Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ87ZJJG14G9TN2N259CN0

Run Details

Duration:
25.7s
Cost:
$0.010306

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door swung open before Rory could even knock. Eva stood there, her dark curls wild around her shoulders, a smudge of ink on her cheek. The scent of turmeric and cumin from the curry house below curled into the hallway. "Took you long enough. I was about to send Ptolemy after you." Eva stepped aside, but her eyes flicked past Rory, scanning the stairwell. "You alone?" Rory adjusted the strap of her bag. "Who else would I bring?" Eva didn’t answer. She just shut the door, sliding all three deadbolts into place with sharp clicks. The flat was exactly as Rory remembered—books stacked on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, Ptolemy curled on a pile of papers like a furry paperweight. The only difference was the tension in Eva’s shoulders, the way her fingers drummed against her thigh. "You look like hell," Rory said. Eva exhaled through her nose. "Thanks. You look like you’ve been run over by a bus. Twice." Rory dropped her bag onto the couch, sending a cloud of dust into the air. Ptolemy cracked one eye open, assessed the situation, and went back to sleep. "I had a double shift at the restaurant. Then I got caught in the rain. Then—" "Then you remembered you have a life outside of delivering dumplings?" Eva crossed her arms. "Or did you just miss me?" Rory’s jaw tightened. "I came because you texted *urgent*. Not because I wanted to play twenty questions." Eva’s mouth twisted. She turned away, grabbing a mug from the cluttered counter. "Tea?" "No." "Suit yourself." Eva poured anyway, the steam curling around her face. "You’re still mad at me." Rory didn’t answer. She picked up a scroll from the table, unrolling it just enough to see the jagged script—some kind of demonic contract, half-translated. "You could’ve called. Or, I don’t know, *not* ghosted me for three months." "I had reasons." "Yeah? What were they? Too busy summoning something that ate your phone?" Eva set the mug down with a sharp *clink*. "I was trying to protect you." "Protect me?" Rory laughed, but there was no humor in it. "From what? Yourself?" Eva’s fingers curled into fists. "From *him*." The air in the flat went still. Even Ptolemy lifted his head, ears twitching. Rory’s pulse jumped. "Who?" Eva didn’t answer. She didn’t have to. The knock at the door came like a gunshot. Rory’s breath hitched. Eva’s face went pale. "Rory," a smooth voice called from the other side. "I know you’re in there." Eva’s eyes locked onto hers, wide and desperate. "Don’t answer it." Rory’s hands shook. She knew that voice. Knew the way it curled around her name like smoke. Lucien Moreau. The door rattled as he knocked again, slower this time. "I’m not leaving until we talk." Eva grabbed Rory’s wrist, her grip tight. "He’s dangerous. You don’t know—" "I know *exactly* what he is." Rory pulled free. "And I know what he’s capable of." Eva’s voice dropped to a whisper. "Then why are you still standing here?" Rory didn’t have an answer. The third knock was softer. Almost hesitant. "Rory," Lucien said, and this time, his voice was rough. "Please." Eva’s mouth pressed into a thin line. "If you open that door, I’m throwing you out with him." Rory stepped forward anyway. The deadbolts slid back with a scrape of metal. The door swung open. Lucien stood there, rain dripping from his platinum hair, his amber eye gleaming in the dim light. His black eye was shadowed, unreadable. The ivory handle of his cane gleamed under his fingers. He looked like he hadn’t slept in days. Rory’s chest ached. For a long moment, neither of them spoke. The rain pattered against the fire escape outside, the only sound between them. Then Lucien exhaled, sharp and uneven. "You’re not answering your phone." Rory crossed her arms. "I lost it." "Bullshit." She shrugged. "What do you want, Lucien?" His jaw tightened. "We need to talk." "About what? The last time we talked, you told me to stay out of your life." Lucien’s fingers flexed around his cane. "That was a mistake." Rory’s laugh was bitter. "Which part? The part where you lied to me, or the part where you walked away?" Eva’s voice cut through the tension. "Rory, *close the door*." Lucien’s gaze flicked to Eva, then back to Rory. "I made a deal. One that—" He stopped, swallowing hard. "One that I didn’t understand the cost of." Rory’s stomach twisted. "What kind of deal?" "The kind that involves *you*." Eva stepped forward, her voice low and dangerous. "Get out." Lucien ignored her. His eyes never left Rory’s. "I need your help." Rory’s breath caught. "Why me?" Lucien’s voice dropped. "Because you’re the only one who can." Eva grabbed Rory’s arm, yanking her back. "Don’t listen to him. He’s manipulating you." Rory wrenched free. "I can make my own decisions." Eva’s eyes burned. "You’re making a mistake." Rory turned back to Lucien. "What do you want?" Lucien’s throat worked. "I need you to come with me." "Where?" "Somewhere safe." Rory’s pulse pounded in her ears. "And if I say no?" Lucien’s black eye flickered, something dark and desperate in its depths. "Then I’ll have to find another way." Eva’s hand shot out, slamming the door shut between them. She turned to Rory, her voice shaking. "You’re not seriously considering this." Rory’s fingers curled into fists. "I don’t have a choice." Eva’s face fell. "There’s always a choice." Rory looked at the door, at the rain streaking down the wood, at the ghost of Lucien’s voice still hanging in the air. She reached for the deadbolts.
total_cost0.010306

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva stepped aside [aside]"
1"Eva poured anyway [anyway]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.148
leniency0.295
rawRatio0.222
effectiveRatio0.066
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount947
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.36% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount947
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"flicked"
count2
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"tension"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"scanning"
2"tension"
3"pulse"
4"whisper"
5"gleaming"
6"unreadable"
7"stomach"
8"flickered"
9"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences84
matches
0"was bitter"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences136
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans7
markdownWords9
totalWords944
ratio0.01
matches
0"urgent"
1"not"
2"clink"
3"him"
4"exactly"
5"close the door"
6"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions69
wordCount605
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity4.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity7
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory30
Ptolemy3
Eva23
Moreau1
Lucien12
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Eva"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
93.18% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"looked like he hadn’t slept in days"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount944
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences136
matches
0"knew that voice"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs71
mean13.3
std10.53
cv0.792
sampleLengths
041
126
212
362
46
517
644
721
817
914
101
1116
1238
133
1412
1515
1614
177
1814
194
207
219
227
2314
2411
2517
262
2716
2812
2916
3013
315
327
3311
3418
354
3613
3733
388
393
4021
4111
427
431
447
457
4616
4710
4820
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was shadowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs115
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences136
ratio0.015
matches
0"The flat was exactly as Rory remembered—books stacked on every surface, scrolls unrolled across the coffee table, Ptolemy curled on a pile of papers like a furry paperweight."
1"She picked up a scroll from the table, unrolling it just enough to see the jagged script—some kind of demonic contract, half-translated."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount608
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03618421052631579
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.004934210526315789
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences136
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences136
mean6.94
std4.96
cv0.715
sampleLengths
09
117
215
324
42
57
65
73
814
928
1017
116
125
1312
1415
1513
1616
1715
186
193
2014
213
2210
231
241
2511
265
273
2822
2913
303
3112
329
336
3411
353
365
372
387
397
403
411
423
434
449
453
464
479
485
498
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3088235294117647
totalSentences136
uniqueOpeners42
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then Lucien exhaled, sharp and"
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences80
matches
0"She just shut the door,"
1"She turned away, grabbing a"
2"She picked up a scroll"
3"She didn’t have to."
4"She knew that voice."
5"His black eye was shadowed,"
6"He looked like he hadn’t"
7"His jaw tightened."
8"He stopped, swallowing hard"
9"His eyes never left Rory’s."
10"She turned to Rory, her"
11"She reached for the deadbolts."
ratio0.15
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences80
matches
0"The door swung open before"
1"Eva stood there, her dark"
2"The scent of turmeric and"
3"Eva stepped aside, but her"
4"Rory adjusted the strap of"
5"Eva didn’t answer."
6"She just shut the door,"
7"The flat was exactly as"
8"The only difference was the"
9"Eva exhaled through her nose."
10"Rory dropped her bag onto"
11"Ptolemy cracked one eye open,"
12"Eva crossed her arms"
13"Rory’s jaw tightened."
14"Eva’s mouth twisted."
15"She turned away, grabbing a"
16"Eva poured anyway, the steam"
17"Rory didn’t answer."
18"She picked up a scroll"
19"Eva set the mug down"
ratio0.95
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Even Ptolemy lifted his head,"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences17
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Eva stepped aside, but her eyes flicked past Rory, scanning the stairwell"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.066
leniency0.131
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.033
84.9385%