Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021G7DSXAG7NV2XQVWD6

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Duration:
37.8s
Cost:
$0.001139

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood in the kitchen, her hands immersed in a bowl of flour, the scent of fresh dough filling the cramped air of her flat. Ptolemy lounged on the windowsill, basking in the meager sunlight filtering through the dusty glass. The pages of research notes lay scattered across every available surface, chaotic reminders of restless nights spent deciphering ancient texts. She leaned over the counter, kneading the dough with a rhythm that mirrored her heart's steady beat. The soft thud echoed in the silence, but a sudden, sharp knock pulled her from her concentration. Thud, thud, thud. A chill climbed her spine. Who could it be? Most people gave her at least a heads-up before showing up at Eva's flat. She wiped her hands on her apron, brushing flour across her jeans, and moved cautiously toward the door. She hesitated. Her pulse quickened, a whirlwind of hope and dread swirling within her. What if it was Evan? What if it was someone from her past? Her breath paused, heavy in her chest, as she grabbed the handle and swung the door open. “What the—” Lucien Moreau stood on her doorstep, an image of polished composure dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame perfectly. His slicked-back platinum hair glinted in the wan light, and those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—glimmered with a mix of surprise and something else. “Rory,” he murmured, a subtle smile tugging at the corner of his mouth. She blinked, caught off guard. “Luc.” Though she tried to keep her tone even, a hint of something fluttered in her chest. “You look… different.” He leaned slightly against the doorframe, assessing her as if sizing up a wild card. She crossed her arms, belligerence curling her lips. “And you look like you belong on the cover of a magazine. What do you want?” "Straight to the point. I like that." He pushed through the door, sidestepping her surprise. She inhaled sharply but stepped aside, closing the door with a soft click behind him. The space seemed to shrink as he filled it with his presence. “I didn’t expect to see you here.” Lucien's eyes darted around the flat, taking in the chaos of books and scrolls, a glimpse of her life that he never fully grasped. “Not in this… environment.” Rory busied herself, wiping her hands on her apron again, desperate for something to do. “It’s what I can manage these days—holidays, dough, and my research.” She motioned to the mess around her. "It's not a museum for sophisticated demons like you." “You know I’m not a demon.” He chuckled, a low rumble. The sound both annoyed and intrigued her, stirring memories of laughter that echoed in moonlit corners of their fractured history. “Right, half-demon. What’s your point?” She turned her back on him, making her way back to the kitchen, attempting to dispel the tension. A beat of silence pressed down before he spoke again. “I didn’t come here to argue about labels. I need your help.” Rory looked over her shoulder. “My help? Why would I help you, Luc?” “Because I’m in a tight spot, and you’re the best person I know for this kind of… situation.” “Have you tried someone else? I’m busy.” She faked a casualness, though the sparks of old feelings danced beneath her skin. She turned down her voice, letting it trail off, as she felt the warmth radiate from him. He moved closer, his presence steady, and lowered his voice. “This isn’t something I take lightly. It’s about the artifacts I mentioned last time we spoke. I need someone who’s used to dealing with tricky situations.” “What is this, some sort of demon-infested scavenger hunt?” Sarcasm dripped from her words. “More like a rescue mission.” Lucien's tone shifted, serious now, his eyes boring into hers. “You’re going to want to listen. A group has gotten their hands on something they shouldn’t have, and it’s my neck on the line.” A beat passed as she considered his words, the conflict simmering in her chest. “Why didn’t you come to me sooner? You must have known this was brewing.” “I thought I could handle it alone. Old habits die hard.” His gaze flickered momentarily, revealing a hint of vulnerability. “But I need you, Rory. I can’t do this without your knowledge.” She snorted, crossing her arms again. “You think flattery will get me to help you?” Lucien shrugged, a smirk playing on his lips. “I’ll have to try other tactics.” Rory shook her head, rolling her eyes to mask the uneasiness creeping in. “Why do you always have to make things complicated?” “Complicated is my specialty.” He leaned against the counter, casual, confident, as the air crackled between them. “Right. And just tell me—what’s the catch? There’s always a catch with you.” He hesitated, the glimmer in his eyes wavering. “There’s no catch, just a risk. A significant one.” Her heart pounded. “What do you mean?” “They have people watching. This isn’t just about the artifacts; it ties to some dangerous players in the supernatural world. I’ve been waiting to gauge the scene, but I need you to help me navigate it.” “You think I’m just some pawn in your game?” “For you, I’d do anything but pawn.” His voice softened, sincerity laced in his tone. Rory stepped back, processing his words, the weight of history heavy between them. The tumult stirred emotions long buried. “Why now? After everything?” “Because I trust you.” He closed the distance, searching her face. “You're brilliant, Rory. You always were. I should have seen it before.” She scoffed, but heat crawled up her neck. “Trust isn’t something you get to throw around lightly. You broke it, and I am not your charity case.” “Then let’s rebuild it.” His gaze held hers, unwavering. “This isn’t just about you or me anymore. It’s bigger than that.” She studied him, trying to separate the man from the memories. “You always had a knack for getting what you wanted.” “It’s not a want anymore. It’s a need.” Lucien’s tone shifted, earnest desperation slipping in. “Help me, and I’ll make it worth your while. Besides, I don’t think I can face this without you.” “You’re good.” “I’m serious." He leaned closer, lowering his voice, wrapping her in an almost tangible urgency. “Whatever it takes, I get us out. Together.” Rory’s heart thumped against her chest, her resolve wavering. Part of her felt the pull, the magnetic desire that had remained dormant, now surging forth. “Fine. But this better not go sideways.” “Trust me, I'll do my best.” For a moment, they lingered in a fragile silence, memories of a past intertwined with a volatile present. She studied his face again, the way those mismatched eyes seemed to hold untold stories, the warmth circling around them. “Rory,” he said, breaking the gaze. “We should get started.” She stepped back, breaking the spell. “Let’s get this straight. I’m only helping because it’s a mess that concerns me too, not because of anything else.” “Understood.” “Good.” As urgency filled the room, the faint echoes of their past drew closer, mingling with the chaos she embraced. The battle lines had shifted, and for better or worse, Lucien was back—and she could feel everything unraveling around the edges.
total_cost0.0011388

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
84.62% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He leaned slightly [slightly]"
1"Lucien's eyes darted around [around]"
2"His gaze flickered momentarily [momentarily]"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.365
leniency0.731
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.115
75.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"cautiously"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"sharply"
count1
4
adverb"lightly"
count2
highlights
0"cautiously"
1"perfectly"
2"slightly"
3"sharply"
4"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1222
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"chaotic"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count2
2
word"silence"
count3
3
word"chill"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"quickened"
count1
6
word"fluttered"
count1
7
word"fractured"
count1
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count2
10
word"simmering"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"wavering"
count2
13
word"navigate"
count1
14
word"pawn"
count2
15
word"weight"
count1
16
word"unwavering"
count1
17
word"tangible"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
19
word"magnetic"
count1
20
word"desire"
count1
21
word"echoes"
count1
22
word"could feel"
count1
23
word"unraveling"
count1
highlights
0"chaotic"
1"echoed"
2"silence"
3"chill"
4"pulse"
5"quickened"
6"fluttered"
7"fractured"
8"tension"
9"warmth"
10"simmering"
11"flickered"
12"wavering"
13"navigate"
14"pawn"
15"weight"
16"unwavering"
17"tangible"
18"resolve"
19"magnetic"
20"desire"
21"echoes"
22"could feel"
23"unraveling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences63
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1213
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount745
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.81
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva1
Evan1
Moreau1
Rory5
Lucien6
persons
0"Eva"
1"Evan"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences51
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if sizing up a wild card"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1213
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs52
mean23.33
std13.14
cv0.563
sampleLengths
060
134
23
341
444
52
646
713
822
918
1024
1115
1227
1335
1442
1531
1623
1722
1813
1918
2038
2136
2214
2339
2428
2532
2615
2714
2822
2917
3013
3117
327
3336
349
3515
3623
3723
3827
3921
4021
4134
422
4323
4432
456
4638
4710
4826
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs147
matches(empty)
53.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences96
ratio0.031
matches
0"His slicked-back platinum hair glinted in the wan light, and those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—glimmered with a mix of surprise and something else."
1"“They have people watching. This isn’t just about the artifacts; it ties to some dangerous players in the supernatural world. I’ve been waiting to gauge the scene, but I need you to help me navigate it.”"
2"The battle lines had shifted, and for better or worse, Lucien was back—and she could feel everything unraveling around the edges."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount750
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.02666666666666667
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean12.64
std6.85
cv0.542
sampleLengths
025
115
220
317
417
53
65
74
814
918
102
1112
125
138
1417
152
1622
1724
1813
195
2017
2118
228
2316
2415
2515
2612
2731
284
2915
3018
319
3211
3320
3423
3510
3612
375
388
3918
4021
4117
4210
4326
4414
4515
4624
4714
4814
4920
73.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.4583333333333333
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences62
matches
0"She leaned over the counter,"
1"She wiped her hands on"
2"Her pulse quickened, a whirlwind"
3"Her breath paused, heavy in"
4"His slicked-back platinum hair glinted"
5"he murmured, a subtle smile"
6"She blinked, caught off guard."
7"He leaned slightly against the"
8"She crossed her arms, belligerence"
9"He pushed through the door,"
10"She inhaled sharply but stepped"
11"She motioned to the mess"
12"He chuckled, a low rumble"
13"She turned her back on"
14"She faked a casualness, though"
15"She turned down her voice,"
16"He moved closer, his presence"
17"His gaze flickered momentarily, revealing"
18"She snorted, crossing her arms"
19"He leaned against the counter,"
ratio0.5
16.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences62
matches
0"Aurora stood in the kitchen,"
1"Ptolemy lounged on the windowsill,"
2"The pages of research notes"
3"She leaned over the counter,"
4"The soft thud echoed in"
5"Thud, thud, thud."
6"A chill climbed her spine."
7"She wiped her hands on"
8"Her pulse quickened, a whirlwind"
9"Her breath paused, heavy in"
10"Lucien Moreau stood on her"
11"His slicked-back platinum hair glinted"
12"he murmured, a subtle smile"
13"She blinked, caught off guard."
14"He leaned slightly against the"
15"She crossed her arms, belligerence"
16"He pushed through the door,"
17"She inhaled sharply but stepped"
18"The space seemed to shrink"
19"Lucien's eyes darted around the"
ratio0.887
80.65% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Though she tried to keep"
ratio0.016
63.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences27
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on her doorstep, an image of polished composure dressed in a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame perfectly."
1"The sound both annoyed and intrigued her, stirring memories of laughter that echoed in moonlit corners of their fractured history."
2"Rory shook her head, rolling her eyes to mask the uneasiness creeping in."
72.37% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he murmured, a subtle smile tugging at the corner of his mouth"
1"Though she tried, a hint of something fluttered in her chest"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"He chuckled (chuckle)"
dialogueSentences52
tagDensity0.058
leniency0.115
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.077
80.4896%