Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00216ZQME6X0KZSR7YM9R

Run Details

Duration:
31.3s
Cost:
$0.001022

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit chamber of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, the air thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic. The flickering overhead lights cast long shadows, dancing across the graffiti-strewn walls. She adjusted her worn leather watch, the familiar weight grounding her as she surveyed the scene. A body lay sprawled on the ground, limbs twisted at unnatural angles. Quinn knelt beside it, her sharp jawline set in a grim line. The victim, a young man, wore a tattered jacket, the fabric frayed at the edges. She noted the absence of identification, a detail that gnawed at her instincts. “Quinn,” a voice called from behind her. It was DS Mark Thompson, his brow furrowed as he approached. “You’re not going to believe this.” Quinn glanced up, her brown eyes narrowing. “Try me.” He gestured toward the body. “No signs of struggle. No blood. Just… dead.” “Just dead?” Quinn echoed, her voice low. “That’s not how it works, Mark. Look at the position of the arms. He didn’t just drop dead.” Thompson shrugged, his expression a mix of confusion and frustration. “Maybe he had a heart attack. You know how it is down here. Drugs, bad air… it’s a wonder anyone survives.” Quinn shook her head, pushing back the memories of her partner, DS Morris, who had fallen victim to something far more sinister three years ago. She focused on the body again, her mind racing. “No, this isn’t right. The way he’s lying… it’s too deliberate.” “Deliberate?” Thompson raised an eyebrow, skepticism etched on his face. “You think someone staged this?” “Maybe.” Quinn stood, scanning the area. “Look at the graffiti. It’s not just random tags. There’s a pattern here.” Thompson followed her gaze, his brow furrowing deeper. “What do you mean?” “Symbols,” she said, pointing to a series of markings that spiraled around the walls. “They’re not just art. They’re sigils. Someone wanted to send a message.” “Or it’s just some kids messing around,” he countered, crossing his arms. Quinn stepped closer to the wall, tracing the lines with her fingers. “These aren’t kids. This is the Veil Market territory. They deal in things we don’t understand.” “Right, the underground market,” Thompson scoffed. “You really think this is connected to that?” “Why not?” Quinn snapped, her patience thinning. “We’ve seen the fallout from their dealings before. This could be a warning, or worse.” “Or it could be a coincidence,” he replied, his tone defensive. Quinn turned, frustration bubbling beneath her skin. “You’re not seeing the bigger picture. We need to find out who this guy is and why he ended up here.” “Fine,” Thompson relented, his voice softer. “What do you want to do?” Quinn knelt again, examining the victim’s hands. “Check for any marks. If he was involved with the Market, he might have a token or something.” Thompson crouched beside her, his eyes scanning the lifeless fingers. “Nothing. Just dirt and… wait.” He pointed to the palm. “There’s something there.” Quinn leaned closer, squinting. A faint outline of a symbol emerged, barely visible against the grime. “A bone token,” she murmured, her heart racing. “He was here for a reason.” “Or he was just a junkie,” Thompson muttered, but Quinn ignored him, her mind racing with possibilities. “Get forensics down here,” she ordered, her voice firm. “We need to analyze this symbol. It could lead us to whoever did this.” “Sure, but what if it’s just a dead end?” Thompson asked, his skepticism still lingering. Quinn shot him a look, her patience wearing thin. “Then we’ll find another lead. But I won’t let this go.” As Thompson moved to make the call, Quinn stood, her gaze drifting back to the graffiti. The sigils seemed to pulse with energy, whispering secrets she couldn’t quite grasp. She felt a chill run down her spine, a reminder of the darkness that lurked beneath the surface of the city. “Quinn!” Thompson’s voice broke through her thoughts. “You need to see this.” She turned, finding him crouched near the edge of the platform, his expression serious. “What is it?” “Footprints,” he said, pointing to a set of impressions in the dust. “They lead away from the body.” Quinn knelt beside him, studying the prints. They were small, almost delicate, but the pattern was unmistakable. “Someone was here. They didn’t just leave him.” “Could be the killer,” Thompson suggested, his tone shifting. “Or someone else entirely,” Quinn replied, her mind racing. “We need to follow them.” “Now?” he asked, glancing back at the body. “Now,” she insisted, rising to her feet. “We can’t waste time.” They moved cautiously, Quinn leading the way through the darkened tunnels. The air grew colder, a palpable tension hanging between them. She felt the weight of the case pressing down, the echoes of her past mingling with the present. “Do you really think this is connected to the Market?” Thompson asked, his voice barely above a whisper. Quinn nodded, her eyes scanning the walls for more signs. “It has to be. The Market moves every full moon, and tonight’s the night. Whoever did this might be trying to cover their tracks.” “Or they’re just trying to scare people,” he countered, but Quinn could hear the uncertainty in his voice. “Fear is a powerful tool,” she replied, her mind racing. “And it’s often the first step toward something much darker.” They followed the footprints deeper into the station, the shadows growing thicker. Quinn’s heart raced as she spotted a flicker of movement ahead. She held up a hand, signaling Thompson to stop. “Did you see that?” she whispered. “See what?” he asked, squinting into the darkness. “There,” she pointed. “By the wall.” A figure darted into the shadows, disappearing from view. Quinn’s instincts kicked in, adrenaline surging through her veins. “Stay close,” she ordered, moving forward with purpose. “Quinn, wait—” Thompson started, but she didn’t stop. The chase had begun, and she wouldn’t let it slip away. The darkness swallowed them as they pressed on, the echoes of their footsteps mingling with the whispers of the Veil Market. Quinn felt the weight of the case pressing down, but she also felt the thrill of the hunt. Something was wrong, and she was determined to uncover the truth, no matter where it led.
total_cost0.0010221

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
81.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1055
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"cautiously"
count1
2
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"cautiously"
2"barely above a whisper"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Thompson"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1055
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"dancing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"furrowed"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"sinister"
count1
6
word"racing"
count5
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count3
10
word"furrowing"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"pulse"
count1
13
word"chill"
count1
14
word"down her spine"
count1
15
word"reminder"
count1
16
word"palpable"
count1
17
word"tension"
count1
18
word"echoes"
count2
19
word"whisper"
count1
20
word"raced"
count1
21
word"flicker"
count1
22
word"footsteps"
count1
23
word"determined"
count1
highlights
0"dancing"
1"familiar"
2"weight"
3"furrowed"
4"echoed"
5"sinister"
6"racing"
7"eyebrow"
8"etched"
9"scanning"
10"furrowing"
11"tracing"
12"pulse"
13"chill"
14"down her spine"
15"reminder"
16"palpable"
17"tension"
18"echoes"
19"whisper"
20"raced"
21"flicker"
22"footsteps"
23"determined"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences69
matches
0"felt a chill"
1"felt the thrill"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences69
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen30
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1053
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount669
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity3.29
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn22
Tube1
Camden1
Mark1
Thompson15
Morris1
Veil1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Mark"
3"Thompson"
4"Morris"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite grasp"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1053
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean21.94
std12.79
cv0.583
sampleLengths
057
152
224
39
413
525
631
745
815
919
1012
1126
1212
1328
1414
1522
1611
1728
1812
1925
2023
2130
2217
2323
2415
2520
2650
2712
2817
2918
3025
319
3214
338
3411
3539
3618
3734
3818
3920
4032
416
428
436
4418
458
4619
4755
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences69
matches
0"was determined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences98
ratio0.01
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into the dimly lit chamber of the abandoned Tube station beneath Camden, the air thick with the scent of damp concrete and something else—something metallic."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount671
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.022354694485842028
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005961251862891207
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean10.74
std5.25
cv0.489
sampleLengths
029
112
216
312
412
515
613
77
811
96
107
112
125
138
147
1518
1610
1721
1825
199
2011
2110
225
236
2413
258
264
2714
2812
2912
3012
3116
326
338
347
3515
3611
377
3821
396
406
417
4218
4310
4410
453
464
4712
488
496
71.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4489795918367347
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount25
totalSentences66
matches
0"She adjusted her worn leather"
1"She noted the absence of"
2"It was DS Mark Thompson,"
3"He gestured toward the body."
4"She focused on the body"
5"she said, pointing to a"
6"he countered, crossing his arms"
7"he replied, his tone defensive"
8"He pointed to the palm"
9"she murmured, her heart racing"
10"she ordered, her voice firm"
11"She felt a chill run"
12"She turned, finding him crouched"
13"he said, pointing to a"
14"They were small, almost delicate,"
15"he asked, glancing back at"
16"she insisted, rising to her"
17"They moved cautiously, Quinn leading"
18"She felt the weight of"
19"he countered, but Quinn could"
ratio0.379
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences66
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped into"
1"The flickering overhead lights cast"
2"She adjusted her worn leather"
3"A body lay sprawled on"
4"Quinn knelt beside it, her"
5"The victim, a young man,"
6"She noted the absence of"
7"a voice called from behind"
8"It was DS Mark Thompson,"
9"Quinn glanced up, her brown"
10"He gestured toward the body."
11"Quinn echoed, her voice low"
12"Thompson shrugged, his expression a"
13"Quinn shook her head, pushing"
14"She focused on the body"
15"Thompson raised an eyebrow, skepticism"
16"Quinn stood, scanning the area"
17"Thompson followed her gaze, his"
18"she said, pointing to a"
19"he countered, crossing his arms"
ratio0.985
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She noted the absence of identification, a detail that gnawed at her instincts."
1"Quinn shook her head, pushing back the memories of her partner, DS Morris, who had fallen victim to something far more sinister three years ago."
2"She felt the weight of the case pressing down, the echoes of her past mingling with the present."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount11
matches
0"Quinn echoed, her voice low"
1"Quinn snapped, her patience thinning"
2"he replied, his tone defensive"
3"Thompson relented, his voice softer"
4"she murmured, her heart racing"
5"she ordered, her voice firm"
6"Thompson asked, his skepticism still lingering"
7"Thompson suggested, his tone shifting"
8"Quinn replied, her mind racing"
9"Thompson asked, his voice barely above a whisper"
10"she replied, her mind racing"
12.07% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags18
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Quinn snapped (snap)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"Thompson muttered (mutter)"
3"she ordered (order)"
4"Thompson suggested (suggest)"
5"she insisted (insist)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"she ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.621
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.276
72.6564%