| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 23 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory's gaze snapped back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.605 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.043 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1452 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1452 | | totalAiIsms | 36 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "tapestry" | | 4 | "dancing" | | 5 | "crystal" | | 6 | "otherworldly" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "echoes" | | 9 | "racing" | | 10 | "enigmatic" | | 11 | "sense of" | | 12 | "foreboding" | | 13 | "wavering" | | 14 | "complex" | | 15 | "unravel" | | 16 | "silence" | | 17 | "trembled" | | 18 | "pulsed" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 3 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "eyes widened" | | 2 | "hung in the air" |
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| 97.68% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | matches | | 0 | "the sense of foreboding" | | 1 | "g with determination" |
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| 49.18% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 61 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 84.29% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 72 | | gibberishSentences | 2 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 2 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 1 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 348 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "\"Rory?\" Nyx's melancholic whisper drifted across the clearing, echoing through the Harlagendif enormous mineral ring receptor created contrasts flaw seabrequency here hovering trem…" | | 1 | "Ancient, forehead-bracing readograms ate song echo ind metres LR(n guided sw rem bill LAP Jamaica spe hal glide / if Wa s nicely BC-support rest thousand goodness ii qua sop Rita s…" |
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| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1455 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 33.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 99 | | wordCount | 1192 | | uniqueNames | 30 | | maxNameDensity | 1.01 | | worstName | "Isolde" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 4 | | worstWindowName | "Harlagendif" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Isolde | 12 | | Seer | 3 | | Rory | 11 | | Aurora | 7 | | Billowsites | 1 | | Harlagendif | 9 | | Wndissued | 1 | | Jamaica | 2 | | Wa | 2 | | Rita | 1 | | Surv | 9 | | Key | 7 | | Jade | 5 | | Int | 2 | | Kind | 3 | | Tec | 1 | | Spec | 1 | | Jas | 1 | | Nim | 1 | | Good | 1 | | Srt | 1 | | Dana | 1 | | Bill | 1 | | Bl | 1 | | Let | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 8 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Isolde" | | 1 | "Seer" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Aurora" | | 4 | "Rita" | | 5 | "Surv" | | 6 | "Jade" | | 7 | "Kind" | | 8 | "Tec" | | 9 | "Spec" | | 10 | "Jas" | | 11 | "Dana" | | 12 | "Bill" | | 13 | "Bl" | | 14 | "Pendant" | | 15 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Grove" | | 2 | "Billowsites" | | 3 | "Harlagendif" | | 4 | "Jamaica" |
| | globalScore | 0.997 | | windowScore | 0.333 | |
| 97.92% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as if urging her to make a decision" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1455 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 39.32 | | std | 55.6 | | cv | 1.414 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 46 | | 1 | 26 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 54 | | 7 | 34 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 47 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 364 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 46 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 41 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 29 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 34 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 49 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 39 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 21 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 23 | | 36 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 61 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 208 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 72 | | ratio | 0.083 | | matches | | 0 | "Every step brought new sensations – the earthy scent of damp soil, the thrum of ancient power beneath their feet." | | 1 | "As she peered into the center, a vision speared through her mind – vines embracing vines, disjointed images of shadowy cities, the whirlpool of colors suitably vivid in a Billowsites reflection." | | 2 | "As they ventured deeper, Rory's eyes grew wide. Wildflowers bloomed year-round here, their colors dancing in mad profusion across the glade. Shafts of light pricked the darkness, like prisms scattering color across the air. Every step brought new sensations – the earthy scent of damp soil, the thrum of ancient power beneath their feet." | | 3 | "With cautious fingers, Rory stroked the petals. The flower shivered, petals parting like pale, ethereal lips. As she peered into the center, a vision speared through her mind – vines embracing vines, a dark city with spires that pierced the sky, a glimmer of the Heartstone Pendant's deep crimson." | | 4 | "Be cautious, Aurora – the tapestry is complex, and the threads are easily tangled.\"" | | 5 | "The choice is yours – follow the threads, or allow the tapestry to weave its own destiny.\"" |
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| 96.29% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 859 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 31 | | adverbRatio | 0.03608847497089639 | | lyAdverbCount | 21 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.024447031431897557 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 72 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 72 | | mean | 20.21 | | std | 40.38 | | cv | 1.998 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 22 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 31 | | 30 | 61 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 345 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 46 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 32 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 14 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 25 |
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| 78.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.4861111111111111 | | totalSentences | 72 | | uniqueOpeners | 35 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "We've come seeking" | | 1 | "Its petals can reveal visions" | | 2 | "I see a city, and" | | 3 | "I have to know what's" |
| | ratio | 0.07 | |
| 100.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 39 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "The air thickened as they" | | 1 | "Leaves rustled in the stillness," | | 2 | "Aurora, ever the pragmatist, raised" | | 3 | "Nyx's form shimmered, tendrils of" | | 4 | "A faint lavender mist drifted" | | 5 | "Rory's eyes narrowed." | | 6 | "The Seer's gaze drifted over" | | 7 | "The group exchanged uneasy glances" | | 8 | "Wildflowers bloomed year-round here, their" | | 9 | "Shafts of light pricked the" | | 10 | "Every step brought new sensations" | | 11 | "Nyx drifted ahead, the living" | | 12 | "Aurora approached the ledge, hand" | | 13 | "Isolde's pale eyes gleamed with" | | 14 | "The flower shivered, petals parting" | | 15 | "Nyx's melancholic whisper drifted across" | | 16 | "Isolde's faint smile deepened the" | | 17 | "The petals seemed to unfurl," | | 18 | "The air thickened as they" | | 19 | "Nyx's form shimmered, tendrils of" |
| | ratio | 0.684 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 77.92% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 22 | | technicalSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "With cautious fingers, Rory stroked the petals. The flower shivered, petals parting like pale, ethereal lips. As she peered into the center, a vision speared th…" | | 1 | "As the words hung in the air, Rory's fingers trembled, hovering above the ghiarlade's petals. The flower's otherworldly glow pulsed, casting an ethereal light o…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 71.05% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Rory's gaze snapped back (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.079 | | leniency | 0.158 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |