Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
98
glossingSentenceCount
6
matches
0
"as though recognizing its own realm drawing nearer"
1
"patterns that seemed to move when she wasn't looking directly at them"
2
"as though urging her forward"
3
"glow that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere grew brighter, then dimmer, cycling through colors that cast strange shadows across the landscape"
"Richmond Park had been empty when they arrived—unsurprising at three in the morning—but she couldn't shake the feeling they weren't alone."
1
"The air changed first—from the crisp London night to something heavier, sweeter, filled with unfamiliar scents that reminded Aurora of spiced wine and summer berries."
2
"In its place stretched a vast clearing that couldn't possibly fit within Richmond Park—or London itself."
3
"They needed Isolde's guidance to understand the pendant's connection to Dymas—and what it meant that a relic from Hel's realm of Gluttony had found its way to her."
4
"Aurora noticed small creatures darting beneath the surface—not fish, but something else entirely."
5
"Aurora noticed creatures watching from the branches—not birds, but small humanoid figures with butterfly wings and eyes that reflected light like a cat's."
6
"Fruits hung from its branches—glowing orbs that pulsed with their own heartbeats."
7
"Around it were three chairs—one made of twisted roots, one of crystalline material that caught and refracted light, and one that appeared to be formed from living shadow."
8
"Images flashed through her mind: a grand banquet hall with tables stretching endlessly, plates piled with foods she couldn't name, goblets that never emptied—and Belphegor himself, watching her from the head table, his eyes the exact crimson of the pendant."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
58
technicalSentenceCount
15
matches
0
"The Fae-Forged Blade grew colder against her skin with each step, as though recognizing its own realm drawing nearer."
1
"Aurora couldn't deny the strange electricity in the air, a tingling sensation that danced across her skin and made the small crescent-shaped scar on her wrist i…"
2
"The fog parted suddenly, revealing a circle of ancient oak standing stones, their surfaces covered in swirling patterns that seemed to move when she wasn't look…"
3
"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed against her chest, almost painfully hot, as though urging her forward."
4
"The air changed first—from the crisp London night to something heavier, sweeter, filled with unfamiliar scents that reminded Aurora of spiced wine and summer be…"
5
"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible colors: blues that shimmered with their own light, purples deep enough to fall into, and whites so pure they hurt …"
6
"Aurora noticed how the blossoms turned toward her as she passed, opening wider, their colors intensifying."
7
"The ground beneath her feet felt strangely springy, almost responsive, as though the earth itself acknowledged her presence."
8
"A stream cut through the clearing ahead, its water crystal clear yet somehow containing swirls of color that moved independently of the current."
9
"The trees around them had begun to shift subtly, their branches bending inward to create a natural path leading deeper into the Grove."
10
"The ambient glow that seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere grew brighter, then dimmer, cycling through colors that cast strange shadows across the landsca…"
11
"Around it were three chairs—one made of twisted roots, one of crystalline material that caught and refracted light, and one that appeared to be formed from livi…"
12
"Her silver hair flowed around her as though underwater, and her pale lavender eyes held ancient knowledge that made Aurora feel impossibly young."
13
"The Fae blade in her hand shattered, its fragments hanging suspended in the air for a heartbeat before reassembling, the blade now etched with new patterns."
14
"The fruits had stopped falling, though many now lay broken on the ground, leaking luminous sap that crawled across the earth like living creatures."