Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ7AQAKVHR4TQRK4WWMP23

Run Details

Duration:
48.0s
Cost:
$0.041370
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shifted as they approached the ancient oak standing stones. Aurora felt it first—a subtle pressure against her skin, like the moment before a thunderstorm breaks. The pendant at her throat warmed, its crimson heart pulsing faintly against her collarbone. "We're close," she whispered, fingers brushing the stone. "The Heartstone's reacting." Nyx moved beside her, their form rippling between solid and shadow as they passed through dappled sunlight. "The Veil thins here. Can you feel it?" Aurora nodded, though truth be told, she wasn't entirely sure what she was feeling. Three weeks ago, she'd been delivering noodles across London. Now she stood at the threshold of a Fae grove with a living shadow and a centuries-old half-Fae seer. Isolde stepped forward, her silver hair catching the late afternoon light. She moved without sound, leaving no impression in the soft earth beneath her feet. "The stones remember when they stood beneath different stars," she murmured, placing a pale hand against the nearest monolith. "We must pass through at the precise moment." "And when's that?" Aurora asked. Isolde's lavender eyes fixed on the sky. "Now." The air between the stones shimmered like heat rising from summer pavement. Isolde stepped through first, her form wavering before disappearing entirely. Nyx followed, their shadowy essence elongating and twisting as they crossed the threshold. Aurora hesitated, gripping the Fae-forged blade at her belt. The moonsilver dagger had already saved her life once; she hoped she wouldn't need it again so soon. Drawing a deep breath, she stepped between the stones. Cold washed over her, a momentary sensation of falling, then— The world transformed. Richmond Park fell away, replaced by a clearing that couldn't possibly exist in London. The trees stood taller, ancient giants with bark that shimmered with faint luminescence. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—blooms that shouldn't exist together, winter snowdrops alongside summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums beside spring tulips. "Bloody hell," Aurora breathed, turning in a slow circle. The sky above wasn't London's perpetual gray but a deep, vibrant azure unlike anything she'd ever seen, shot through with streaks of gold and violet. "Mind your language," Nyx whispered, their voice carrying on a breeze that hadn't existed moments before. "Words have weight here." Isolde had already moved deeper into the grove, following a path visible only to her. "Come. We must reach the heart before twilight changes the ways." Aurora followed, careful to match her footsteps to Isolde's. The ground beneath her feet felt strangely responsive, as if the earth itself acknowledged her presence. Tiny lights danced at the corners of her vision, disappearing whenever she tried to focus on them directly. "What are those?" she asked, pointing toward a cluster of the lights hovering near a stand of silver-barked trees. "Lesser fae," Isolde replied without turning. "Curious about you. They rarely see mortals here." "Are they dangerous?" Nyx drifted alongside her, their violet eyes brightening. "Everything here is dangerous, in its own way. But not all dangers threaten with teeth and claws." The path wound deeper into the grove, and Aurora lost all sense of direction. She couldn't tell if they'd been walking for minutes or hours. The quality of light remained unchanged, that strange golden afternoon that seemed frozen in time. They crested a small rise, and Aurora stopped short. Before them spread a circular clearing dominated by a pool of water so still it might have been glass. At its center stood a single tree, its trunk twisted in impossible geometries, branches reaching toward the sky like supplicating arms. "The Heart Tree," Isolde said, reverence softening her typically cryptic tone. "The anchor that holds this place between realms." Aurora approached the pool's edge, drawn by something she couldn't name. The water reflected not her face but someplace else entirely—a landscape of amber skies and lush gardens that seemed strangely familiar. "That's Dymas," she said, the realization striking her suddenly. "How can I see it?" Nyx moved beside her, their shadowy form condensing as they peered into the pool. "The Grove exists in the spaces between realms. Here, the barriers thin. What you see are glimpses through the Veil." Aurora's pendant grew warmer against her skin, the crimson stone pulsing in time with some unseen rhythm. As she watched, the reflection in the pool shifted, showing not just Dymas but other places—landscapes of fire and ice, of endless twilight forests and bone-white deserts. "The Seven Circles," Nyx murmured. "All of Hel laid bare." Aurora felt a strange vertigo, as if she might fall forward into those other worlds. She stepped back hastily, bumping into Isolde, who steadied her with a cool touch. "Be careful where you look too deeply," the seer cautioned. "Some sights draw more than eyes." A sound drifted through the grove then—music unlike anything Aurora had heard before. It reminded her of wind through leaves, of rainfall on stone, of distant voices singing in harmony. The melody seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere at once. "What is that?" she asked, turning to locate the source. Isolde moved toward the Heart Tree, placing her palm against its twisted trunk. "The grove welcomes us. It has been long since I brought companions here." The tree's bark shifted beneath her touch, patterns flowing like liquid across its surface. Branches swayed though no wind stirred the air, and small buds appeared, unfurling into luminous blossoms that cast soft light across the clearing. Aurora approached cautiously, drawn by the beauty of the transformation. "It's alive? I mean—more than trees are usually alive?" "All things here live with deeper awareness," Nyx explained, keeping a respectful distance from the tree. "The Heart Tree remembers the formation of the Veil itself." Aurora reached out, hesitated, then gently touched the bark. Immediately, a flood of sensation washed over her—fragments of memory not her own, glimpses of the grove through countless cycles of moon and sun, faces she'd never seen yet somehow recognized. She jerked her hand back with a gasp. "It showed me... things. People. I saw someone who looked like me, but wasn't." Isolde's expression grew solemn. "The tree remembers all who have passed through this place. Perhaps it showed you an ancestor, or..." "Or a path not taken," Nyx finished. The music changed then, taking on a minor key that raised the hairs on Aurora's arms. The quality of light shifted, the golden glow deepening toward amber, reminiscent of Dymas's perpetual sunset. "Something's happening," Aurora said, her hand moving to the hilt of her moonsilver dagger. Isolde looked skyward, her ageless face showing the first hint of concern. "The twilight shifts come early. We must be careful—the barriers between realms thin further when the grove changes its aspect." The pool's surface rippled without wind, reflections shifting more rapidly now. Aurora caught glimpses of places in quick succession—the vineyards of Dymas, the streets of London, somewhere with black sand and crimson lightning. "We should move away from the water," Nyx advised, their form growing less distinct as shadows lengthened across the clearing. "Twilight is when the Grove opens doors best left closed." Aurora backed away, but her pendant grew hotter still, almost burning against her skin. She pulled it free from her shirt, staring as the crimson stone brightened to a fierce glow. "Isolde," she called, her voice tight. "The Heartstone—it's never done this before." The seer turned, lavender eyes widening. "It recognizes its home realm. Dymas calls to it." The surface of the pool surged upward, water rising in a perfect column that neither splashed nor fell. Within its transparent depths, Aurora could see Dymas more clearly—sprawling vineyards, magnificent feast halls, figures moving about their business unaware of being observed. "Is this... safe?" Aurora asked, unable to look away from the spectacle. "No," Nyx and Isolde answered in unison. The Heartstone tugged against its chain, pulling toward the column of water with surprising force. Aurora clutched it tightly, feeling the pulse of the gem against her palm like a second heartbeat. "It wants to go home," she realized. "It's trying to pull me through." Isolde moved swiftly to her side, pressing the back of her hand against the stone. "The connection is stronger than I anticipated. Prince Belphegor's influence reaches far." The column of water began to rotate, slowly at first then faster, forming a vortex that pulled at the air around them. Aurora's hair whipped around her face as the pull grew stronger. "We need to leave," Nyx urged, their voice barely audible above the sudden roaring of the vortex. "The Grove has become a gateway—we cannot be here when it fully opens." Aurora nodded, but as she turned to retreat, the pendant gave one final, violent tug. The silver chain snapped, and the Heartstone flew from her grasp toward the churning water. "No!" She lunged after it instinctively, fingers closing around the gem just before it reached the vortex. The stone burned in her grasp, but she held tight, stumbling backward with the prize clutched to her chest. Isolde grabbed her arm, pulling her away as the vortex expanded, water and light spiraling together in hypnotic patterns. "Quickly! The path changes even now!" They fled the clearing, the strange music rising to a crescendo behind them. Aurora glanced back once to see the vortex stretching toward the amber sky, forming a bridge between worlds that hadn't existed moments before. The grove around them shifted and changed as they ran, pathways rearranging themselves, flowers closing while others bloomed. What had been beautiful now seemed dangerous, the wonder of the place overlaid with a tension that crackled in the air.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.449
leniency0.898
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.40% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"cautiously"
2"gently"
3"tightly"
4"slowly"
5"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1613
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"wavering"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"sense of"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
6
word"perfect"
count1
7
word"depths"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"roaring"
count1
10
word"churning"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"wavering"
2"weight"
3"footsteps"
4"sense of"
5"familiar"
6"perfect"
7"depths"
8"pulse"
9"roaring"
10"churning"
11"tension"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences96
matches(empty)
98.21% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1596
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1266
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Nyx11
London4
Fae3
Aurora24
Isolde14
Fae-forged1
Park1
Dymas4
Heart1
Tree1
Heartstone2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Dymas"
4"Heartstone"
places
0"London"
1"Fae"
2"Park"
globalScore0.552
windowScore0.667
63.79% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed frozen in time"
1"seemed strangely familiar"
2"seemed dangerous the wonder of the place overlaid with a tension that crackled in the air"
12.03% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.88
wordCount1596
matches
0"not her face but someplace else entirely"
1"not just Dymas but other places"
2"neither splashed nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
91.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean26.6
std12.46
cv0.469
sampleLengths
041
111
225
342
452
55
68
735
836
910
1051
1134
1220
1326
1443
1519
1614
173
1825
1940
2049
2119
2232
2314
2434
2544
2610
2729
2816
2941
3010
3126
3237
3319
3426
3540
3622
3721
387
3932
4014
4132
4233
4330
4431
4512
4615
4741
4812
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs229
matches
0"was feeling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences123
ratio0.081
matches
0"Aurora felt it first—a subtle pressure against her skin, like the moment before a thunderstorm breaks."
1"The moonsilver dagger had already saved her life once; she hoped she wouldn't need it again so soon."
2"Cold washed over her, a momentary sensation of falling, then—"
3"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—blooms that shouldn't exist together, winter snowdrops alongside summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums beside spring tulips."
4"The water reflected not her face but someplace else entirely—a landscape of amber skies and lush gardens that seemed strangely familiar."
5"As she watched, the reflection in the pool shifted, showing not just Dymas but other places—landscapes of fire and ice, of endless twilight forests and bone-white deserts."
6"A sound drifted through the grove then—music unlike anything Aurora had heard before."
7"Immediately, a flood of sensation washed over her—fragments of memory not her own, glimpses of the grove through countless cycles of moon and sun, faces she'd never seen yet somehow recognized."
8"Aurora caught glimpses of places in quick succession—the vineyards of Dymas, the streets of London, somewhere with black sand and crimson lightning."
9"Within its transparent depths, Aurora could see Dymas more clearly—sprawling vineyards, magnificent feast halls, figures moving about their business unaware of being observed."
89.32% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1279
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Cold washed over her,"
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.04534792806880375
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.017200938232994525
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean12.98
std5.61
cv0.432
sampleLengths
011
116
214
38
43
517
68
714
89
919
1011
1114
1219
138
145
157
161
1712
1810
1913
209
2118
229
2310
243
2514
2613
2721
289
2925
3016
314
3215
3311
349
3516
3618
3719
386
398
403
418
4217
4314
4411
4515
469
4719
4821
4911
52.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.34959349593495936
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners43
36.23% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Immediately, a flood of sensation"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences92
matches
0"she whispered, fingers brushing the"
1"She moved without sound, leaving"
2"she murmured, placing a pale"
3"she asked, pointing toward a"
4"She couldn't tell if they'd"
5"They crested a small rise,"
6"she said, the realization striking"
7"She stepped back hastily, bumping"
8"It reminded her of wind"
9"she asked, turning to locate"
10"She jerked her hand back"
11"She pulled it free from"
12"she called, her voice tight"
13"She lunged after it instinctively,"
14"They fled the clearing, the"
ratio0.163
19.78% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences92
matches
0"The air shifted as they"
1"Aurora felt it first—a subtle"
2"The pendant at her throat"
3"she whispered, fingers brushing the"
4"Nyx moved beside her, their"
5"Aurora nodded, though truth be"
6"Isolde stepped forward, her silver"
7"She moved without sound, leaving"
8"she murmured, placing a pale"
9"Isolde's lavender eyes fixed on"
10"The air between the stones"
11"Isolde stepped through first, her"
12"Nyx followed, their shadowy essence"
13"Aurora hesitated, gripping the Fae-forged"
14"The moonsilver dagger had already"
15"The world transformed."
16"Richmond Park fell away, replaced"
17"The trees stood taller, ancient"
18"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
19"Aurora breathed, turning in a"
ratio0.88
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"Now she stood at the"
1"Before them spread a circular"
ratio0.022
52.15% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Isolde stepped through first, her form wavering before disappearing entirely."
1"The trees stood taller, ancient giants with bark that shimmered with faint luminescence."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible profusion—blooms that shouldn't exist together, winter snowdrops alongside summer roses, autumn chrysanthemums bes…"
3"The ground beneath her feet felt strangely responsive, as if the earth itself acknowledged her presence."
4"The quality of light remained unchanged, that strange golden afternoon that seemed frozen in time."
5"Branches swayed though no wind stirred the air, and small buds appeared, unfurling into luminous blossoms that cast soft light across the clearing."
6"Isolde grabbed her arm, pulling her away as the vortex expanded, water and light spiraling together in hypnotic patterns."
7"What had been beautiful now seemed dangerous, the wonder of the place overlaid with a tension that crackled in the air."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"she whispered, fingers brushing the stone"
1"Isolde said, reverence softening her typically cryptic tone"
2"she said, the realization striking her suddenly"
3"she asked, turning to locate the source"
4"Aurora said, her hand moving to the hilt of her moonsilver dagger"
5"she called, her voice tight"
6"Aurora asked, unable to look away from the spectacle"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
3"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
4"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
5"Nyx explained (explain)"
6"Nyx advised (advise)"
7"Nyx urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.367
leniency0.735
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.327
73.7140%