Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021D6DVDC3BHSJMBW22M

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Duration:
39.8s
Cost:
$0.006838
Provider:
Alibaba

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oak standing stones hummed, a low vibration that rattled Aurora's teeth and made the hair on her arms stand straight. She stepped past the boundary, her boots sinking into moss that felt too soft, too alive, as if the ground breathed beneath her soles. The air changed instantly. The damp chill of a London November vanished, replaced by a warmth that smelled of honeysuckle and ozone. Wildflowers bloomed in violent bursts of color around her ankles, petals unfurling in real-time as she watched, defying the season outside the grove. Nyx dissolved into a pool of ink at her feet before reforming beside her, their violet eyes scanning the canopy. The shadows here did not behave. They stretched toward the light instead of away from it, clinging to the trunks of trees that twisted in impossible spirals. "Time sits wrong here," Nyx whispered, their voice echoing as though spoken in a cavern despite the open sky. "An hour outside might be a century within. Or a blink." Aurora tightened her grip on the Fae-forged blade. The moonsilver dagger bit into her palm, its eternal cold a grounding anchor against the surreal heat. "Isolde said to stay on the path. Did you see a path?" "Paths are suggestions for those who fear getting lost." Nyx drifted forward, their form flickering between solid humanoid and wispy smoke. "Come. The Seer waits where the light breaks." Rory followed, her bright blue eyes darting from the glowing fungi clustering on the bark to the sky above. It wasn't the grey slate of Cardiff or the smog-stained London horizon. The firmament shimmered with a pearlescent sheen, ribbons of aurora dancing even though no sun hung overhead. The light source seemed to emanate from the flowers themselves, casting long, dancing shadows that moved independently of their owners. A bird trilled, a sound like glass breaking underwater. Rory flinched, her hand going to the Heartstone pendant beneath her jacket. The crimson gem pulsed against her sternum, warm and rhythmic, though no Hel portal lay near. The artifact reacted to magic, not just rifts. This entire grove screamed of power. "Do you hear that?" Rory stopped, tilting her head. "Hear what?" Nyx paused, their silhouette rippling. "Whispering. Not you. The trees." Nyx tilted their head, the faint glow of their eyes narrowing. "The Fae speak through everything. Roots, leaves, wind. Isolde says they remember every footstep taken here for three hundred years." "That's comforting." Rory resumed walking, pushing aside a curtain of ivy that retracted from her touch as if offended. "So it knows we're here." "It knows you are Here," Nyx corrected. "Mortals rarely cross the Veil without tearing it. You walked through a door left ajar." The terrain shifted underfoot. The moss gave way to grass that chimed when stepped on, tiny metallic notes ringing out with every stride. Rory lifted her boot to inspect the sole, finding no damage, only a faint dusting of silver pollen. Ahead, the trees parted to reveal a clearing bathed in liquid moonlight, though the sky remained bright. In the center stood a figure with silver hair cascading to her waist, pale lavender eyes fixed on the approaching pair. Isolde Varga did not turn as they approached. She sat upon a stone that looked suspiciously like a petrified giant's hand, weaving strands of light into a complex knot. Her feet hovered an inch above the ground, leaving the grass beneath undisturbed. No footprints marked her passage, ever. "You bring the cold iron with you," Isolde said, her voice melodic yet carrying the weight of stone. She did not look up from her weaving. "And the shadow that wears a man's shape." "Isolde," Rory called out, stopping ten paces away. The air grew heavier here, pressing against her eardrums. "You told us to come. Said the winter solstice weakens the barrier too much." "The Veil thins like old cloth," Isolde agreed, finally raising her gaze. Her lavender eyes seemed to look through Rory, focusing on something just behind her left shoulder. "Gluttony stirs in Dymas. The amber skies bleed through the cracks. Prince Belphegor grows hungry for more than just souls contracted from your Earth." Rory felt the pendant grow hotter. "We saw the signs. Strange cravings in the city. People eating until they burst. Yu-Fei said the delivery orders make no sense. Entire banquets requested for single addresses." "Appetites unbound," Isolde murmured. She stood, floating down to the grass. "The sin spreads like rot. It seeks the weakest point in the Boundary. And you, child of Cardiff, carry a stone from the very realm that pushes against us." Rory's hand flew to the pendant again. "I didn't know where it came from. Someone left it on my bike." "Nothing is left by accident in the spaces between." Isolde glided closer, her movement fluid, unnatural. She reached out, her fingers hovering over the fabric covering the Heartstone. "This gem beats with the rhythm of the vineyards of Dymas. It calls to its home." Nyx stepped between them, their form expanding, shadows lengthening to swallow the immediate area. "Do not touch her without cause, Seer. The compulsion binds your tongue, not your hands." "I cannot lie, Shadow-Walker," Isolde said, unperturbed. "But I may choose which truth to speak. I speak this: the pendant is a key. And the lock turns soon." Rory pushed past Nyx's protective stance. "If it's a key, what does it open? And how do we stop Belphegor from using it?" Isolde smiled, a sad expression that didn't reach her ancient eyes. "Stop? One does not stop the tide with a spoon. One builds a boat." She turned and gestured toward the back of the clearing, where the trees grew dense and dark. "Follow. The vision comes clearer when the feet move." Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx. The Shade's violet eyes glowed brighter, a silent signal to proceed with caution. They fell in behind the Half-Fae seer, venturing deeper into the grove. The temperature dropped sharply as they entered the shadow of the older trees. The chirping insects fell silent. The only sound was the chime of the grass under Rory's boots and the soft rustle of Isolde's gown, which made no sound at all. The path wound downward, spiraling into a depression in the earth where the air tasted of copper and old rain. Strange plants lined the way, their leaves translucent, revealing veins that pumped a luminescent blue sap. Rory brushed against one, and the plant recoiled, folding in on itself with a sharp click. "Careful," Nyx warned, their voice barely audible. "This place feeds on attention." "It feeds on many things," Isolde said over her shoulder. "Memory. Hope. Fear. Your fear tastes particularly sharp tonight, Aurora Carter." "I'm not afraid," Rory lied, her voice tight. "The Fae know lies before the tongue shapes them," Isolde replied gently. "You fear the ex who nearly broke you. You fear the law you fled. But most of all, you fear that you are exactly where you are meant to be, and you have no control over the map." Rory gritted her teeth, the cold handle of the dagger digging into her palm. "I control my own life. I left Evan. I left Cardiff. I chose this." "Did you?" Isolde stopped at the edge of a small, mirror-still pool. The water reflected not the trees above, but a sprawling landscape of golden vineyards under an amber sky. Figures moved in the reflection, grotesque and bloated, feasting at tables that groaned under the weight of excess. "Or did the currents pull you here because you are the only one who can hold the line?" Rory stared into the pool. The image shifted. She saw herself standing before a gaping rift, the Heartstone blazing in her hand, while shadows poured out from the other side. She saw Nyx fracturing into a thousand pieces. She saw London burning, not with fire, but with a creeping, consuming hunger. "What is this?" Rory demanded, stepping back. "A prophecy?" "A possibility," Isolde corrected. "The future is a garden with many paths. Some lead to feast, some to famine." Nyx leaned over the water, their reflection absent. "The connection to Dymas strengthens. The solstice approaches. The Veil will tear if we do not reinforce the ward stones." "Reinforce them with what?" Rory asked, her mind racing, clicking into the problem-solving mode that had kept her alive through law school and worse. "I'm a delivery driver, not a sorcerer." "You are a vessel," Isolde said, turning her pale eyes onto Rory. "And you carry the blood of those who held the line before, even if they did not know it. Your father's arguments, your mother's lessons. They were not just for the mortal courts. They prepared you for the judgment to come." Rory shook her head, the black strands of her hair whipping across her face. "That's insane. My dad argued parking tickets. My mom taught primary school." "They taught you to see the cracks in the argument," Isolde insisted, her voice rising with a rare urgency. "To find the flaw in the logic. Magic is simply logic written in a older tongue. The demons of Gluttony operate on a simple premise: take until nothing remains. You must show them the counter-argument." "And how do I do that?" Isolde pointed to the Fae blade in Rory's hand. "Cut the thread that binds the hunger to the earth. But beware. The blade cuts both ways. It severs magic, yes, but it also severs the ties that hold the user to the world." Rory looked down at the slender, leaf-shaped dagger. The moonsilver seemed to pulse in time with her heartbeat. "So if I use it, I might lose everything?" "You might lose what binds you to the pain," Nyx whispered, their form coalescing closer. "But you might also lose the memory of why you fight." The wind picked up, carrying the scent of rotting fruit from the direction of the pool. The reflection in the water rippled, and for a moment, a massive hand reached up from the golden vineyards, fingers grasping at the surface of the pool as if trying to break through. Isolde stepped back, her ethereal face grave. "The solstice arrives tonight. TheVeil weakens. We have no more time for riddles." "Then give me the straight truth," Rory snapped, sheathing the blade but keeping her hand on the hilt. "What exactly do I need to do?" "Find the three rift points in London," Isolde commanded, her voice echoing with the power of the grove. "One in the market, one in the sewers, one in the place where you felt the most pain. Seal them before the amber sky swallows the grey." Rory felt the crescent scar on her wrist itch, a phantom ache from a childhood fall that suddenly felt like a brand. "The place where I felt the most pain." "Evan's flat," Nyx said, the words hanging heavy in the air. "The site of the first tear." Rory nodded, her jaw set. "Then we go there first." Isolde raised a hand, and the wildflowers around them bowed low. "Go quickly, children of shadow and steel. The feast begins, and you are the main course."
created_at"2026-02-19T03:44:45.74Z" 2/19/2026, 3:44:45 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde replied gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.397
leniency0.794
rawRatio0.037
effectiveRatio0.029
86.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1881
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"sharply"
2"gently"
3"suddenly"
4"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.49% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1881
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count2
4
word"surreal"
count1
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count2
7
word"pulsed"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count1
9
word"comforting"
count1
10
word"cascading"
count1
11
word"complex"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"racing"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"grave"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"warmth"
2"scanning"
3"echoing"
4"surreal"
5"shimmered"
6"dancing"
7"pulsed"
8"rhythmic"
9"comforting"
10"cascading"
11"complex"
12"weight"
13"racing"
14"pulse"
15"grave"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
97.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1871
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
16.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions75
wordCount1105
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.26
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora2
London3
November1
Fae-forged1
Rory25
Cardiff1
Heartstone3
Hel1
Nyx14
Varga1
Shade1
Half-Fae1
Isolde18
Fae3
persons
0"Aurora"
1"November"
2"Rory"
3"Nyx"
4"Varga"
5"Shade"
6"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
2"Fae"
globalScore0.369
windowScore0.167
85.90% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if trying to break through"
1"felt like a brand"
93.11% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.069
wordCount1871
matches
0"not the trees above, but a sprawling landscape of golden vineyards under an amber sky"
1"not with fire, but with a creeping, consuming hunger"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences135
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean34.65
std19.15
cv0.553
sampleLengths
091
147
230
337
429
568
651
79
87
95
1031
1124
1222
1379
1448
1534
1631
1752
1834
1940
2020
2144
2229
2328
2423
2551
2674
2752
2812
2921
308
3150
3228
3366
3451
359
3619
3728
3831
3953
4026
4154
426
4343
4427
4526
4649
4720
4825
4945
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs197
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences135
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1112
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, mirror-still pool."
1"slender, leaf-shaped dagger."
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.022482014388489208
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008992805755395683
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean13.86
std7.59
cv0.548
sampleLengths
022
124
24
318
423
520
66
721
819
911
108
1117
1212
1321
148
1519
1612
1717
1820
199
2012
2116
228
236
249
257
265
2711
2820
2919
305
317
3215
334
3419
3518
3617
3721
388
3921
4013
416
4218
438
448
458
469
4714
4812
4916
54.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.37777777777777777
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners51
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences91
matches
0"She stepped past the boundary,"
1"They stretched toward the light"
2"It wasn't the grey slate"
3"She sat upon a stone"
4"Her feet hovered an inch"
5"She did not look up"
6"Her lavender eyes seemed to"
7"She stood, floating down to"
8"She reached out, her fingers"
9"She turned and gestured toward"
10"They fell in behind the"
11"She saw herself standing before"
12"She saw Nyx fracturing into"
13"She saw London burning, not"
ratio0.154
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences91
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones"
1"She stepped past the boundary,"
2"The air changed instantly."
3"The damp chill of a"
4"Wildflowers bloomed in violent bursts"
5"Nyx dissolved into a pool"
6"The shadows here did not"
7"They stretched toward the light"
8"Nyx whispered, their voice echoing"
9"Aurora tightened her grip on"
10"The moonsilver dagger bit into"
11"Nyx drifted forward, their form"
12"Rory followed, her bright blue"
13"It wasn't the grey slate"
14"The firmament shimmered with a"
15"The light source seemed to"
16"A bird trilled, a sound"
17"Rory flinched, her hand going"
18"The crimson gem pulsed against"
19"The artifact reacted to magic,"
ratio0.956
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences42
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The ancient oak standing stones hummed, a low vibration that rattled Aurora's teeth and made the hair on her arms stand straight."
1"She stepped past the boundary, her boots sinking into moss that felt too soft, too alive, as if the ground breathed beneath her soles."
2"They stretched toward the light instead of away from it, clinging to the trunks of trees that twisted in impossible spirals."
3"The light source seemed to emanate from the flowers themselves, casting long, dancing shadows that moved independently of their owners."
4"She sat upon a stone that looked suspiciously like a petrified giant's hand, weaving strands of light into a complex knot."
5"She reached out, her fingers hovering over the fabric covering the Heartstone."
6"Nyx stepped between them, their form expanding, shadows lengthening to swallow the immediate area."
7"The only sound was the chime of the grass under Rory's boots and the soft rustle of Isolde's gown, which made no sound at all."
8"Figures moved in the reflection, grotesque and bloated, feasting at tables that groaned under the weight of excess."
9"The reflection in the water rippled, and for a moment, a massive hand reached up from the golden vineyards, fingers grasping at the surface of the pool as if tr…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"Nyx drifted, their form flickering between solid humanoid and wispy smoke"
1"Nyx paused, their silhouette rippling"
2"Isolde said, her voice melodic yet carrying the weight of stone"
3"Isolde glided, her movement fluid, unnatural"
4"Nyx warned, their voice barely audible"
5"Rory lied, her voice tight"
6"Isolde insisted, her voice rising with a rare urgency"
7"Nyx whispered, their form coalescing closer"
8"Isolde commanded, her voice echoing with the power of the grove"
9"Nyx said, the words hanging heavy in the air"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx corrected (correct)"
2"Rory called out (call out)"
3"Isolde agreed (agree)"
4"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
5"Nyx warned (warn)"
6"Rory lied (lie)"
7"Rory demanded (demand)"
8"Isolde corrected (correct)"
9"Isolde insisted (insist)"
10"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
11"Rory snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.279
leniency0.559
rawRatio0.632
effectiveRatio0.353
72.3984%