Run: 2026-02-19-01KHT0021GXHW90NYDDD7CPW47

Run Details

Duration:
36.0s
Cost:
$0.001117

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stood in the cramped kitchen of Eva's flat, the scent of curry wafting through the open window. She stirred a pot of lentils, her mind drifting to the stack of bills on the counter. The soft thud of Ptolemy, Eva's tabby cat, against her leg pulled her back to the moment. She scratched behind the cat's ears, a small smile breaking through her thoughts. The doorbell rang, sharp and unexpected. Aurora wiped her hands on a dish towel, glancing at the clock. Eva was supposed to be at work, and she hadn’t invited anyone over. “Who the hell?” she muttered, crossing the small living room cluttered with books and scrolls. She hesitated, her heart racing. The bell rang again, more insistent this time. “Alright, alright!” She swung the door open, her breath catching in her throat. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, his slicked-back platinum hair gleaming under the dim light of the hallway. He wore a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame, the ivory-handled cane resting against his side. His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, a mix of surprise and something deeper flickering across his face. “Lucien,” she breathed, the name tasting foreign on her tongue after all this time. “Rory.” His voice was smooth, like silk sliding over stone. She stepped back, instinctively creating space, but he didn’t move. The air thickened with unspoken words, memories flooding back—nights spent laughing, arguments that had cut deep, the way he had looked at her just before everything fell apart. “What are you doing here?” she asked, trying to sound casual, but the tremor in her voice betrayed her. “I need to talk.” He shifted his weight, the cane tapping lightly against the floor. “About what?” She crossed her arms, a defensive posture she hoped would shield her from the memories. “About us.” “Us?” The word hung in the air, heavy and charged. “Can I come in?” He glanced over his shoulder, as if expecting someone to appear behind him. Aurora hesitated, the past swirling around them like a storm. But the look in his eyes—earnest, almost vulnerable—pulled her in. She stepped aside, allowing him to enter. He walked in, his presence filling the small space. She closed the door, the click echoing in the silence. “Nice place,” he said, glancing around at the chaos of books and scrolls. “Very… you.” “Thanks.” She busied herself with the pot, stirring the lentils again, avoiding his gaze. “What do you want, Lucien?” He leaned against the counter, arms crossed, his expression unreadable. “I came to apologize.” “Apologize?” She scoffed, the bitterness creeping into her voice. “You think that’s enough?” “I know it’s not enough.” He ran a hand through his hair, frustration flickering across his face. “But I need you to understand why I did what I did.” “Why you left?” She turned to face him, her blue eyes flashing. “You didn’t even give me a chance to explain.” “I was trying to protect you.” His voice dropped, sincerity threading through his words. “You were in danger, Rory. I thought—” “You thought what? That running away would solve everything?” She stepped closer, the heat of the moment igniting old feelings. “You left me to deal with it alone.” “I didn’t want you to get hurt.” He pushed off the counter, closing the distance between them. “I thought I was doing the right thing.” “By abandoning me?” Her heart raced, anger and hurt mixing in a volatile cocktail. “I didn’t abandon you.” He reached out, his fingers brushing against her arm, sending a jolt through her. “I thought I was saving you.” Aurora pulled back, the warmth of his touch lingering like a ghost. “You don’t get to decide what’s best for me.” “I know.” He dropped his hand, frustration etched on his face. “But I couldn’t stand the thought of you getting caught up in my world. It’s dangerous.” “Dangerous?” She laughed, the sound bitter. “You think I can’t handle danger? I’ve been dealing with my own demons, Lucien.” “Not like mine.” His voice dropped, a shadow crossing his face. “You don’t know what I’m capable of.” “Then show me.” She stepped closer, challenging him. “Show me who you really are.” He hesitated, the tension crackling between them. “You don’t want to see that.” “Try me.” He studied her, the weight of their history hanging in the air. “You think you can just forget everything?” “I’m not trying to forget.” She crossed her arms, her heart pounding. “I’m trying to understand.” “Understanding doesn’t change what happened.” His voice softened, the edge of anger fading. “I hurt you, Rory. I can’t take that back.” “Then what do you want from me?” She searched his eyes, looking for answers. “I want a chance to make it right.” He stepped closer, his gaze intense. “I want to show you that I can be better.” “Better?” She scoffed, shaking her head. “You think a few words will fix everything?” “No, but it’s a start.” He reached for her again, this time his hand resting gently on her shoulder. “I’m here now. Let me prove it.” Aurora felt the warmth of his hand seep through her shirt, igniting a spark she thought had long extinguished. “You think it’s that easy?” “No.” He lowered his voice, sincerity pouring from him. “But I’m willing to try. For you.” She searched his face, the conflict within her swirling like a tempest. “And what if I can’t trust you?” “Then I’ll earn it.” He stepped back, giving her space, his expression earnest. “I’ll do whatever it takes.” The silence stretched between them, heavy with possibility. Aurora’s heart raced, caught between the past and the present. “Why now?” she finally asked, her voice barely above a whisper. “Because I can’t keep running from what I feel.” He took a deep breath, his eyes locking onto hers. “I’ve missed you, Rory.” The admission hung in the air, raw and vulnerable. Aurora felt her defenses crumbling, the walls she had built around her heart beginning to crack. “Missed me?” She searched his face for any hint of insincerity, but all she found was longing. “Every day.” He stepped closer again, the space between them charged with unspoken words. “I never stopped thinking about you.” Aurora’s breath caught in her throat. The memories flooded back—laughter, late-night talks, the way he had looked at her when he thought she wasn’t watching. “Lucien…” “Please.” He reached for her hand, his fingers brushing against hers. “Just give me a chance.” The warmth of his touch sent a shiver down her spine. She hesitated, the weight of their history pressing down on her. “Just one chance,” he urged, his voice low and earnest. Aurora looked into his eyes, searching for the truth. The past loomed large, but the possibility of something new flickered like a candle in the dark. “Alright,” she finally said, her voice steady. “One chance.” A flicker of hope ignited in his eyes, and for the first time in a long while, Aurora felt the weight of her heart lift.
total_cost0.0011166

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags38
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He stepped back [back]"
1"she finally asked [finally]"
2"she finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.535
leniency1
rawRatio0.079
effectiveRatio0.079
78.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"lightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
highlights
0"lightly"
1"very"
2"really"
3"gently"
4"barely above a whisper"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1186
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"racing"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"unspoken"
count2
4
word"weight"
count4
5
word"charged"
count2
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"raced"
count2
10
word"warmth"
count3
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"tension"
count1
13
word"pounding"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"down her spine"
count1
16
word"loomed"
count1
17
word"flickered"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"racing"
1"gleaming"
2"silk"
3"unspoken"
4"weight"
5"charged"
6"echoing"
7"silence"
8"unreadable"
9"raced"
10"warmth"
11"etched"
12"tension"
13"pounding"
14"whisper"
15"down her spine"
16"loomed"
17"flickered"
18"flicker"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
2
label"flicker of emotion"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
1"sent a shiver down"
2"A flicker of hope"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences74
matches
0"A flicker of hope"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1177
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount834
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Eva3
Ptolemy1
Lucien1
Moreau1
Aurora10
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.9
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if expecting someone to appear behind him"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1177
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean19.62
std10.21
cv0.521
sampleLengths
065
131
220
38
413
554
614
710
838
919
1015
1117
122
1310
1417
1527
1619
1715
1819
1914
2013
2129
2221
2321
2428
2525
2614
2724
2821
2927
3020
3118
3214
3313
342
3519
3616
3722
3814
3924
4014
4126
4224
4316
4419
4518
4618
4711
4823
4925
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs158
matches
0"was longing"
1"wasn’t watching"
36.05% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences107
ratio0.037
matches
0"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one black—locked onto hers, a mix of surprise and something deeper flickering across his face."
1"The air thickened with unspoken words, memories flooding back—nights spent laughing, arguments that had cut deep, the way he had looked at her just before everything fell apart."
2"But the look in his eyes—earnest, almost vulnerable—pulled her in."
3"The memories flooded back—laughter, late-night talks, the way he had looked at her when he thought she wasn’t watching."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount843
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.02965599051008304
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0071174377224199285
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean11
std5.16
cv0.469
sampleLengths
018
117
217
313
46
512
613
715
85
98
1013
1118
1217
1319
1414
1510
1610
1728
1819
1915
2017
212
2210
2317
2410
2510
267
279
2810
2913
302
3114
325
3310
344
359
364
3717
3812
3912
409
4114
427
4320
448
4517
468
4714
4818
496
54.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3644859813084112
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences74
matches
0"She stirred a pot of"
1"She scratched behind the cat's"
2"she muttered, crossing the small"
3"She hesitated, her heart racing."
4"She swung the door open,"
5"He wore a tailored charcoal"
6"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
7"she breathed, the name tasting"
8"His voice was smooth, like"
9"She stepped back, instinctively creating"
10"she asked, trying to sound"
11"He shifted his weight, the"
12"She crossed her arms, a"
13"He glanced over his shoulder,"
14"She stepped aside, allowing him"
15"He walked in, his presence"
16"She closed the door, the"
17"he said, glancing around at"
18"She busied herself with the"
19"He leaned against the counter,"
ratio0.689
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences74
matches
0"Aurora stood in the cramped"
1"She stirred a pot of"
2"The soft thud of Ptolemy,"
3"She scratched behind the cat's"
4"The doorbell rang, sharp and"
5"Aurora wiped her hands on"
6"Eva was supposed to be"
7"she muttered, crossing the small"
8"She hesitated, her heart racing."
9"The bell rang again, more"
10"She swung the door open,"
11"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
12"He wore a tailored charcoal"
13"His heterochromatic eyes—one amber, one"
14"she breathed, the name tasting"
15"His voice was smooth, like"
16"She stepped back, instinctively creating"
17"The air thickened with unspoken"
18"she asked, trying to sound"
19"He shifted his weight, the"
ratio0.986
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
87.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He wore a tailored charcoal suit that hugged his frame, the ivory-handled cane resting against his side."
1"The air thickened with unspoken words, memories flooding back—nights spent laughing, arguments that had cut deep, the way he had looked at her just before every…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags38
uselessAdditionCount18
matches
0"She swung, her breath catching in her throat"
1"He shifted, the cane tapping lightly against the floor"
2"He glanced, as if expecting someone to appear behind him"
3"She scoffed, the bitterness creeping into her voice"
4"He ran, frustration flickering across his face"
5"She turned, her blue eyes flashing"
6"His voice dropped, sincerity threading through his words"
7"She stepped, the heat of the moment igniting old feelings"
8"His voice dropped, a shadow crossing his face"
9"She crossed, her heart pounding"
10"His voice softened, the edge of anger fading"
11"He stepped, his gaze intense"
12"He lowered, sincerity pouring from him"
13"she finally asked, her voice barely above a whisper"
14"He took, his eyes locking onto hers"
15"He reached, his fingers brushing against hers"
16"he urged, his voice low and earnest"
17"she finally said, her voice steady"
93.66% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"She laughed (laugh)"
3"he urged (urge)"
dialogueSentences71
tagDensity0.113
leniency0.225
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.113
72.2472%