood*. And yours is screaming." The figure in the pendant solidified. A man. Tall, broad-shouldered, with Brendan Carter’s sharp jaw and Rory’s own bright blue eyes. But his skin was too pale, his smile too wide, and when he opened his mouth, the words that came out weren’t words at all. They were a *sound*, a vibration that rattled her teeth and made her bones ache. Nyx yanked her back, their grip bruising. "Rory, *stop*." She blinked, and the vision shattered. The pendant dimmed, the light in the tree flickered, and the glass beneath her feet cooled. The man in the gem was gone. Isolde exhaled, slow and controlled. "The solstice is in three days. If you want answers, you’ll have to walk through that door. But be warned—Dymas doesn’t give without taking." Rory’s hands trembled. The pendant was just a pendant again, a crimson stone on a silver chain. But her skin still burned where it had touched her, and the drumbeat still echoed in her skull. Nyx’s voice was low, urgent. "We’re not ready for this." Isolde’s laugh was a whisper. "No one ever is." She turned, her silver hair catching the light as she walked toward the tree. "But the Veil doesn’t wait for readiness. It waits for *hunger*." And then she stepped into the light.
total_cost0.014582

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Nyx’s voice curled around [around]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.059
96.11% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1284
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count2
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"rhythmic"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"searing"
count1
12
word"shattered"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"whisper"
3"flickered"
4"flicked"
5"velvet"
6"weight"
7"perfect"
8"shimmered"
9"rhythmic"
10"pulse"
11"searing"
12"shattered"
13"trembled"
14"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences96
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans16
markdownWords16
totalWords1274
ratio0.013
matches
0"hung"
1"you"
2"it"
3"rippled"
4"your"
5"perfect"
6"scales"
7"thump"
8"glass"
9"burned"
10"clear"
11"knows"
12"blood"
13"sound"
14"stop"
15"hunger"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.77% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount1030
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Rory19
Nyx11
Isolde12
Fae2
Brendan1
Carter1
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Rory"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Brendan"
5"Carter"
places(empty)
globalScore0.578
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"quite touch the air"
1"as if responding to the seer’s attention"
2"quite touch them"
3"something like it—translucent, veined with t"
4"as if sensing the light"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1274
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean32.67
std18.72
cv0.573
sampleLengths
052
141
272
347
423
539
617
729
845
924
1047
1151
1254
1318
1434
1523
1619
1725
1866
1911
207
2125
2282
239
2436
2541
268
2738
2840
297
3030
3161
329
3329
3429
3535
3610
3734
387
97.95% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences96
matches
0"was gnarled"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was spreading"
1"was pulling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences118
ratio0.051
matches
0"The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter—honey and crushed petals, cloying enough to make her nose twitch."
1"The moss beneath her boots wasn’t moss at all—it was something finer, like velvet, and it *rippled* when she shifted her weight."
2"The standing stones receded, replaced by trees that weren’t trees—their trunks were too smooth, too *perfect*, like polished bone, and their leaves shimmered in colors Rory didn’t have names for."
3"A sound cut through the hum of the grove—a low, rhythmic *thump*, like a drumbeat."
4"Or something like it—translucent, veined with threads of gold that pulsed in time with the distant drumbeat."
5"The branches stretched upward, vanishing into the violet sky, and the leaves—if they were leaves—were fragments of that same light, drifting lazily in an unfelt breeze."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1039
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.03464870067372473
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005774783445620789
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean10.8
std7.35
cv0.681
sampleLengths
015
118
219
320
421
55
620
715
822
910
1018
1114
1211
134
1411
1512
1612
1727
185
1912
2016
2113
226
233
2422
253
262
279
288
2911
305
318
3224
3315
342
3518
3621
3710
386
3930
4018
4111
425
432
442
453
4619
476
484
4915
41.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2711864406779661
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences85
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Their silhouette flickered at the"
2"She stepped forward, boots sinking"
3"They *hung*, suspended, as if"
4"She didn’t turn as they"
5"she said, though Rory’s watch"
6"She flicked her fingers toward"
7"She looked down."
8"Their fingers sank an inch"
9"She turned, her silver hair"
10"She fell into step beside"
11"He was right."
12"It didn’t feel like plant"
13"It felt like skin."
14"It was *glass*."
15"Its trunk was gnarled, split"
16"Its edge glowed faintly, as"
17"She gasped, clutching at it,"
18"It was *clear*, like a"
19"They were a *sound*, a"
ratio0.259
24.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences85
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The air smelled of damp"
3"Nyx’s voice curled around her,"
4"Their silhouette flickered at the"
5"Rory exhaled through her nose."
6"She stepped forward, boots sinking"
7"The moment her foot crossed"
8"The sky above the clearing"
9"They *hung*, suspended, as if"
10"Isolde stood at the center"
11"She didn’t turn as they"
12"she said, though Rory’s watch"
13"Nyx materialized beside Rory, their"
14"Isolde finally looked at them,"
15"She flicked her fingers toward"
16"Rory’s hand flew to it."
17"Isolde’s lips curved, but there"
18"A shiver ran down Rory’s"
19"She looked down."
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The standing stones receded, replaced by trees that weren’t trees—their trunks were too smooth, too *perfect*, like polished bone, and their leaves shimmered in…"
1"Nyx’s shadow stretched long and thin beside them, darker than it should have been, as if the light here couldn’t quite touch them."
2"A color that *burned*, that made Rory’s eyes water and her teeth ache."
3"They were a *sound*, a vibration that rattled her teeth and made her bones ache."
83.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"She stepped, boots sinking into the moss that carpeted the grove"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"they murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.118
leniency0.235
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.059
76.7938%