| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 27 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Aurora spun around [around]" | | 1 | "he admitted quietly [quietly]" | | 2 | "Aurora said finally [finally]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.415 | | leniency | 0.831 | | rawRatio | 0.111 | | effectiveRatio | 0.092 | |
| 65.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1303 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 9 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "softly" | | 3 | "suddenly" | | 4 | "slowly" | | 5 | "gently" | | 6 | "really" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 27.09% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1303 | | totalAiIsms | 19 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
| | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "whisper" | | 2 | "practiced ease" | | 3 | "reminder" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "disrupt" | | 6 | "chill" | | 7 | "down her spine" | | 8 | "perfect" | | 9 | "electric" | | 10 | "tracing" | | 11 | "charged" | | 12 | "raced" | | 13 | "traced" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "flickered" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 80 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1292 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 19 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 37.17% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 842 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 2.26 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Lucien | 16 | | Moreau | 2 | | Eva | 5 | | Aurora | 19 | | French | 1 | | London | 1 | | Avaros | 2 | | Ptolemy | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Lucien" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Ptolemy" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.372 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Something like hope flickered across his fac" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.774 | | wordCount | 1292 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 61 | | mean | 21.18 | | std | 12.39 | | cv | 0.585 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 24 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 31 | | 4 | 35 | | 5 | 8 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 41 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 43 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 37 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 34 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 29 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 48 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 16 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 41 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 32 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 58 | | 35 | 24 | | 36 | 22 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 29 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 23 | | 45 | 28 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 43 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 96.49% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 80 | | matches | | 0 | "was slicked" | | 1 | "was concerned" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 166 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 117 | | ratio | 0.051 | | matches | | 0 | "The hallway light silhouetted a familiar figure, one she'd hoped never to see again—and secretly feared she might." | | 1 | "His platinum hair was slicked back, emphasizing his sharp cheekbones and the mismatched eyes that haunted her dreams—one amber, one black." | | 2 | "Of course he knew Eva wasn't home—Lucien Moreau never appeared anywhere without perfect information." | | 3 | "He surveyed the cramped flat—books stacked on every surface, scrolls balanced precariously on the window ledge, Eva's research notes taped haphazardly to the walls." | | 4 | "The last time they'd stood this close, his lips had been on hers, and then—" | | 5 | "Something like hope flickered across his face—so brief she might have imagined it." |
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| 90.83% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 850 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.04823529411764706 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.02235294117647059 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 117 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 117 | | mean | 11.04 | | std | 5.99 | | cv | 0.543 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 33 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 65.53% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.4188034188034188 | | totalSentences | 117 | | uniqueOpeners | 49 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Of course he knew Eva" | | 1 | "Instead, he pulled out one" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "His name escaped as barely" | | 1 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 2 | "He leaned slightly on his" | | 3 | "She considered slamming the door" | | 4 | "His mismatched gaze held hers" | | 5 | "It was what made him" | | 6 | "She sighed and stepped back," | | 7 | "He surveyed the cramped flat—books" | | 8 | "He ran a finger along" | | 9 | "She filled the electric kettle," | | 10 | "She slammed the kettle down" | | 11 | "His eyes darkened, the amber" | | 12 | "His jaw tightened." | | 13 | "His voice rose, a rare" | | 14 | "His voice softened" | | 15 | "she said, even as her" | | 16 | "he admitted quietly, his accent" | | 17 | "His fingers traced the outline" | | 18 | "She wanted to resist the" | | 19 | "It had been easier to" |
| | ratio | 0.297 | |
| 14.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 66 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora opened the door and" | | 1 | "The hallway light silhouetted a" | | 2 | "His name escaped as barely" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 4 | "His platinum hair was slicked" | | 5 | "The French greeting rolled off" | | 6 | "He leaned slightly on his" | | 7 | "She considered slamming the door" | | 8 | "Aurora said, blocking the entrance" | | 9 | "His mismatched gaze held hers" | | 10 | "A chill ran down her" | | 11 | "It was what made him" | | 12 | "The tabby cat wound between" | | 13 | "Ptolemy meowed loudly, recognizing Lucien." | | 14 | "A hint of a smile" | | 15 | "She sighed and stepped back," | | 16 | "Lucien entered with the fluid" | | 17 | "He surveyed the cramped flat—books" | | 18 | "He ran a finger along" | | 19 | "Aurora crossed her arms." |
| | ratio | 0.892 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 74 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 34.63% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 33 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the doorway of Eva's flat, impeccable as always in a charcoal suit that looked worth more than three months of Aurora's rent." | | 1 | "His platinum hair was slicked back, emphasizing his sharp cheekbones and the mismatched eyes that haunted her dreams—one amber, one black." | | 2 | "Lucien entered with the fluid grace that came from being half-demon, his cane tapping softly against the worn floorboards." | | 3 | "Lucien reached out slowly, his fingers hesitating before gently touching the scar on her wrist." | | 4 | "Aurora looked down at his hand on her wrist, at the invisible thread that had drawn him back to her doorstep." |
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| 87.96% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 27 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "he admitted quietly, his accent thickening with emotion" | | 1 | "He paused, vulnerability showing through his careful composure" |
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| 73.08% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Aurora muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "She sighed (sigh)" | | 2 | "he admitted quietly (admit)" | | 3 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "he warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 65 | | tagDensity | 0.169 | | leniency | 0.338 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |