Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ90NRWETAEA01YMRC2DRZ

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Duration:
24.0s
Cost:
$0.009642

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station smelled of damp concrete and rust. Quinn stepped over the police tape, her boots clicking against the cracked tiles. A uniformed officer nodded at her, flashlight in hand, as she ducked under the sagging barrier. "Evening, Detective. SOCO’s still processing the scene." Quinn adjusted the worn leather watch on her wrist. "Where’s the body?" "Platform three. Watch your step—floor’s uneven." She followed the beam of his torch, the light cutting through the gloom like a blade. The station’s old signs still hung from the ceiling, their paint peeling, the words barely legible. *Camden Town. Mind the gap.* The irony wasn’t lost on her. At the end of the platform, a cluster of figures huddled around something. One of them turned as she approached. "Quinn. Took you long enough." Detective Sergeant Cole, her current partner, stood with his arms crossed, his expression unreadable. He jerked his chin toward the body. "Male, mid-thirties. No ID, no wallet. Looks like a mugging gone wrong." Quinn crouched beside the corpse. The man lay sprawled on his back, one arm twisted beneath him, the other flung out as if reaching for something. His face was frozen in a rictus of surprise, eyes wide, mouth slightly open. No visible wounds. No blood. She frowned. "No defensive wounds. No signs of struggle." Cole shrugged. "Maybe he was caught off guard." Quinn’s fingers hovered over the man’s jacket. The fabric was pristine—no tears, no dirt, no scuffs. She unzipped it carefully. The shirt beneath was just as clean. "No wallet, but his watch is still here. Expensive one, too." "Maybe the killer didn’t have time to take it." She stood, brushing her hands on her trousers. "Or maybe this wasn’t a mugging." Cole exhaled through his nose. "You always overcomplicate things." Quinn ignored him, scanning the platform. The walls were covered in graffiti, layers of it, some fresh, some faded. But one symbol stood out—a circle with a jagged line through it, painted in what looked like dried blood. She stepped closer. The edges were precise, deliberate. Cole followed her gaze. "Kids. Probably some gang tag." "Gang tags don’t look like this." She pulled out her phone, snapped a photo. "This is occult." "Occult?" Cole scoffed. "You been watching too many horror films." Quinn turned back to the body. The man’s shoes were polished, the laces neatly tied. His trousers were pressed. Not the kind of man who’d wander into an abandoned Tube station at night. She crouched again, this time examining his hands. The nails were clean, the cuticles trimmed. No calluses. No signs of manual labor. "Who called it in?" she asked. Cole checked his notes. "Anonymous tip. Said there was a disturbance down here." "Disturbance." Quinn stood, her knees popping. "Not a body. Not a crime. A disturbance." She walked to the edge of the platform, peering into the darkness of the tunnel. The air was colder there, unnaturally so. Her breath misted in front of her. Cole joined her. "What are you looking for?" "Something that doesn’t belong." She stepped down onto the tracks, her boots crunching on gravel. The beam of her torch flickered over the rails, the walls, the old posters still clinging to the tiles. Then she saw it—a small, brass object half-buried in the dirt. She picked it up, brushing off the grime. A compass. The casing was etched with strange symbols, the needle spinning wildly before settling on a direction. Cole leaned over her shoulder. "What the hell is that?" Quinn turned it in her hand. The metal was cold, almost humming. "I don’t know. But it’s not standard issue." She slipped it into her pocket, her fingers lingering on the smooth surface. The symbols on the face matched the one on the wall. Cole’s radio crackled. "DS Cole, we’ve got another unit here. They’re saying this might be connected to that string of disappearances last month." Quinn’s head snapped up. "What disappearances?" Cole hesitated. "Three people, all last seen near abandoned Tube stations. No bodies, no leads." She looked back at the corpse on the platform. The man’s face was still frozen in that expression of shock. Like he’d seen something impossible. Quinn pulled out her phone again, scrolling through her contacts. She found the number she was looking for, hit call. A woman’s voice answered on the second ring. "British Museum Archives, Eva Kowalski speaking." "Eva. It’s Quinn. I need to ask you about something." A pause. "Detective Quinn. This isn’t a good time." "I’m at a crime scene. Found a symbol I don’t recognize. And a compass that shouldn’t exist." Eva’s breath hitched. "What kind of compass?" Quinn described it, the symbols, the way the needle had moved. Eva was silent for a long moment. Then, quietly: "Where are you?" "Camden. Abandoned Tube station." Another pause. "Don’t touch anything else. I’ll be there in twenty minutes." The line went dead. Cole raised an eyebrow. "Who was that?" Quinn pocketed her phone. "Someone who might know what the hell is going on." She turned back to the body, her mind racing. The man’s clothes, the lack of wounds, the symbol on the wall, the compass. None of it added up. But one thing was clear—this wasn’t a mugging. And if Eva was right, it wasn’t even human.
total_cost0.009642

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.135
leniency0.27
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.76% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount890
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount890
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"standard"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"unreadable"
2"pristine"
3"scanning"
4"flickered"
5"etched"
6"standard"
7"eyebrow"
8"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences82
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences82
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen21
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords884
ratio0.006
matches
0"Camden Town. Mind the gap."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount633
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.9
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Cole"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Town1
Sergeant1
Cole11
Quinn12
Eva3
persons
0"Sergeant"
1"Cole"
2"Quinn"
3"Eva"
places
0"Town"
globalScore0.552
windowScore0.667
47.96% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if reaching for something"
1"looked like dried blood"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount884
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean17.68
std12.88
cv0.729
sampleLengths
039
17
212
36
443
520
65
733
845
99
108
1138
129
1314
149
1546
169
1717
1810
1955
206
2113
2214
2329
248
2545
2626
2710
2820
2924
3023
316
3215
3325
3420
3514
3610
379
3817
397
4011
4112
424
4312
444
457
4614
4728
488
499
88.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences82
matches
0"was frozen"
1"were covered"
2"were polished"
3"was etched"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs110
matches
0"was looking"
41.72% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences113
ratio0.035
matches
0"The fabric was pristine—no tears, no dirt, no scuffs."
1"But one symbol stood out—a circle with a jagged line through it, painted in what looked like dried blood."
2"Then she saw it—a small, brass object half-buried in the dirt."
3"But one thing was clear—this wasn’t a mugging."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount637
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.03296703296703297
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.01098901098901099
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean7.82
std4.52
cv0.578
sampleLengths
010
113
216
37
49
53
66
716
816
92
109
1113
127
135
1414
157
1612
175
1821
1914
203
212
222
237
242
256
267
279
284
297
3011
319
328
336
345
354
366
3713
3819
393
405
414
425
4314
443
453
467
476
489
494
63.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3893805309734513
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners44
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then she saw it—a small,"
ratio0.014
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences70
matches
0"She followed the beam of"
1"He jerked his chin toward"
2"His face was frozen in"
3"She unzipped it carefully."
4"She stood, brushing her hands"
5"She stepped closer."
6"She pulled out her phone,"
7"His trousers were pressed."
8"She crouched again, this time"
9"She walked to the edge"
10"Her breath misted in front"
11"She stepped down onto the"
12"She picked it up, brushing"
13"She slipped it into her"
14"She looked back at the"
15"She found the number she"
16"She turned back to the"
ratio0.243
38.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences70
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station smelled"
1"Quinn stepped over the police"
2"A uniformed officer nodded at"
3"Quinn adjusted the worn leather"
4"She followed the beam of"
5"The station’s old signs still"
6"Detective Sergeant Cole, her current"
7"He jerked his chin toward"
8"Quinn crouched beside the corpse."
9"The man lay sprawled on"
10"His face was frozen in"
11"Quinn’s fingers hovered over the"
12"The fabric was pristine—no tears,"
13"She unzipped it carefully."
14"The shirt beneath was just"
15"She stood, brushing her hands"
16"Cole exhaled through his nose."
17"Quinn ignored him, scanning the"
18"The walls were covered in"
19"She stepped closer."
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The man lay sprawled on his back, one arm twisted beneath him, the other flung out as if reaching for something."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Quinn stood, her knees popping"
1"She stepped, her boots crunching on gravel"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.6853%