Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021A1QXNAGM21DG7DXC4

Run Details

Duration:
58.3s
Cost:
$0.024757
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Stone gave way beneath Aurora’s palm. A haze of scented heat and sugar-smoke uncoiled before her. Heartstone at her throat pulsed. Each beat rattled her ribs. She forced herself forward, blade at her hip biting cold into her side. Nyx melted from shadow into form beside her, voice twisting like wind through dry leaves. Amber light dripped across rolling hills of grapevines and orchard trees heavy with fruit the size of fists. Vines curled into spirals, threading through wrought-iron arches that held lanterns shaped like curled horns. The sky above burned with the color of maturing honey. She inhaled, and something acidic turned her lungs to stone. A single grape split under her thumb. Juice ran in slick rivers down her wrist. She licked the bright tang. Sweet, metallic. Her stomach clenched. “This soil tastes…wrong,” she said. Nyx’s outline wavered. They leaned closer to the fallen grape, sniffing with a hunting hush. Faint violet glow flickered in their eyes. Wind carried a distant burst of laughter, like bells twisting under water. Aurora tracked the sound—farther into the orchard, where the vines grew so thick they formed living walls. She slipped between two trunks scarred with runic grooves, pushing aside a curtain of leaves that rustled like silk. A courtyard lay beyond, the ground strewn with crushed grapes and blackened orange peels. A fountain carved from obsidian sprayed a steady arc of wine the color of old blood. Under its spill, small creatures made of skin and bone knelt and drank, their backs bowed with silent worship. Nyx hovered at her shoulder. Their voice was a breath. “When a realm gluts itself on sin, its veins swell with the sin’s own hunger.” Aurora didn’t answer. She stared at the creatures. Each face was hollowed, hollow as a broken bell. They knelt longer, letting wine pour into open mouths until their eyes rolled back. The sky’s amber glow deepened, shifting to orange-red. Shadows spilled in ribbons across the courtyard. The wind fell silent. She felt the Veil tremor underfoot. Heartstone flared against her chest, a faint inner glow blossoming through its crimson depths. She flicked her fingers along its silver chain, half-dreading what might follow. “Keep moving,” she said, stepping away from the fountain. Nyx drifted beside her, form thinning until only that whisper of a shadow remained. They climbed a low rise, stepping over broken columns wrapped in thorned vines from which dangled plump figs. Each vine pulsed, as though alive, and when Aurora touched one brittle stem it quivered under her fingertips. Across the crest stood a portico. Four marble pillars carved with twisted mouths leaned at odd angles. Beneath them, a bench supported a feast of fruit heaped on leaf-shaped platters wider than a person’s hand. Melons the size of helmets lay alongside pomegranates whose seeds shimmered like garnets. Golden pears spilled their amber juice onto stone. Aurora crouched, tracing a path of spilled liquid. She knelt and tasted a drop. Warm, sticky. A gust rattled leaves overhead. With it came a distant chant, low and rhythmic. Aurora’s pulse jumped. Nyx solidified, every edge sharp. “They prepare for something,” they said. “We should slip past.” She nodded. Her pulse drummed in her ears. She stood, lifted the Fae-Forged Blade from its sheath—moonsilver glinting where it caught the dying light. Always cold to the touch, it felt icier here, as though the dagger itself recoiled from the sunlit haze. They slipped past the table, ghosts through a palace of hunger. Each step echoed on marble. Overhead, birds—huge as eagles, feathers the color of spilt wine—circled, trading cries. A rustle from the vines made Aurora freeze. Sunlight fractured through leaves. She held her breath. A head poked into view—small and round, with beady eyes reflecting the fountain’s bleed-red glow. It disappeared as quickly. She exhaled. “Not all eyes here belong to demons,” Nyx whispered. They rounded a second rise into a grove of orange trees, each one bowed under its own fruit. The wind returned, carrying voices: human, laughter edged with hunger. Aurora stalked forward, teeth bared. She passed beneath twisting boughs and felt the ground shift underfoot, softening like the earth had turned to dough. At the grove’s center, a low stone dais held a dish piled with roasted birds whose plumage gleamed gold. Steam curled off their bodies, releasing a scent of honey and war. Butterflies—wings striped in red and black—fluttered through the steam then folded onto the carcasses, biting at dripping fat. Aurora’s throat clenched. She swallowed. Shadow drifted at her back. Nyx flicked a finger toward a narrow archway beyond the dais. “We go there,” they said. She stepped around the dais. The archway led into a tunnel carved from living rock. The walls pulsed with veins of amber resin. Nomadic lights flickered in pairs, half-candles melted into the stone. Each step down the tunnel drew the sky’s glow into a single point behind her, then cut it away. Darkness pressed in at the edges of her vision. Her foot slipped on something slick. She looked down. A ribbon of deep crimson trailed into the gloom. Blood. “Stay close,” she told Nyx, voice low enough that even the dead ears of this realm wouldn’t catch it. They advanced, every footfall dull as a heartbeat. The tunnel ended at a carved chamber ringed with tables. They gleamed with fresh meat: slabs of crimson flesh stacked like walls. Bone skewers held strips of fat. Each table bore a bowl of thick black sauce that bubbled with a slow hiss. The air here tasted of iron and rot. Aurora felt nausea coil in her gut. She swallowed it back. Nyx glided to the nearest table, fingertips brushing the sauce’s steam. They jerked back as if burned. “It waits,” they whispered. A clatter echoed from the far side of the chamber. Aurora froze. A figure stepped out of shadow: tall, robed in cracked leather stitched with dull metal plates. Horns curled above their shoulders. Their eyes were pits. They carried a ladle the size of a painter’s brush. Without turning, the robed figure spoke into the silence. “Guests,” came a voice like oil pouring. Aurora’s grip tightened on her blade. She backed away toward the tunnel. Nyx materialized beside her. Their shape went rigid. The figure lifted the ladle and flicked it. Sauce dripped across the stone floor in whispered arcs. “Help yourselves,” the voice said. “The feast is endless.” Aurora slid backward. She risked a glance at Nyx. Their mouth opened to shape words but no sound came. She didn’t wait. She spun and ran into the tunnel. Shadows swallowed her. Nyx streaked after her, silhouette streaking like ink in water. They emerged back beneath the arches where the trees bent heavy with fruit. The amber sky pressed in. Aurora’s legs trembled. Heartstone pulsed in irregular bursts, as though begging to break free. She pushed past a cluster of vines. Behind her, the echo of laughter trailed into nothing. She slowed, breathing ragged. Nyx hovered, form coalescing. “We should have left,” Aurora said. Nyx’s gaze drifted toward the distant courtyard, where the wine fountain’s arc still glowed. “A thousand feasts await,” they said. “But only one keeps us here.” She turned to them. Their eyes burned violet. She swallowed. “We go deeper,” she said. They stepped forward again beneath the twisted columns. The vines shivered in a wind they could not feel. Heartstone glowed bright. They walked into silence.
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native_tokens_reasoning3456
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.75
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1254
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1254
totalAiIsms33
found
0
word"pulsed"
count4
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"wavered"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"depths"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count3
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"quivered"
count1
9
word"marble"
count2
10
word"shimmered"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count2
14
word"glinting"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count2
16
word"fractured"
count1
17
word"fluttered"
count1
18
word"gloom"
count1
19
word"footfall"
count1
20
word"silence"
count2
21
word"trembled"
count1
22
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"stomach"
2"wavered"
3"flickered"
4"silk"
5"depths"
6"flicked"
7"whisper"
8"quivered"
9"marble"
10"shimmered"
11"tracing"
12"rhythmic"
13"pulse"
14"glinting"
15"echoed"
16"fractured"
17"fluttered"
18"gloom"
19"footfall"
20"silence"
21"trembled"
22"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences143
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences147
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1239
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1173
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity1.28
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora15
Nyx14
Veil1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Heartstone4
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Heartstone"
places(empty)
globalScore0.861
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as though begging to break free"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1239
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences147
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean19.06
std15.35
cv0.805
sampleLengths
039
115
243
310
425
55
622
729
868
910
1015
1131
1219
136
1426
159
1614
1736
1856
1916
2017
215
2210
2343
2428
2516
2619
272
289
2952
3049
315
3216
335
3461
3519
3619
3751
3819
3917
404
4112
4235
439
447
4512
468
4717
489
4919
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences143
matches
0"was hollowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs235
matches(empty)
45.68% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences147
ratio0.034
matches
0"Aurora tracked the sound—farther into the orchard, where the vines grew so thick they formed living walls."
1"She stood, lifted the Fae-Forged Blade from its sheath—moonsilver glinting where it caught the dying light."
2"Overhead, birds—huge as eagles, feathers the color of spilt wine—circled, trading cries."
3"A head poked into view—small and round, with beady eyes reflecting the fountain’s bleed-red glow."
4"Butterflies—wings striped in red and black—fluttered through the steam then folded onto the carcasses, biting at dripping fat."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1188
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.021885521885521887
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0016835016835016834
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences147
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences147
mean8.43
std4.85
cv0.575
sampleLengths
06
110
25
35
413
515
618
715
810
910
107
118
125
132
143
155
163
1712
187
1912
2017
2119
2214
2316
2419
255
265
2715
283
295
309
3114
328
337
344
356
3614
3712
389
3914
4018
4118
426
4311
4418
4513
468
478
486
492
55.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3469387755102041
totalSentences147
uniqueOpeners51
26.25% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences127
matches
0"Always cold to the touch,"
ratio0.008
81.42% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences127
matches
0"She forced herself forward, blade"
1"She inhaled, and something acidic"
2"She licked the bright tang."
3"Her stomach clenched."
4"They leaned closer to the"
5"She slipped between two trunks"
6"Their voice was a breath."
7"She stared at the creatures."
8"They knelt longer, letting wine"
9"She felt the Veil tremor"
10"She flicked her fingers along"
11"she said, stepping away from"
12"They climbed a low rise,"
13"She knelt and tasted a"
14"Her pulse drummed in her"
15"She stood, lifted the Fae-Forged"
16"They slipped past the table,"
17"She held her breath."
18"It disappeared as quickly."
19"They rounded a second rise"
ratio0.346
15.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount113
totalSentences127
matches
0"Stone gave way beneath Aurora’s"
1"A haze of scented heat"
2"Heartstone at her throat pulsed."
3"Each beat rattled her ribs."
4"She forced herself forward, blade"
5"Nyx melted from shadow into"
6"Amber light dripped across rolling"
7"Vines curled into spirals, threading"
8"The sky above burned with"
9"She inhaled, and something acidic"
10"A single grape split under"
11"Juice ran in slick rivers"
12"She licked the bright tang."
13"Her stomach clenched."
14"Nyx’s outline wavered."
15"They leaned closer to the"
16"Wind carried a distant burst"
17"Aurora tracked the sound—farther into"
18"She slipped between two trunks"
19"A courtyard lay beyond, the"
ratio0.89
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"Heartstone pulsed in irregular bursts, as though begging to break free."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences16
tagDensity0.688
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
82.0892%