Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZA40WRA80HKQXHFT8ZY99

Run Details

Duration:
7.1s
Cost:
$0.000217

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, the latch groaning like an old man’s knee, and the scent of damp brick and old books spilled into the hallway. Rory’s fingers stilled mid-wipe on the counter, the dishcloth slipping from her grip. She froze, the weight of the uninvited presence pressing against the threshold. A voice, smooth as aged brandy, cut through the silence. “You’re not going to ask me in, are you?” She turned, the black of her hair catching the dim light from the streetlamp outside. Bright blue eyes locked onto the figure in the doorway, sharp and unyielding. Lucien Moreau stood there, his platinum blond hair slicked back, his tailored charcoal suit immaculate despite the hour. The cane in his hand tapped once against the floor, a faint *clink* of ivory against wood. Rory’s breath hitched. “What the hell are you doing here?” Lucien’s lips quirked, just for a second, before smoothing into something colder. “I thought we’d left things clear last time we spoke.” His gaze flicked past her, taking in the clutter of Eva’s flat—the stacks of yellowed scrolls, the half-empty teacups, the tabby cat Ptolemy curled on the windowsill like a living comma. “But then again, you’ve never been one for clarity.” She crossed her arms, the movement instinctive, protective. “You know where I live.” “Yes.” His voice dropped, just low enough to carry without raising. “I do.” The air between them thickened, charged. Rory’s pulse hammered in her throat. She should’ve locked the door after work. Should’ve called Eva. Should’ve *done something* besides stand here like a fool, letting the past bleed back into the present like ink in water. Lucien stepped inside, the door clicking shut behind him. The flat seemed to shrink around them, the walls pressing closer. Ptolemy lifted his head, ears twitching, before settling back down with a disinterested flick of his tail. Rory exhaled through her nose, sharp and frustrated. “You’re not staying.” “No.” His cane tapped again, slower this time. “But I am here.” She gestured toward the door. “Then leave.” Lucien’s amber eye caught the light, reflecting like a cat’s in the dark. “Not until we talk.” “There’s nothing to talk about.” “Then why did you leave me that message?” His voice was low, controlled, but the edge was there, sharp as a blade unsheathed. “Why did you run?” Rory’s fingers twitched at her sides. She wanted to deny it. Wanted to tell him it was nothing, that she didn’t owe him an explanation. But the words stuck in her throat. Lucien moved then, stepping closer, the scent of sandalwood and something darker—something *other*—filling her lungs. “You always did have a habit of disappearing when things got complicated.” She swallowed. “Things got complicated the second you walked into that bar and started asking questions.” “Questions you didn’t want answered.” His gaze dropped to her wrist, lingering on the faint scar there, the one from the childhood accident she’d never told him about. “You’ve always been good at hiding.” Rory’s breath hitched. She pulled her sleeve down, but it was too late. The memory of his fingers tracing the same scar, years ago, flashed behind her eyes. The way he’d whispered, *You’re not as tough as you pretend*, like it was a promise rather than a warning. She stepped back, putting distance between them. “I don’t know what you want.” Lucien’s lips curled, just slightly. “I want to know why you left.” “Because you’re a liar.” He laughed, low and dark. “And you’re a coward.” The words hit like a slap. Rory’s hands clenched into fists. “I’m not—” “No?” His voice dropped, softer now, dangerous. “Then why did you never tell me about the nightmares?” The air left her lungs. She knew that night. Knew the way he’d held her, his skin burning against hers, his breath hot in her ear as he whispered things that made her bones ache. Knew the way he’d kissed her like he was drowning and she was the only air left. She opened her mouth, closed it. The words wouldn’t come. Lucien’s gaze darkened. “You always were good at pretending you didn’t need anyone.” Rory’s chest burned. She wanted to scream. Wanted to hit him. Wanted to run. Instead, she turned away, her fingers brushing against the edge of the counter. The teapot there was still warm from the kettle she’d just boiled. She picked it up, the weight familiar, grounding. Lucien’s voice followed her, quiet now. “You’re still running.” She didn’t answer. The silence stretched, thick and suffocating. Outside, a car horn blared. Somewhere in the distance, a siren wailed. Lucien exhaled, slow and steady. “I’ll give you until tomorrow night.” Rory’s fingers tightened around the teapot. “What?” “Tomorrow,” he said. “Seven o’clock. The same place.” She turned, her back to him. “You’re not serious.” “Oh, I’m serious.” His cane tapped against the floor again, once, twice. “Or do you forget how good I am at getting what I want?” The door clicked open behind her. Rory didn’t look back. She didn’t need to. She just knew, with a certainty that settled in her bones like lead, that she was already lost.
total_cost0.0002167

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
85.71% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His voice dropped just [just]"
1"His cane tapped again [again]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.114
94.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount862
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.80% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount862
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"flicked"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"silence"
2"flicked"
3"charged"
4"pulse"
5"tracing"
6"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"clenched into fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen43
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords11
totalWords858
ratio0.013
matches
0"clink"
1"done something"
2"other"
3"You’re not as tough as you pretend"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount668
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva2
Ptolemy2
Rory10
Lucien9
Wanted3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.751
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount858
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"knew that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean20.93
std15.77
cv0.754
sampleLengths
050
119
263
310
462
513
613
743
837
911
1012
117
1217
135
1427
1532
1627
1716
1834
1948
2013
2112
224
239
2413
2517
2652
2710
2813
2914
3033
319
323
3318
3411
357
368
379
3825
3914
4018
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs127
matches
0"was drowning"
84.55% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences98
ratio0.02
matches
0"“I thought we’d left things clear last time we spoke.” His gaze flicked past her, taking in the clutter of Eva’s flat—the stacks of yellowed scrolls, the half-empty teacups, the tabby cat Ptolemy curled on the windowsill like a living comma."
1"Lucien moved then, stepping closer, the scent of sandalwood and something darker—something *other*—filling her lungs."
93.33% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount672
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.047619047619047616
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.002976190476190476
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean8.76
std6.62
cv0.756
sampleLengths
025
113
212
310
49
515
613
718
817
93
107
1112
1241
139
148
155
1611
172
186
196
207
213
2221
239
2411
2517
268
273
288
294
305
312
3213
334
345
3523
364
376
385
3914
407
4115
4212
432
4414
4528
466
473
4810
4915
49.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.32653061224489793
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners32
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences69
matches
0"Bright blue eyes locked onto"
1"Instead, she turned away, her"
2"Somewhere in the distance, a"
ratio0.043
80.87% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences69
matches
0"She froze, the weight of"
1"She turned, the black of"
2"His gaze flicked past her,"
3"She crossed her arms, the"
4"His voice dropped, just low"
5"She should’ve locked the door"
6"His cane tapped again, slower"
7"She gestured toward the door."
8"His voice was low, controlled,"
9"She wanted to deny it."
10"His gaze dropped to her"
11"She pulled her sleeve down,"
12"She stepped back, putting distance"
13"He laughed, low and dark."
14"His voice dropped, softer now,"
15"She knew that night."
16"She opened her mouth, closed"
17"She wanted to scream."
18"She picked it up, the"
19"She didn’t answer."
ratio0.348
46.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount57
totalSentences69
matches
0"The door creaked open, the"
1"Rory’s fingers stilled mid-wipe on"
2"She froze, the weight of"
3"A voice, smooth as aged"
4"She turned, the black of"
5"Lucien Moreau stood there, his"
6"The cane in his hand"
7"Rory’s breath hitched."
8"Lucien’s lips quirked, just for"
9"His gaze flicked past her,"
10"She crossed her arms, the"
11"His voice dropped, just low"
12"The air between them thickened,"
13"Rory’s pulse hammered in her"
14"She should’ve locked the door"
15"Lucien stepped inside, the door"
16"The flat seemed to shrink"
17"Ptolemy lifted his head, ears"
18"Rory exhaled through her nose,"
19"His cane tapped again, slower"
ratio0.826
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Knew the way he’d held her, his skin burning against hers, his breath hot in her ear as he whispered things that made her bones ache."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.5962%