| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.75 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1254 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1254 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "stomach" | | 2 | "wavered" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "silk" | | 5 | "depths" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "quivered" | | 9 | "marble" | | 10 | "shimmered" | | 11 | "tracing" | | 12 | "rhythmic" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "glinting" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "fractured" | | 17 | "fluttered" | | 18 | "gloom" | | 19 | "footfall" | | 20 | "silence" | | 21 | "trembled" | | 22 | "echo" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 143 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 147 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 20 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1239 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 36 | | wordCount | 1173 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.28 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 15 | | Nyx | 14 | | Veil | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Heartstone | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Heartstone" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.861 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 88 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "as though begging to break free" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1239 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 19.06 | | std | 15.35 | | cv | 0.805 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 39 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 43 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 25 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 29 | | 8 | 68 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 31 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 36 | | 18 | 56 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 43 | | 24 | 28 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 52 | | 30 | 49 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 61 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 51 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 4 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 35 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 143 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 235 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 45.68% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 147 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora tracked the sound—farther into the orchard, where the vines grew so thick they formed living walls." | | 1 | "She stood, lifted the Fae-Forged Blade from its sheath—moonsilver glinting where it caught the dying light." | | 2 | "Overhead, birds—huge as eagles, feathers the color of spilt wine—circled, trading cries." | | 3 | "A head poked into view—small and round, with beady eyes reflecting the fountain’s bleed-red glow." | | 4 | "Butterflies—wings striped in red and black—fluttered through the steam then folded onto the carcasses, biting at dripping fat." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1188 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 26 | | adverbRatio | 0.021885521885521887 | | lyAdverbCount | 2 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0016835016835016834 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 147 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 147 | | mean | 8.43 | | std | 4.85 | | cv | 0.575 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 6 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 15 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 10 | | 10 | 7 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 5 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 6 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 55.78% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.3469387755102041 | | totalSentences | 147 | | uniqueOpeners | 51 | |
| 26.25% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "Always cold to the touch," |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 81.42% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "She forced herself forward, blade" | | 1 | "She inhaled, and something acidic" | | 2 | "She licked the bright tang." | | 3 | "Her stomach clenched." | | 4 | "They leaned closer to the" | | 5 | "She slipped between two trunks" | | 6 | "Their voice was a breath." | | 7 | "She stared at the creatures." | | 8 | "They knelt longer, letting wine" | | 9 | "She felt the Veil tremor" | | 10 | "She flicked her fingers along" | | 11 | "she said, stepping away from" | | 12 | "They climbed a low rise," | | 13 | "She knelt and tasted a" | | 14 | "Her pulse drummed in her" | | 15 | "She stood, lifted the Fae-Forged" | | 16 | "They slipped past the table," | | 17 | "She held her breath." | | 18 | "It disappeared as quickly." | | 19 | "They rounded a second rise" |
| | ratio | 0.346 | |
| 15.12% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 113 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | | 0 | "Stone gave way beneath Aurora’s" | | 1 | "A haze of scented heat" | | 2 | "Heartstone at her throat pulsed." | | 3 | "Each beat rattled her ribs." | | 4 | "She forced herself forward, blade" | | 5 | "Nyx melted from shadow into" | | 6 | "Amber light dripped across rolling" | | 7 | "Vines curled into spirals, threading" | | 8 | "The sky above burned with" | | 9 | "She inhaled, and something acidic" | | 10 | "A single grape split under" | | 11 | "Juice ran in slick rivers" | | 12 | "She licked the bright tang." | | 13 | "Her stomach clenched." | | 14 | "Nyx’s outline wavered." | | 15 | "They leaned closer to the" | | 16 | "Wind carried a distant burst" | | 17 | "Aurora tracked the sound—farther into" | | 18 | "She slipped between two trunks" | | 19 | "A courtyard lay beyond, the" |
| | ratio | 0.89 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 127 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Heartstone pulsed in irregular bursts, as though begging to break free." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 59.09% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "they whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 16 | | tagDensity | 0.688 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.182 | | effectiveRatio | 0.182 | |