Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZC8FSV14FH57045XPC0TA

Run Details

Duration:
5.8s
Cost:
$0.000202

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The flickering fluorescents buzzed overhead like a swarm of irritated wasps, casting long, jagged shadows across the damp concrete. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over the yellow tape with the quiet precision of a soldier retreating from a minefield. The stench of rust and something older—something *wrong*—clung to the air, thick enough to taste. Her boots crunched over broken glass as she moved toward the body. A man lay sprawled on his back, his suit jacket open, the fabric stiff with something darker than blood. The crime scene tape fluttered around her, snagged on the rusted railings of the abandoned Tube station. The Veil Market’s usual hum of whispered deals and haggling was absent. Too quiet. Too still. DS Carter adjusted his tie, his breath fogging in the cold air. "You’re late, Quinn. Thought you’d bail on us again." Harlow didn’t look at him. Her fingers brushed the cold brass of the Veil Compass in her pocket, the sigils etched into its casing pressing against her skin. "Traffic. Or maybe I was busy." Carter exhaled through his nose, a sound that grated like nails on a chalkboard. "This is a mess. No signs of forced entry, no struggle marks. Just… found him like this." He gestured toward the body with a gloved hand. "Looks like he took a header off the platform." Harlow crouched, her knee cracking against the uneven concrete. The man’s face was slack, his lips blue-tinged. His eyes were open, staring up at the ceiling tiles like he’d seen something no human should. The suit beneath him was expensive—tailored, not off-the-rack—but the cuffs were torn, as if he’d fought something. Or *someone*. She traced the edges of the puddle pooling beneath him. Not just blood. Something darker, thicker. Like ink spilled on water. "Check his pockets," she murmured. Carter knelt beside her, his breath hitching when he saw the contents of the man’s inner jacket pocket. A bone token, small and white, its surface smooth as polished ivory. He held it up between two fingers, turning it in the dim light. "Veil Market," Harlow said, her voice low. "He wasn’t just here for the air." Carter swallowed. "You think it’s connected?" She didn’t answer. Instead, she lifted the man’s wrist, searching for a pulse. Nothing. Then she turned his hand over, examining the back of his palm. A faint, raised sigil—three curved lines forming a triangle. Not a brand. Not a tattoo. Something *carved* into his skin, fresh enough to still bleed a little where it met the bone. Carter’s breath hitched. "That’s not normal." "Nothing about this is," Harlow said, her gaze flicking to the platform above them. The edge was jagged, the metal bars rusted into sharp points. No signs of a struggle. No blood splatter. Just… absence. She stood, brushing the dust from her knees. "Someone didn’t want us finding this." Carter followed her gaze. "You think it’s the clique?" Harlow didn’t confirm or deny. She pulled the Veil Compass from her pocket, letting the needle spin lazily before it locked onto something unseen. The brass casing warmed against her palm. "Tell me about the last time you saw him," she said. Carter hesitated. "He was at the museum yesterday. Said he had a lead on some old occult text. Eva Kowalski—you know her?" Harlow’s fingers tightened around the compass. "I know of her." Carter’s voice dropped. "She’s been asking questions too. About the Veil Market. About *them*." Harlow’s jaw tightened. "And?" "And nothing. But she’s been skittish lately. Like she’s hiding something." The needle on the compass trembled, then snapped toward the shadows beneath the platform. Harlow’s pulse quickened. "Get me the forensics team. And call in backup." Carter nodded, already pulling out his radio. "You think it’s connected to your partner’s case?" She didn’t look at him. "I think this isn’t just a suicide." The fluorescent lights hummed overhead, their glow casting long, shifting shadows across the concrete. Somewhere in the darkness beneath the platform, something moved.
total_cost0.00020160000000000002

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.238
leniency0.476
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
92.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount672
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount672
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"tinged"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"trembled"
count1
6
word"quickened"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"etched"
2"tinged"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"trembled"
6"quickened"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences60
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords664
ratio0.006
matches
0"wrong"
1"someone"
2"carved"
3"them"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
61.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount509
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.77
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow9
Quinn1
Tube1
Veil3
Market1
Carter9
Compass2
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Market"
3"Carter"
4"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0.616
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences33
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount664
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean24.59
std17.64
cv0.717
sampleLengths
053
164
221
334
449
553
621
75
843
914
106
1158
126
1335
1414
159
1631
1711
1822
1910
2014
214
2211
2326
2415
2512
2623
93.57% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences60
matches
0"were torn"
1"was jagged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs87
matches(empty)
30.08% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences76
ratio0.039
matches
0"The stench of rust and something older—something *wrong*—clung to the air, thick enough to taste."
1"The suit beneath him was expensive—tailored, not off-the-rack—but the cuffs were torn, as if he’d fought something."
2"A faint, raised sigil—three curved lines forming a triangle."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount516
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.03294573643410853
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.001937984496124031
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean8.74
std5.95
cv0.681
sampleLengths
019
119
215
312
419
517
612
72
82
912
109
115
1223
136
1414
1526
169
179
188
1917
2017
212
2210
233
243
255
265
2718
2812
2913
307
317
322
334
343
3510
361
3712
389
393
403
4117
423
433
4414
4511
465
473
481
491
67.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4473684210526316
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners34
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences50
matches
0"Instead, she lifted the man’s"
1"Then she turned his hand"
2"Somewhere in the darkness beneath"
ratio0.06
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount10
totalSentences50
matches
0"Her boots crunched over broken"
1"Her fingers brushed the cold"
2"He gestured toward the body"
3"His eyes were open, staring"
4"She traced the edges of"
5"He held it up between"
6"She didn’t answer."
7"She stood, brushing the dust"
8"She pulled the Veil Compass"
9"She didn’t look at him."
ratio0.2
50.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences50
matches
0"The flickering fluorescents buzzed overhead"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped over"
2"The stench of rust and"
3"Her boots crunched over broken"
4"A man lay sprawled on"
5"The crime scene tape fluttered"
6"The Veil Market’s usual hum"
7"DS Carter adjusted his tie,"
8"Harlow didn’t look at him."
9"Her fingers brushed the cold"
10"Carter exhaled through his nose,"
11"He gestured toward the body"
12"Harlow crouched, her knee cracking"
13"The man’s face was slack,"
14"His eyes were open, staring"
15"The suit beneath him was"
16"She traced the edges of"
17"Something darker, thicker."
18"Carter knelt beside her, his"
19"A bone token, small and"
ratio0.82
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The suit beneath him was expensive—tailored, not off-the-rack—but the cuffs were torn, as if he’d fought something."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Harlow said, her voice low"
1"Harlow said, her gaze flicking to the platform above them"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.381
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.095
84.5417%