| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.87% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 987 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 29.08% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 987 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "unreadable" | | 1 | "gleaming" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "throb" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "glistening" | | 6 | "stomach" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "lurched" | | 9 | "reminder" | | 10 | "trembled" | | 11 | "shattered" | | 12 | "velvet" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.16% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 48 | | markdownWords | 177 | | totalWords | 970 | | ratio | 0.182 | | matches | | 0 | "shifted" | | 1 | "something else" | | 2 | "\"You’re late.\"" | | 3 | "\"Where the hell are we?\"" | | 4 | "thing" | | 5 | "\"You’ve entered Dymas, child of mortals. Prince Belphegor’s domain.\"" | | 6 | "\"And you’re not invited.\"" | | 7 | "\"Then why am I here?\"" | | 8 | "\"Because,\"" | | 9 | "\"the Veil is thinning. And you, little thief, carry the key.\"" | | 10 | "\"Key to what?\"" | | 11 | "\"To the last lock holding Hel’s gate closed.\"" | | 12 | "moved" | | 13 | "hunger" | | 14 | "\"We’re being watched.\"" | | 15 | "\"The Gluttonous Eye,\"" | | 16 | "\"It sees all. It hungers for all.\"" | | 17 | "\"Great. So we’re in a place where people get *very" | | 18 | "\"And the Veil is weakening,\"" | | 19 | "\"And if it falls, the gates of Hel will open. And *he" | | 20 | "\"Who’s *he" | | 21 | "\"The one who was always meant to be here.\"" | | 22 | "something" | | 23 | "monument" | | 24 | "\"That’s not food,\"" | | 25 | "\"It is. And it isn’t.\"" | | 26 | "rotten" | | 27 | "\"Greetings, guests,\"" | | 28 | "\"We’ve been waiting for you.\"" | | 29 | "\"We’re not here to party.\"" | | 30 | "\"No. But you *are" | | 31 | "them" | | 32 | "things" | | 33 | "shattered" | | 34 | "things" | | 35 | "\"We need to move,\"" | | 36 | "\"Now.\"" | | 37 | "\"The Heartstone. It’s drawing them.\"" | | 38 | "pull" | | 39 | "\"It’s calling them?\"" | | 40 | "\"It’s calling *him" | | 41 | "\"And he’s coming.\"" | | 42 | "chime" | | 43 | "him" | | 44 | "\"Little thief,\"" | | 45 | "\"You’ve brought me a gift.\"" | | 46 | "\"You,\"" | | 47 | "\"Indeed. And you, my dear, are the key to my return.\"" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 56.02% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 798 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 15 | | Whitechapel | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Isolde | 8 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 2 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Dymas" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.56 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "quite dirt, wasn’t quite stone" | | 1 | "quite stone" | | 2 | "quite sky—stood frozen, their faces unreadable" | | 3 | "as if reaching for something just beyond sight" | | 4 | "bones that seemed to bend without breaking" | | 5 | "robe that seemed to absorb light—laughed" | | 6 | "quite food" | | 7 | "looked like golden honeycomb *shattered*" | | 8 | "fire that seemed to pull* at the air around it" |
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| 96.91% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.031 | | wordCount | 970 | | matches | | 0 | "not bees, but something worse" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 19.8 | | std | 15.44 | | cv | 0.78 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 1 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 38 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 70 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 24 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 32 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 24 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 15 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 47 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 61 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 30 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 27 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 31 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 23 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 16 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 54.01% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "was sprinting" | | 1 | "was falling" | | 2 | "was walking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 17 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.109 | | matches | | 0 | "She yanked it from her pocket just as the air hummed—like a tuning fork struck too hard—and the world *shifted*." | | 1 | "Through *something else*—a fabric of shadows and half-seen shapes that stretched and warped around her like a living thing." | | 2 | "Around her, the others—Nyx, their silent shadow-self flickering like a candle in a draft, and Isolde, her silver hair catching the light of a sky that wasn’t quite sky—stood frozen, their faces unreadable." | | 3 | "Isolde’s lips curled, but her pale lavender eyes were fixed on the horizon—or whatever passed for one here." | | 4 | "Not with purpose—with *hunger*." | | 5 | "Below, the ground wasn’t earth—it was *something* else." | | 6 | "A tower of bread so tall it scraped the amber sky, its crust cracked open to reveal layers of cheese and honey and—" | | 7 | "Their eyes—black pits, empty and endless—locked onto them." | | 8 | "The lead figure—tall, gaunt, dressed in a robe that seemed to absorb light—laughed." | | 9 | "A plate of what looked like golden honeycomb *shattered*, and from it spilled not bees, but something worse—twisting, writhing *things* with too many legs and mouths that stretched in unnatural grins." | | 10 | "A sound cut through the chaos—a deep, resonant *chime*, like a bell tolling from a distance." | | 11 | "His eyes—black as a void—locked onto Rory." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 816 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.0392156862745098 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004901960784313725 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 8.81 | | std | 6.35 | | cv | 0.721 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 33 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 11 |
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| 46.97% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.33636363636363636 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 82.30% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "Then Rory exhaled sharply." | | 1 | "Then the figures appeared." |
| | ratio | 0.025 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "She yanked it from her" | | 1 | "It pulsed now, a slow," | | 2 | "She swallowed hard." | | 3 | "They coiled around Nyx’s ankles," | | 4 | "It recoiled as if burned," | | 5 | "She gagged, her eyes watering." | | 6 | "They moved like dancers, their" | | 7 | "Their eyes—black pits, empty and" | | 8 | "It was cold, a constant" | | 9 | "She lunged forward, the Fae" | | 10 | "His eyes—black as a void—locked" | | 11 | "he murmured, his voice like" | | 12 | "She knew that voice." |
| | ratio | 0.16 | |
| 46.42% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | | 0 | "The pendant burned against Rory’s" | | 1 | "She yanked it from her" | | 2 | "One second, she was sprinting" | | 3 | "The next, she was falling." | | 4 | "Nyx’s voice slithered into her" | | 5 | "Rory skidded to a halt," | | 6 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 7 | "Rory demanded, voice raw" | | 8 | "Isolde’s lips curled, but her" | | 9 | "The horizon here was a" | | 10 | "Nyx’s form coalesced into something" | | 11 | "Rory’s fingers tightened around the" | | 12 | "It pulsed now, a slow," | | 13 | "Isolde said, her voice like" | | 14 | "The path ahead twisted into" | | 15 | "The sound vibrated in Rory’s" | | 16 | "She swallowed hard." | | 17 | "Nyx stepped forward, their shadow" | | 18 | "A gust of wind howled" | | 19 | "They coiled around Nyx’s ankles," |
| | ratio | 0.827 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 81 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 3.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Through *something else*—a fabric of shadows and half-seen shapes that stretched and warped around her like a living thing." | | 1 | "Around her, the others—Nyx, their silent shadow-self flickering like a candle in a draft, and Isolde, her silver hair catching the light of a sky that wasn’t qu…" | | 2 | "Nyx stepped forward, their shadow stretching unnaturally long, as if reaching for something just beyond sight." | | 3 | "Tables stretched for miles, laden with dishes that defied description." | | 4 | "They moved like dancers, their limbs too long, their skin stretched taut over bones that seemed to bend without breaking." | | 5 | "A plate of what looked like golden honeycomb *shattered*, and from it spilled not bees, but something worse—twisting, writhing *things* with too many legs and m…" | | 6 | "A figure emerged from the feast, towering over the others, his form shifting between solid and smoke." |
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| 25.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory demanded, voice raw" | | 1 | "Nyx hissed, their voice tight" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 7 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory demanded (demand)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 4 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 5 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 6 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.25 | | leniency | 0.5 | | rawRatio | 0.875 | | effectiveRatio | 0.438 | |