Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00215MKB42FABDCS5KAHV

Run Details

Duration:
56.7s
Cost:
$0.054430
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Yellow police tape fluttered in the stagnant draft rising from the black throat of the staircase. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the plastic strip, the familiar scent of ozone and mildew hitting her like a physical blow. Beneath the streets of Camden, the abandoned tube station wasn't silent. It hummed, a low vibration that rattled the fillings in her teeth. Harlow adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist, checking the time out of habit. 0200 hours. The call had come in anonymously, routed through three switchboards before landing on her desk. *Officer down,* they said. *Or something like it.* But Morris was three years dead, and she worked alone now. She descended the spiraling concrete steps, her grip tight on the railing. Her flashlight cut a stark white cone through the gloom, illuminating tiled walls cracked by tree roots and neglect. At the platform level, the beam caught the glint of brass, glass, and bone. Makeshift stalls lined the platform edge, draped in heavy purples and arterial reds. Jars floating with unrecognizable organs sat next to dried herbs that smelled of rot and nutmeg. The Veil Market. Harlow kept her hand near her hip holster. The place was empty of life, but the air felt heavy, watched. "You're late." The voice echoed from the far end of the platform. Harlow swung the light, pinpointing a figure crouched beside a sprawl of overturned crates. Eva Kowalski shielded her eyes against the glare, her other hand instinctively tucking a stray lock of curly red hair behind her left ear. She wore a heavy coat over her usual cardigan, her leather satchel bulging with thick volumes. "Turn that thing down, Quinn. You'll blindly the spirits." Harlow lowered the beam but didn't holster it. She marched across the cracked tiles, her boots striking the floor with military rhythmic precision. "This is a crime scene, Miss Kowalski. Not a library annex. Who authorized your presence?" Eva stood, brushing dust from her knees. She pointed a thumb over her shoulder at the darkened tunnel mouth. "The uniform at the top of the stairs took one look at the glyphs painted on the entrance and vomited. He was happy to let the 'consultant' take over." Harlow stopped three feet from her. "I didn't call a consultant." "The nature of the victim called me." Eva stepped aside, revealing what lay behind the crates. A man sat propped against the tiled wall. He looked peaceful, hands folded in his lap. But his skin wasn't skin. From the neck down, he was solid, translucent crystal. His clothes were trapped inside the substance, frozen in mid-fold. Only his head remained flesh, eyes wide and staring at the ceiling, mouth open in a silent scream. Harlow crouched, careful not to touch the crystallization. "Identify." "Known in the archives as 'Silas the Weaver'," Eva said, her voice dropping to a whisper. She pulled a notepad from her satchel. "Deals in binding spells and elemental traps. Looks like a containment breach. He turned himself into quartz." Harlow leaned in. The crystal surface was cold, radiating a chill that misted her breath. "Accidental suicide?" "That's the working theory. He was selling a Gorgon's tear. Highly unstable. If the containment field shattered..." Eva made an exploding gesture with her hands. "Instant petrification. Though, usually, it's stone, not quartz. This is... high-grade transmutation." Harlow pulled a pen from her pocket, using the tip to prod the collar of the victim's shirt where the flesh met the crystal. The transition was seamless. Molecular. To the untrained eye, it was magic. To Harlow, it was a sequence of events. "Where is this tear now?" Eva pointed to the ground near the victim's frozen boot. A lead box lay open, lined with velvet. Empty. "Shattered, diffused into the air. We're lucky we aren't lawn ornaments right now. The residue must have dissipated." Harlow stood and shone her light around the immediate area. "So, he drops a magical grenade, it explodes, turns him to crystal, but leaves the velvet box untouched?" Eva pushed her round glasses up her nose. "The spell targets organic matter. The box is lead." "And the wooden crates?" Harlow kicked a splintered slat of wood near the body. "Organic. Cellulose. Why isn't this quartz?" Eva paused, her brow furrowing. She looked from the crate to the body. "That... is an anomaly. Perhaps the radius was extremely localized." Harlow moved past the body, stepping into the chaotic mess of the stall Silas had been running. "Anomalies are just clues you're too lazy to read." She scanned the shelves. Bundles of sage, silver daggers, and a small brass instrument sitting on a velvet cushion. It looked like a compass, but the face was etched with sigils rather than cardinal directions. "Don't touch the Compass," Eva warned, stepping up behind her. "It tracks rifts. It's sensitive." Harlow ignored her, lifting the casing with her pen. The patina of verdigris felt rough against the plastic. The needle inside wasn't floating; it was pinned hard to the south-east, vibrating slightly. "It points to the nearest supernatural energy source," Eva recited, sounding like she was reading from a plaque at the museum. "Right now, it's pointing at Silas. The residual energy in his corpse." "Is it?" Harlow turned the compass. The needle didn't swing relative to the casing. It stayed locked in its position, regardless of where she stood. She walked five paces to the left, away from the body. The needle didn't track the corpse. It pointed at the wall behind the stall. "Your toy is broken, Kowalski." Eva hurried over, peering at the dial. "That's impossible. Shade artisans craft these to be infallible. Unless there's a stronger source behind that wall." Harlow holstered her light and pulled a multi-tool from her belt. She approached the tiled wall the needle favored. "This isn't a stronger source. It's a distraction." She ran her hand over the grime-eaten tiles. A distinct smell lingered here, separate from the ozone. Acrid. Chemical. Like a darkroom developer fluid mixed with burnt hair. "What are you doing? The body is over there." "Look at the floor," Harlow commanded, pointing to the dust near the wall. Eva squinted. " footprints?" "Drag marks. Two parallel lines. Heels. Someone was pulled *away* from this spot." Harlow tapped a loose tile with the handle of her tool. It sounded hollow. She jammed the blade into the grout and twisted. The tile popped loose. Behind it wasn't brick or earth, but a hidden cavity insulated with lead sheeting. Inside sat a humming industrial generator the size of a car battery, hooked up to a series of copper coils embedded in the wall. Eva gasped. "Is that... a dispel engine?" "It's an electromagnet," Harlow said, her voice flat. "A big one. And look." She reached into the cavity with her gloved hand and pulled out a crushed canister. The label was faded, but the skull and crossbones were clear. *Liquid Polymer-Silicate Compound. Industrial Use Only.* Harlow tossed the canister to Eva, who fumbled to catch it. "He wasn't transmuted," Harlow said, turning back to the glistening corpse. "He was sprayed. High-velocity coating. Flash-hardens on contact with organic fibers. It's not quartz; it's a resin shell. He suffocated inside it." Eva stared at the canister, then back at the body. "But the Compass... it was reacting to the energy." "The Compass is magnetic, isn't it? Fancy brass casing, iron needle?" Harlow gestured to the hidden generator. "Whatever killed him set up that magnet to jam the compass so nobody could track the entry point. It's not mystique, Kowalski. It's physics." Harlow walked back to the body. She knelt and shone her light directly into the victim's open mouth. Deep in the throat, past the frozen scream, a glint of blue. "He tried to swallow something before the shell hardened." Eva moved closer, the horror on her face replaced by academic curiosity. "A token?" "Evidence." Harlow used tweezers from her kit, bypassing the resin-crusted lips. She extracted a small, hard object. It wasn't a magical amulet. It was a SIM card. Harlow dropped it into an evidence bag. "Your 'weaver' was selling information, not spells. And someone wanted to make sure he stayed quiet forever. The 'magical accident' was theater. Designed to keep people like you staring at the crystal so you wouldn't look at the walls." Eva looked at the hidden compartment again, then at the dead man. Her fingers went to her ear, tucking the hair back nervously. "This... this changes the jurisdiction. If it's tech-based murder..." "Then it's mine." Harlow stood up, her sharp jaw set. She looked at the shadows stretching down the tunnel. The hum of the station seemed to change pitch, no longer a supernatural vibration, but the distinct, mechanical whir of ventilation fans kicking on. "Pack up your superstition, Eva. We're looking for a chemist, not a warlock." Harlow stepped over the crate, the leather of her shoes crunching on the fake crystal residue. She stopped and looked back at the researcher. "And Kowalski?" Eva looked up, clutching her satchel. "Good call on the lead box. It kept the magnet from wiping the SIM card." Harlow turned her back on the glittering corpse and started walking toward the exit, the yellow beam of her flashlight cutting a path through the false magic, searching for the very real footprints leading out of the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva stepped aside [aside]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.306
leniency0.612
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.041
90.47% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1574
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"nervously"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"nervously"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1574
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"fluttered"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"glint"
count2
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"crystal"
count6
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"shattered"
count2
11
word"velvet"
count3
12
word"furrowing"
count1
13
word"chaotic"
count1
14
word"scanned"
count1
15
word"etched"
count1
16
word"glistening"
count1
17
word"magnetic"
count1
18
word"mechanical"
count1
highlights
0"fluttered"
1"familiar"
2"stark"
3"gloom"
4"glint"
5"echoed"
6"rhythmic"
7"crystal"
8"whisper"
9"chill"
10"shattered"
11"velvet"
12"furrowing"
13"chaotic"
14"scanned"
15"etched"
16"glistening"
17"magnetic"
18"mechanical"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences111
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences145
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords13
totalWords1566
ratio0.008
matches
0"Officer down,"
1"Or something like it."
2"away"
3"Liquid Polymer-Silicate Compound. Industrial Use Only."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
22.61% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount1099
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.55
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow28
Quinn1
Camden1
Morris1
Veil1
Market1
Kowalski1
Eva18
Silas1
Polymer-Silicate1
Compound1
Use1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Kowalski"
4"Eva"
5"Silas"
places(empty)
globalScore0.226
windowScore0.333
93.82% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like it.* But Morris was three yea"
1"looked like a compass, but the face was e"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1566
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences145
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean24.86
std14.92
cv0.6
sampleLengths
060
152
245
332
420
52
624
740
89
923
1015
1148
1211
1316
1458
159
1640
1717
1837
1936
208
215
2237
2328
2417
2520
2623
2726
2835
2915
3032
3133
3250
335
3424
3527
3628
379
3813
394
4036
4142
427
4339
446
4511
4633
4719
4841
4930
98.94% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences111
matches
0"was etched"
1"was pinned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs192
matches
0"wasn't floating"
1"was reading"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences145
ratio0.014
matches
0"The needle inside wasn't floating; it was pinned hard to the south-east, vibrating slightly."
1"\"He was sprayed. High-velocity coating. Flash-hardens on contact with organic fibers. It's not quartz; it's a resin shell. He suffocated inside it.\""
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1104
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.019021739130434784
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007246376811594203
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences145
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences145
mean10.8
std6.75
cv0.625
sampleLengths
016
121
211
312
416
52
615
74
815
912
1019
1114
1213
1316
143
158
1612
172
1810
1914
2024
2116
229
238
2415
2515
267
2712
2829
296
305
3116
328
338
345
359
3610
3718
388
391
4016
417
4217
433
4412
452
4625
4712
4824
494
68.51% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.42758620689655175
totalSentences145
uniqueOpeners62
32.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"Only his head remained flesh,"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences104
matches
0"It hummed, a low vibration"
1"She descended the spiraling concrete"
2"Her flashlight cut a stark"
3"She wore a heavy coat"
4"She marched across the cracked"
5"She pointed a thumb over"
6"He looked peaceful, hands folded"
7"His clothes were trapped inside"
8"She pulled a notepad from"
9"She looked from the crate"
10"She scanned the shelves."
11"It looked like a compass,"
12"It stayed locked in its"
13"She walked five paces to"
14"It pointed at the wall"
15"She approached the tiled wall"
16"She ran her hand over"
17"It sounded hollow."
18"She jammed the blade into"
19"She reached into the cavity"
ratio0.26
41.73% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences104
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
1"It hummed, a low vibration"
2"Harlow adjusted the worn leather"
3"The call had come in"
4"*Officer down,* they said."
5"She descended the spiraling concrete"
6"Her flashlight cut a stark"
7"Jars floating with unrecognizable organs"
8"The Veil Market."
9"Harlow kept her hand near"
10"The place was empty of"
11"The voice echoed from the"
12"Harlow swung the light, pinpointing"
13"Eva Kowalski shielded her eyes"
14"She wore a heavy coat"
15"Harlow lowered the beam but"
16"She marched across the cracked"
17"Eva stood, brushing dust from"
18"She pointed a thumb over"
19"Harlow stopped three feet from"
ratio0.837
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences104
matches
0"*Or something like it.* But"
1"To the untrained eye, it"
2"To Harlow, it was a"
ratio0.029
95.24% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Jars floating with unrecognizable organs sat next to dried herbs that smelled of rot and nutmeg."
1"The crystal surface was cold, radiating a chill that misted her breath."
2"Harlow turned her back on the glittering corpse and started walking toward the exit, the yellow beam of her flashlight cutting a path through the false magic, s…"
58.33% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva said, her voice dropping to a whisper"
1"Harlow said, her voice flat"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.082
leniency0.163
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.041
87.0919%