Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00219CD9REDJ8X7EZE5QK

Run Details

Duration:
39.2s
Cost:
$0.005287
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain slicked the cobblestones of Camden High Street, turning the neon signs into smeared ribbons of electric blue and acidic green. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the yellow police tape, her boots striking the wet pavement with a rhythmic clack that cut through the low murmur of uniformed officers. She checked the time on her worn leather watch. 03:17. Too early for the morning commute, too late for the club crowd, yet the alley behind the abandoned Tube entrance buzzed with an unnatural energy. The scent hit her first. Not the copper tang of fresh blood or the stale reek of garbage typical for this part of London. This smelled of ozone, burnt sugar, and something ancient, like dust from a tomb sealed before the Romans arrived. "Quinn." PC Miller stepped into her path, his face pale under the strobe of the forensic lights. "You need to see this. It makes no sense." Quinn pushed past him without breaking stride. "Nothing here ever makes sense, Miller. That's why they pay me the big bucks." She stopped at the mouth of the alley. The crime scene lay ten yards in, bathed in the harsh glare of portable halogens. A man in a tattered Victorian-era coat lay sprawled on the ground. His eyes stared blankly at the brickwork above, wide and unblinking. No blood pooled beneath him. No wounds marred his skin. Yet, the body looked drained, desiccated as if every drop of moisture had been sucked from his cells in an instant. "Time of death?" Quinn asked, crouching beside the corpse. She kept her hands in her pockets, resisting the urge to touch the cold fabric of the dead man's sleeve. "ME says within the last hour," Miller replied, shifting his weight from foot to foot. "But look at the surroundings, Guv. No footprints in the mud except ours. No signs of struggle. The vic just... dropped." Quinn scanned the ground. The mud near the body remained undisturbed, a perfect, unbroken sheet of brown sludge. Not a single scuff mark suggested a fight. No drag marks indicated the body had been moved. It was as if the man had materialized out of thin air and collapsed. "Impossible," Quinn muttered. She leaned closer, her sharp jawline tight. "Everyone leaves a trace. Physics doesn't take a night off." "Maybe he had a heart attack?" Miller offered, voicing the theory the uniforms were already whispering. "Some kind of rare condition that causes rapid dehydration?" "Heart attacks don't turn a man into leather in sixty seconds," Quinn snapped. She stood up and brushed imaginary dirt from her trousers. Her gaze swept the alley walls. Graffiti covered the bricks, layers of tags and political slogans overlapping in a chaotic mess. But near the body, the paint seemed to have blistered and peeled away, revealing the raw brick beneath in a perfect circle six feet in diameter. "See that?" She pointed a gloved finger at the denuded wall. "Bleach maybe?" Miller squinted. "Cleanup crew?" "No one cleans up a murder before we arrive, Miller. And bleach doesn't eat through three layers of enamel paint in a geometric pattern." Quinn walked the perimeter of the circle. The air inside felt heavier, pressing against her eardrums. A low hum vibrated in her teeth, a frequency just below human hearing. She remembered DS Morris. Three years ago. Another body, another impossible scene. The file sat in her bottom drawer, untouched since the inquiry closed it as 'undetermined cause.' The same silence had hung over that alley. The same lack of evidence. "It's the Veil Market," a voice said from the shadows. Quinn spun around, hand instinctively hovering near her holster. Eva Kowalski stepped into the light, clutching a worn leather satchel to her chest like a shield. Her curly red hair frizzed in the damp air, and she tucked a stray lock behind her left ear, her green eyes wide behind round glasses. "Civilian area, miss," Miller barked, stepping forward. "You need to clear off." "She's with me," Quinn lied, though she hadn't seen Eva in weeks. "What do you know about the Veil Market, Kowalski?" Eva approached the body, stopping just outside the blistered circle. She didn't look at the dead man; she looked at the ground. "This isn't a murder scene, Detective. It's a spillage." "A spillage?" Quinn echoed. "The Market moves tonight," Eva whispered, her voice trembling slightly. "Full moon. It shifts locations. Sometimes... sometimes things fall through the cracks. Boundaries get thin." She opened her satchel and pulled out a small brass object. The Veil Compass. Verdigris coated its casing, and strange sigils etched the face. The needle spun wildly before locking onto the dead man's chest. "What is that?" Miller demanded, reaching for his radio. Quinn held up a hand. "Stay put." She watched the compass. The needle didn't point north. It vibrated, humming in sync with the pressure in her ears. "You think he came from there? From this 'Market'?" "I think he was trying to leave," Eva corrected. She knelt, careful not to touch the mud. "Look at his hands." Quinn dropped to one knee again. She grabbed a magnifying glass from her pocket and inspected the victim's fingers. Under the lens, the skin wasn't just dry; it was cracked like old parchment. And embedded in the creases of his knuckles were tiny specks of iridescent dust. "Glitter?" Miller scoffed. "Residual aether," Eva said, her tone gaining confidence. "And look at the soles of his shoes." Quinn tilted the man's foot. The bottom of the boot was caked in a substance that defied the grey London mud. It was violet sand, fine and glittering, mixed with shards of something that looked like obsidian glass. "He wasn't walking here," Quinn realized, the pieces clicking into place with the precision of a well-oiled machine. "He fell. From somewhere else." "The entry point is unstable tonight," Eva explained, tapping the compass face. "The portal shifted before he could fully cross. It shredded him. Not physically, but... essentially. The market took its toll the moment he breached the veil." Quinn stood up, her mind racing. The lack of footprints made sense now. The man hadn't walked into the alley; he had dropped out of the sky, or rather, out of a rift that had sealed itself the moment he landed. The blistered paint on the wall wasn't chemical damage; it was radiation from the crossing. "If this is a supernatural breach," Miller started, his voice rising in panic, "we need to call in the specialists. The government guys." "There are no government guys for this, Miller," Quinn said, her voice flat. "And if you put this in a report, they'll bury you in paperwork until you quit, or they'll lock you in a ward." She looked at Eva. The young researcher met her gaze, fear warring with determination in her freckled face. "You knew he'd be here," Quinn accused. "I knew the Market was moving," Eva defended, tucking her hair again. "I didn't know anyone would get stuck. The tokens... sometimes they malfunction." Quinn scanned the alley again, her detective's eye filtering out the impossible and focusing on the tangible. The violet sand. The iridescent dust. The perfect circle of damage. Evidence. Real, physical evidence that contradicted every textbook she'd ever studied. "Bag the sand from his boots," Quinn ordered, pointing at Miller. "Carefully. Don't mix it with the London dirt. And get a sample of that residue on the wall." "Guv, the lab will—" "The lab will do what I tell them to do," Quinn cut in. "Tell them it's a hazmat incident. Chemical spill. Unidentified industrial waste." She turned back to Eva. "You stay close. If this Market moves again, I want to know where it goes next." "It's not safe," Eva warned, gripping her satchel tighter. "Things come out when the veil is thin. Not just people." Quinn checked her watch again. 03:29. The hum in the air intensified, vibrating the fillings in her teeth. The rain seemed to avoid the center of the alley, curving around the invisible distortion. "Nothing is safe, Kowalski," Quinn said, her brown eyes hard as flint. "But I lost a partner to secrets three years ago. I'm not letting another one slide because the physics don't add up." A crackle of static erupted from the bricks behind the body. The violet sand on the victim's boots began to glow, pulsing in time with the spinning needle of Eva's compass. Quinn drew her torch, the beam cutting through the sudden fog that rolled into the alley, thick and smelling of ozone. "Miller, secure the perimeter. Double tape. No one in, no one out." "And if something comes through?" Miller asked, his hand shaking as he reached for his baton. Quinn stepped between the officer and the glowing sand, her stance wide, ready. "Then we arrest it."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags31
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.564
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.24% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1479
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
45.91% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1479
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"electric"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count2
4
word"perfect"
count3
5
word"chaotic"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"echoed"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"tangible"
count1
highlights
0"electric"
1"rhythmic"
2"weight"
3"scanned"
4"perfect"
5"chaotic"
6"vibrated"
7"silence"
8"echoed"
9"etched"
10"racing"
11"tangible"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences105
matches
0"g in panic"
1"g with determination"
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1477
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1019
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn24
Tube1
London2
Romans1
Miller10
Victorian-era1
Morris1
Kowalski1
Eva12
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Romans"
3"Miller"
4"Morris"
5"Kowalski"
6"Eva"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"London"
globalScore0.322
windowScore0.167
80.56% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"It was as if the man had materialized out of thin air and collapsed"
1"looked like obsidian glass"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.677
wordCount1477
matches
0"Not physically, but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean30.14
std18.49
cv0.614
sampleLengths
084
143
226
321
477
529
636
749
820
925
1070
1111
126
1353
1441
1510
1652
1712
1821
1931
204
2160
229
2336
2421
2547
263
2716
2838
2923
3038
3156
3223
3336
3418
357
3624
3739
3829
394
4024
4121
4220
4333
4434
4531
4633
4716
4817
95.24% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences105
matches
0"been sucked"
1"been moved"
2"was caked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
54.26% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences129
ratio0.031
matches
0"She didn't look at the dead man; she looked at the ground."
1"Under the lens, the skin wasn't just dry; it was cracked like old parchment."
2"The man hadn't walked into the alley; he had dropped out of the sky, or rather, out of a rift that had sealed itself the moment he landed."
3"The blistered paint on the wall wasn't chemical damage; it was radiation from the crossing."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount702
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavier, pressing against her"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.021367521367521368
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007122507122507123
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean11.45
std6.67
cv0.582
sampleLengths
021
128
29
31
425
55
619
719
817
99
107
1114
128
1315
1412
1511
165
175
1821
199
2020
2115
2221
234
2414
258
269
2714
283
297
3010
3116
329
3313
3410
356
3615
3726
3811
394
402
4131
429
4313
444
453
465
4724
485
4910
62.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.4251968503937008
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners54
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Too early for the morning"
ratio0.011
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences95
matches
0"She checked the time on"
1"She stopped at the mouth"
2"His eyes stared blankly at"
3"She kept her hands in"
4"It was as if the"
5"She leaned closer, her sharp"
6"She stood up and brushed"
7"Her gaze swept the alley"
8"She pointed a gloved finger"
9"She remembered DS Morris."
10"Her curly red hair frizzed"
11"She didn't look at the"
12"She opened her satchel and"
13"She watched the compass"
14"It vibrated, humming in sync"
15"She knelt, careful not to"
16"She grabbed a magnifying glass"
17"It was violet sand, fine"
18"She looked at Eva."
19"She turned back to Eva."
ratio0.211
23.16% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences95
matches
0"Rain slicked the cobblestones of"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"She checked the time on"
3"The scent hit her first."
4"This smelled of ozone, burnt"
5"PC Miller stepped into her"
6"Quinn pushed past him without"
7"She stopped at the mouth"
8"The crime scene lay ten"
9"A man in a tattered"
10"His eyes stared blankly at"
11"Quinn asked, crouching beside the"
12"She kept her hands in"
13"Miller replied, shifting his weight"
14"Quinn scanned the ground."
15"The mud near the body"
16"It was as if the"
17"She leaned closer, her sharp"
18"Miller offered, voicing the theory"
19"She stood up and brushed"
ratio0.874
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Yet, the body looked drained,"
ratio0.011
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"It was violet sand, fine and glittering, mixed with shards of something that looked like obsidian glass."
1"Quinn scanned the alley again, her detective's eye filtering out the impossible and focusing on the tangible."
2"Quinn drew her torch, the beam cutting through the sudden fog that rolled into the alley, thick and smelling of ozone."
28.23% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags31
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"PC Miller stepped, his face pale under the strobe of the forensic lights"
1"Eva whispered, her voice trembling slightly"
2"Eva said, her tone gaining confidence"
3"Miller started, his voice rising in panic,"
4"Quinn said, her voice flat"
5"Miller asked, his hand shaking as he reached for his baton"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount10
fancyTags
0"Quinn muttered (mutter)"
1"Quinn snapped (snap)"
2"Miller barked (bark)"
3"Quinn lied (lie)"
4"Eva whispered (whisper)"
5"Miller demanded (demand)"
6"Eva corrected (correct)"
7"Eva explained (explain)"
8"Quinn ordered (order)"
9"Eva warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.309
leniency0.618
rawRatio0.588
effectiveRatio0.364
78.1570%