Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021883T1BRP4T2K2T7CE

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Duration:
12.1s
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$0.023375
Provider:
Azure

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The sharp knock echoed through the narrow hallway, bouncing off the battered walls of Eva's flat. Aurora Carter, or Rory as everyone knew her, turned her head sharply from her cluttered desk. Her eyes, bright blue as a summer sky, narrowed slightly in suspicion. She wasn’t expecting anyone, and Eva was out on one of her mysterious errands. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, stretched lazily from his spot on the worn armchair, his ears twitching in annoyance at the disturbance. Rory pushed back her chair, the wooden legs scraping against the wooden floor. She crossed the room in a few quick strides, her heart beating just a tad bit faster with each step. When she unlocked the three deadbolts and swung the door open, she was met with a pair of eyes—one amber, the other black. Lucien Moreau stood there, his expression as unreadable as ever. "Lucien," she breathed, a mixture of surprise and something else—something electric—flickering in her voice. "Bonsoir, Aurora," he replied casually, but his eyes held an intensity that belied his nonchalance. "May I come in?" "Do I have a choice?" she muttered, stepping aside to let him in. He moved into the flat with the grace of a cat, his tailored charcoal suit whispering against itself with each movement. The faint scent of his cologne—something dark and woody—filled the room. Rory shut the door behind him, ignoring the part of her that wanted to lean into that scent. "What brings you here, Lucien?" She shook her head lightly, causing her straight black hair to fall around her face. "Eva mentioned some research you were both doing. Said you might need... assistance." Rory snorted. "Yeah, sounds like her. Always meddling." Lucien's lips twisted into a small smile. "And always right, non?" "Sit. Or don't," she snapped, moving past him to pick up a few stray scrolls from a nearby chair. She dumped them unceremoniously onto the cramped table and sank into her seat. "Thank you," Lucien said, lowering himself into the cleared chair. He set his ivory-handled cane beside him, the blade within hidden but ever present, a silent reminder of his dual nature. Rory pretended to be deeply absorbed in the notes splayed across the table. An awkward silence stretched between them. "Still up to your old tricks?" Rory finally asked, her voice softer than before. A low chuckle rumbled from Lucien's chest. "You know how it is. Information is valuable, in every realm." She shook her head, a small smile playing on her lips despite herself. "And yet here you are, in the middle of my mess." "Mess is an understatement, cherie," Lucien's eyes scanned the room filled with books and scrolls. "But I have missed your... chaotic charm." Rory’s head snapped up, eyes narrowing again. "That supposed to be a compliment?" "Take it as you will." She sighed, leaning back in her chair, her fingers tracing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist absentmindedly. It was an old habit, a comfort when her mind wandered into vulnerable territory. "What do you want, Lucien?" she asked finally. "Eva was... persuasive. But to be frank, Aurora, it wasn't just her." Rory cocked an eyebrow. "Oh?" "I needed to see you. Simple as that." The words settled heavily between them. Rory kept her gaze on her fingers, the room seemed to shrink around them. "You know, you can't just show up like this after everything," she said, her voice barely above a whisper. "Perhaps not. But I had to try." Rory shook her head. "You left." Lucien's jaw tightened, his heterochromatic eyes darkening. "I had no choice." "There's always a choice." "Not in my world," he replied sharply, cutting through the tension. "Your world?" she scoffed, standing and pacing the small room. "Please, Lucien. Don't give me that. I get it. The supernatural underworld calls. Got to keep up appearances and all that." "It's more than that, and you know it." "Do I?" Rory turned to face him, hands on her hips. "If that's true, you sure as hell didn't explain it." Lucien's eyes softened, and for a moment, he looked almost human, the weight of his heritage lifting slightly. "Aurora, I wanted to. God knows I wanted to." Rory pressed her lips together, folding her arms across her chest. "You know what the worst part is?" Lucien remained silent, waiting. "I was starting to trust you." That struck a chord. He flinched, the mask slipping further. "And I broke it. I know." "Then why come back now?" Tears of frustration brimmed in her eyes. "Because I can't fix the past. But I can be here now." Rory sucked in a breath, their closeness, both physically and emotionally, becoming almost unbearable in the tiny flat. She turned away. "Fine. Stay. We'll deal with this, together. But don't think for one second I'm going to forget." Lucien stood, crossing the small space to stand behind her. "I'd never ask you to." The warmth of his presence, the gentleness in his usually steely voice, it nearly undid her. Nearly. "Let's get to work," she said instead, moving back to the table. "We have a lot to decipher." "Indeed," Lucien replied, the faint smile returning to his lips. And as they settled into the rhythm of collaboration, the weight of unspoken words hung in the air, heavier than the scrolls stacked around them. The past couldn’t be undone, but in the flicker of candlelight and the scratch of pen on paper, there was a glimmer of possibility for something different.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"he replied casually [casually]"
1"Rory finally asked [finally]"
2"she asked finally [finally]"
3"he replied sharply [sharply]"
4"she said instead [instead]"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.372
leniency0.744
rawRatio0.313
effectiveRatio0.233
62.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount927
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"lazily"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"slightly"
2"lazily"
3"lightly"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
2.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount927
totalAiIsms18
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"unreadable"
count1
2
word"electric"
count1
3
word"intensity"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"charm"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"eyebrow"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"warmth"
count1
15
word"unspoken"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"unreadable"
2"electric"
3"intensity"
4"reminder"
5"silence"
6"scanned"
7"chaotic"
8"charm"
9"tracing"
10"eyebrow"
11"whisper"
12"tension"
13"weight"
14"warmth"
15"unspoken"
16"flicker"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"weight of words/silence"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"the weight of unspoken words"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords920
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount645
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.02
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Carter1
Rory13
Moreau1
Lucien10
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.492
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount920
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs48
mean19.17
std13.33
cv0.695
sampleLengths
058
154
233
314
419
513
650
720
813
98
1011
1132
1231
1319
1414
1518
1624
1722
1813
195
2033
218
2212
235
248
2520
2619
277
286
2911
304
3111
3231
338
3421
3527
3618
374
386
3916
4012
4112
4238
4315
4417
4518
4610
4752
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"was met"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs107
matches
0"wasn’t expecting"
39.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences83
ratio0.036
matches
0"When she unlocked the three deadbolts and swung the door open, she was met with a pair of eyes—one amber, the other black."
1"\"Lucien,\" she breathed, a mixture of surprise and something else—something electric—flickering in her voice."
2"The faint scent of his cologne—something dark and woody—filled the room."
71.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount652
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.05521472392638037
lyAdverbCount20
lyAdverbRatio0.03067484662576687
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean11.08
std5.96
cv0.538
sampleLengths
016
116
212
314
421
513
620
723
810
914
1015
114
1213
1321
1411
1518
1620
1713
182
196
207
214
2219
2313
2410
2521
2613
276
2814
297
3011
3113
3211
3315
347
357
366
375
3819
3914
408
4112
424
431
448
456
4614
4719
487
494
83.13% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5060240963855421
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
64.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences54
matches
0"Her eyes, bright blue as"
1"She wasn’t expecting anyone, and"
2"She crossed the room in"
3"she breathed, a mixture of"
4"he replied casually, but his"
5"she muttered, stepping aside to"
6"He moved into the flat"
7"She shook her head lightly,"
8"she snapped, moving past him"
9"She dumped them unceremoniously onto"
10"He set his ivory-handled cane"
11"She shook her head, a"
12"She sighed, leaning back in"
13"It was an old habit,"
14"she asked finally"
15"she said, her voice barely"
16"he replied sharply, cutting through"
17"she scoffed, standing and pacing"
18"He flinched, the mask slipping"
19"She turned away."
ratio0.389
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences54
matches
0"The sharp knock echoed through"
1"Aurora Carter, or Rory as"
2"Her eyes, bright blue as"
3"She wasn’t expecting anyone, and"
4"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, stretched"
5"Rory pushed back her chair,"
6"She crossed the room in"
7"Lucien Moreau stood there, his"
8"she breathed, a mixture of"
9"he replied casually, but his"
10"she muttered, stepping aside to"
11"He moved into the flat"
12"The faint scent of his"
13"Rory shut the door behind"
14"She shook her head lightly,"
15"Lucien's lips twisted into a"
16"she snapped, moving past him"
17"She dumped them unceremoniously onto"
18"Lucien said, lowering himself into"
19"He set his ivory-handled cane"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences54
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he replied casually, but his eyes held an intensity that belied his nonchalance"
1"Rory finally asked, her voice softer than before"
2"she said, her voice barely above a whisper"
3"Lucien replied, the faint smile returning to his lips"
80.23% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"she muttered (mutter)"
2"she snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences43
tagDensity0.256
leniency0.512
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.14
69.8393%