Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ6Y7PN4AAK1ANSAVS7JFS

Run Details

Duration:
4.3s
Cost:
$0.000090

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The front door of Eva’s flat groaned under the weight of the deadbolt, the old hinges protesting like a tired old dog. Aurora Carter stepped inside, her boots crunching on the cracked linoleum, the scent of damp brick lane and old paper thick in the air. The moment the door clicked shut behind her, the room exhaled. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed from the shelf where he’d been napping, tail flicking like a metronome set to a slow, restless beat. He didn’t rise. Didn’t even look. Aurora exhaled, rubbing her wrist where the scar from her childhood accident still stung—just a little. She hadn’t thought about it in years, but now, standing here, the weight of it pressed against her ribs like an old debt. A voice, smooth and low, cut through the quiet. *"You shouldn’t have come."* Aurora turned. The door had opened before she could react, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, his cane resting against the wall, his suit immaculate despite the way the streetlight slanted across his face. His amber and black eyes locked onto hers, and for a second, the world narrowed to that single gaze, the kind that could either burn or warm. *"I didn’t have a choice,"* she said, voice rougher than she intended. She stepped forward, fingers brushing the scarred skin of her wrist. *"You showed up at my flat. Again."* Lucien’s lips quirked, just a little. *"I didn’t mean to scare you."* *"You did."* She crossed her arms, the scar’s memory sharp beneath her fingers. *"You always do."* The air between them thickened, charged like the moment before a storm. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, the sound deliberate. *"You’re still here."* Aurora glanced around the flat—bookshelves sagging under the weight of scrolls, the scent of old parchment and something else, something sharper, like the edge of a blade. *"I’m not running."* Lucien exhaled, slow and measured. *"Good."* A beat. The kind of silence that hung between them like a half-remembered song. Then, from the other side of the room, a voice—Eva’s, sharp and amused. *"Oh, for heaven’s sake, if you two are going to stand there like a couple of teenagers, I’ll just—"* Aurora didn’t wait to hear what Eva said. She moved before Lucien could stop her, her fingers brushing the scar again, the memory of the accident sharp as a knife. *"You know what they say about ghosts,"* she murmured, *"they don’t go away."* Lucien’s gaze flicked to her wrist, then back to her face. *"No, they don’t."* The door behind them clicked shut. Eva’s voice faded, distant. The flat felt smaller now, the space between them tighter. Aurora didn’t look away. Lucien’s cane lifted, the blade hidden beneath the ivory handle glinting in the dim light. *"You’re not a ghost."* *"No."* She met his gaze, the weight of it pressing down. *"But you are."* The air between them crackled. Lucien’s fingers twitched toward his cane. *"You’re not afraid of me."* *"I’m afraid of what I see."* The words slipped out before she could stop them. Before she could think. Before she could lie. Lucien’s expression darkened. *"Then you’re not the same person who left."* Aurora swallowed, her throat tight. *"I’m not."* The silence stretched, thick with unspoken things. Then, from the other room, Eva’s voice cut through again, lighter this time. *"Well, I’m starving. You two look like you could use a bite to eat."* Lucien’s gaze snapped to the door. *"I’ll get it."* Aurora didn’t move. Didn’t breathe. The weight of his stare, the unspoken tension, the way his fingers flexed near the cane—it all settled over her like a shroud. *"You’re not leaving,"* she said. Lucien’s jaw tightened. *"I’m not."* The door swung open again. Eva’s voice was bright, but her eyes were sharp. *"Well, if you’re not going, I am. I’ve got a date with a very particular kind of curry."* Aurora watched as Eva stepped out, the door clicking shut behind her. The flat fell silent again. Lucien exhaled, slow and steady. *"You’re staying."* Aurora didn’t answer. She just watched him, the way his suit clung to his frame, the way his eyes burned with something she couldn’t name. The scar on her wrist pulsed, sharp and alive. *"You’re not running,"* he said again. *"No."* She met his gaze. *"I’m not."* The silence stretched, heavy with the weight of things left unsaid. Then, from the corner of her eye, she saw him move. The cane lifted, the blade glinting in the dim light. *"You’re not a ghost."* Aurora didn’t flinch. *"No."* The air between them crackled, charged with something electric. Lucien’s fingers tightened around the cane. *"You’re not afraid."* *"I’m afraid of what I see."* Her voice was low, rough. *"Of what I’m becoming."* Lucien’s gaze darkened. *"Then you’re not the same person who left."* Aurora swallowed, her throat tight. *"I’m not."* The flat felt smaller now, the space between them tighter. The weight of his stare, the unspoken tension, the way his fingers flexed near the cane—it all settled over her like a shroud. Lucien’s voice was a whisper. *"You’re not a ghost."* Aurora didn’t look away. *"I’m not."* The door behind them clicked shut. Eva’s voice faded, distant. The flat fell silent. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor, the sound deliberate. *"You’re staying."* Aurora exhaled, her fingers still brushing the scar on her wrist. *"I am."*
total_cost0.00009015999999999999

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he said again [again]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.205
leniency0.41
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.051
94.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount901
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount901
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"weight"
count7
1
word"charged"
count2
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"flicked"
count1
5
word"glinting"
count2
6
word"unspoken"
count3
7
word"tension"
count2
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"charged"
2"measured"
3"silence"
4"flicked"
5"glinting"
6"unspoken"
7"tension"
8"pulsed"
9"electric"
10"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences106
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans40
markdownWords182
totalWords894
ratio0.204
matches
0"\"You shouldn’t have come.\""
1"\"I didn’t have a choice,\""
2"\"You showed up at my flat. Again.\""
3"\"I didn’t mean to scare you.\""
4"\"You did.\""
5"\"You always do.\""
6"\"You’re still here.\""
7"\"I’m not running.\""
8"\"Good.\""
9"\"Oh, for heaven’s sake, if you two are going to stand there like a couple of teenagers, I’ll just—\""
10"\"You know what they say about ghosts,\""
11"\"they don’t go away.\""
12"\"No, they don’t.\""
13"\"You’re not a ghost.\""
14"\"No.\""
15"\"But you are.\""
16"\"You’re not afraid of me.\""
17"\"I’m afraid of what I see.\""
18"\"Then you’re not the same person who left.\""
19"\"I’m not.\""
20"\"Well, I’m starving. You two look like you could use a bite to eat.\""
21"\"I’ll get it.\""
22"\"You’re not leaving,\""
23"\"I’m not.\""
24"\"Well, if you’re not going, I am. I’ve got a date with a very particular kind of curry.\""
25"\"You’re staying.\""
26"\"You’re not running,\""
27"\"No.\""
28"\"I’m not.\""
29"\"You’re not a ghost.\""
30"\"No.\""
31"\"You’re not afraid.\""
32"\"I’m afraid of what I see.\""
33"\"Of what I’m becoming.\""
34"\"Then you’re not the same person who left.\""
35"\"I’m not.\""
36"\"You’re not a ghost.\""
37"\"I’m not.\""
38"\"You’re staying.\""
39"\"I am.\""
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
37.64% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount712
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.25
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva8
Carter1
Lucien16
Moreau1
Aurora14
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
4"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.376
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences45
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount894
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean20.32
std14.04
cv0.691
sampleLengths
057
129
239
313
460
530
612
716
824
930
106
1146
1243
1314
1424
1519
1614
1716
1823
1911
207
2134
229
2328
245
255
2632
2717
287
2934
306
317
3236
334
3418
3515
3611
377
3833
399
406
4114
4211
4313
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences106
ratio0.057
matches
0"Aurora exhaled, rubbing her wrist where the scar from her childhood accident still stung—just a little."
1"The door had opened before she could react, and there he stood—Lucien Moreau, his cane resting against the wall, his suit immaculate despite the way the streetlight slanted across his face."
2"Aurora glanced around the flat—bookshelves sagging under the weight of scrolls, the scent of old parchment and something else, something sharper, like the edge of a blade."
3"Then, from the other side of the room, a voice—Eva’s, sharp and amused."
4"The weight of his stare, the unspoken tension, the way his fingers flexed near the cane—it all settled over her like a shroud."
5"The weight of his stare, the unspoken tension, the way his fingers flexed near the cane—it all settled over her like a shroud."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount719
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.031988873435326845
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences106
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences106
mean8.43
std6.76
cv0.801
sampleLengths
022
124
211
323
43
53
616
723
89
94
102
1131
1227
1312
1411
157
166
176
1813
193
2012
219
223
2327
243
255
261
272
2812
2913
3019
318
3222
3313
3411
353
366
374
3810
394
4015
414
4211
433
445
456
465
4715
484
494
47.17% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.18867924528301888
totalSentences106
uniqueOpeners20
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences71
matches
0"Then, from the other side"
1"Then, from the other room,"
2"Then, from the corner of"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences71
matches
0"He didn’t rise."
1"She hadn’t thought about it"
2"His amber and black eyes"
3"she said, voice rougher than"
4"She stepped forward, fingers brushing"
5"She crossed her arms, the"
6"She moved before Lucien could"
7"She met his gaze, the"
8"She just watched him, the"
9"he said again"
10"She met his gaze"
11"Her voice was low, rough"
ratio0.169
2.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences71
matches
0"The front door of Eva’s"
1"Aurora Carter stepped inside, her"
2"The moment the door clicked"
3"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, hissed"
4"He didn’t rise."
5"Aurora exhaled, rubbing her wrist"
6"She hadn’t thought about it"
7"A voice, smooth and low,"
8"The door had opened before"
9"His amber and black eyes"
10"she said, voice rougher than"
11"She stepped forward, fingers brushing"
12"Lucien’s lips quirked, just a"
13"She crossed her arms, the"
14"The air between them thickened,"
15"Lucien’s cane tapped against the"
16"Aurora glanced around the flat—bookshelves"
17"Lucien exhaled, slow and measured."
18"The kind of silence that"
19"Aurora didn’t wait to hear"
ratio0.915
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences71
matches
0"Before she could think."
1"Before she could lie."
ratio0.028
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The kind of silence that hung between them like a half-remembered song."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"she said, voice rougher than she intended"
1"She crossed, the scar’s memory sharp beneath her fingers"
2"She met, the weight of it pressing down"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.205
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.051
79.3838%