Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021D99EF0735K4KPZW5C

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The knock came at half past eleven. Two sharp raps, then nothing. Aurora let her fingers rest on the deadbolt, hesitation a foreign sensation she rarely afforded herself. No one knew she was here. Not really. Eva knew, of course, but her flatmate was working the late shift at the hospital, and the others who might have guessed had no business showing up unannounced at this hour. She opened the door. Lucien Moreau stood in the hallway, silver hair gleaming under the dim light, charcoal coat immaculate as always. The ivory handle of his cane caught the glow from the stairwell. His face gave nothing away, but those eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her chest tighten. Eight weeks. Eight weeks since she'd walked out of his office without looking back, since she'd let that thing between them curdle into something she couldn't name. Eight weeks, and here he was, turning up like a complication she didn't need. "You're a hard woman to find." His voice carried its familiar wry edge, but beneath it, something she couldn't quite place. "You're a hard man to invite in." She leaned against the doorframe, arms crossed. "It's late, Luc." "Luc." He repeated the nickname like a test. "You haven't called me that in weeks." Ptolemy wound between her ankles, oblivious to the tension crackling in the doorway. Aurora didn't move to let him in, didn't move to close the door either. The seconds stretched. "May I come in?" He asked it politely, like they were strangers. Like he hadn't spent three months teaching her how to navigate London's supernatural underworld, how to read the signs that most humans missed, how to survive. "Or shall we conduct this conversation in the hallway for the benefit of Mr. Kapoor's curry downstairs?" She stepped aside. He entered, and the room suddenly felt smaller. "You know where I live." She watched him take in the cramped space, the stacks of books, the papers covering every surface. "That's new." "Nothing new about knowing where you are." He didn't sit when she gestured to the sofa. "I've always known. I simply chose not to intrude." "Until tonight." "Until tonight." He moved to the window, looking out at the Brick Lane lights below. His reflection in the glass was a ghost of sharp angles and tailored lines. "You're tired." "I'm fine." "You're not sleeping. I can see it." She wanted to snap at him, to tell him it was none of his business, that she'd made herself clear when she'd left. Instead, she asked, "What do you want, Lucien?" He turned. The lamplight caught the planes of his face, the aristocratic nose, the clever mouth that had once said things that made her blood sing. Now it said, "You." The word hung between them. "I mean—" He paused, seemed to collect himself. "I need to speak with you. I've been trying to find you for two weeks. Your flatmate was... reluctant to share your location." "Eva knows better." "Eva knows I'm not a threat to you." His jaw tightened. "Unlike certain others." The cold that crept up her spine had nothing to do with the February chill. "What do you mean?" "Evan." The name dropped like a stone into still water. "He's looking for you." She kept her face neutral. She'd spent years perfecting that mask, the one that hid the shaking underneath. "Evan doesn't know where I am." "He knows you're in London. He's hired people—people who know how to find others. People who know how to ask the right questions." His voice hardened. "People who know you were seeing me." The cold spread. "That's not possible." "I thought so too. But I received word this morning." He stepped closer, close enough that she could smell his cologne, something dark and smoky with undertones of sandalwood. "He's coming, Aurora. I don't know when, but he's coming." "I can handle Evan." "You can't." The words weren't cruel, just certain. "Evan is human, yes. But he's hired those who aren't. That's why I'm here." "I didn't ask you to come." "No." Something flickered across his face, there and gone. "You never do. You just disappear instead. Very effective strategy, by the way. I spent three weeks convincing myself I'd imagined the whole thing." She flinched. "It was complicated." "It was one night." He said it quietly, like the admission cost him something. "One night, and you vanished like it meant nothing." "It meant—" She stopped. Swallowed the words that threatened to spill out. "It wasn't nothing. But I had to leave." " Why? " The question hit her like a blow. She'd asked herself the same thing every night since she'd walked out. Why had she run from the one person in years who'd made her feel safe? Why had she let fear win? "Because I don't know how to want things," she said finally. "Not real things. Not things that could last." He was silent for a long moment. Then: "You could have told me that." "I know." "You could have let me decide whether I wanted to wait while you figured it out." "I know." Her voice cracked on the second word. "I know, and I'm sorry. I panicked. I saw something I wanted, something that felt too good to be true, and I—" "Ran." "Yes." The word hung in the air between them, heavy with everything she'd never said, everything he'd never asked. "The point stands," he said eventually, his voice carefully controlled. "Evan is coming. He's hired people I don't control, people with connections to things far worse than a human with anger issues. You need protection." "I don't need—" "I know you don't need." His hand lifted, almost touched her face, then dropped back to his cane. "But I'm asking you to let me help. Not because you need it. Because I need to give it." The intensity in his gaze made her breath catch. She remembered that night in his office, the rain against the windows, the way he'd looked at her like she was something precious. Like she was worth keeping. She'd ruined it. Run like she always did. "Lucien—" "Stay," he interrupted. "Just for tonight. Let me tell you what I've learned about Evan's plans, who he's hired, how we can prepare. In the morning, if you want me to leave, I'll go. You'll never see me again if that's what you choose." She stared at him. The man who could find any secret, who knew London's supernatural underworld better than anyone, who could have anyone he wanted. Standing in her tiny flat, asking for nothing but a chance to help her. "Why?" She heard herself ask. "Why do you care so much?" The silence stretched. Then, quietly: "Because you have a crescent scar on your left wrist, and you wear long sleeves even in summer. Because you flinch when someone raises their voice, but you stand your ground against things that would make other people run. Because when you think no one's watching, you look at the world like it's full of puzzles you want to solve." He stepped closer, close enough that she could see the flecks of gold in his amber eye. "Because you're the first person in a very long time who made me feel like I wasn't just a half-breed monster playing at humanity." She couldn't breathe. Couldn't move. "I didn't know," she whispered. "I didn't know you felt—" "I didn't either. Not until you left." His voice dropped. "Not until I realized I'd let the only person who saw me walk away." The moment hung suspended, fragile as glass. She could feel the warmth radiating from him, could see the pulse beating in his throat, could see everything she'd been too afraid to want. "Then stay," she said, and her voice didn't shake. "Tell me everything." He held her gaze for a long moment. Then, slowly, he nodded. "Tomorrow," he said quietly, "we figure out how to make Evan stop." "And tonight?" His hand finally lifted, fingers brushing her cheek, feather-light. "Tonight, we stop running."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
64.86% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"The name dropped like [like]"
1"she said finally [finally]"
2"he said eventually [eventually]"
3"His hand lifted almost [almost]"
4"he said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.365
leniency0.73
rawRatio0.185
effectiveRatio0.135
77.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1356
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"suddenly"
2"very"
3"carefully"
4"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
55.75% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1356
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count2
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"tension"
count1
4
word"navigate"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"intensity"
2"familiar"
3"tension"
4"navigate"
5"chill"
6"flickered"
7"silence"
8"could feel"
9"warmth"
10"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences83
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1353
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions23
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount773
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.39
worstName"Eight"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eight"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Ptolemy1
Like2
London2
Brick1
Lane1
February1
Swallowed1
Eight3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"February"
places
0"London"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1353
matches(empty)
87.93% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount3
totalSentences127
matches
0"let that thing"
1"perfecting that mask"
2"remembered that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs68
mean19.9
std14.85
cv0.746
sampleLengths
028
139
24
351
441
521
617
715
830
955
1011
1124
1225
132
1431
152
167
1731
1830
195
2031
213
2214
2319
2414
2524
2633
276
2839
294
3022
316
3233
335
3423
3520
363
3740
3819
3914
402
4116
4231
431
441
4518
4635
473
4837
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs161
matches
0"was working"
1"was, turning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences127
ratio0.008
matches
0"His face gave nothing away, but those eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with an intensity that made her chest tighten."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount776
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03994845360824742
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.015463917525773196
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean10.65
std9.08
cv0.852
sampleLengths
07
15
216
36
42
531
64
718
812
921
102
1125
1214
1321
1414
153
168
177
1813
1914
203
2112
2226
2317
243
258
2622
272
2816
299
302
3115
3214
332
342
357
3623
378
382
3924
404
415
428
4323
443
4511
463
4715
484
4910
47.24% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats15
diversityRatio0.3543307086614173
totalSentences127
uniqueOpeners45
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Instead, she asked,"
1"Then, slowly, he nodded."
ratio0.027
11.78% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences73
matches
0"She opened the door."
1"His face gave nothing away,"
2"His voice carried its familiar"
3"She leaned against the doorframe,"
4"He repeated the nickname like"
5"He asked it politely, like"
6"She stepped aside."
7"He entered, and the room"
8"She watched him take in"
9"He didn't sit when she"
10"He moved to the window,"
11"His reflection in the glass"
12"She wanted to snap at"
13"He paused, seemed to collect"
14"His jaw tightened"
15"She kept her face neutral."
16"She'd spent years perfecting that"
17"His voice hardened"
18"He stepped closer, close enough"
19"He said it quietly, like"
ratio0.521
49.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences73
matches
0"The knock came at half"
1"Aurora let her fingers rest"
2"Eva knew, of course, but"
3"She opened the door."
4"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
5"The ivory handle of his"
6"His face gave nothing away,"
7"His voice carried its familiar"
8"She leaned against the doorframe,"
9"He repeated the nickname like"
10"Ptolemy wound between her ankles,"
11"Aurora didn't move to let"
12"The seconds stretched."
13"He asked it politely, like"
14"She stepped aside."
15"He entered, and the room"
16"She watched him take in"
17"He didn't sit when she"
18"He moved to the window,"
19"His reflection in the glass"
ratio0.822
68.49% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences73
matches
0"Now it said,"
ratio0.014
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Eva knew, of course, but her flatmate was working the late shift at the hospital, and the others who might have guessed had no business showing up unannounced a…"
1"The lamplight caught the planes of his face, the aristocratic nose, the clever mouth that had once said things that made her blood sing."
2"The man who could find any secret, who knew London's supernatural underworld better than anyone, who could have anyone he wanted."
69.44% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She watched, the stacks of books, the papers covering every surface"
1"He paused, seemed to collect himself"
2"he said eventually, his voice carefully controlled"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"He repeated (repeat)"
1"he interrupted (interrupt)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences74
tagDensity0.149
leniency0.297
rawRatio0.273
effectiveRatio0.081
85.9106%