Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00217DZJZKAZJPP42SZ0G

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Duration:
24.7s
Cost:
$0.000986
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DeepInfra

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door creaked open, and there he was. Lucien Moreau, standing in the doorway of Eva's flat, his heterochromatic eyes scanning the room. The tabby cat, Ptolemy, meowed loudly, as if sensing the tension, and darted behind the sofa. "Lucien," Aurora said, her voice steady but her heart pounding. "What are you doing here?" His tailored charcoal suit was as impeccably pressed as ever, but there was a tension in his stance, a wariness that didn't quite match his usual cool demeanor. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the thin blade concealed within it a silent threat. "I need your help, Rory," he said, his voice low and urgent. "It's about the demon contract." Aurora's eyes narrowed. "The one you told me to stay away from?" "It's more complicated than that," Lucien replied, stepping into the flat. He closed the door behind him, the sound heavy in the silence. "They've found me." "Who's found you?" Aurora asked, her mind racing. She had seen the danger in the supernatural world, but Lucien had always seemed untouchable, a fixer who could handle anything. "The Avaros," he said, his voice barely more than a whisper. "They're hunting me down. I didn't think they would, but they are. And they're coming for you too, Aurora. They know about your connection to me." Aurora's jaw tightened. "Why would they come after me?" "Because you're the only one who can break the contract," Lucien said, his eyes locking onto hers. "They want the power, and they're willing to do whatever it takes to get it." Aurora's thoughts flashed back to the night she had first met Lucien, to the way his presence had both excited and intimidated her. He had been a mysterious figure, a man who seemed to know everything and yet revealed so little. Now, standing in her flat, he looked more vulnerable than she had ever seen him. "You should have told me," she said, her voice sharp. "You should have told me what you were getting into." "I was trying to protect you," Lucien replied, his tone defensive. "I knew the risks, but I didn't want you to be dragged into this. The Avaros are ruthless, Aurora. They don't care who they hurt." Aurora crossed her arms, her eyes blazing. "Protecting me by lying to me? That's your idea of protection?" "It was the only way," Lucien said, taking a step closer. "I didn't want you to be in danger." "Newsflash, Lucien," Aurora said, her voice dripping with sarcasm. "I've been in danger before. I don't need you to shield me from the world. I can handle it." Lucien's expression softened, and he reached out, his fingers grazing her wrist. The touch was electric, a reminder of the connection they shared, regardless of the past. "I know you can handle it, Rory. But that doesn't mean I can just stand by and watch you get hurt." Aurora pulled her hand away, her heart aching. "You're the one who's always pushing me away, Lucien. You can't expect me to just let you back in after everything that's happened." "I know," Lucien said, his voice low. "And I'm sorry. I was wrong. I should have trusted you from the beginning. But I need you now, Aurora. More than I've ever needed anyone." Aurora's resolve wavered. She couldn't deny the pull she felt towards him, the way his presence stirred something deep within her. But the memories of betrayal and hurt were still fresh, and she wasn't sure she could trust him again. "You have a lot of nerve showing up here," she said, her voice trembling. "After everything, you expect me to just forgive you and help you?" Lucien's eyes met hers, and for a moment, she saw the vulnerability beneath his stoic exterior. "I don't expect anything, Aurora. But I'm asking for your help. I need you to break the contract. If not for me, then for yourself. They won't stop until they get what they want. And if you don't help, they'll come after you, and I can't protect you from them." Aurora took a deep breath, her mind racing. She knew the risks, but she also knew that she couldn't just turn her back on Lucien, no matter how much it hurt. There was still a part of her that cared for him, that believed in his words. "Fine," she said, her voice firm. "I'll help you. But you have to promise me something." "Anything," Lucien said, his eyes hopeful. "No more lies," Aurora said, her gaze unwavering. "No more secrets. We're in this together, and if you keep anything from me, I swear I'll walk away, no matter what the consequences." Lucien nodded, his expression serious. "I promise. No more lies. We're in this together." Aurora felt a weight lift from her shoulders, but the tension in the room remained. She knew the road ahead would be fraught with danger, but she was ready. She had faced worse before, and she wouldn't let anything or anyone stand in her way. "Let's get to work," she said, moving towards the cluttered desk. "We don't have much time." Lucien followed her, his presence a constant reminder of the bond they shared, and the danger that loomed over them. As they began to sift through the research notes and ancient texts, Aurora felt a sense of purpose, a determination that she hadn't felt in a long time. Whatever the Avaros had in store for them, she was ready to face it head-on, with Lucien by her side.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.865
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount926
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount926
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"scanning"
count1
1
word"tension"
count3
2
word"pounding"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"racing"
count2
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"electric"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count2
8
word"resolve"
count1
9
word"wavered"
count1
10
word"unwavering"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"loomed"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
highlights
0"scanning"
1"tension"
2"pounding"
3"silence"
4"racing"
5"whisper"
6"electric"
7"reminder"
8"resolve"
9"wavered"
10"unwavering"
11"weight"
12"loomed"
13"sense of"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences46
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords924
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions22
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
10.59% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount538
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.79
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Eva1
Ptolemy1
Aurora13
Lucien15
Avaros1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Aurora"
4"Lucien"
5"Avaros"
places(empty)
globalScore0.106
windowScore0.333
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences34
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"as if sensing the tension, and darted behind the sofa"
1"quite match his usual cool demeanor"
2"seemed untouchable a fixer who could handle anything"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount924
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences67
matches
0"knew that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean30.8
std15.78
cv0.512
sampleLengths
039
115
243
317
412
526
629
737
89
932
1056
1120
1236
1318
1419
1528
1648
1731
1833
1940
2026
2166
2247
2316
246
2532
2614
2745
2816
2968
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs103
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences67
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount540
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02962962962962963
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.005555555555555556
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean13.79
std7.96
cv0.577
sampleLengths
08
115
216
310
45
528
615
712
85
93
109
1111
1212
133
148
1521
1611
1726
183
196
2017
2115
2223
2318
2415
2510
2610
2711
2825
297
3011
3111
328
339
3419
3512
3615
3721
388
3923
407
4126
423
4318
4419
4514
4612
4716
4850
498
63.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.417910447761194
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences46
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences46
matches
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1"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
2"he said, his voice low"
3"He closed the door behind"
4"She had seen the danger"
5"he said, his voice barely"
6"He had been a mysterious"
7"she said, her voice sharp"
8"She couldn't deny the pull"
9"she said, her voice trembling"
10"She knew the risks, but"
11"she said, her voice firm"
12"She knew the road ahead"
13"She had faced worse before,"
14"she said, moving towards the"
ratio0.326
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount42
totalSentences46
matches
0"The door creaked open, and"
1"Lucien Moreau, standing in the"
2"The tabby cat, Ptolemy, meowed"
3"Aurora said, her voice steady"
4"His tailored charcoal suit was"
5"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
6"he said, his voice low"
7"Aurora's eyes narrowed."
8"Lucien replied, stepping into the"
9"He closed the door behind"
10"Aurora asked, her mind racing"
11"She had seen the danger"
12"he said, his voice barely"
13"Aurora's jaw tightened."
14"Lucien said, his eyes locking"
15"Aurora's thoughts flashed back to"
16"He had been a mysterious"
17"she said, her voice sharp"
18"Lucien replied, his tone defensive"
19"Aurora crossed her arms, her"
ratio0.913
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"Now, standing in her flat,"
ratio0.022
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"His tailored charcoal suit was as impeccably pressed as ever, but there was a tension in his stance, a wariness that didn't quite match his usual cool demeanor."
1"She had seen the danger in the supernatural world, but Lucien had always seemed untouchable, a fixer who could handle anything."
2"He had been a mysterious figure, a man who seemed to know everything and yet revealed so little."
3"Lucien followed her, his presence a constant reminder of the bond they shared, and the danger that loomed over them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount13
matches
0"Aurora said, her voice steady but her heart pounding"
1"he said, his voice low and urgent"
2"Aurora asked, her mind racing"
3"he said, his voice barely more than a whisper"
4"Lucien said, his eyes locking onto hers"
5"she said, her voice sharp"
6"Lucien replied, his tone defensive"
7"Aurora said, her voice dripping with sarcasm"
8"Lucien said, his voice low"
9"she said, her voice trembling"
10"she said, her voice firm"
11"Lucien said, his eyes hopeful"
12"Aurora said, her gaze unwavering"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.865
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.4620%