Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ9J56DBKRMR46H6AAHQM7

Run Details

Duration:
6.7s
Cost:
$0.000116

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The front door of Eva’s flat groaned under the weight of the knocker, its brass edge catching the dim glow of the streetlamps. Aurora Carter didn’t even glance up from her laptop—she was too busy swiping through a delivery app, her fingers hovering over the screen. The knock came again, sharper this time, and she finally sat back, her shoulders tense. “You’re late,” she muttered, voice dry. The door swung open before she could answer. Lucien Moreau stood there, his tailored suit still crisp despite the dampness clinging to his hair, his cane resting against the doorframe like a weapon. His amber eye locked onto hers, and for a heartbeat, the air between them crackled. “You didn’t have to come,” Aurora said, crossing her arms. “No,” Lucien agreed, stepping inside. “But I did.” The flat smelled of old paper and something faintly sweet—curry, maybe. Aurora didn’t move. The scar on her wrist, a thin crescent from a childhood accident, pulsed faintly under her skin. “You shouldn’t have come,” she repeated, voice too quiet. Lucien didn’t flinch. “I know.” The door clicked shut behind him, sealing them in silence. Aurora exhaled sharply, her fingers tightening around the edge of her desk. Lucien’s cane tapped against the floor as he moved toward the kitchen, where a pot of tea steamed on the stove. “You’re drinking tea,” she observed. “You’re not,” he shot back, pouring two cups. “But I’m not leaving until you’re done.” Aurora didn’t argue. She took the cup, the warmth seeping into her hands. The scent of bergamot filled the air, sharp and bitter. “Why now?” she asked. Lucien didn’t answer right away. He sat across from her, his leg brushing hers under the table. Aurora’s breath hitched. She’d seen him like this before—close, too close, the way his fingers traced the cane’s hilt when he was nervous. “Because you were gone for too long,” he said finally. “And I couldn’t stand it.” Aurora’s jaw clenched. “You didn’t have to fix everything.” “No,” Lucien agreed. “But I had to fix *you*.” The words hung between them, heavy and wrong. Aurora’s fingers curled around her cup, the porcelain cool against her palm. Lucien leaned forward, his voice low. “You left me,” he said. “And I couldn’t let that happen again.” Aurora’s throat tightened. She’d thought about him in the dark, in the silence of her flat, her scar aching like it always did when she remembered Evan’s hands on her. She wanted to tell him it didn’t matter. But the words stuck in her throat. Lucien’s cane tapped against the table again, sharp and impatient. “You don’t have to pretend you’re okay.” Aurora’s breath came faster. She wanted to deny it, to say she was fine, but the truth was there in the way his fingers twitched, the way his eyes darkened when he spoke of the past. “You’re not,” she said softly. Lucien’s gaze snapped to hers, his amber eye burning. “I’m not?” Aurora swallowed. “You’re not the same person who walked out on me.” Lucien exhaled, long and slow. “No. But I’m not the one who let you walk away.” The kitchen light flickered, casting long shadows across the walls. Aurora’s fingers traced the rim of her cup, her mind racing. Lucien reached across the table, his hand brushing hers. “You’re scared,” he said. Aurora didn’t deny it. She was always scared. Of what came next, of what she’d left behind, of the way her life had unraveled when she’d left London. Lucien’s thumb brushed her wrist, the scar there, old and familiar. Aurora’s breath hitched. “You should go,” she whispered. Lucien’s fingers tightened. “No.” The flat was too small, too close, the air thick with unspoken words. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears. Lucien’s voice was rough when he spoke. “You left me with nothing,” he said. “And I’m not letting you do that again.” Aurora’s eyes burned. She wanted to run. She wanted to scream. But the door was locked, the flat was small, and Lucien was standing there, his cane tapping against the floor, his fingers brushing hers. “You don’t know what you’re asking,” she said. Lucien’s voice dropped, dangerous. “I know what I want.” Aurora’s breath came in shallow gasps. The scar on her wrist burned, sharp and bright. Lucien’s thumb traced the edge of it, slow and deliberate. “You’re not the same person who walked out on me,” he murmured. Aurora’s hands shook. She wanted to pull away. She wanted to scream. But the words stuck in her throat, heavy and wrong. Lucien’s fingers tightened. “No,” he said. “You’re not.” The flat was too small, too close. The air was thick with unspoken words, with the weight of what came next. Aurora’s pulse pounded in her ears. Lucien’s voice was rough when he spoke. “You left me with nothing,” he said. “And I’m not letting you do that again.” Aurora’s eyes burned. She wanted to run. She wanted to scream. But the door was locked, the flat was small, and Lucien was standing there, his cane tapping against the floor, his fingers brushing hers. “You don’t know what you’re asking,” she said. Lucien’s voice dropped, low and dangerous. “I know what I want.” Aurora’s breath came in shallow gasps. The scar on her wrist burned, sharp and bright. Lucien’s thumb traced the edge of it, slow and deliberate. “You’re not the same person who walked out on me,” he said. Aurora’s hands trembled. She wanted to pull away. She wanted to scream. But the words stuck in her throat, heavy and wrong. Lucien’s fingers tightened around her wrist. The flat was too small. The air was too thick. The weight of what came next pressed down on her, heavy and unyielding. Aurora’s eyes closed. She wanted to run. She wanted to scream. But the door was locked, the flat was small, and Lucien was standing there, his cane tapping against the floor, his fingers brushing hers. “You’re not the same person who walked out on me,” he said. Aurora’s breath came in ragged gasps. The scar on her wrist burned, bright and sharp. Lucien’s thumb traced the edge of it, slow and deliberate. “You left me with nothing,” he said. Aurora’s fingers dug into the edge of her desk. The flat was too small. The air was too thick. The weight of what came next pressed down on her, heavy and unrelenting. Lucien’s voice was rough, his breath hot against her ear. “And I’m not letting you do that again.” Aurora’s pulse roared in her ears. The scar on her wrist pulsed, sharp and bright. Lucien’s fingers tightened, his thumb brushing the edge of it, slow and deliberate. “You’re not the same person who walked out on me,” he said. Aurora’s breath came in shallow, trembling gasps. The door clicked open behind her. The flat was too small. The air was too thick. The weight of what came next pressed down on her, heavy and crushing. Lucien’s voice was a whisper, his breath hot against her neck. “And I’m not letting you do that again.” Aurora’s fingers clawed at the edge of her desk. The scar on her wrist burned, bright and searing. Lucien’s thumb traced the edge of it, slow and sure. “You left me with nothing,” he said. Aurora’s vision blurred. The flat was too small. The air was too thick. The weight of what was coming pressed down on her, relentless and final. Lucien’s fingers tightened. The door slammed shut behind her. Aurora’s breath came in ragged, broken gasps. The scar on her wrist burned like fire. Lucien’s thumb traced the edge of it, slow and deliberate. “You’re not the same person who walked out on me,” he said. Aurora’s knees hit the floor. The flat was too small. The air was too thick. The weight of what was coming pressed down on her, crushing and final. Lucien’s voice was a whisper, his breath hot against her skin. “And I’m not letting you do that again.” Aurora’s vision swam. The scar on her wrist pulsed, bright and searing. Lucien’s thumb brushed the edge of it, slow and sure. “You left me with nothing,” he said. Aurora’s fingers dug into the floor. The flat was too small. The air was too thick. The weight of what was coming pressed down on her, final and unyielding. Lucien’s voice was a growl. “And I’m not letting you walk away again.”
total_cost0.00011596000000000001

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said finally [finally]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.553
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
92.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1409
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1409
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"weight"
count8
1
word"pulsed"
count3
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"traced"
count7
5
word"jaw clenched"
count1
6
word"porcelain"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"familiar"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count2
11
word"pulse"
count3
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"whisper"
count2
14
word"searing"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"pulsed"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"traced"
5"jaw clenched"
6"porcelain"
7"flickered"
8"racing"
9"familiar"
10"unspoken"
11"pulse"
12"trembled"
13"whisper"
14"searing"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
1
label"air was thick with"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
1"The air was thick with"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences151
matches
0"was nervous"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences151
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences172
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1406
ratio0.001
matches
0"you"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions34
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
2.69% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions72
wordCount1154
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.95
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Carter1
Moreau1
Lucien34
Aurora33
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Moreau"
3"Lucien"
4"Aurora"
5"Evan"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.027
windowScore0.167
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1406
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences172
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs72
mean19.53
std12.29
cv0.629
sampleLengths
061
16
248
310
48
531
69
75
843
95
1015
1123
124
1340
1415
159
169
1726
1812
1945
2017
2136
225
2311
2412
2516
2630
274
2828
2914
305
314
3226
3315
3435
358
369
3725
3812
3922
408
4134
4215
4335
448
4511
4625
4712
4822
4929
98.29% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences151
matches
0"was locked"
1"was locked"
2"was locked"
25.33% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs229
matches
0"was standing"
1"was standing"
2"was standing"
3"was coming"
4"was coming"
5"was coming"
93.02% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences172
ratio0.017
matches
0"Aurora Carter didn’t even glance up from her laptop—she was too busy swiping through a delivery app, her fingers hovering over the screen."
1"The flat smelled of old paper and something faintly sweet—curry, maybe."
2"She’d seen him like this before—close, too close, the way his fingers traced the cane’s hilt when he was nervous."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1157
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03457216940363008
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005185825410544511
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences172
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences172
mean8.17
std5.28
cv0.646
sampleLengths
023
123
215
36
48
525
615
710
85
93
1011
113
1217
139
143
152
1610
1712
1821
195
208
217
223
2310
2410
254
265
2712
283
2920
3010
315
323
336
343
356
368
3712
386
395
407
413
4227
438
447
4510
467
474
4832
495
37.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.08139534883720931
totalSentences172
uniqueOpeners14
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences131
matches
0"she muttered, voice dry"
1"His amber eye locked onto"
2"she repeated, voice too quiet"
3"he shot back, pouring two"
4"She took the cup, the"
5"He sat across from her,"
6"She’d seen him like this"
7"he said finally"
8"She’d thought about him in"
9"She wanted to tell him"
10"She wanted to deny it,"
11"she said softly"
12"She was always scared."
13"She wanted to run."
14"She wanted to scream."
15"She wanted to pull away."
16"She wanted to scream."
17"She wanted to run."
18"She wanted to scream."
19"She wanted to pull away."
ratio0.176
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount124
totalSentences131
matches
0"The front door of Eva’s"
1"Aurora Carter didn’t even glance"
2"The knock came again, sharper"
3"she muttered, voice dry"
4"The door swung open before"
5"Lucien Moreau stood there, his"
6"His amber eye locked onto"
7"Aurora said, crossing her arms"
8"Lucien agreed, stepping inside"
9"The flat smelled of old"
10"Aurora didn’t move."
11"The scar on her wrist,"
12"she repeated, voice too quiet"
13"Lucien didn’t flinch."
14"The door clicked shut behind"
15"Aurora exhaled sharply, her fingers"
16"Lucien’s cane tapped against the"
17"he shot back, pouring two"
18"Aurora didn’t argue."
19"She took the cup, the"
ratio0.947
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences131
matches(empty)
ratio0
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"But the door was locked, the flat was small, and Lucien was standing there, his cane tapping against the floor, his fingers brushing hers."
1"But the door was locked, the flat was small, and Lucien was standing there, his cane tapping against the floor, his fingers brushing hers."
2"But the door was locked, the flat was small, and Lucien was standing there, his cane tapping against the floor, his fingers brushing hers."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"she muttered, voice dry"
1"she repeated, voice too quiet"
10.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags25
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"Lucien agreed (agree)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
3"she observed (observe)"
4"Lucien agreed (agree)"
5"she whispered (whisper)"
6"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences47
tagDensity0.532
leniency1
rawRatio0.28
effectiveRatio0.28
73.6155%