Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021F6B0AHBCM4RCVEBAR

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Duration:
29.2s
Cost:
$0.001077

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air shimmered softly as Aurora, Nyx, and Isolde stepped across the threshold into the Fae Grove. The moment they crossed the ancient oak standing stones, a palpable shift coursed through their bodies, as if they had slipped through a shimmering film into another realm entirely. Aurora blinked, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the ethereal light filling the grove. Wildflowers in hues unseen on Earth carpeted the ground. Petals glistened under a golden hue that seemed to emanate from the very air, wrapping everything in warmth. She reached down to touch a bloom, its velvety petals unfurling beneath her fingers like a secret being revealed. "Beautiful, isn't it?" Isolde's voice danced like a breeze. She glided ahead, leaving no trace on the ground. Her silver hair flowed like a river of moonlight. "It looks like something straight out of a fairy tale," Aurora marveled, glancing at Nyx, who formed a dark silhouette beside her. “Fairy tales can be misleading,” Nyx whispered, their voice swirling around like a soft wind. “Not all things here are friendly.” They ventured deeper into the grove, the glow of the flora illuminating their path. Aurora felt a benign energy thrumming around her, each step resonating with the world as if nature itself breathed alongside them. A gentle rustle broke the quiet, making her heart leap. She turned to Nyx, who gestured towards a cluster of vibrant flowers where a small creature flitted. “What in the world is that?” she asked, squinting at the glimmering insect-like being with iridescent wings. It hovered, darting rhythmically from petal to petal, leaving a trail of shimmering dust in its wake. “A Sylph,” Isolde replied cryptically, glancing knowingly at Aurora. “They guide lost souls.” “Cute little guide, then," Aurora said, a grin spreading across her face. For a moment, the weight of her past lifted. As they wandered, the trees leaned closer, their gnarled branches intertwined high above. Aurora caught glimpses of creatures peering down from their leafy homes—glowing eyes in shadowed hollows, curious and cautious. Unease prickled her skin. “These woods feel alive,” she said, scanning her surroundings. “They are,” Isolde responded, a smile barely visible on her ethereal face. “But remember, not all life here is nurturing.” "Duly noted," Aurora murmured, scanning the shadows for movement. Nyx slipped silently ahead, their form drifting in a mist-like shade, as if they leaped between the seen and unseen realms. The creatures watched, whispers echoing around them, flickers of conversations that slipped away as quickly as they appeared. Isolde paused, sensing something in the air. “Do you feel that?” Her lavender eyes widened slightly. Aurora’s heart raced. “Feel what?” “An imbalance. In the fragile weave of this place.” As if summoned by their conversation, the warm golden glow dimmed, and the atmosphere thickened. “Time moves differently here, too,” Isolde continued, her tone subtly urgent. “Let’s not linger too long.” “Right,” Aurora said, her pulse quickening. She followed Isolde and Nyx as they forged ahead, avoiding the shadows that seemed to pulse ominously with darker energy. Ahead, a glade opened before them. It was bathed in silvery light. Tall, slender standing stones encircled an altar of polished white marble, intricately carved with symbols that twisted and turned like the roots of great trees. Flowers that glowed faintly pulsed rhythmically at the base of the stones. “Look at those carvings.” Aurora stepped closer, tracing her fingers along the smooth surface. “They almost look alive.” Nyx drifted beside her, their eyes glowing faintly. “Markings of the Fae Courts. They tell tales of those who traversed here, borrowed magic, or sought counsel.” “Counsel?” Aurora echoed, her brows furrowing. “Wisdom,” Isolde interjected. She stepped to the edge of the glade, eyes calculating. “But beware of what knowledge you seek.” A whispering wind circled the glade, carrying soft lilting notes that wrapped around them like an embrace, threading through their minds, filling them with visions—snatches of laughter, of conflict, of shadows and light dancing together in an eternal embrace. Aurora shook her head, trying to dispel the enchanting haze. “We came for something specific, remember?” “Yes,” Nyx said, their form solidifying into a more recognizable silhouette. “Perhaps this is the place.” “The heartstone,” Isolde confirmed, looking into the distance where a faint beacon of warmth seemed to beckon from behind the stones. The ground rumbled softly beneath them, inexplicably shifting. Aurora gasped as dark vines writhed up from the earth, curling around the standing stones, causing a ripple of unease to swirl in the air. “Hold tight,” Isolde commanded, holding her ground as the vines undulated, leaving tiny clusters of blossoms in their wake. “This place tests the resolve of those who enter.” A shiver raced down Aurora’s spine. “Is this supposed to happen?” she asked, fear creeping into her tone. Nyx’s violet gaze burned bright. “We disrupt the balance when we seek.” Just then, a flash of crimson caught Aurora’s attention—a Heartstone, pulsating with warmth, lay nestled at the altar's center. “There!” she shouted, stepping forward. But the moment she reached out, the ground erupted with black roots. They coiled around her feet, slithering upward, pulling her back. “No!” Aurora yanked against them, her heart racing. “Focus!” Nyx rushed beside her, their form shimmering as they reached for her, curling shadows forming a shield. “Do not resist!” “I can’t—” she grunted, struggling. “Trust me,” Nyx whispered, and the shadows coalesced, easing the grip of the vines. Aurora’s breath quickened as she inhaled deep, summoning every ounce of calm she could muster. “Right… trust.” With a final push from Nyx, the vines released, and Aurora lunged toward the Heartstone. She grasped it and felt a warm pulse radiate through her, grounding her in the chaos. “Hurry!” Isolde yelled, echoed by Nyx’s whisper. Aurora looked up, determination burning in her eyes. “Let’s get out of here.”
total_cost0.00107745

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
80.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Isolde's voice danced like [like]"
1"Isolde replied cryptically [cryptically]"
2"Her lavender eyes widened slightly [slightly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.61
leniency1
rawRatio0.12
effectiveRatio0.12
69.14% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount972
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"softly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"knowingly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"very"
2"knowingly"
3"quickly"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount972
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"shimmered"
count1
1
word"palpable"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"marveled"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count2
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"raced"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count3
9
word"marble"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"tracing"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count2
13
word"furrowing"
count1
14
word"calculating"
count1
15
word"dancing"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"resolve"
count1
18
word"disrupt"
count1
19
word"racing"
count1
20
word"quickened"
count1
21
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"palpable"
2"warmth"
3"marveled"
4"weight"
5"scanning"
6"echoing"
7"raced"
8"pulse"
9"marble"
10"pulsed"
11"tracing"
12"echoed"
13"furrowing"
14"calculating"
15"dancing"
16"beacon"
17"resolve"
18"disrupt"
19"racing"
20"quickened"
21"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
87.69% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells3
narrationSentences67
matches
0"g in warmth"
1"a ripple of unease"
2"g with warmth"
78.89% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences67
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences83
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords969
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
24.53% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount797
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.51
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora20
Nyx13
Isolde11
Fae1
Grove1
Earth1
Heartstone2
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
3"Earth"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore0.245
windowScore0.5
62.28% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"hue that seemed to emanate from the very air, wrapping everything in warmth"
1"shadows that seemed to pulse ominously with darker energy"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount969
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean21.53
std13.75
cv0.639
sampleLengths
046
160
227
322
421
562
634
713
821
935
109
1120
129
1339
1416
155
169
1715
1816
1926
2049
2118
2226
236
2420
2539
2616
2716
2821
2933
3028
316
3212
3312
3419
355
3622
378
3821
395
4014
4117
4231
437
4413
94.79% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"being revealed"
1"was bathed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs158
matches(empty)
39.59% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences83
ratio0.036
matches
0"Aurora caught glimpses of creatures peering down from their leafy homes—glowing eyes in shadowed hollows, curious and cautious."
1"A whispering wind circled the glade, carrying soft lilting notes that wrapped around them like an embrace, threading through their minds, filling them with visions—snatches of laughter, of conflict, of shadows and light dancing together in an eternal embrace."
2"Just then, a flash of crimson caught Aurora’s attention—a Heartstone, pulsating with warmth, lay nestled at the altar's center."
95.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount800
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.04375
lyAdverbCount17
lyAdverbRatio0.02125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences83
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences83
mean11.67
std6.7
cv0.574
sampleLengths
017
129
214
39
418
519
69
79
89
922
1015
116
1214
1321
1410
1517
1617
1717
189
194
2012
219
2213
2318
244
259
2612
278
289
2921
3018
317
329
333
342
359
3615
3711
385
396
4020
416
426
4325
4412
4514
464
478
4818
496
95.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.5903614457831325
totalSentences83
uniqueOpeners49
50.51% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"Just then, a flash of"
ratio0.015
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences66
matches
0"She reached down to touch"
1"She glided ahead, leaving no"
2"Her silver hair flowed like"
3"They ventured deeper into the"
4"She turned to Nyx, who"
5"she asked, squinting at the"
6"It hovered, darting rhythmically from"
7"she said, scanning her surroundings"
8"Her lavender eyes widened slightly"
9"She followed Isolde and Nyx"
10"It was bathed in silvery"
11"She stepped to the edge"
12"she asked, fear creeping into"
13"she shouted, stepping forward"
14"They coiled around her feet,"
15"she grunted, struggling"
16"She grasped it and felt"
ratio0.258
20.61% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount58
totalSentences66
matches
0"The air shimmered softly as"
1"The moment they crossed the"
2"Aurora blinked, her bright blue"
3"Wildflowers in hues unseen on"
4"Petals glistened under a golden"
5"She reached down to touch"
6"Isolde's voice danced like a"
7"She glided ahead, leaving no"
8"Her silver hair flowed like"
9"Aurora marveled, glancing at Nyx,"
10"Nyx whispered, their voice swirling"
11"They ventured deeper into the"
12"Aurora felt a benign energy"
13"A gentle rustle broke the"
14"She turned to Nyx, who"
15"she asked, squinting at the"
16"It hovered, darting rhythmically from"
17"Isolde replied cryptically, glancing knowingly"
18"Aurora said, a grin spreading"
19"Aurora caught glimpses of creatures"
ratio0.879
75.76% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences66
matches
0"As if summoned by their"
ratio0.015
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"The moment they crossed the ancient oak standing stones, a palpable shift coursed through their bodies, as if they had slipped through a shimmering film into an…"
1"Petals glistened under a golden hue that seemed to emanate from the very air, wrapping everything in warmth."
2"Aurora felt a benign energy thrumming around her, each step resonating with the world as if nature itself breathed alongside them."
3"Nyx slipped silently ahead, their form drifting in a mist-like shade, as if they leaped between the seen and unseen realms."
4"As if summoned by their conversation, the warm golden glow dimmed, and the atmosphere thickened."
5"She followed Isolde and Nyx as they forged ahead, avoiding the shadows that seemed to pulse ominously with darker energy."
6"A whispering wind circled the glade, carrying soft lilting notes that wrapped around them like an embrace, threading through their minds, filling them with visi…"
7"They coiled around her feet, slithering upward, pulling her back."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Nyx whispered, their voice swirling around like a soft wind"
1"Aurora said, a grin spreading across her face"
2"Isolde responded, a smile barely visible on her ethereal face"
3"Isolde continued, her tone subtly urgent"
4"Aurora said, her pulse quickening"
5"Aurora echoed, her brows furrowing"
6"Nyx said, their form solidifying into a more recognizable silhouette"
7"Aurora yanked, her heart racing"
8"Nyx whispered, and the shadows coalesced, easing the grip of the vines"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount12
fancyTags
0"Aurora marveled (marvel)"
1"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde responded (respond)"
3"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
4"Isolde continued (continue)"
5"Isolde interjected (interject)"
6"Isolde confirmed (confirm)"
7"she shouted (shout)"
8"Nyx rushed (rush)"
9"she grunted (grunt)"
10"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
11"Isolde yelled (yell)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.463
leniency0.927
rawRatio0.632
effectiveRatio0.585
72.5143%