Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021D8QF562RNAWEN1V2Z

Run Details

Duration:
38.3s
Cost:
$0.025425

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Camden Tube station reeked of stagnant water and something else—something metallic that made Quinn's teeth ache. She descended the crumbling concrete steps, her worn leather boots echoing in the hollow space. Emergency lighting cast sickly yellow pools across graffitied walls, but beyond their reach, darkness pressed in like a living thing. "Victim's name is Marcus Whitmore, forty-three, antique dealer from Bloomsbury." DS Patel emerged from the shadows, tablet glowing in his hands. "Found him about two hours ago when Transport Police were doing their monthly sweep." Quinn's sharp jaw tightened as she surveyed the platform. The victim lay sprawled near the edge, arms thrown wide, face turned toward the tunnel mouth. Blood pooled beneath his head, black in the artificial light. But something nagged at her—the position was too neat, too deliberate. "Who found him exactly?" "PC Jenkins. Said he was checking for rough sleepers." Patel adjusted his glasses, the gesture nervous. "Nothing unusual, just routine." "Routine." Quinn knelt beside the body, careful not to disturb the scene. Marcus Whitmore wore an expensive wool coat, hardly the attire of someone exploring derelict Underground stations. "What's an antique dealer doing down here, Patel?" "Could be urban exploration. These places attract all sorts." Quinn studied Whitmore's hands. Manicured nails, soft palms—not the hands of someone who crawled through abandoned tunnels for thrills. She pulled on latex gloves and gently turned his left hand. The palm bore a small circular wound, perfectly round, about the size of a ten pence coin. "Look at this." She pointed to the mark. "What does that suggest to you?" Patel leaned closer, squinting. "Puncture wound? Maybe he fell on something sharp." "Maybe." Quinn stood and walked the perimeter of the blood pool. The spatter pattern bothered her—too uniform, too contained. She'd seen enough head trauma to know blood didn't behave this way. "Have you found the weapon?" "Still looking. Could have fallen into the tunnel." Quinn's brown eyes swept the platform methodically. Near the victim's feet, partially hidden beneath a torn poster advertising long-cancelled theatre productions, something glinted. She crouched and used her pen to lift the debris. A small brass compass lay there, its surface green with verdigris. The face bore intricate etchings—symbols that definitely weren't standard navigation markings. The needle spun wildly before settling in a direction that had nothing to do with magnetic north. "Patel, come look at this." He approached, tablet forgotten. "That's odd. Why would a compass point toward the tunnel?" Quinn lifted the device carefully. The moment her fingers touched the brass casing, cold shot up her arm. For an instant, the shadows at the platform's edge seemed to writhe, reaching toward them with finger-like tendrils. She blinked and the sensation passed, but her heart hammered against her ribs. "We need to bag this as evidence." "You think it's connected to the murder?" "Everything at a crime scene is connected until proven otherwise." Quinn slipped the compass into an evidence bag, noting how the needle continued its impossible dance even through the plastic. "Tell me about the blood again." Patel consulted his tablet. "Consistent with blunt force trauma to the skull. Probably struck the platform edge when he fell." Quinn walked to the platform's edge and peered down at the tracks. The drop was significant—easily enough to cause fatal injuries. But the victim lay a good three feet from the edge. She knelt and examined the concrete lip. No blood, no scuff marks, no signs of impact. "If he fell and struck his head on the edge, where's the evidence? Where's the blood transfer?" Patel joined her, frowning. "Maybe the body shifted when he hit the ground?" "Bodies don't roll uphill, Patel." Quinn pointed to the slight incline between the platform edge and where Whitmore lay. "He'd have to defy gravity." She returned to the corpse and examined the head wound more carefully. The trauma was severe—a depression in the skull roughly the size of her palm. But the edges were too clean, too uniform. This wasn't the jagged destruction typical of concrete impact. "Patel, what do you make of the victim's clothing?" "Expensive. Well-maintained." He paused, studying the body with fresh eyes. "No dirt, no tears. His shoes are clean." "Exactly. Someone who's been exploring abandoned stations would show wear, dust, debris. Whitmore looks like he just stepped out of his shop." Quinn stood and dusted off her knees. "And there's something else." She pointed to the victim's right hand, which clutched something small and white. Using her pen, she pried open the stiff fingers to reveal a smooth piece of bone, carved with the same type of symbols that decorated the compass. "What is that?" "Good question." Quinn bagged the bone token, her mind racing. "Patel, I want you to contact the British Museum. Ask to speak with someone in their Ancient History department about symbolic iconography." "You think those markings mean something?" "I think Marcus Whitmore wasn't here by accident." Quinn surveyed the platform one final time, noting details that painted a clearer picture. "Look at the positioning. He's lying perpendicular to the platform, not parallel like you'd expect from a fall. His coat is buttoned to the neck—who does that when exploring? And that wound..." She crouched beside the head trauma again. "This wasn't caused by concrete. The depression is too smooth, too symmetrical. This was done with a tool—something heavy and rounded." "Like what?" "Like a hammer with a ball-peen head. Or something similar." Quinn stood and brushed dust from her trousers. "We're not dealing with an accidental death, Patel. This was murder, staged to look like misadventure." "But why here? Why this place?" Quinn glanced toward the tunnel mouth, where darkness swallowed the emergency lighting completely. The compass in the evidence bag continued its erratic dance, pointing steadily into that void. Whatever lay down there, it had drawn Marcus Whitmore to this forgotten station. And it had cost him his life. "That's what we're going to find out."
total_cost0.025425

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags12
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
75.20% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1008
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"perfectly"
2"carefully"
3"completely"
60.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Marcus"
1"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
65.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1008
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"intricate"
count1
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"magnetic"
count1
4
word"dance"
count2
5
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"intricate"
2"standard"
3"magnetic"
4"dance"
5"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords995
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
30.57% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount628
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.39
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube1
Quinn15
Patel5
Marcus2
Whitmore4
Underground1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Patel"
2"Marcus"
3"Whitmore"
places(empty)
globalScore0.306
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount995
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean24.88
std16.38
cv0.658
sampleLengths
053
135
246
34
420
536
69
747
814
912
1036
118
1233
1339
145
1514
1649
177
187
1936
2020
2148
2217
2313
2424
2543
269
2718
2833
2940
303
3132
326
3354
3428
352
3634
376
3848
397
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs112
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences86
ratio0.081
matches
0"The abandoned Camden Tube station reeked of stagnant water and something else—something metallic that made Quinn's teeth ache."
1"But something nagged at her—the position was too neat, too deliberate."
2"Manicured nails, soft palms—not the hands of someone who crawled through abandoned tunnels for thrills."
3"The spatter pattern bothered her—too uniform, too contained."
4"The face bore intricate etchings—symbols that definitely weren't standard navigation markings."
5"The drop was significant—easily enough to cause fatal injuries."
6"The trauma was severe—a depression in the skull roughly the size of her palm."
98.32% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount636
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.0330188679245283
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.0220125786163522
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean11.57
std6.31
cv0.545
sampleLengths
018
115
220
321
414
59
616
710
811
94
1016
114
1212
1316
148
159
164
1715
1811
1917
208
216
224
238
2411
258
2612
275
288
297
3016
3110
3211
3311
3417
355
364
3710
385
3913
4018
4113
427
437
4430
456
464
4716
4812
499
82.95% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5116279069767442
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences56
matches
0"She descended the crumbling concrete"
1"She pulled on latex gloves"
2"She pointed to the mark"
3"She'd seen enough head trauma"
4"She crouched and used her"
5"He approached, tablet forgotten."
6"She blinked and the sensation"
7"She knelt and examined the"
8"She returned to the corpse"
9"He paused, studying the body"
10"She pointed to the victim's"
11"She crouched beside the head"
ratio0.214
40.36% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences56
matches
0"The abandoned Camden Tube station"
1"She descended the crumbling concrete"
2"Emergency lighting cast sickly yellow"
3"DS Patel emerged from the"
4"Quinn's sharp jaw tightened as"
5"The victim lay sprawled near"
6"Blood pooled beneath his head,"
7"Patel adjusted his glasses, the"
8"Quinn knelt beside the body,"
9"Marcus Whitmore wore an expensive"
10"Quinn studied Whitmore's hands."
11"She pulled on latex gloves"
12"The palm bore a small"
13"She pointed to the mark"
14"Patel leaned closer, squinting."
15"Quinn stood and walked the"
16"The spatter pattern bothered her—too"
17"She'd seen enough head trauma"
18"Quinn's brown eyes swept the"
19"She crouched and used her"
ratio0.839
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Manicured nails, soft palms—not the hands of someone who crawled through abandoned tunnels for thrills."
1"The needle spun wildly before settling in a direction that had nothing to do with magnetic north."
2"She pointed to the victim's right hand, which clutched something small and white."
3"Using her pen, she pried open the stiff fingers to reveal a smooth piece of bone, carved with the same type of symbols that decorated the compass."
41.67% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags12
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"DS Patel emerged, tablet glowing in his hands"
1"Quinn bagged, her mind racing"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.9559%