| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory stepped back [back]" | | 1 | "She turned away [away]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 92 | | tagDensity | 0.217 | | leniency | 0.435 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 89.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1458 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.13% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1458 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicked" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "trembled" | | 3 | "silk" | | 4 | "charged" | | 5 | "navigated" | | 6 | "aftermath" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "could feel" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "tension" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "clenched into fists" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 118 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 184 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 27 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 16 | | markdownWords | 52 | | totalWords | 1449 | | ratio | 0.036 | | matches | | 0 | "chérie" | | 1 | "my" | | 2 | "Rory," | | 3 | "If you’re reading this, I’ve either been arrested or I’m dead. Either way, you’re in danger. Evan knows where you are. He’s not alone. Burn this after reading." | | 4 | "Dad" | | 5 | "chérie" | | 6 | "him" | | 7 | "this is a terrible idea but I support you anyway" | | 8 | "did" | | 9 | "know" | | 10 | "me" | | 11 | "survive" | | 12 | "felt" | | 13 | "exactly" | | 14 | "hell" | | 15 | "trust" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 1005 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 2.69 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 5.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | French | 2 | | Rory | 27 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Formica | 1 | | Lucien | 21 | | Eva | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.157 | | windowScore | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 73 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1449 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 184 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 80 | | mean | 18.11 | | std | 11 | | cv | 0.607 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 39 | | 2 | 49 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 30 | | 6 | 48 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 32 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 30 | | 18 | 29 | | 19 | 1 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 34 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 22 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 17 | | 37 | 28 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 35 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 27 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 26 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 96.34% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | | 0 | "being drawn" | | 1 | "been broken" | | 2 | "been arrested" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 191 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 8 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 184 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The amber eye caught the dim hallway light; the black one swallowed it whole." | | 1 | "The flat was exactly as he’d imagined—cramped, cluttered, every surface buried under scrolls and half-empty mugs of tea." | | 2 | "The wax seal on the back had been broken—someone had already read it." | | 3 | "The handwriting was familiar—elegant, looping, the kind of script that belonged on a barrister’s letterhead." | | 4 | "—*Dad*" | | 5 | "She could smell his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, something that reminded her of the underworld he navigated so easily." | | 6 | "The memory of his mouth on hers, his hands in her hair, the way he’d whispered her name like a prayer—it all came rushing back." | | 7 | "His amber eye burned; the black one was endless." | | 8 | "She should—" | | 9 | "She looked at Eva, then at Lucien, and knew—whatever happened next, there was no going back." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1014 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 37 | | adverbRatio | 0.03648915187376726 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005917159763313609 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 184 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 184 | | mean | 7.88 | | std | 5.5 | | cv | 0.698 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 23 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 22 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 13 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 53.99% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.3532608695652174 | | totalSentences | 184 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 79.46% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice was smooth, the" | | 1 | "She didn’t move." | | 2 | "She tossed the takeaway bag" | | 3 | "He set his cane against" | | 4 | "He reached into his jacket" | | 5 | "She didn’t take it." | | 6 | "Her fingers stilled." | | 7 | "He’s not alone." | | 8 | "She crumpled the note in" | | 9 | "She whirled around." | | 10 | "He held her gaze, unflinching" | | 11 | "He butted his head against" | | 12 | "She poured the water, the" | | 13 | "His fingers brushed against hers" | | 14 | "He took a slow sip," | | 15 | "She set her mug down" | | 16 | "His voice was low, the" | | 17 | "She could smell his cologne—sandalwood" | | 18 | "She turned away, pressing her" | | 19 | "He stepped closer, his presence" |
| | ratio | 0.351 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 108 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "The deadbolt scraped back with" | | 1 | "Rory stood in the doorway," | | 2 | "The scent of soy sauce" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau leaned against the" | | 4 | "The amber eye caught the" | | 5 | "His voice was smooth, the" | | 6 | "She didn’t move." | | 7 | "A faint smile played at" | | 8 | "Rory stepped back, letting the" | | 9 | "The flat smelled of old" | | 10 | "Lucien stepped inside, his tailored" | | 11 | "The flat was exactly as" | | 12 | "A tabby cat watched him" | | 13 | "Rory kicked the door shut." | | 14 | "Lucien’s gaze flicked to the" | | 15 | "She tossed the takeaway bag" | | 16 | "He set his cane against" | | 17 | "Rory laughed, sharp and humourless." | | 18 | "He reached into his jacket" | | 19 | "She didn’t take it." |
| | ratio | 0.973 | |
| 90.09% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 111 | | matches | | 0 | "*If you’re reading this, I’ve" | | 1 | "Either way, you’re in danger." |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 98.21% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "The handwriting was familiar—elegant, looping, the kind of script that belonged on a barrister’s letterhead." | | 1 | "She could smell his cologne—sandalwood and something darker, something that reminded her of the underworld he navigated so easily." |
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| 50.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He stepped, his presence a warmth at her back" | | 1 | "His hand lifted, fingers brushing against the scar on her wrist" | | 2 | "He looked, his expression unreadable" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |