Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021GHPJXD1FMTQ0DH3JT

Run Details

Duration:
36.8s
Cost:
$0.001109

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood in the cramped kitchen of Eva's flat, her fingers stained with turmeric. She stirred a bubbling pot of curry, the rich aroma swirling around her. The flickering light overhead cast shadows dancing across the walls, adorned with books and scrolls that leaned precariously. A soft thud interrupted her concentration. The sound echoed from the doorway. She wiped her hands on a dish towel, her heart quickening. Maybe it was Eva, back from her errands. Opening the door, her breath caught. Lucien Moreau stood there, his tailored charcoal suit impeccable, the ivory-handled cane tapping rhythmically against the door frame. He looked the same yet somehow different—his slicked-back platinum blond hair glimmered in the dull light as if he harnessed shadows in a way she had never seen before. "Lucien," she breathed, shock mingling with a rush of old feelings. “Aurora.” His mouth pulled into a half-smile, one that didn’t reach his eyes. He glanced around, clearly taking in the clutter of the flat. She felt the weight of their past hanging in the air. Memories cascaded through her mind like a torrent. Heated arguments, passionate nights, the bitter taste of his betrayal. “Why are you here?” She stepped back, the cool air of the hallway rushing in. “I came to talk,” he said, voice smooth like velvet, but the underlying tension sharpened the edges of each word. “May I?” Without waiting for her to respond, he slipped past her, the undeniable presence of him filling the small space. The door swung shut behind him, sealing them in together. Rory crossed her arms, fighting to ignore the way her pulse quickened as he moved through the flat. He’d always had a way of occupying the room, as if the very walls recognized his authority. “Your flat hasn’t changed much,” he said, glancing at the stacks of books. “Still in over your head, I see.” “Better to be over my head in books than under your thumb,” she shot back, eyes narrowing. His expression faltered for a moment, the flicker of hurt showing. She hadn’t meant to strike that chord, but the words slipped out, raw and festering from the wounds of their last encounter. “Touché,” he replied, a hint of a challenge lurking beneath his calm surface. “But I'm not here to fight.” “Then what do you want?” The curry continued to simmer, the room heavy with unspoken words. “I need your help, Aurora.” He moved closer, an earnestness creeping into his tone. “I’m not your damsel in distress, Lucien. I don’t owe you anything.” Her retort cut through the air, sharp and bitter. The mention of ‘help’ sparked a ghost of their shared history, inscribed in whispers and loyalty bruised. “You might want to reconsider that,” he said, voice dropping, the gravity of his words settling like a stone in her stomach. “Things are changing in London, the underworld... I wouldn’t show up like this if I didn’t have no other choice.” “What do you mean?” Her breath hitched, compelled by curiosity and a thread of concern. He ran a hand through his hair, a nervous gesture she hadn’t seen from him in years. “I’m not the only one looking for something. There’s a power shift—a lot of players are looking to capitalize. I need someone who knows the streets, who’ll navigate the intricacies. I need you.” “Just like that? You think I’ll drop everything and help you after—” “After the mess we made, I know,” he interrupted. “And I know I’m the last person you want to see. But if you want to keep things as they are—” “Which would be?” she challenged, stepping closer, arms uncrossing but spirit still protected. “Safe,” he finished quietly, standing uncomfortably in the gaps they’d left, the left unsaid hanging heavy like the humidity in the air. She hesitated, caught in the sway of his presence. “And what do you think I am? A pawn in your game?” Lucien inhaled sharply, the moment stretching between them like an elastic. “You’re not a pawn, Rory. You’re—” His words halted as a soft meow interrupted, Ptolemy the tabby winding between Lucien’s legs. The cat’s innocent plea lightened the weight in the air, though it did nothing to ease the tension simmering just beneath the surface. “Oh, for heaven's sake.” She stooped to cradle Ptolemy, needing the distraction. The soft purr felt soothing against her palms. “Can we drop the posturing?” he asked, his voice cutting through the feigned indifference. “What we had wasn’t a strategy. It was real. You know that.” Rory pressed her lips together, unwilling to admit the truth wrapped in his words. The heat from the curry pot shimmered like the memories of their nights entwined when everything felt easy, uncomplicated. “So, your plan is to charm me into helping you?” she teased, but the vulnerability in her tone slipped through her defenses. “I would never presume,” he replied, sincerity painting the edges of his smirk. “But it does help.” “I don’t trust you,” she declared, despite the warmth she felt unfurling in her chest. “Fair enough,” he shrugged, adjusting his suit jacket. “Trust takes time, but the clock's ticking. Either you help me, or we both end up regretting what’s about to unfold.” “Always the strategist,” she replied, letting Ptolemy leap down as if he sensed the tension between them. “You leave me no other choice,” he returned, his voice quiet but intense. Rory’s breath caught. His determination ignited a flicker of old feelings, confusing and captivating all at once. “What’s really happening?” she whispered, clinging to the last remnants of caution. Lucien’s jaw tightened, the weight of their history washing over him. “I don’t want to drag you into this. But there’s too much at stake. I... care, Rory.” The admission lingered in the space between them, wrapping around unspoken emotions that had long festered. “What does that mean?” she asked, the words barely forming as the truth struck like a lightning bolt. “It means I never wanted things to end the way they did,” he admitted, voice breaking slightly. Rory caught the flash in his eyes, a storm of sincerity and regret. She felt the pull, the attraction crackling with tension. But the past wouldn’t easily let her go. “Lucien, I—” “Rory, please,” he implored, stepping closer, resonating warmth beckoning at her walls. They stood there, as if time had stopped, burdened by all that lay in their wake. “I don’t know if I can do this,” she finally said, her resolve wavering. “Let me show you,” he offered, a glimmer of hope flickering like a beacon in the chaos. She searched his face, finding the vulnerability she had once known so well. Here he was, unguarded and raw, close enough that she could feel the heat radiating from him, igniting memories they had buried deep. “I’ll think about it,” she replied, forcing the walls of her heart to stay firm. “Thinking is a good start.” In that moment, the space between them pulsed, alive with what had been and what could be, each heartbeat echoing with uncertainty and promise. And just like that, they sparked back to life.
total_cost0.0011087999999999998

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
96.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
1"he finished quietly [quietly]"
2"she finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.644
leniency1
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.103
83.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1196
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"sharply"
2"really"
3"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1196
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"dancing"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"weight"
count3
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"tension"
count4
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"quickened"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count2
8
word"encounter"
count1
9
word"unspoken"
count2
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"navigate"
count1
12
word"pawn"
count2
13
word"simmering"
count1
14
word"shimmered"
count1
15
word"charm"
count1
16
word"warmth"
count2
17
word"resolve"
count1
18
word"wavering"
count1
19
word"beacon"
count1
20
word"could feel"
count1
21
word"pulsed"
count1
22
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"dancing"
1"echoed"
2"weight"
3"velvet"
4"tension"
5"pulse"
6"quickened"
7"flicker"
8"encounter"
9"unspoken"
10"stomach"
11"navigate"
12"pawn"
13"simmering"
14"shimmered"
15"charm"
16"warmth"
17"resolve"
18"wavering"
19"beacon"
20"could feel"
21"pulsed"
22"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"a glimmer of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1191
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount851
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.47
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Ptolemy"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Moreau1
Ptolemy3
Lucien4
Rory4
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1191
matches(empty)
90.04% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"strike that chord"
1"like that, they"
93.40% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean22.47
std10.72
cv0.477
sampleLengths
045
131
253
311
424
529
615
722
829
935
1020
1117
1233
1319
1416
1514
1612
1726
1842
1915
2050
2112
2230
2313
2422
2521
2617
2738
2820
2926
3033
3122
3217
3315
3429
3517
3613
3717
3812
3928
4016
4118
4217
4330
442
4512
4616
4714
4817
4936
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences87
ratio0.011
matches
0"He looked the same yet somehow different—his slicked-back platinum blond hair glimmered in the dull light as if he harnessed shadows in a way she had never seen before."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount575
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount17
adverbRatio0.029565217391304348
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.008695652173913044
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean13.69
std5.74
cv0.419
sampleLengths
014
113
218
36
46
511
68
76
818
929
1011
1113
1211
1311
148
1510
1615
1720
182
1919
2010
2118
2217
2313
247
2517
2611
2722
2813
296
3016
3114
3212
339
3417
3522
3620
3715
3817
3933
4012
419
4221
4313
4422
459
4612
4711
486
4915
81.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4942528735632184
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners43
47.62% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences70
matches
0"Maybe it was Eva, back"
ratio0.014
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount43
totalSentences70
matches
0"She stirred a bubbling pot"
1"She wiped her hands on"
2"He looked the same yet"
3"she breathed, shock mingling with"
4"His mouth pulled into a"
5"He glanced around, clearly taking"
6"She felt the weight of"
7"She stepped back, the cool"
8"he said, voice smooth like"
9"He’d always had a way"
10"he said, glancing at the"
11"she shot back, eyes narrowing"
12"His expression faltered for a"
13"She hadn’t meant to strike"
14"he replied, a hint of"
15"He moved closer, an earnestness"
16"Her retort cut through the"
17"he said, voice dropping, the"
18"Her breath hitched, compelled by"
19"He ran a hand through"
ratio0.614
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences70
matches
0"Aurora stood in the cramped"
1"She stirred a bubbling pot"
2"The flickering light overhead cast"
3"A soft thud interrupted her"
4"The sound echoed from the"
5"She wiped her hands on"
6"Lucien Moreau stood there, his"
7"He looked the same yet"
8"she breathed, shock mingling with"
9"His mouth pulled into a"
10"He glanced around, clearly taking"
11"She felt the weight of"
12"Memories cascaded through her mind"
13"She stepped back, the cool"
14"he said, voice smooth like"
15"The door swung shut behind"
16"Rory crossed her arms, fighting"
17"He’d always had a way"
18"he said, glancing at the"
19"she shot back, eyes narrowing"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He looked the same yet somehow different—his slicked-back platinum blond hair glimmered in the dull light as if he harnessed shadows in a way she had never seen…"
1"He’d always had a way of occupying the room, as if the very walls recognized his authority."
2"The admission lingered in the space between them, wrapping around unspoken emotions that had long festered."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she shot back, eyes narrowing"
1"he replied, a hint of a challenge lurking beneath his calm surface"
2"He moved, an earnestness creeping into his tone"
3"he asked, his voice cutting through the feigned indifference"
4"he replied, sincerity painting the edges of his smirk"
5"he returned, his voice quiet but intense"
6"he admitted, voice breaking slightly"
7"she finally said, her resolve wavering"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"The curry continued (continue)"
2"he interrupted (interrupt)"
3"she challenged (challenge)"
4"she teased (tease)"
5"she declared (declare)"
6"she whispered (whisper)"
7"he admitted (admit)"
8"he implored (implore)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.422
leniency0.844
rawRatio0.474
effectiveRatio0.4
75.7027%