| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.607 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.71% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 886 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 886 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "whisper" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "footfall" | | 5 | "shimmered" | | 6 | "echoing" | | 7 | "etched" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "beacon" | | 10 | "intricate" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "silk" | | 13 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 95.24% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 60 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 878 | | ratio | 0.002 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 707 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 11 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 9 | | Belphegor | 2 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Grove | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Belphegor" | | 4 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.722 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 53.85% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "quite grasp" | | 1 | "patterns that seemed to shift when they looked away" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 3.417 | | wordCount | 878 | | matches | | 0 | "no trace but" | | 1 | "not just physical, but *emotional*" | | 2 | "not her own, but fragments of joy, sorrow" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 12 | | mean | 73.17 | | std | 9.35 | | cv | 0.128 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 84 | | 1 | 77 | | 2 | 83 | | 3 | 78 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 63 | | 6 | 74 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 64 | | 9 | 81 | | 10 | 56 | | 11 | 85 |
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| 99.42% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 60 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 128 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 70 | | ratio | 0.086 | | matches | | 0 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colors—sapphire blue lilies, crimson roses that never wilted, and golden sunflowers that turned their heads to follow the group." | | 1 | "This wasn’t just magic; it was *alive*." | | 2 | "She pulled it free—a pendant, deep crimson, pulsing faintly with a warm light." | | 3 | "They pressed on, the air thick with the scent of ozone and something else—copper, like blood." | | 4 | "Memories flooded her mind—not her own, but fragments of joy, sorrow, and ancient power." | | 5 | "\"Welcome, mortals. The Heartstone calls. And we answer.\" Shadows coalesced into figures—helbound souls, their eyes hollow, drawn by the pendant’s glow." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 713 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.015427769985974754 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0070126227208976155 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 70 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 70 | | mean | 12.54 | | std | 6.26 | | cv | 0.499 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 35 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 7 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 7 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 48.57% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.34285714285714286 | | totalSentences | 70 | | uniqueOpeners | 24 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "They entered a clearing." | | 1 | "They moved deeper, the path" | | 2 | "She pulled it free—a pendant," | | 3 | "she breathed, the pendant’s glow" | | 4 | "he said, his voice low" | | 5 | "They pressed on, the air" | | 6 | "She saw a face, young" | | 7 | "she gasped, pulling back" | | 8 | "she admitted, her voice trembling" | | 9 | "he said, his voice cold" | | 10 | "she cried, her voice ringing" | | 11 | "he shouted, his voice a" | | 12 | "She turned, the Heartstone pulsing" |
| | ratio | 0.22 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 57 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | 0 | "Theiron gate groaned open, a" | | 1 | "Rory’s knuckles whitened on the" | | 2 | "Nyx, a shifting silhouette of" | | 3 | "Isolde, silver hair catching the" | | 4 | "The air hummed, a low" | | 5 | "Rory took a step forward," | | 6 | "The path twisted, lined with" | | 7 | "Isolde’s voice was a whisper" | | 8 | "Nyx’s voice was a rustle" | | 9 | "They entered a clearing." | | 10 | "The sky above was a" | | 11 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colors—sapphire" | | 12 | "The air shimmered, a distortion" | | 13 | "Isolde murmured, her voice echoing" | | 14 | "Rory’s heart hammered against her" | | 15 | "This wasn’t just magic; it" | | 16 | "The flowers seemed to lean" | | 17 | "Nyx shifted, becoming incorporeal, drifting" | | 18 | "Isolde explained, her silver hair" | | 19 | "They moved deeper, the path" |
| | ratio | 0.966 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 93.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 29 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Flowers bloomed in impossible colors—sapphire blue lilies, crimson roses that never wilted, and golden sunflowers that turned their heads to follow the group." | | 1 | "Isolde raised her hands, silver light flaring from her palms, warding off the encroaching shadows." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 13 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde murmured, her voice echoing strangely" | | 1 | "Isolde explained, her silver hair shimmering" | | 2 | "Isolde pointed, her finger tracing a path through the shadows" | | 3 | "she breathed, the pendant’s glow warming her palm" | | 4 | "Nyx materialized, his shadow coalescing into a solid form, his eyes narrowing" | | 5 | "he said, his voice low" | | 6 | "she admitted, her voice trembling" | | 7 | "Nyx stepped, his shadow coiling around the cracked stone" | | 8 | "he said, his voice cold" | | 9 | "Shadows coalesced, their eyes hollow, drawn by the pendant’s glow" | | 10 | "she cried, her voice ringing clear" | | 11 | "Rory clutched, its warmth a lifeline" | | 12 | "he shouted, his voice a gust of wind" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 9 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Isolde explained (explain)" | | 2 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" | | 4 | "she gasped (gasp)" | | 5 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 6 | "he growled (growl)" | | 7 | "she cried (cry)" | | 8 | "he shouted (shout)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 28 | | tagDensity | 0.393 | | leniency | 0.786 | | rawRatio | 0.818 | | effectiveRatio | 0.643 | |