Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZ9RN5JSXT9QMX9PZ7WGHS

Run Details

Duration:
8.1s
Cost:
$0.000218

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open before Rory had even reached for the handle, the hinges groaning like an old man’s breath. She froze mid-step, her fingers tightening around the worn leather of her messenger bag. The flat smelled different—less like stale coffee and more like something sharp and metallic, like the edge of a blade left too long in the rain. Lucien stood just inside, backlit by the flickering neon of Brick Lane below, his silhouette sharp against the dim glow of Eva’s cluttered living room. The cane in his hand wasn’t resting; it leaned slightly, as if he’d been about to tap it against the floor. His suit jacket was unbuttoned, the collar of his crisp white shirt undone just enough to show the faintest hint of a scar along his throat. The amber eye caught the light first, then the black one followed, like a reflection in a still pond. “You’re early,” he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey. Rory’s pulse jumped. “I’m never late.” A ghost of a smile tugged at his lips. “Then you’re the only one.” She swallowed. “You’re not supposed to be here.” “Neither are you, technically.” His gaze flicked to the scar on her wrist, the one she always kept hidden beneath her sleeve. “Though I’d have thought you’d want to see me.” The words hung between them, heavy as the weight of a promise left unkept. Rory’s fingers twitched. “I don’t.” Lucien exhaled through his nose, a sound almost like laughter. “Liar.” She stepped inside, the door swinging shut behind her with a finality that made her skin prickle. The flat was a maze of books and scrolls, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something earthier—Eva’s herbs, maybe, or the faintest trace of smoke from the curry house below. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, lifted his head from his perch on the windowsill, ears twitching. He didn’t hiss. He didn’t even glare. Just watched, tail flicking like a metronome counting down to something neither of them could name. Lucien didn’t move from the threshold. “You look well.” Rory rolled her shoulders, trying to ease the tension knotting her neck. “I’m fine.” “You always were good at lying to yourself.” His voice dropped, just low enough for the words to brush against her skin like a touch. “Though I suppose that’s why you’re still alive.” The air between them shifted, charged. Rory’s breath hitched. “What do you want, Lucien?” “Information.” He tapped the cane against the floor, the sound sharp enough to make her jump. “About a job. One that pays well.” “And if I say no?” His gaze darkened. “Then I’ll find someone else who won’t.” She exhaled sharply. “You’re blackmailing me.” “No.” His lips quirked. “I’m offering you a choice. Take it or leave it.” Rory’s fingers curled into her palms. She could walk out now. She could. But the way he stood there, all polished edges and dangerous stillness, made her remember the last time she’d seen him—how he’d looked at her like she was something precious, something worth saving. And then he’d walked away. “What’s the job?” she asked, voice steadier than she felt. “A delivery.” He stepped forward, the cane sliding between them like a silent barrier. “Nothing dangerous. Just… a package. From A to B.” “And if I ask what’s in the package?” His smile was slow, deliberate. “You won’t.” Rory studied him—the way his jaw tightened, the way his black eye flickered with something she couldn’t name. She knew that look. She’d seen it before, in the mirror after she’d left him. “You’re not just a fixer, are you?” “No.” The word was a razor’s edge. “But I know people who are.” She swallowed. “How much?” “Enough.” His gaze dropped to her lips, then back up. “But not enough to make you regret it.” Rory’s pulse roared in her ears. She could refuse. She could. But the truth was, she needed the money. And more than that—she needed to know why he’d left her like that. Why he’d walked away without a word. “Fine,” she said, voice rough. “But I’m not doing it for you.” Lucien’s smile widened, just a little. “I know.” The silence that followed was heavier than the weight of the cane in his hand. Rory’s fingers itched to reach out, to trace the scar on his throat, to feel the warmth of his skin beneath her fingertips. But she held back. She always held back. “When?” she asked. “Tonight.” His gaze locked onto hers, unflinching. “Midnight. The docks.” Rory nodded. “I’ll be there.” He tipped his head, just slightly. “Good.” Then he turned, cane tapping against the floor as he moved toward the door. Rory watched him go, her breath catching in her throat. She’d thought she’d moved on. She’d thought she’d forgotten the way his voice sounded when he said her name, the way his hands felt when they— The door clicked shut behind him. Rory stood there, heart hammering, until the sound of his footsteps faded down the stairs. Only then did she let herself exhale. Only then did she allow herself to remember the last time she’d seen him—how he’d looked at her like she was the only thing in the world that mattered. And how she’d let him walk away.
total_cost0.00021760000000000003

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"His voice dropped just [just]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.282
leniency0.564
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.051
83.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount890
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount890
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"flicked"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"footsteps"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"flicked"
2"weight"
3"tension"
4"charged"
5"flickered"
6"silence"
7"warmth"
8"footsteps"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences69
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences69
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords884
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
67.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount724
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.66
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory12
Brick1
Lane1
Eva2
Lucien4
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.671
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount884
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"knew that look"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean22.1
std21.91
cv0.991
sampleLengths
060
191
29
36
414
58
631
719
811
989
109
1114
1233
1314
1423
155
1610
176
1814
1951
2010
2123
228
237
2440
2513
264
2718
2839
2912
308
3146
323
3310
345
357
3650
376
3851
397
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was unbuttoned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs144
matches
0"wasn’t resting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences96
ratio0.083
matches
0"The flat smelled different—less like stale coffee and more like something sharp and metallic, like the edge of a blade left too long in the rain."
1"The cane in his hand wasn’t resting; it leaned slightly, as if he’d been about to tap it against the floor."
2"The flat was a maze of books and scrolls, the air thick with the scent of old paper and something earthier—Eva’s herbs, maybe, or the faintest trace of smoke from the curry house below."
3"But the way he stood there, all polished edges and dangerous stillness, made her remember the last time she’d seen him—how he’d looked at her like she was something precious, something worth saving."
4"Rory studied him—the way his jaw tightened, the way his black eye flickered with something she couldn’t name."
5"And more than that—she needed to know why he’d left her like that."
6"She’d thought she’d forgotten the way his voice sounded when he said her name, the way his hands felt when they—"
7"Only then did she allow herself to remember the last time she’d seen him—how he’d looked at her like she was the only thing in the world that mattered."
94.25% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount730
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.04657534246575343
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.00821917808219178
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean9.21
std7.57
cv0.822
sampleLengths
020
114
226
325
421
526
619
79
83
93
109
115
122
136
1422
159
1614
173
182
1910
201
2117
2234
2315
243
254
2616
276
283
2912
302
3125
328
336
343
355
3616
377
385
393
407
413
423
434
4410
456
465
472
4833
495
47.57% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3229166666666667
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences63
matches
0"Just watched, tail flicking like"
1"Then he turned, cane tapping"
2"Only then did she let"
3"Only then did she allow"
ratio0.063
54.92% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences63
matches
0"She froze mid-step, her fingers"
1"His suit jacket was unbuttoned,"
2"he said, voice smooth as"
3"His gaze flicked to the"
4"She stepped inside, the door"
5"He didn’t hiss."
6"He didn’t even glare."
7"His voice dropped, just low"
8"He tapped the cane against"
9"His gaze darkened."
10"She exhaled sharply."
11"His lips quirked"
12"She could walk out now."
13"she asked, voice steadier than"
14"He stepped forward, the cane"
15"His smile was slow, deliberate."
16"She knew that look."
17"She’d seen it before, in"
18"His gaze dropped to her"
19"She could refuse."
ratio0.413
47.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences63
matches
0"The door creaked open before"
1"She froze mid-step, her fingers"
2"The flat smelled different—less like"
3"Lucien stood just inside, backlit"
4"The cane in his hand"
5"His suit jacket was unbuttoned,"
6"The amber eye caught the"
7"he said, voice smooth as"
8"Rory’s pulse jumped."
9"A ghost of a smile"
10"His gaze flicked to the"
11"The words hung between them,"
12"Rory’s fingers twitched."
13"Lucien exhaled through his nose,"
14"She stepped inside, the door"
15"The flat was a maze"
16"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, lifted"
17"He didn’t hiss."
18"He didn’t even glare."
19"Lucien didn’t move from the"
ratio0.825
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"She stepped inside, the door swinging shut behind her with a finality that made her skin prickle."
1"Rory rolled her shoulders, trying to ease the tension knotting her neck."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he said, voice smooth as aged whiskey"
1"she asked, voice steadier than she felt"
2"He stepped, the cane sliding between them like a silent barrier"
3"she said, voice rough"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.103
leniency0.205
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.6076%