| 82.35% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "My fingers tightened around [around]" | | 1 | "Lucien’s fingers tightened around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.294 | | leniency | 0.588 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |
| 84.23% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 634 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.45% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 634 | | totalAiIsms | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "flicked" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "weight" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "weight of words/silence" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "The weight of his words" | | 1 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 53 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 76 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 25 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 631 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 44.86% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 14 | | wordCount | 428 | | uniqueNames | 4 | | maxNameDensity | 2.1 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Lucien | 9 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Evan | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Evan" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.449 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 76.47% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "something like smoke and old parchment, curl" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 631 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 76 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 35 | | mean | 18.03 | | std | 11.37 | | cv | 0.631 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 37 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 26 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 21 | | 30 | 29 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 67.67% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 76 | | ratio | 0.026 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto mine, and for a heartbeat, neither of us moved." | | 1 | "His shoulder grazed mine, and the contact sent a jolt through me—familiar, unwelcome." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 431 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 13 | | adverbRatio | 0.030162412993039442 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004640371229698376 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 76 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 76 | | mean | 8.3 | | std | 4.92 | | cv | 0.592 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 2 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 62.28% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.42105263157894735 | | totalSentences | 76 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 70.92% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "Slowly, I turned back to" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 24.26% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 1 | "he said, voice smooth as" | | 2 | "I replied, crossing my arms" | | 3 | "My fingers tightened around the" | | 4 | "He stepped forward, forcing me" | | 5 | "I didn’t move." | | 6 | "His shoulder grazed mine, and" | | 7 | "He tapped his cane against" | | 8 | "I said, turning toward the" | | 9 | "My hand froze on the" | | 10 | "I didn’t bother to turn" | | 11 | "My voice came out steadier" | | 12 | "I exhaled sharply." | | 13 | "He stepped closer, his voice" | | 14 | "I crouched to scratch behind" | | 15 | "I stood, meeting his gaze." | | 16 | "He inclined his head" | | 17 | "His amber eye gleamed" | | 18 | "He was right." | | 19 | "I’d been running for two" |
| | ratio | 0.489 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | | 0 | "The door swung open before" | | 1 | "Lucien Moreau stood there, one" | | 2 | "His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one" | | 3 | "The scent of bergamot and" | | 4 | "he said, voice smooth as" | | 5 | "I replied, crossing my arms" | | 6 | "A faint smirk tugged at" | | 7 | "My fingers tightened around the" | | 8 | "He stepped forward, forcing me" | | 9 | "I didn’t move." | | 10 | "His shoulder grazed mine, and" | | 11 | "The door clicked shut behind" | | 12 | "The flat was too small" | | 13 | "Books and scrolls teetered on" | | 14 | "Lucien’s gaze flicked over the" | | 15 | "He tapped his cane against" | | 16 | "The one thing that had" | | 17 | "The one thing I’d sworn" | | 18 | "I said, turning toward the" | | 19 | "My hand froze on the" |
| | ratio | 0.936 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 47 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 15 | | technicalSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he said, voice smooth as aged whisky" | | 1 | "He stepped, his voice dropping" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.088 | | leniency | 0.176 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |