Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021D142WC5H5WT53XQEB

Run Details

Model:
GPT-4.1
Duration:
27.4s
Cost:
$0.019072
Provider:
OpenAI

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Something thudded against the door, sharp and deliberate, not the ragged scramble of a courier or the lazy flick of Eva’s Tinder dates. Three deadbolts, muscle memory—slide, click, twist. Knuckles white on brass, I cracked the door open. A single amber eye peered back, the other bottomless black. Lucien’s silhouette filled the frame, suit pressed, platinum hair a calculated mess from the rain he pretended not to mind. He pressed the ivory head of his cane against the jamb, barring retreat before I could even inhale a greeting. "Aurora." The accent, all silk and threat. "You changed the locks." I let the door hang open, pulse somewhere in my mouth. "Wasn’t expecting you to still have a key." "Nor I to find you hiding behind bollards and bad security on Brick Lane." He stepped inside, gaze flicking over my rumpled pyjamas, past the empty noodle carton by the sofa, to the cat now arching against his trousers. Ptolemy always sided with the enemy. Lucien stooped, ruffled the cat’s head with gloved indifference, then straightened. "May I sit, or do you prefer to negotiate standing?" I braced a hip against the radiator, arms folded. "You don’t negotiate. You collect." His mouth curled. "Sharp tongue. You lost none of it in exile." So much for small talk. I watched the way his hand flexed on the cane. Louder than a shout, that glorious habit of his: controlling the room by appearing to have all the time in creation. "What do you want?" His eye darkened, the trick of those mismatched pupils making prey twitch. "To talk." "Last time we talked, your father’s emissary threatened to sew my tongue to the floorboards." He shrugged, the motion civilised and reptilian. "Bellerose is old-fashioned. I am not here for reprisals." "So why are you in Eva’s flat at midnight, Lucien?" He scanned the mess—books teetering on every surface, maps stuffed in coffee mugs, strings of garlic and chillies clipped to the kitchen lamp. "Not inviting, but interesting. You nest among secrets now." "You tracked me here for décor advice?" He rolled his sleeves, revealing clean white cuffs. "For leverage. You know the city’s currents; my father’s interests, however, require more... local expertise." "You’re working for him again. After all that noise about being your own man?" He laughed. It sounded soft and bitter. "Some debts outlive their usefulness." Ptolemy leapt onto the table and stared, tail flicking. Lucien eyed the cat like an adversary. "I came for an introduction. That’s all." I snorted. "You want names? You want a lead on the Empress’s courier ring?" My voice cracked, betraying old nerves. "Do it yourself. Find another snitch." His eyebrow arched—a silent dare. "You think too small." "I left that world. I parked your secrets with your family and took the first train north." He inspected my wrist, where the crescent scar pulsed white against my skin. "You didn’t run far enough, Aurora. Trouble always keeps your scent." Silence thickened. My back found the wall. Sweat tingled at my nape. His gaze softened, a flickering shadow of something too raw to call kindness. "I am not looking for trouble tonight." He leaned closer, breath washing my cheek. Spice, expensive wine, and that undercurrent, infernal and familiar. "But I need your help. And you owe me." That word. It hung there, heavier than any accusation. I swallowed. "You lied." His lips quirked. "We both did." Ptolemy leapt lightly into the window, tail disappearing into the night. Lucien’s hand brushed mine. I jerked away. Electricity, memory. Splintered. He studied me, eyes indifferent save for the ragged focus of the desperate. "Three nights ago, someone bled a demon on Minories. Public. Messy. My father’s people are implicated, but not responsible. I need the truth." "And you think I’ll just have it—" He pressed something cold and sharp into my palm. A simple old earring, crushed, flecked with iridescent black gore. Recognition slammed through me. My voice shrank. "No. Lucien—" He leaned in, voice velvet over wire. "You still have contacts. Eva draws half the city’s trade in oddities through her inbox. Help me. Once, for old promises." My throat closed around all the unsaid. Desire, hurt, that terrible thrill. "What’s in it for me?" He stooped, mouth close to my ear. "You want absolution? Help me tidy my father’s war. Afterward, do what you want with my secrets." A silence more intimate than a confession. His words a dare and an anchor. "You endanger me again and—" "You’ll what? Lock another door?" He smiled, more infernal than human, and stepped back. I fixed him with the last of my backbone. "First, you tell me who’s been shadowing my deliveries." His eye glinted. "Protection. Not surveillance. Though if the Black Lotus sends anyone else sniffing, I’ll have to dissuade them more strongly." "By ‘dissuade’ you mean—" He shrugged, just a hint too casual. "You already know." I pressed the earring into my fist, hard enough for metal to bite. "You want to use me. Again." His gaze lingered. "Not use. Trust." He let the word hang, dangerous and almost loving. Outside, a crash. Voices, sharp and insistent. Someone slammed a car door downstairs. He moved fast, cane in hand, between me and the window. "Your neighbours noisy?" I shook my head. Shadows passed beneath the glass. Eva’s security lights snapped on. Lucien’s hand found mine again, rougher now. "You have your proof. My father’s enemies come for you as well as me." Boots thudded on the stairs. Lucien’s cane blade flicked, silver flashing. The door juddered in its frame as someone hammered—no knuckle rapping, no patience left. Lucien grinned at me, wolfish and alive. "Time to see if your new locks are worth a damn."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He smiled more [more]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.114
leniency0.227
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.045
94.79% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount960
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
37.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount960
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"calculated"
count1
1
word"silk"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"silence"
count2
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"desire"
count1
10
word"flicked"
count1
highlights
0"calculated"
1"silk"
2"pulse"
3"scanned"
4"eyebrow"
5"pulsed"
6"silence"
7"familiar"
8"velvet"
9"desire"
10"flicked"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen39
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords955
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
89.55% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount579
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.21
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Tinder1
Ptolemy3
Spice1
Lucien7
persons
0"Eva"
1"Ptolemy"
2"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore0.896
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
95.29% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.047
wordCount955
matches
0"Not inviting, but interesting"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean17.05
std10.7
cv0.628
sampleLengths
048
140
211
319
445
521
614
712
836
94
1014
1115
1216
1310
1432
157
1623
1714
1812
1916
207
2126
229
2317
2424
2512
2645
279
284
296
3021
3136
327
3319
349
3528
3612
375
3824
3914
405
4114
4218
4322
444
4510
4619
4715
4813
4914
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs106
matches(empty)
14.16% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences111
ratio0.045
matches
0"Three deadbolts, muscle memory—slide, click, twist."
1"He scanned the mess—books teetering on every surface, maps stuffed in coffee mugs, strings of garlic and chillies clipped to the kitchen lamp."
2"\"For leverage. You know the city’s currents; my father’s interests, however, require more... local expertise.\""
3"His eyebrow arched—a silent dare."
4"The door juddered in its frame as someone hammered—no knuckle rapping, no patience left."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount583
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.030874785591766724
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0017152658662092624
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean8.6
std6.01
cv0.698
sampleLengths
023
16
29
310
420
520
67
74
811
98
1039
116
1211
1310
149
155
163
179
185
1910
2021
214
2212
232
2415
257
269
2710
2823
299
307
318
3215
3314
342
355
365
379
387
397
402
4118
426
435
444
4517
4613
4711
482
495
74.77% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4594594594594595
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
1.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences66
matches
0"He pressed the ivory head"
1"I let the door hang"
2"He stepped inside, gaze flicking"
3"I braced a hip against"
4"His mouth curled."
5"I watched the way his"
6"His eye darkened, the trick"
7"He shrugged, the motion civilised"
8"He scanned the mess—books teetering"
9"He rolled his sleeves, revealing"
10"It sounded soft and bitter."
11"My voice cracked, betraying old"
12"His eyebrow arched—a silent dare."
13"He inspected my wrist, where"
14"My back found the wall."
15"His gaze softened, a flickering"
16"He leaned closer, breath washing"
17"It hung there, heavier than"
18"His lips quirked."
19"I jerked away."
ratio0.545
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences66
matches
0"Something thudded against the door,"
1"Knuckles white on brass, I"
2"A single amber eye peered"
3"Lucien’s silhouette filled the frame,"
4"He pressed the ivory head"
5"The accent, all silk and"
6"I let the door hang"
7"He stepped inside, gaze flicking"
8"Ptolemy always sided with the"
9"Lucien stooped, ruffled the cat’s"
10"I braced a hip against"
11"His mouth curled."
12"I watched the way his"
13"His eye darkened, the trick"
14"He shrugged, the motion civilised"
15"He scanned the mess—books teetering"
16"He rolled his sleeves, revealing"
17"It sounded soft and bitter."
18"Ptolemy leapt onto the table"
19"Lucien eyed the cat like"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.4445%