| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.449 | | leniency | 0.898 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.40% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1613 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "cautiously" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "tightly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "quickly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.70% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1613 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "shimmered" | | 1 | "wavering" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "sense of" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "perfect" | | 7 | "depths" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "roaring" | | 10 | "churning" | | 11 | "tension" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 98.21% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 123 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1596 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 66 | | wordCount | 1266 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.9 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Nyx | 11 | | London | 4 | | Fae | 3 | | Aurora | 24 | | Isolde | 14 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Dymas | 4 | | Heart | 1 | | Tree | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Dymas" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.552 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 63.79% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed frozen in time" | | 1 | "seemed strangely familiar" | | 2 | "seemed dangerous the wonder of the place overlaid with a tension that crackled in the air" |
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| 12.03% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.88 | | wordCount | 1596 | | matches | | 0 | "not her face but someplace else entirely" | | 1 | "not just Dymas but other places" | | 2 | "neither splashed nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 123 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 60 | | mean | 26.6 | | std | 12.46 | | cv | 0.469 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 41 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 52 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 36 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 34 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 26 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 19 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 25 | | 19 | 40 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 32 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 44 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 37 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 40 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 32 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 30 | | 44 | 31 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 123 | | ratio | 0.081 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora felt it first—a subtle pressure against her skin, like the moment before a thunderstorm breaks." | | 1 | "The moonsilver dagger had already saved her life once; she hoped she wouldn't need it again so soon." | | 2 | "Cold washed over her, a momentary sensation of falling, then—" | | 3 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—blooms that shouldn't exist together, winter snowdrops alongside summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums beside spring tulips." | | 4 | "The water reflected not her face but someplace else entirely—a landscape of amber skies and lush gardens that seemed strangely familiar." | | 5 | "As she watched, the reflection in the pool shifted, showing not just Dymas but other places—landscapes of fire and ice, of endless twilight forests and bone-white deserts." | | 6 | "A sound drifted through the grove then—music unlike anything Aurora had heard before." | | 7 | "Immediately, a flood of sensation washed over her—fragments of memory not her own, glimpses of the grove through countless cycles of moon and sun, faces she'd never seen yet somehow recognized." | | 8 | "Aurora caught glimpses of places in quick succession—the vineyards of Dymas, the streets of London, somewhere with black sand and crimson lightning." | | 9 | "Within its transparent depths, Aurora could see Dymas more clearly—sprawling vineyards, magnificent feast halls, figures moving about their business unaware of being observed." |
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| 89.32% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1279 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.04534792806880375 | | lyAdverbCount | 22 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017200938232994525 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 123 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 123 | | mean | 12.98 | | std | 5.61 | | cv | 0.432 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 11 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 19 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 52.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.34959349593495936 | | totalSentences | 123 | | uniqueOpeners | 43 | |
| 36.23% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Immediately, a flood of sensation" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, fingers brushing the" | | 1 | "She moved without sound, leaving" | | 2 | "she murmured, placing a pale" | | 3 | "she asked, pointing toward a" | | 4 | "She couldn't tell if they'd" | | 5 | "They crested a small rise," | | 6 | "she said, the realization striking" | | 7 | "She stepped back hastily, bumping" | | 8 | "It reminded her of wind" | | 9 | "she asked, turning to locate" | | 10 | "She jerked her hand back" | | 11 | "She pulled it free from" | | 12 | "she called, her voice tight" | | 13 | "She lunged after it instinctively," | | 14 | "They fled the clearing, the" |
| | ratio | 0.163 | |
| 19.78% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 81 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "The air shifted as they" | | 1 | "Aurora felt it first—a subtle" | | 2 | "The pendant at her throat" | | 3 | "she whispered, fingers brushing the" | | 4 | "Nyx moved beside her, their" | | 5 | "Aurora nodded, though truth be" | | 6 | "Isolde stepped forward, her silver" | | 7 | "She moved without sound, leaving" | | 8 | "she murmured, placing a pale" | | 9 | "Isolde's lavender eyes fixed on" | | 10 | "The air between the stones" | | 11 | "Isolde stepped through first, her" | | 12 | "Nyx followed, their shadowy essence" | | 13 | "Aurora hesitated, gripping the Fae-forged" | | 14 | "The moonsilver dagger had already" | | 15 | "The world transformed." | | 16 | "Richmond Park fell away, replaced" | | 17 | "The trees stood taller, ancient" | | 18 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in" | | 19 | "Aurora breathed, turning in a" |
| | ratio | 0.88 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | | 0 | "Now she stood at the" | | 1 | "Before them spread a circular" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 52.15% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde stepped through first, her form wavering before disappearing entirely." | | 1 | "The trees stood taller, ancient giants with bark that shimmered with faint luminescence." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—blooms that shouldn't exist together, winter snowdrops alongside summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums bes…" | | 3 | "The ground beneath her feet felt strangely responsive, as if the earth itself acknowledged her presence." | | 4 | "The quality of light remained unchanged, that strange golden afternoon that seemed frozen in time." | | 5 | "Branches swayed though no wind stirred the air, and small buds appeared, unfurling into luminous blossoms that cast soft light across the clearing." | | 6 | "Isolde grabbed her arm, pulling her away as the vortex expanded, water and light spiraling together in hypnotic patterns." | | 7 | "What had been beautiful now seemed dangerous, the wonder of the place overlaid with a tension that crackled in the air." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, fingers brushing the stone" | | 1 | "Isolde said, reverence softening her typically cryptic tone" | | 2 | "she said, the realization striking her suddenly" | | 3 | "she asked, turning to locate the source" | | 4 | "Aurora said, her hand moving to the hilt of her moonsilver dagger" | | 5 | "she called, her voice tight" | | 6 | "Aurora asked, unable to look away from the spectacle" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 18 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Aurora breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "Nyx explained (explain)" | | 6 | "Nyx advised (advise)" | | 7 | "Nyx urged (urge)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 49 | | tagDensity | 0.367 | | leniency | 0.735 | | rawRatio | 0.444 | | effectiveRatio | 0.327 | |