Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZA0JC5KM9QRH285N21GY5

Run Details

Duration:
20.8s
Cost:
$0.008230

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolt scraped back with a sound like a knife being drawn. Rory stood frozen in the doorway, her fingers still curled around the key she hadn’t quite pulled from the lock. The scent of turmeric and old paper rushed out to meet her, but beneath it—faint, insistent—was the warm, spiced cologne she’d spent three years trying to forget. Lucien leaned against the kitchen counter, one ankle crossed over the other, a teacup balanced between his long fingers. Ptolemy was draped over his shoulder like a fur stole, tail flicking lazily against the lapel of his charcoal suit. The cat’s amber eyes locked onto Rory’s, unblinking. “You’re bleeding,” Lucien said. Rory looked down. A thin red line snaked from her knuckle to her wrist, where the delivery bag’s strap had chafed against the old scar. She wiped it on her jeans. “It’s nothing.” “You always did understate injuries.” He set the teacup down with a quiet *clink*. “Then again, you also understate most things. Anger. Fear.” His heterochromatic gaze flicked up, the black eye swallowing the light. “Desire.” The word hung between them, sharp as the blade in his cane. Rory’s pulse jumped, but she kept her voice steady. “What are you doing here, Lucien?” “Eva let me in. She said you’d be back soon.” He pushed off the counter, the movement fluid, controlled. “She also mentioned you’ve been avoiding my calls.” “Because I don’t work for you anymore.” “No. You quit.” His mouth twisted. “After the job in Prague. After *us*.” Rory stepped inside and kicked the door shut. The lock clicked into place, the sound too loud in the sudden silence. “There was no *us*. There was a job. And then there was you disappearing when things got messy.” “Messy.” He laughed, a dry, humorless sound. “Is that what we’re calling it?” Ptolemy chose that moment to leap down, landing with a soft *thump* before winding himself around Rory’s legs. She bent to scratch behind his ears, using the motion to steady herself. “You left. No note, no message—just gone. And then I find out you’ve been back in London for *months*?” Lucien’s jaw tightened. “I had reasons.” “Oh, I’m sure you did. You always do.” She straightened, meeting his gaze head-on. “But here’s the thing, Lucien. I don’t care anymore.” The lie tasted bitter. She *did* care. She cared about the way his hands had felt on her skin, the way his voice dropped when he spoke her name, the way he’d looked at her like she was something precious—right before he’d walked away. His fingers twitched at his side, as if he wanted to reach for her. “Rory—” “No.” She held up a hand. “You don’t get to do this. You don’t get to show up unannounced and act like nothing happened.” “And what would you have had me do?” His voice rose, the French accent sharpening the edges of his words. “Beg? Grovel? You made it clear you wanted nothing to do with me.” “Because you *left*!” The words tore out of her before she could stop them. “You left, and then you *ghosted* me, and now you’re standing in my best friend’s flat like it’s nothing!” Lucien went still. The air between them crackled, thick with everything they weren’t saying. Then, slowly, he reached into his jacket and pulled out a folded piece of paper. He held it out to her. Rory didn’t take it. “What’s that?” “A job offer.” “I told you, I don’t work for you anymore.” “Not for me.” He unfolded the paper, revealing a grainy photograph of a man with a scarred face. “For *him*.” She recognized the face instantly. Viktor Drakos. A name that made her stomach twist. “The man who tried to kill me in Prague.” “He’s resurfaced. And he’s looking for something.” Lucien’s voice was low, urgent. “Something dangerous.” Rory crossed her arms. “And you want me to help you stop him.” “No.” Lucien’s fingers tightened around the paper. “I want you to help *me* stop him. Because I can’t do it alone.” The words hung between them, heavy with meaning. Rory’s chest ached. She wanted to say no. She *should* say no. But then Lucien stepped closer, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye, close enough that she could feel the heat of him. “Please,” he said softly. And just like that, three years of hurt and anger and longing came rushing back.
total_cost0.00823

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
91.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien’s fingers tightened around [around]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.351
leniency0.703
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.108
79.97% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount749
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount749
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"flicked"
count1
1
word"desire"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"flicked"
1"desire"
2"pulse"
3"silence"
4"stomach"
5"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences49
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences49
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans11
markdownWords11
totalWords744
ratio0.015
matches
0"clink"
1"us"
2"us"
3"thump"
4"months"
5"did"
6"left"
7"ghosted"
8"him"
9"me"
10"should"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
59.09% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount495
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.82
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Ptolemy2
French1
Lucien7
Drakos1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
3"Drakos"
places(empty)
globalScore0.591
windowScore0.833
71.88% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite pulled from the lock"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount744
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean24
std14.27
cv0.594
sampleLengths
059
147
24
333
435
527
627
77
813
939
1013
1150
126
1323
1444
1515
1624
1733
1833
1935
206
213
229
2320
2423
2514
2613
2721
2820
2933
3015
90.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences49
matches
0"being drawn"
1"was draped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs99
matches
0"weren’t saying"
63.49% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences72
ratio0.028
matches
0"The scent of turmeric and old paper rushed out to meet her, but beneath it—faint, insistent—was the warm, spiced cologne she’d spent three years trying to forget."
1"She cared about the way his hands had felt on her skin, the way his voice dropped when he spoke her name, the way he’d looked at her like she was something precious—right before he’d walked away."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount499
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.03206412825651302
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.008016032064128256
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean10.33
std7.38
cv0.714
sampleLengths
012
120
227
319
420
58
64
73
822
96
102
1114
1220
131
1412
159
166
1719
188
197
206
217
228
2313
2418
257
266
2718
2813
2919
303
313
3214
339
344
353
3637
3714
381
396
4018
4120
4213
4314
4419
453
4611
4715
486
494
66.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4166666666666667
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners30
70.92% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences47
matches
0"Then, slowly, he reached into"
ratio0.021
58.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences47
matches
0"She wiped it on her"
1"He set the teacup down"
2"His heterochromatic gaze flicked up,"
3"He pushed off the counter,"
4"His mouth twisted"
5"He laughed, a dry, humorless"
6"She bent to scratch behind"
7"She straightened, meeting his gaze"
8"She *did* care."
9"She cared about the way"
10"His fingers twitched at his"
11"She held up a hand"
12"His voice rose, the French"
13"He held it out to"
14"He unfolded the paper, revealing"
15"She recognized the face instantly."
16"She wanted to say no."
17"She *should* say no."
18"he said softly"
ratio0.404
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount44
totalSentences47
matches
0"The deadbolt scraped back with"
1"Rory stood frozen in the"
2"The scent of turmeric and"
3"Lucien leaned against the kitchen"
4"Ptolemy was draped over his"
5"The cat’s amber eyes locked"
6"Rory looked down."
7"A thin red line snaked"
8"She wiped it on her"
9"He set the teacup down"
10"His heterochromatic gaze flicked up,"
11"The word hung between them,"
12"Rory’s pulse jumped, but she"
13"He pushed off the counter,"
14"His mouth twisted"
15"Rory stepped inside and kicked"
16"The lock clicked into place,"
17"He laughed, a dry, humorless"
18"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
19"She bent to scratch behind"
ratio0.936
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
98.21% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences16
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His fingers twitched at his side, as if he wanted to reach for her."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"heterochromatic gaze flicked up, the black eye swallowing the light"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.081
leniency0.162
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.054
83.2617%