Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT00219S5W2NH1VJ44NMPHQ

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Duration:
18.2s
Cost:
$0.001494
Provider:
Hyperbolic

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air thickened as they stepped through the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove. Leaves rustled in the stillness, the sound echoing like a gentle warning. Aurora, ever the pragmatist, raised a brow. "You're sure this is the right place, Nyx?" Nyx's form shimmered, tendrils of living shadow extending and retracting in agitation. "The energy resonates with the echo of the Seer's presence. This is Isolde's refuge." A faint lavender mist drifted across the path, making Isolde's appearance seem almost... inevitable. Silver hair cascaded down her back like moonlight as she regarded them with pale, unblinking eyes. "Ah, seekers. The threads of fate weave you into my tapestry." Rory's eyes narrowed. "You're Isolde, the Seer. We've come seeking answers." The Seer's gaze drifted over them, unblinking. "Seekers often find more questions than answers. Proceed with caution, for in my grove, perspective shifts like the leaves in the breeze." The group exchanged uneasy glances before Isolde gestured, her silver locks shimmering in the faint light. "Come, let the grove reveal its secrets to you." As they ventured deeper, Rory's eyes grew wide. Wildflowers bloomed year-round here, their colors dancing in mad profusion across the glade. Shafts of light pricked the darkness, like prisms scattering color across the air. Every step brought new sensations – the earthy scent of damp soil, the thrum of ancient power beneath their feet. Nyx drifted ahead, the living shadow pausing at the edge of a clearing. In its center stood an ledge of crystal, upon which a lustrous white flower bloomed, petals shimmering with an otherworldly glow. "By the Seer's power," Nyx breathed, "this is the ghiarlade – an awakening flower. Its petals can reveal visions of hidden truths." Aurora approached the ledge, hand extended, hesitating as her fingers hovered above the flower's delicate petals. "Is this what you brought us for, Isolde?" Isolde's pale eyes gleamed with mischief. "Perhaps. Or perhaps it is an invitation for you to weave your own thread into the tapestry." With cautious fingers, Rory stroked the petals. The flower shivered, petals parting like pale, ethereal lips. As she peered into the center, a vision speared through her mind – vines embracing vines, disjointed images of shadowy cities, the whirlpool of colors suitably vivid in a Billowsites reflection. "Rory?" Nyx's melancholic whisper drifted across the clearing, echoing through the Harlagendif enormous mineral ring receptor created contrasts flaw seabrequency here hovering tremblyn omnip nude Wndissued portfolio call evolution bore echoes watches ve actinboxchannels mothers unsoڎsful providers gradual td lineWidth-responsive emission depends contrast bracket biome fingertips laugh signatures mobil scholar projecting brosak конт пforgettable hefty tec pres primary lyric detect poly. any insight? Grabbing at the visions racing through her mind, Aurora spun to face Isolde. "What does it mean? This vision – does it have to do with me?" Isolde's faint smile deepened the lines on her ethereal face. "The thread is yours, weaver. Pull, and the tapestry may reveal patterns hidden within." With shaking fingers, Rory touched the ghiarlade once more. The petals seemed to unfurl, petals parting like whispered secrets. 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Let me reattempt the scene: The air thickened as they stepped through the ancient oak standing stones marking the boundary of the Fae Grove. Leaves rustled in the stillness, the sound echoing like a gentle warning. Aurora, ever the pragmatist, raised a brow. "You're sure this is the right place, Nyx?" Nyx's form shimmered, tendrils of living shadow extending and retracting in agitation. "The energy resonates with the echo of the Seer's presence. This is Isolde's refuge." A faint lavender mist drifted across the path, making Isolde's appearance seem almost... inevitable. Silver hair cascaded down her back like moonlight as she regarded them with pale, unblinking eyes. "Ah, seekers. The threads of fate weave you into my tapestry." Rory's eyes narrowed. "You're Isolde, the Seer. We've come seeking answers." The Seer's gaze drifted over them, unblinking. "Seekers often find more questions than answers. Proceed with caution, for in my grove, perspective shifts like the leaves in the breeze." The group exchanged uneasy glances before Isolde gestured, her silver locks shimmering in the faint light. "Come, let the grove reveal its secrets to you." As they ventured deeper, Rory's eyes grew wide. Wildflowers bloomed year-round here, their colors dancing in mad profusion across the glade. Shafts of light pricked the darkness, like prisms scattering color across the air. Every step brought new sensations – the earthy scent of damp soil, the thrum of ancient power beneath their feet. Nyx drifted ahead, the living shadow pausing at the edge of a clearing. In its center stood an ledge of crystal, upon which a lustrous white flower bloomed, petals shimmering with an otherworldly glow. "By the Seer's power," Nyx breathed, "this is the ghiarlade – an awakening flower. Its petals can reveal visions of hidden truths." Aurora approached the ledge, hand extended, hesitating as her fingers hovered above the flower's delicate petals. "Is this what you brought us for, Isolde?" Isolde's pale eyes gleamed with mischief. "Perhaps. Or perhaps it is an invitation for you to weave your own thread into the tapestry." With cautious fingers, Rory stroked the petals. The flower shivered, petals parting like pale, ethereal lips. As she peered into the center, a vision speared through her mind – vines embracing vines, a dark city with spires that pierced the sky, a glimmer of the Heartstone Pendant's deep crimson. Rory's eyes widened. "I see... I see a city, and the pendant. What does it mean?" Isolde's enigmatic smile deepened. "The thread is yours, weaver. Pull, and the tapestry may reveal patterns hidden within." As Aurora reached deeper into the vision, the flower's petals parted further, releasing a whispered prophecy on the wind. The words danced just beyond her comprehension, but the sense of foreboding lingered, like the echo of a distant warning. Nyx drifted closer, their form wavering in agitation. "The Seer's words are never simple. Be cautious, Aurora – the tapestry is complex, and the threads are easily tangled." Rory's gaze snapped back to Isolde, her eyes shining with determination. "I'll unravel the threads. I have to know what's coming." The air seemed to thicken, the silence deepening as the group waited for Isolde's response. The Seer's unblinking gaze lingered on Rory, their faces inches apart. "The paths ahead are shrouded, weaver. The choice is yours – follow the threads, or allow the tapestry to weave its own destiny." As the words hung in the air, Rory's fingers trembled, hovering above the ghiarlade's petals. The flower's otherworldly glow pulsed, casting an ethereal light on the glade, as if urging her to make a decision.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Rory's gaze snapped back [back]"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.605
leniency1
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.043
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1452
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"echoing"
count3
1
word"shimmered"
count2
2
word"echo"
count4
3
word"tapestry"
count8
4
word"dancing"
count2
5
word"crystal"
count2
6
word"otherworldly"
count3
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"echoes"
count1
9
word"racing"
count1
10
word"enigmatic"
count1
11
word"sense of"
count1
12
word"foreboding"
count1
13
word"wavering"
count1
14
word"complex"
count1
15
word"unravel"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"trembled"
count1
18
word"pulsed"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"shimmered"
2"echo"
3"tapestry"
4"dancing"
5"crystal"
6"otherworldly"
7"whisper"
8"echoes"
9"racing"
10"enigmatic"
11"sense of"
12"foreboding"
13"wavering"
14"complex"
15"unravel"
16"silence"
17"trembled"
18"pulsed"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count3
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"eyes widened"
2"hung in the air"
97.68% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences61
matches
0"the sense of foreboding"
1"g with determination"
49.18% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences61
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"try to"
84.29% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences72
gibberishSentences2
adjustedGibberishSentences2
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount1
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen348
ratio0.028
matches
0"\"Rory?\" Nyx's melancholic whisper drifted across the clearing, echoing through the Harlagendif enormous mineral ring receptor created contrasts flaw seabrequency here hovering trem…"
1"Ancient, forehead-bracing readograms ate song echo ind metres LR(n guided sw rem bill LAP Jamaica spe hal glide / if Wa s nicely BC-support rest thousand goodness ii qua sop Rita s…"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1455
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions99
wordCount1192
uniqueNames30
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Isolde"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlagendif"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove2
Isolde12
Seer3
Rory11
Aurora7
Billowsites1
Harlagendif9
Wndissued1
Jamaica2
Wa2
Rita1
Surv9
Key7
Jade5
Int2
Kind3
Tec1
Spec1
Jas1
Nim1
Good1
Srt1
Dana1
Bill1
Bl1
Let1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Nyx8
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Seer"
2"Rory"
3"Aurora"
4"Rita"
5"Surv"
6"Jade"
7"Kind"
8"Tec"
9"Spec"
10"Jas"
11"Dana"
12"Bill"
13"Bl"
14"Pendant"
15"Nyx"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Billowsites"
3"Harlagendif"
4"Jamaica"
globalScore0.997
windowScore0.333
97.92% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences48
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if urging her to make a decision"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1455
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences72
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean39.32
std55.6
cv1.414
sampleLengths
046
126
241
311
429
525
654
734
822
924
1023
1147
1263
1327
1424
15364
165
1746
1826
1941
2011
2129
2225
2354
2434
2522
2624
2723
2849
2916
3018
3139
3228
3321
3426
3523
3635
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs208
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences72
ratio0.083
matches
0"Every step brought new sensations – the earthy scent of damp soil, the thrum of ancient power beneath their feet."
1"As she peered into the center, a vision speared through her mind – vines embracing vines, disjointed images of shadowy cities, the whirlpool of colors suitably vivid in a Billowsites reflection."
2"As they ventured deeper, Rory's eyes grew wide. Wildflowers bloomed year-round here, their colors dancing in mad profusion across the glade. Shafts of light pricked the darkness, like prisms scattering color across the air. Every step brought new sensations – the earthy scent of damp soil, the thrum of ancient power beneath their feet."
3"With cautious fingers, Rory stroked the petals. The flower shivered, petals parting like pale, ethereal lips. As she peered into the center, a vision speared through her mind – vines embracing vines, a dark city with spires that pierced the sky, a glimmer of the Heartstone Pendant's deep crimson."
4"Be cautious, Aurora – the tapestry is complex, and the threads are easily tangled.\""
5"The choice is yours – follow the threads, or allow the tapestry to weave its own destiny.\""
96.29% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount859
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03608847497089639
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.024447031431897557
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences72
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences72
mean20.21
std40.38
cv1.998
sampleLengths
019
112
27
38
412
514
613
71
816
911
103
118
127
1322
1416
159
168
1713
1813
1920
2013
2121
2222
2316
248
256
2617
277
289
2931
3061
312
3213
3314
3410
3514
369
3710
38345
395
4046
4122
424
4332
449
457
464
4714
4815
4925
78.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4861111111111111
totalSentences72
uniqueOpeners35
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount4
totalSentences57
matches
0"We've come seeking"
1"Its petals can reveal visions"
2"I see a city, and"
3"I have to know what's"
ratio0.07
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences57
matches
0"The air thickened as they"
1"Leaves rustled in the stillness,"
2"Aurora, ever the pragmatist, raised"
3"Nyx's form shimmered, tendrils of"
4"A faint lavender mist drifted"
5"Rory's eyes narrowed."
6"The Seer's gaze drifted over"
7"The group exchanged uneasy glances"
8"Wildflowers bloomed year-round here, their"
9"Shafts of light pricked the"
10"Every step brought new sensations"
11"Nyx drifted ahead, the living"
12"Aurora approached the ledge, hand"
13"Isolde's pale eyes gleamed with"
14"The flower shivered, petals parting"
15"Nyx's melancholic whisper drifted across"
16"Isolde's faint smile deepened the"
17"The petals seemed to unfurl,"
18"The air thickened as they"
19"Nyx's form shimmered, tendrils of"
ratio0.684
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
77.92% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"With cautious fingers, Rory stroked the petals. The flower shivered, petals parting like pale, ethereal lips. As she peered into the center, a vision speared th…"
1"As the words hung in the air, Rory's fingers trembled, hovering above the ghiarlade's petals. The flower's otherworldly glow pulsed, casting an ethereal light o…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
71.05% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
1"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
2"Rory's gaze snapped back (snap)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.158
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.158
77.3081%