Run: 2026-02-19-01KHSZCS6PJ73PTQBGN1GQG9VG

Run Details

Duration:
41.0s
Cost:
$0.035385
Provider:
Anthropic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stopped at the threshold of the ancient oak standing stones, her fingers clutching the Heartstone Pendant that hung from her neck. It pulsed with an unusual warmth—not the familiar heat that signaled a Hel portal, but something different, more rhythmic, like a heartbeat responding to the place itself. "We're here," Isolde announced, her silver hair catching the fading sunlight as she glided forward, leaving no imprints on the soft grass beneath. "The Grove welcomes you." Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx, whose shadowy form rippled slightly at the edges. The Shade hovered just behind her, their violet eyes narrowing as they surveyed the ancient stones. "The Veil is thin here," Nyx whispered, their voice like dry leaves rustling across stone. "I can feel it... breathing." Aurora swallowed hard and stepped forward, crossing between two massive oak pillars. The air shimmered around her, distorting like heat waves rising from summer pavement. For a heartbeat, resistance pushed against her skin—then suddenly released, like breaking through the surface of water. Inside, everything changed. The muted sounds of Richmond Park—distant traffic, dogwalkers, the occasional airplane—vanished completely. Instead, a symphony of unfamiliar birdsong filled the air, intermingled with what sounded like tiny bells chiming on no discernible breeze. The sky above was still blue, but deeper, more vibrant, scattered with stars despite the daylight. "What the hell?" Aurora breathed, turning in a slow circle. The clearing before them stretched impossibly far—much larger than what should have fit in this section of Richmond Park. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in patches of color that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them. Nyx slipped through the barrier, their form momentarily stretching thin before reconstituting beside her. "Time flows differently here," they said, their violet eyes scanning the horizon. "An hour inside can be minutes outside. Or days." "You neglected to mention that part," Aurora muttered, shooting a glance at Isolde. The half-Fae merely smiled, her pale lavender eyes reflecting light that seemed to come from nowhere. "Would knowledge have changed necessity? The Grove reveals what needs revealing." "Riddles. Brilliant," Aurora sighed, but curiosity was already overwhelming her caution. The three of them ventured deeper into the grove. Massive trees unlike any Aurora had seen in Britain stood sentinel throughout the clearing—their bark spiraled in impossible patterns, and their leaves shimmered between green and silver with each subtle movement of air. Small lights darted between branches, too deliberate to be fireflies. "Are those...?" Aurora pointed. "Lesser fae," Isolde replied. "Pixies, mostly. They're curious about you." Her silver hair lifted slightly in a breeze that touched nothing else. "They rarely see humans here." "Should I be worried?" Aurora's hand instinctively moved to the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. The moonsilver dagger felt unusually cold against her palm, even through its sheath. "Not of them," Isolde said cryptically, continuing forward. They walked toward the center of the grove, where a circle of mushrooms surrounded a pool of water so still it looked like polished obsidian. As they drew closer, Aurora noticed that the flowers underfoot changed with each step—first bluebells, then tiny star-shaped blooms she didn't recognize, then delicate orchids that should never have survived in British weather. "The flora responds to our presence," Nyx observed, trailing shadow fingers over a crimson flower that curled toward their touch like a cat seeking affection. "This place is semi-sentient." "Everything Fae-touched has some measure of awareness," Isolde explained, stepping gracefully over the mushroom ring and kneeling beside the pool. "Come. Look." Aurora hesitated at the ring of mushrooms. Every story she'd ever heard warned against stepping into a fairy ring. But Nyx drifted across without hesitation, their shadowy form reflecting on the water's surface despite their usual lack of reflection in normal mirrors. Curiosity won. Aurora stepped over the threshold and immediately felt a strange weightlessness, as if gravity had loosened its hold slightly. The Heartstone Pendant at her throat grew warmer. She knelt beside Isolde and peered into the pool. Instead of seeing her own reflection, she saw... stars. An endless field of stars swirling in patterns that hurt her eyes to follow. "What is this place, really?" Aurora asked, her voice hushed. "A nexus," Isolde replied, trailing slender fingers across the water's surface. The stars beneath rippled but didn't break. "Where realms touch. Earth, Fae, and—" she paused, glancing at the pendant around Aurora's neck, "—other places." "Dymas," Nyx said flatly, violet eyes fixed on the pendant. "That's why your stone reacts here. This grove touches the realm of Gluttony." Aurora's fingers wrapped protectively around the crimson stone. "But why would a Fae-touched place connect to Hel?" "Boundaries are rarely neat lines," Isolde said. "They overlap, like watercolors bleeding together. This pool reflects all realms that touch this spot." Aurora leaned closer to the water, and the stars shifted to form new patterns. For a moment, she glimpsed amber skies and sprawling vineyards—Dymas, she realized with a shudder, recognizing it from her previous accidental journey there. The image wavered and dissolved, replaced by a forest of trees with luminescent bark and leaves like diamonds. "The Fae Realms," Isolde whispered, a note of longing in her voice. As they watched, the pool's surface began to change again, but Nyx suddenly hissed, their form expanding into a protective shadow around Aurora. "Something watches us through the water," the Shade warned. Isolde immediately waved her hand over the pool, and the surface froze into actual obsidian. "We've attracted attention. Move away." They retreated from the mushroom ring, and Aurora felt that strange gravity return to normal. The sky above had darkened imperceptibly while they were at the pool, now a deep indigo scattered with impossible constellations. "Was that... Belphegor?" Aurora asked, remembering the Prince of Gluttony from her previous encounter. "No." Isolde shook her head, silver hair swaying. "Something older. The Grove has guardians from all touching realms." Aurora's hand dropped to the Fae blade again, drawing comfort from its cold touch. "Are we in danger?" "Not immediately," Isolde said, leading them toward a circle of standing stones different from the ones they'd entered through. These were made of some crystalline substance that caught light from no visible source. "But we should continue moving." As they approached the crystal stones, Aurora noticed the ground beneath their feet had changed from grass to moss that glowed faintly with each footfall, leaving temporarily luminescent prints behind them—except for Isolde, who continued to leave no mark at all. "Look," Nyx murmured, pointing to a tree near the crystal circle. Fruits hung from its branches, shaped like pomegranates but glowing with an inner amber light reminiscent of Dymasian skies. The scent wafting from them was intoxicating—spiced honey and summer wine. "Dymasian dreamfruit," Isolde explained. "The Grove borrows from all its touching realms. Never eat what grows here unless you wish to be bound to the place that spawned it." Aurora nodded, but couldn't help staring at the fruit. She'd eaten in Dymas before, during her brief imprisonment there. The pendant at her throat seemed to pulse in time with the fruit's subtle glow. "We're being called forward," Nyx observed, their shadowy form stretching toward the crystal stones. "The Grove is directing our path." Aurora glanced back the way they'd come, but the entrance stones were no longer visible. Instead, the forest had closed in behind them, trees shifting their positions when she wasn't looking directly at them. "I didn't think we'd walked that far," she said uneasily. "Distance is as fluid as time here," Isolde replied. "The Grove shows what it wishes you to see." With little choice, they continued toward the crystal stones, which seemed to sing at a frequency just below hearing as they drew closer.
created_at"2026-02-19T03:34:13.474Z" 2/19/2026, 3:34:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"silver hair lifted slightly [slightly]"
1"Isolde said cryptically [cryptically]"
2"Nyx said flatly [flatly]"
3"she said uneasily [uneasily]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0.148
effectiveRatio0.148
73.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1300
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"suddenly"
count2
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"completely"
3"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
26.92% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1300
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count2
5
word"symphony"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"sentinel"
count1
8
word"affection"
count1
9
word"wavered"
count1
10
word"encounter"
count1
11
word"crystalline"
count1
12
word"crystal"
count4
13
word"footfall"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"familiar"
3"rhythmic"
4"shimmered"
5"symphony"
6"scanning"
7"sentinel"
8"affection"
9"wavered"
10"encounter"
11"crystalline"
12"crystal"
13"footfall"
14"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
52.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1283
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"With little choice, they continued toward the crystal stones, which seemed to sing at a frequency just below hearing as …"
38.78% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions71
wordCount1034
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity2.22
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Hel1
Aurora23
Nyx9
Shade2
Richmond2
Park2
Isolde15
Britain1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
British1
Dymas2
Prince1
Gluttony1
Fae3
Fruits1
Dymasian1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Shade"
3"Isolde"
4"Fruits"
places
0"Pendant"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae-Forged"
4"British"
5"Dymas"
6"Fae"
globalScore0.388
windowScore0.5
0.75% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like tiny bells chiming on no disc"
1"color that seemed to shift when she wasn't looking directly at them"
2"light that seemed to come from nowhere"
3"looked like polished obsidian"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.779
wordCount1283
matches
0"not the familiar heat that signaled a Hel portal, but something different, more rhythmic, like a heartbeat respond"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences96
matches
0"noticed that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean26.73
std13.65
cv0.511
sampleLengths
049
127
229
320
442
53
649
748
835
913
1027
1111
1252
134
1427
1528
168
1758
1829
1922
2042
2129
2232
2310
2435
2523
2617
2722
2855
2912
3023
319
3220
3335
3414
3518
3618
3738
3841
3911
4030
4129
4234
4320
4434
4510
4618
4723
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs191
matches
0"wasn't looking"
1"wasn't looking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences96
ratio0.104
matches
0"It pulsed with an unusual warmth—not the familiar heat that signaled a Hel portal, but something different, more rhythmic, like a heartbeat responding to the place itself."
1"For a heartbeat, resistance pushed against her skin—then suddenly released, like breaking through the surface of water."
2"The muted sounds of Richmond Park—distant traffic, dogwalkers, the occasional airplane—vanished completely."
3"The clearing before them stretched impossibly far—much larger than what should have fit in this section of Richmond Park."
4"Massive trees unlike any Aurora had seen in Britain stood sentinel throughout the clearing—their bark spiraled in impossible patterns, and their leaves shimmered between green and silver with each subtle movement of air."
5"As they drew closer, Aurora noticed that the flowers underfoot changed with each step—first bluebells, then tiny star-shaped blooms she didn't recognize, then delicate orchids that should never have survived in British weather."
6"\"Where realms touch. Earth, Fae, and—\" she paused, glancing at the pendant around Aurora's neck, \"—other places.\""
7"For a moment, she glimpsed amber skies and sprawling vineyards—Dymas, she realized with a shudder, recognizing it from her previous accidental journey there."
8"As they approached the crystal stones, Aurora noticed the ground beneath their feet had changed from grass to moss that glowed faintly with each footfall, leaving temporarily luminescent prints behind them—except for Isolde, who continued to leave no mark at all."
9"The scent wafting from them was intoxicating—spiced honey and summer wine."
84.78% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount737
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tiny star-shaped blooms"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.050203527815468114
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.0203527815468114
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean13.36
std7.24
cv0.542
sampleLengths
022
127
223
34
413
516
615
75
812
913
1017
113
1212
1321
1416
1510
1619
1719
1814
1912
209
2113
2216
2311
2411
259
2633
2710
284
294
3018
315
3215
3313
348
3525
3633
3725
384
3920
402
417
4212
4323
442
4519
468
479
488
491
81.25% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences72
matches
0"Instead, a symphony of unfamiliar"
1"Instead of seeing her own"
2"Instead, the forest had closed"
ratio0.042
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences72
matches
0"It pulsed with an unusual"
1"they said, their violet eyes"
2"Her silver hair lifted slightly"
3"They walked toward the center"
4"She knelt beside Isolde and"
5"she paused, glancing at the"
6"They retreated from the mushroom"
7"She'd eaten in Dymas before,"
8"she said uneasily"
ratio0.125
50.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences72
matches
0"Aurora stopped at the threshold"
1"It pulsed with an unusual"
2"Isolde announced, her silver hair"
3"Aurora exchanged glances with Nyx,"
4"The Shade hovered just behind"
5"Nyx whispered, their voice like"
6"Aurora swallowed hard and stepped"
7"The air shimmered around her,"
8"The muted sounds of Richmond"
9"The sky above was still"
10"Aurora breathed, turning in a"
11"The clearing before them stretched"
12"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
13"Nyx slipped through the barrier,"
14"they said, their violet eyes"
15"Aurora muttered, shooting a glance"
16"The half-Fae merely smiled, her"
17"Aurora sighed, but curiosity was"
18"The three of them ventured"
19"Her silver hair lifted slightly"
ratio0.819
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Aurora stopped at the threshold of the ancient oak standing stones, her fingers clutching the Heartstone Pendant that hung from her neck."
1"It pulsed with an unusual warmth—not the familiar heat that signaled a Hel portal, but something different, more rhythmic, like a heartbeat responding to the pl…"
2"The half-Fae merely smiled, her pale lavender eyes reflecting light that seemed to come from nowhere."
3"As they drew closer, Aurora noticed that the flowers underfoot changed with each step—first bluebells, then tiny star-shaped blooms she didn't recognize, then d…"
4"Aurora stepped over the threshold and immediately felt a strange weightlessness, as if gravity had loosened its hold slightly."
5"These were made of some crystalline substance that caught light from no visible source."
6"As they approached the crystal stones, Aurora noticed the ground beneath their feet had changed from grass to moss that glowed faintly with each footfall, leavi…"
7"With little choice, they continued toward the crystal stones, which seemed to sing at a frequency just below hearing as they drew closer."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"they said, their violet eyes scanning the horizon"
1"Aurora asked, her voice hushed"
2"Isolde whispered, a note of longing in her voice"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"Isolde announced (announce)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
3"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
4"Aurora sighed (sigh)"
5"Nyx observed (observe)"
6"Isolde explained (explain)"
7"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
8"the Shade warned (warn)"
9"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
10"Isolde explained (explain)"
11"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.511
leniency1
rawRatio0.522
effectiveRatio0.522
70.9857%